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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey dear..................i never meant sujal to get old...................do vampires get old.nah.. not as quick as humans.. but tht wud mean deciding wht kashish wud be like and stuff... plus.. he's already soo mature in this ff, cant make him daddy level mature.. no way...😆??????????????atleast in ur fic i dont think so..TRUE!!!!😉😉😉😆😆😆..he will never look anything but develishly charming in my ff's.. even if he gets blind, beaten, enraged or anything else..😃😃😃....................well apart from SK i love Angad Kripa jodi..me too, i watched 2-3 epis only but i like it!! and now Maan Geet jodi from Geet show..yah it really popular thee days... lot of pl are writing on tht........................oh ya neelu mentioned u both are friends and in same class ..yes we are, we met in the hostel and she told me to check this site out.. then i decided to try my hand at writing.. she said it was gud and i shud post it.. so i did..i think am right about the latter part...........................

well angad and maan are both equally egoistic and hot headed..heeehee.. he doesnt know he's egoistic.. its just u cant help being awed when he is around and now after so amny years, he expects tht awe from every1....................but love has made angad more romantic and passionate....hmm i am liking it😉 and maan love is making him so adorable and mad in feelings.... ahh tough to decide....................hope this helps with the story u have in mind..helped me loads sweety...😊😊.......................choose ur characters accordingly.......................i will..😉



..u see, i dont want ot loe readers i have if they dont like the main couple.. and i think agand-kripa is by far the most popular coise till now.. so i am leaning heavily on them...

and great comment dear..😊😊😊 thanks

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meghna continue soon please..😊
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hello readers..
This is the last chapter of this ff and its filled with madness...

It may turn to be a bit boring, but it explains how deep sujal's and kashish's feelings and needs for each other are.

For clarification of certain terms read the glossary provided in the end..



Chapter 7

Once upon an insane week


(Last Chapter)

Ours days settled down… Mine, Leila's and our boss's… Our routine evolved and another month passed happily with nothing big. He had felt real blood lust only 2wice in the whole month. Once when I had ridden up the elevator with him and today, coz I guess his mother had visited him.


"Why doesn't she leave him alone? He is her son, doesn't she want him happy? Why doesn't she understand that he is happy here?"


I asked Leila as we lay on my bed and I stroked her soft, furry head.. Leila whined in response and twitched her ear. Some days I almost believed she was really listening… but then why would a dog want to hear me rant about my boss?


Oh and did I rant about him… I felt disgusted at how obsessive and possessive I was becoming… earlier those women hadn't mattered. Yet today it had been so difficult not to tell her to leave and offer myself… what is wrong with me?!! I glanced at the clock for the 5th time in last half an hour… the daytime drags on so long… it's still 2 hrs till office time.. I stretched and close my eyes, hoping for time to move faster.. I got disturbed from my mindless musing when Leila perked up and uttered a low growl.


"What's wrong girl? What's bothering you?" I patted her head trying to calm her down, but she only tensed even more.


Now she sat on her haunches, her ears straight, her teeth bared. "What's wrong girl?" I asked her again with slight alarm, getting off the bed.


She rushed to the door growling. She never growls around me.. Whine, yes.. But now she looked dangerous all of a sudden, "Leila are you ok?" I asked trying to pat her calm, then I heard some1 moving outside So that's what she is growling at.


More than ever, I was thankful for her presence now. Although it seemed stupid that some1 would try to rob me in daylight.. Something still kicked my defense mechanism and I grabbed a baseball bat and slowly headed out of my room. Leila stayed close by my side, reducing her growl to a low rumble which the intruder wouldn't hear… Ok.. So she is intelligent..


I hid behind a wall to my drawing room and slowly peaked. A man in black overalls was looking around my place. He didn't look like thief coz he wasn't opening any drawers and he wasn't an innocent person coz he had a gun in his hand. I shuddered with fear and pulled Leila close to me. There isn't any1 I can call for help right now. I have to do this myself!! I wouldn't let what happened to my Joseph, happen to me too!!


Drawing strength from my resolve, I racked my brain for a plan. I knew I had to sneak up to him and blow his head open from behind. Bending low I whispered to Leila, "Leila I don't know if you understand me, but I need you to walk in there quietly, don't frighten him. Just go near him make him turn his back to me.. God I hope you r understanding..GO."


I pushed her forth hoping for best. Coz I couldn't forgive myself if anything happened to her.. She had been a true companion for the last month.


