Maaneet ff...Ishq Hua....thread #1.. - Page 15

geet of ur FF is an endearing specimen................love her and her antics...........

oh god this geet and her dhanno
maan tha mechanic
geet and his bickering is just so great
do continue
bye sumi

hey dear

guys i ws unwell so cudnt update bt will surely update soon..........

hey just read all d parts nd every part was awesome their Fights reminds me of Mayank nupur. too good yaar pls get well soon nd update ur story.😊

just finished reading part 12....it freakin' awesome....now off to read the next part...can't wait!!!!

loved the hug...the exchange of words between them is so funny and chweet!!! Loved it...thanks a bunch sweetie!!!

your story is full of comedy,i cant stop laughing ,super cute dialogs, u r doing really well,pls update soon,pls add me to your pm list

Part 14

Geet sits in d car and Maan sits beside her in the backseat. they while sitting dash against one another..their shoulders touch and both gve an angry look to each odr.........

Maan sees Geet's excitement when she sits in the car...Maan gves a smile.....Geet exclaims..........

Geet: sir......kya yeh gari aapki he.......???

Maan: nahin chori ki hai............

Geet: Huh...! ...sir chori ki......sir chori karna buri baat hai........

Maan: geet raat ke ek baje tumhe itna bolne ka energy kahan se aata hai...?

Geet: Sir main na........

Maan: bas geet.....ab chup se betho please..........

Geet feels extremely bored when the car starts...she shouts to the driver.../

Geet: Dreiver ji......music chalaiyye na........

Maan:Geet...main music nahin sunta hoon....

Geet: Kya sir?...app music nahin sunte he....kaise insaan he..........??

Geet in her mind..........

Geet: e le.......dekha....kaise itrarahe he....apni gari.........huh...!.....main bhi inhe apni dhanno pe kabhi bethne nahin dungi.........

Maan: geet tum kahan rehti ho...?

Geet: Ghar me sir............insaan toh ghar main hi rehte he na.........

Maan: ufff....geet woh nahin..........mera matlab hai ki tumhara address kya hai?

Geet: oh sir! ..aisa boliye na...sir main bandra main rehti hoon..........

Maan: achcha..........toh theek hai.......

Geet feel extremely bored in the car.....she tell maan.......

Geet: sir........aap gari main jaate jaate bore nahin hote he........??

Maan: nahin ....nahin....gari main toh baithkar nachte jana chahiye........

Geet: sir kya baat karrahe he...?aapko nachna aata hai...?/

Maan: toh geet tumhe kya lagta hai.....main adiwasi hoon............???

Geet: nahin sir.....bilkul nahin............

Geet first feels cold in the ac...maan on noticing dis tells her to open the window...geet then opens d window............strong breeze blows in d car.........and geets' hair is flying away .....geet is thoroughly enjoying d breeze....maan sees geet's wide smile and smiles himself..........maan is constantly staring at her....( mahii plays in d bg........definitely...)...geet's hair flows onto maan's face and maan feels the special feeling again .............he feels the tenderness and softness of geet's hair..........he exclaims.........

Maan: yeh kya horaha hai mujhe?...kyun geet ki har baat mujhe uske taraf khichti hai.....?...aise pehle mujhe kabhi nahin hua ...........

Maan can feel himself lost in the spell of geet's hair...maan suddenly realises dat he is behaving awkward.........

Maan: yeh kya maan....phir se....?...nahin maan.....mat bhul ki tu maan singh khurana hai......

Geet: achcha sir.....ek baat bataiyye.........aap kahan rehte he sir...........mera matlab aapka address kya hai...??

Maan: kyun?

Geet: woh mujhe aapke ghar chori karna hai..........

Maan: kya?

Geet: arey sir....aise hi poocha....

Maan: main worli sea face main rehta hoon.........

Geet feels extremely hot because maan's window is closed ....she does not get proper ventilation...........she tells him to open d window....

Geet: sir khidki kholiye na.....dekhiye na kitni achchi hawa arahihe ...

Maan: geet tumhari khuli hain na......toh mera toh chod do

Geet: arey sir........shayad aapne science me nahin padha hoga....ventilation bolke koi cheez hoti hai..........

Geet widout even taking the permission of maan opens his window...when geet comes near to maan to open d window...maan feels dat special feeling again...she opens d window and maan again gets lost in her beauty again..........he sees her hair flying again and enjoys d beautiful straight hair she has.....geet speaks...........

Geet: achcha hai na sir......\

Maan: haan ....bohot achcha hai...( geting lost in her........)

suddenly geet sees d moon and finds it beautiful....she says...........

