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Sej

@SejN

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 15 years ago

#711

congrats on ur 100 pgs and i loved this part it was so awesome :)

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Samina

@Iqbal Neha1

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#712

amazing part

muskaan and rahul are finally getting closer to each other i liked the way u showed how their relationship is moving the same with abhi and nikki.The scene between armaan and ridz was beautifully potrayed and i really liked armaans gesture of giving his house keys to ridz.

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naureen

@Norz

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#713

awesoem part

finlly u update

hope ur exams went well

i want dr.shshank to know aboyt them atleast this will lessen thir tension

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anushkajain

@anushkajain

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#714

hey the part was as always awesome...................👏⭐️

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godisgr8

@godisgr8

Explorer

Posted: 15 years ago

#715

amazing part as always..

pls. make dr,shashank come to knw about them......so that they cn b together whenever they want...

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Angel.ARlover

@Angel.ARlover

Explorer

Posted: 15 years ago

#716

Congratualtions on the hundred pages.

You write soo nicely..flaw less!
I just love Armaan riddhimas relatnshp.they undrstnd each other soo well.M awstruck!!
Loved how Rahul and muskaan are progressing.Afetr Ar they wre my fav couple i loved thm to bits.

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here-i-am

@here-i-am

Explorer

Posted: 15 years ago

#717

awesome part😊

loved armaan's sweet little gesture

continue soon

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Riddhi

@Riddss

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#718

heyyy dear,
awesome part
thanks for PM.

love
Riddss

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shristi

@shristi sarda

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#719

hey thank god finally u r back....
was missing this ff badly.....
well the update was just tooo sweet and cute....
armaan is chooo chweet....
thanks for the pm and update soon....

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Anokhee

@Anokhee

Navigator

+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#720

Hey Once Again!

You know, I read your part last night itself and I was extremely lazy to comment and also because I didnt want to divert my mind about thinking about this part repeatedly before i fell asleep...
And now, when I came back to comment, I thought, why not read it once again?
So, after 2 readings, here's my comment:
I was actually thinking on the same lines as Ridhima? Because their relationship had become a little stagnant and I'm so happy you mentioned it too...
And the fact that Armaan gave her his own house's keys was a wonderful gesture... You know when Armaan was ill and Ridhima was was continuously ringing the doorbell, I actually felt like, I wish she just had the key and entered the house like her own... I really like these cute little things in a relationship like giving each other every right to do anything. I like it when one enters the other ones house like your own, uses the other things like their own and so on. I would love to see Ridhima making Armaan's house as hers. Do things she cant in her own house. I love the way you used the phrase "Her other home" in the end.
Its just so adorable........

And yes, you're right, I'm the writer of a perfect dream, pretty amateur compared yours though!
And if you really like it so much, I'm disappointed to not spot even one comment so far from you!
I would be honored to receive a comment from you!

And as for this FF,
Update super soon!

Love,
Anokhee!
❤️

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