Leila slowly went into the room as I had asked, but she bared her teeth to the intruder and her gait was more stalk-like rather than a stroll… I had asked her to be nonthreatening… Urgggh!! She is a dog! I reminded myself. Limited brain!!


Bracing my bat I watched Leila circle and turn the intruder around. As soon as his back was turned, I charged, but something warned him and abruptly he turned, pointing the gun at me.


At that moment I knew I was going to die.. I wish I can see him one last time before dying..


Leila leapt at the intrude before he could aim and the shot went wild. She had gone for the jugular and now they both rolled on the floor, making me unable to strike, "Leila move!!" I said taking position. But the wolf in her was dominant, she didn't listen to me, she was nipping, biting and snaring the man with full intention to kill and not maim.


"Leila!!!" I screamed when another shot rang and she whined instantly. The intruder shook off Leila's suddenly prone from and I struck him without hesitation. Not caring if he was dead I rushed to Leila and checked her pulse. I sighed with relief when she breathed, but her chest was rapidly becoming red and I knew she was shot. Somehow I managed to drag her to the door, into a cab and rush to a veterinary hospital, whose name somehow popped into my mind. God please god please save her!! Please Please Please..


I prayed feverishly as the cab sped. Once at the clinic, they took her quickly into emergency and I sat down at the waiting chairs. My blue tee had become red with Leila's blood and my cheeks were streaked with tears. Seeing my condition, some people tried to help me, offer sympathy. But it wasn't them I wanted… What I wanted was…. my breath caught up in my throat as I saw his face in my mind. Leila is his dog. My responsibility. I had let her get hurt. He will hate me now… and this thought burned through my soul, pained my heart.


I don't know how long I sat there, bleakly staring at the tiles. The doc hadn't come out of the surgery yet and I hadn't come out of my shock.


"KASHISH!!" my head snapped up at the voice. Surely I am hallucinating!! He couldn't be here.. He couldn't be looking this worried.. He couldn't be looking to so concerned and so relived after seeing me… Surely this is a punish-


My 'Hallucination' reached me and crushed me into a tight hug before I could call him a dream. Thrown into another shock ( a pleasant one) I heard him murmur something with deep affection in his voice.


When I had calmed down a little and so had he ( I guess ), he pulled he slightly away and cupped my cheek, "Tell me you r unhurt. Tell Me!"


"I am fine. Lei-" before I could continue he again crushed me to his chest, saying something in a language I didn't understand but recognized one word 'RwhalMsdr'


So apparently it doesn't mean stupid secretary.. I smiled suddenly and curled my hand around his back. Now that he was here, I knew everything would be Ok. I was totally calm now, even happy!! Go figure. From highly panicked, shock, guilt, dread, I had gone to La-La land.


Yah, just coz he's hugging me…


Maybe he heard my thoughts or the clearing of throats around us, so he put me away from him, and instantly I was sad. What is wrong with ME??!!! I don't like him this way do I? He is my boss!! I respect him! I don't.. I .. don't.. No I Can't!! SO I Don't!


"Leila.." I managed to squeak, fighting my inner turmoil. It would do me no good thinking nonsense around him.


"She'll be fine. She is strong."


"But she got shot!!", I said, horror again seeped into me. His presence had cleansed away every bad thing from inside my mind and now that we were separated, the whole evening came slowly back to me.


Perhaps he realized the strange effect his touch has upon me coz he cradled my hand in his and made me sit, "What had happened? Tell me everything."


I nodded and gave up every detail before I could forget. When I had finished he cursed colorfully once …oh he's mad, so mad.. I have never heard him curse!! I have never seen so many emotions in him actually... and then his face set into emotionless, harsh, stone planes.


I could feel menace emitting from him, even the animals around us became agitated and started whining.


"I am sorry for what happened." He said in a voice, which showed just how much control he had. His nerve ticked wildly in his jaw and black storm swirled in his eyes. He was beyond furious, he was Wrath itself condensed into a human form… Some1.. More than some1 are going to die…


Slowly I placed my hand on his cheek to distract him. "It's ok. I am not hurt and as you said, Leila will be fine too. And b/w both of us, we probably killed the intruder."


With a bit more control he looked at me and murmured, "But he isn't the one, who is responsible."


"Why not? He is the one who-…. You mean some1 had sent him?"