Geet: sir...woh dekhie...(she smiles sweetly...maan is stiill gazing at her).............kitna achcha chand khila hai na.............kitna khoobsurat hai na sir......??/

Maan: waqai..........bohot khoobsurat hai...aaj sach main sahi mayne main chand khila hai.............

Geet: huh sir aapne kuch kaha....????

Maan: ( cumin bk to reality)...haan ...upp.....nahin maine kuch nahin kaha....

Geet moves away and sits while maan says in his mind..........

Maan: yeh main kya kehraha tha...?.....main pagal hogaya hoon...sach me..............

Geet: sir aaj ka mausam achcha hai na......???

Maan: Haan......achcha hai............

Maan lks in d odr syd of the window wen....maanputs hand on his head....

Maan: ouch.....!!!

Geet hears dat and turns...........

Geet: sir kya hua...??

Maan: kuch nahin.............

geet sees dat maan has got hurt in his head...his head was bruised.........geet gets worried........

Geet: sir...........yeh kya hai.......????aapko itni gehri chot kaise lagi...???

Maan: kuch nahin hua hai geet...........main theek hoon.........

Geet: kya theek sir.........itni chot lagi hai aur aap kehrahe he ki aap theek hai.........

Maan: geet...zara si chot hai...kuch nahin hoga.............

Geet: yeh aapko zara si chot lagti he.........???..litni gehri chot hai sir............waise aapko yeh chot lagi kaise.........??

Maan: woh jo tumne apne jooti se meri itni achchi khatirdaari ki...........

Geet: uppp...sorry sir..........laiyye main aapki madat karti hoon............

Maan: nahin geet...please...........

Geet: sir main aapki har baat sunti aur manti hoon na...toh ab aap meri baat suiye..............

geet with her dupatta......gves warmth to the wound frst................she takes water form the car and wets one syd of her dupatta and puts it on the wound...............maan constantly is seeing her worry for him on her face...he gets lost in her kind nature...........wen d upatta touches his forehead maan feels a relevation...he goes into a trance again

He says....

Maan: yeh kaisa ehsaas hai.....jo main mehsus karraha hoon.....pehle toh kabhi aisa nahin hua..........iss ladki ke aate hi sab badal gaya...kyun.................main badal gaya...........kyun...............

he realises again.........and says.............

Maan: geet...bas...bas...bas hua...........main abhi theek hoon...........

Geet: sach sir.........?

Maan: haan bilkul...............

both of them r on a drive wen d car stops..........geet's house has cum...............geet gets down...maan gets out of d car...............geet too......

Geet: arey sir aapko nikalne ki kya zaroorat thi........???

Maan: geet...koi baat nahin....

geet murmurs...

Geet: aaj inhe kya hogaya achanak se........

Maan: huh kya?

Geet: kuch nahin.......kuch nahi sir........

Its 1.30 by d watch........Geet yawns.............maan notices dat........

Maan: dekho geet bohot raat hogayi he...ab tum jao aur sojao...im sure iss adventourous nyt ke baad tumhe bohot neend aaegi isiliye kal office jaldi aane ki koi zaroorat nahin he..........kal nau baje aajana theek hai....???

Geet: sir aap yeh pehle keh chuke hai...aur kuch..agar aapki ijazat ho toh main andar jaun???

Maan: uppp...haan jao na maine kab roka hai..........

Geet: theek he sir...thank u sir.........gud nyt................

Maan: bye geet.............he smiles...ur welcome

geet goes in wen dm opens d door for her.............

Geet (while yawning): arey dm aap abhi tak soyi nahin....

DM: nahin....aaj toh bohot der hogayi................

Geet: haan...bohot hi lambi raat thi...aur yaadgar bhi....

DM: Kya??...kya hua geet bata na...,??

Geet: arey DM abhi nahin...abhi mujhe bohot neend arahi he................details kal dungi..............

DM: aur khana kaun kahega..........??

Geet: mujhe bhook nahin.............

Geet widout changing her night clothes nly goes to sleep.......she jumps on d bed...........DM shouts.........

DM: arey geet..kapde toh badal le...uff yeh ladki bhi.............

on d odr hand maan is still standind outsyd geet's house...........he sees geet's house once and luks up to d sky while leaving and says..........

Maan: sach main kya raat thi......iss raat ko main kabhi nahin bhulunga aur yeh sirf tumhari waje se geet....thank u geet................

maan sits in his car and leaves form dere.............

Lovelyyyyyy part.
Plzz continue soon.
Thanxx for the pm.


Fatima