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ssh57

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1091

Pg.100
Hey, that was the most spectaculour century anyone could have made. Armaan gave her his house keys. Sucha chweet gesture. Once again I have to say this ff is very practical and realistic. loving it.

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ssh57

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1092

Pg 107,
Totally run out of words yaar. So romantic, so beautiful, it was ethereal.

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ssh57

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1093

Pg 117,
No girl could have asked for a better proposal. It was out of the world yet practical. Not some fantasy. The phone call at the end was the icing on the cake.

Pg 129,
The whole part was as fantabulous as ever but for the last line.
Whether they ended up kissing is something which only the two of them know!

If you don't know who else will? You are the one tailing them.

Edited by ssh57 - 14 years ago

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ssh57

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1094

Pg 139,
The whole part was very well written. What makes an incident decent or indecent is how it is expressed. You made this incidemt to be a natural progression of the relationship. IT was so well written that it didn't feel cheap or vulgar. But the last part was the best.

Just because my eyes are shut, doesn't always mean I don't know what's going on.. This is the third time you've done that to me.. ", he seethed through clenched teeth.. Armaan gulped and lay down quickly, closing his eyes, hoping this to be a nightmare.. Those dangerous eyes were going to haunt him forever..

How come you manage to give such a catchy ending to each part?

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1095

Originally posted by: ssh57
Pg 117,
No girl could have asked for a better proposal. It was out of the world yet practical. Not some fantasy. The phone call at the end was the icing on the cake.

Pg 129,
The whole part was as fantabulous as ever but for the last line.
Whether they ended up kissing is something which only the two of them know!
If you don't know who else will? You are the one tailing them.

i do give them their privacy.. i dont pry that much! 😆