He slowly nodded and looked down with Shame in his eyes? Alright! I'll kill whoever is doing this!! They dare to shame him!!! Now, it seemed as if I had borrowed a load of his fury, for he was looking much calmer now, "I'll take care of this my Rwhal-Msdr. They should have known better. You don't have to worry. They will pay with flesh and blood. They will pay till they die in hell"


Gone was his lack of control and boiling wrath, to be replaced by cold fury, which I feared… Coz this meant he wouldn't fail, he wouldn't die in impetuous foolishness. He will exact what he wants in the most painful way possible and no one would be able to stop him.


"Please.. that… Is it necessary? Can't these people be reasoned with? I don't want people getting hurt.. I don't want you getting hurt." I pleaded.


"Reasoned?(his storm in his eyes crackled to form a glint) This was the result of reasoning… No. The time for talks is past. Now I am going to reason with their fates. You don't have to worry about me, my blood is strong and my resolve even stronger.. ", He said and baring his teeth in a menacing smile.. I should be Afraid, I should be Terrified after realizing his intentions, I should be Running… But I Can't.


His fangs slowly elongated as he plotted murder and blood without his realization, WOW!! He is sooo dangerously HOT!! The thought formed clear in my mind and my hand moved by itself to touch his mouth.


His eyes smiled at me then, giving me look I had never received. As if I am something to eat.. But more than just blood.. He stared deep into my eyes and kissed my palm then. Instantly my heart jumped into my throat, fire burnt a path from my palm to my heart and then spread all over me. Instant combustion..


I never realized when he released my hand, went to talk with his driver. I didn't realize when the doc came and what she said about Leila either… My brain rebooted when he grasped my hand and gave it a squeeze.


"What breed is your dog?" the pretty doc was asking. For the 2nd time maybe.


"She's half wolf", I replied still a bit dazed. Shit, Leila isn't mine. She's Sujal's


"Does she get her vaccine shots?" the doc asked doubtfully. See! His dog!


"Yes." My boss replied calmly. The doc looked for me to him and then at our linked hand and raised her brow. I don't even want to start thinking what she was thinking atleast not in his presence.. and definitely not after what had happened right now.


"She'll be released tomorrow" she finally said and left.


"See, Leila is fine." My boss said turning to me. Ok. Breath. Breathe and look at your shoes. Good. Now think.


"How do you know I was here?" I asked. Thank god I was thinking logically again. So logically I withdrew my hand from his. logic also told me my eyes were lying when he looked slightly disappointed.


"Max.. Another dog, managed to scent your trail.. I had a feeling that something was wrong, when I… the sun went down and I had been fearing something already so…" he trailed off not wanting me to know too much.


I let it rest, coz his strange household was none of my business. My logical mind agreed and treacherous heart did not.


"I should stay here… I want to stay here and see to everything. But I have to go. Now. I have to… err… make a few things clear… to … some stubborn people. I'll be away for a week. I've put max on guard of your house. My driver would take back Leila to my house. I also want you postpone all my meeting for next week, I may not be available on the phone either. Ok?"


"No!" I said and he looked surprised. How can he go away for a week and not even talk on the phone? How am I gonna mange the office? How am I gonna live without.. SHUT UP!! Stop whining!! I ordered myself in time before the words formed.


"I want to take care of Leila." I continued with false bravado. I wanted to say more, oh so much more.. But I forgot everything when he cupped my face. His eyes were all soft and tender polar opposite from before. He smiled and kissed my forehead.


I didn't hear, see, feel anything for next 20 mins actually. I guess that made his job easier, coz by the time my brain rebooted 2nd time that night, I was sitting in the room where Leila lay drugged. The driver and Max waited outside dutifully and my boss had left for his trip.

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The week of his absence which I had been dreading began.


Leila's health consumed my entire attention span for the first two days. Or I let it, coz otherwise I would have been thinking too much about my boss, I had to go without him for a week, I can't begin to go crazy at day two. I chided myself jokingly, but I what did I know of the future?


By the night on 2nd day itself my nerves were shot. I was jittery in the office. Leila had recovered very fast for my mind's sanity and the empty room beyond the door in my office, kept sending chills to my mind.


I have to avoid thinking about him all together. But that means not thinking about him!!! Argghh.


I Want Him!! I.. NO!! I mean I Want him in that room beyond that door.


Insane… I have gone completely insane..To even imagine such things, to even dare to crave such things.. Insane..


The next day, unable to sleep I fussed over Leila, until she barked and growled at me, sending me away. She's gotta sleep.. Let her sleep.


… Go to the garden, exhaust yourself with phy activity. My mind guided me. But it didn't help. I saw some wild creepers in the garden and they reminded me of the balcony at his house and then that night. I went inside and started on a cleaning spree, but the red dress in the closet made things worse… Can't he call? Oh please just for a 5seconds.. Oh Please…Please..


I paced the floor nervously, but then when that didn't help either, I put on my running shoes, plugged my ears with the noisiest hard rock music and went jogging. I saw a huge dog on the way but I ignored it. I ignored everything and kept running…


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Today was the 3rd day since he… Oh god I can't even think word 'gone' without hyperventilating… What is wrong with me?!!

I tried jogging again but it didn't help. This nervous, restless, lost feeling assured me that something was Deeply wrong with my psyche..

One moment I was craving him desperately, next moment I was afraid of even thinking about him coz it created an odd pain in my stomach and made the craving even stronger.. Both the conflicting emotions fed each other. One frightening me to extreme, the other sending me to depths of hopelessness, both driving me to insanit.. I didn't even know when I had slept or eaten last. My own fear of my reaction to my feelings fuelled my insanity.…

I got ready to go to office with every cell in body vibrating violently.

It wasn't this bad!!! The week after he bit me, all this wasn't this bad!!!

Further panicked I placed the floor. I was able to work, drink, eat!! I screamed out loud and tore of my clothes. I knew I couldn't go to office in my condition. So I called in sick and went for another round of running. When I returned my body was exhausted and his image was burned in my mind.

When I woke up or maybe managed to think about something other than him, I realized it was day time. With anger and hatred I didn't know I possesses, I glared at the sun. If not for the sun, he would get 24 hrs to do his work. He would come back sooner!!

Is he coming back right?! A doubt popped in mind and I had an intuition that my life was going to get worse.

I was already so sickly maddened by his absence, now the fear and tension of his not returning was like fearing my own death at the end of the week. Stupid tears slid down my cheek when I remembered how concerned he had looked kissing my forehead. Gods I never cry!!! Why am I crying?!!

When I couldn't figure this out, I cried even harder, eventually Leila limped over to me and began to lick my face in earnest. I too argued with my mind gave myself reasons for his obvious return.

"He has a successful business here, he has to come back!".... He can start his business elsewhere. The doubt replied

"SHUT UP!!" I squashed the stupid doubt in my mind.

RwhAlMsdr the word echoed in my mind, bringing instant relief to my fevered mind.

What the heck?!! How can a word mean so much?

But I knew it did, something prompted me to concentrate on it. I decided to Google word and froze at the ans.. This.. this.. CAN'T be Right… I'll look again.. THIS Can't be the Right!!.. Each time I searched the result was diff, but it roughly translated to same – source of soul

I don't know for how long stared at those words in lost silence. Not an endearment or a complement.. But so much more..

"A human IS no more than robot, a zombie without a conscious, a soul.. Without a spirit."

And wouldn't he stay away to keep it safe? If he truly sees you as his spirit, then wouldn't he place your safety before your need to be close to him? He is not coming back.. It is futile to wait.. He won't come back.. You can mean too much to him or too less.. Either way he is not coming bac-

I screamed. I screamed so loud that Leila howled. I couldn't get over what those words meant. The fact he felt something for me and already the voice of doubt had poisoned it. Ruined my elation.

I kept screaming until I fell into a sobbing heap.

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When I next possessed some sanity I didn't know what day it was.. 4th .. 5th .. 6th ? Whichever it was I knew it was too long.. It was too long a wait.

It's his fault. Hate him. It's all his fault. He bit you and made you a slave. It's his fault. The doubtful voice drilled into my mind.

But my moment of lucidity was clear enough to again crush it. It wasn't his fault. What I was feeling wasn't coz of his bite either, I realized with amazement. Something had changed in me, on the day I had first met him. I have been driving towards this phase ever since I had started working for him, I had been slow so I didn't realize. It had gained speed when he had bit me. My first sign had been at the time when I had felt pain while driving away from him that night.. And last time when he exposed something deeper to me, it exploded.

"I am finally here, my fate realized, since the day he had first rested his empty eyes on me, this fate of mine had been decided…"

And again I was reduced to a sobbing heap..

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Every moment I spent in mad yearning or cruel despair burned my body raw and every lucid moment which came afterward cleared my mind further…

I knew now I couldn't live without him. Sooner or later I would die without him. I knew I meant a lot to him. I knew he may not come back, as a way to protect me. I knew that the pain I felt now, in his absence was the pain he felt every time when he resisted taking my blood.

I wasn't afraid of him taking my blood now. Now I Needed him to take my blood. I needed to ease his pain, in turn to ease mine. Oh I need him! All of him, nothing but him..

And what if he doesn't return? The doubt flashed in mind and this time brought me memories of my lonely existence. I cringed with pain and cried again. If I am his soul source then he is my anchor.. Without him I am adrift and lost…

Want him.. Need him.. Want.. Need…

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(sujal's pov)

Every vampire's ultimate wish is to walk safely under sun, feel the warm pleasure of it caressing our skin, mine isn't.

A vampire's greatest fear is being exposed to the same sun and burning alive, mine isn't.

My lips curved into a smile and I knew it was a cruel smile as I worked towards fulfilling my ultimate wish, working against my greatest fear. I watched the man writhe on floor and waited for my 'dearest' mother to show up. This wasn't going to be my only surprise to her.. Oh No… This, was just the beginning.

Coz of her, for 6 days I had stayed away from my Rwh al-Msdr. For 6 days I have fended off madness. But now I was reaching my limit Make me wait any longer… They would get the blood bath they want.

The need to; see her, touch her, hold her, was like a living organism eating up my insides…

"SUJAL!!! Stop this!!!" my mother screamed as soon as she rushed into the room. Her mouth was stained red with blood… Fool..

Did she believe she could defeat me, by power of more blood?

I do not feel starved of blood. I am starved of sanity.. My hunger cannot be surpassed by any power.

I projected in her mind easily, despite her barriers. As anticipated she grew alarmed by my prowess and felt the first thread of fear. Wildly I latched on it and fed it with my mind. I fed my fear of being separated from Kashish into her mind, just as I was feeding it to the agonized man on the floor.

"Stop it Sujal. I know you r manipulating my mind."

"Am I?" I asked, breaking eye contact as I no longer needed it. I didn't need anything except her and I would surpass anything to get to her. my hunger would consume everything until it found her.

"This is…. How are u… No… No…. Sujal…. I am your mother-"

"And she is my Rwh al-Msdr!!" I felt my control fracturing. The glass in front of my vibrated and the room temp dropped a little. My hunger fed..

"Son.. You r mistaken. She is just a bloodh-"

##AAAAAAAAAARRRRRGHHHHH### The man on floor screamed in agony, interrupting her. I had chosen him coz he was her favorite toy.. Payback dearest mother..

Think about her again and he dies… And his spilled blood may break my control… Decide mother..

The man begun to scream in earnest now, for I could not stop the hunger which had begun to feed on his pain.. A second passed and then she said, "Fine. Do whatever you want. Stop all this just."

I turned to her and shuffled some papers to her. I am no longer your son. I give up my family name and inheritance. These are papers signed by our council. The only thing which we have in common now is our name.. I have paid the sum of 5 million in gold as my dept to you. Do you understand and accept?

Again I projected my words into her mind and watch her shudder with horror.

"Son!.. Sujal!!.. NO!! This is madness.. Haven't I just said you r free to do what you wish? Why this? I do not wish to-" her words died in mid sentenced when she looked me in the eye and saw the fine edge of dangerous-madness was balancing on

I do not care what you wish. I am free of every tie to you. Do you understand and accept?

Her lips thinned into tight line and she begun to resist my will in earnest. A futile effort, all I had to do was fall a little deeper into that madness, let go of the hunger a bit more.

The man on the floor became too drained to scream now, he could barely twitch, his blood slowed as his heart beat slowly. Slowly I knelt down and brushed his sweat away… He is just the beginning… mother…

When he was on brink of dying my mother nodded her head and signed the papers, instantly she turned to leave. Oh Mrs. Grewal.. It also says here, that if you ever retaliate, in any manner. I am free to kill you and whoever else I feel is involved.

I saw furious resolve replaced by fear in her face and gave her a glimpse of the chaos in my mind. Solidifying her fear, I released her mind completely.

I managed to gains some control me, when I realized that I would be seeing her soon 12 hrs and I would be with her.

9 hrs later I stood outside her door. My body vibrated with anticipation, my mind no longer mine. I inhaled her scent wondering if I would lose myself to bloodlust. I had been told she was not coming to the office. I assumed that she was afraid after the attack, but now I knew something was wrong.

The peace I felt was missing. The door didn't open, but Leila scratched from inside, I waited another second for humans are slow, then Leila howled and my heart stopped.

It was a howl of desperation and despair. I broke down the door and blindly followed her scent which was mingled with tears and dread. A second later I found her.. And I realized what was worse than burning alive in the sun.

She at huddled in a corner. Her face lost in her wild tresses and trembling hands. She looked worse than the writhing man on the floor. He had being dying of fear and pain.. But she wasn't dying. She was vanishing out of existence… But she isn't a vampire.. She didn't need a 'Rwh Hamyh'… a 'Rwh Mrsah'…. did she? was I her spirit anchor.. protector? ..

If I need her inside me- to feel, did she needed me around her- to exist?

if she is the spirit then I am the outer body...

I didn't feel walking to her or taking her into my arms. Neither did she.. I realized now that I wasn't the only one on who had fallen into madness, she had too.…

Slowly her body warmed to right temperature and tears begun to flow from her listless eyes. By minutes she became a bit of herself as I became mine. I pulled her closer and buried my face in her hair. Slowly, ever so painfully her hands crept around me and a tremor ran through my body.

As my mind once again became my own, my blood lust returned along with a more basic lust. NO!!! She is hurt!! In pain.. I cannot take anything from her.. I cannot hurt her more!!!

"Take my blood." Her small muffed voice filled my ears and cleansed my mind. Almost hypnotizing me into following her command.

"No… I can't hurt you more.." I managed to groan aloud. Her smell wrapped around m senses and I felt what being intoxicated like a drunk is.

"Take it… It… It… hurts", her voice captured me, her words stunned me.

"Please..", she begged me brokenly and I knew I could do naught, but obey her.

I pulled her away slightly and she exposed her neck to me. I am not a raving mad, who is only here for your blood Kashish.

I spoke in her mind, to make her understand what I felt wasn't just emotionless hunger for her. I turned her face and dipped my head not to drink from her neck but from her lips. I tasted her sweet, delicate lips and understood what sirens were.

I put all my love, need, hunger, affection into that one action. When I ended the kissed, her eyes shimmering with tears and love washed over my face and I realized what the warmth of heavenly sun on a cold skin is…


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Glossary:-


Vampire: an evolved species of human, who burn in sun have great night vision, possess various levels of psionic powers and some rarely telekintic powers. They drink human blood for sustenance and cannot turn humans into vampires through any means.


Rwh al-Msdr(Arabic) : Source of the spirit.


Rw? ?amyh(arabic) : spirit protector.


Rw? Mrsah(arabic) : spirit anchor.


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wow fantastic ending dear....................sujal and kashish hopelessly in love with each other and cant survive without the other......................and sujal took good care that kashish wont be harmed afters.................really liked sujal's POV too dear....................it completely reminded me of Twilight..............but of course this fic is different...................very good try on something this different......................

if u r finalizing on Angad and kripa then too u r not losing me as ur reader..............so no worries................
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Fantastic ending to a very different story.
Sujal and Kashish are both hopelessly in love and caanot survive without each other.
Sujal took all the care to ensure Kashish's safety and all the while that Sujal was away Kashish kept prayinf for his safety/
Superb!! completely enjoyed reading the whole story.
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Lovely Story !!

It was soo amazing.......I read it all in one go...!
Eagerly waiting for your next story !!
Ok about the lead pair you wanted .,.....I wanna suggest Shruti Seth(Esha) and Kavi Shastri(Rohan) for the next fic...
They were the lead couple of the YRF Tv Show.- Rishta.com...!!
I adored that show and they had gr8 chemistry.,...Since no one else is making any suggestions...I dearly hope you consider my choice...
BTW, U can see their pic on my siggy...! Its my 3rd siggy !!
Luv,
Vandu
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Originally posted by: spvd

wow fantastic ending dear...thanks😊😳.................sujal and kashish hopelessly in love with each other and cant survive without the other. i hope the desc wasnt too boring... i just wanted to how the depth of their need........................and sujal took good care that kashish wont be harmed afters😆😆😉.he'll tear apart the heavens for her.................really liked sujal's POV too dear.really? thanks😊😊 it was a lat moment thing.. i deleted the part of k'spov and rewrote the whole thing......................it completely reminded me of Twilight.yah well twilight is just another addition in my vamipre fan book................but of course this fic is different.thts what i had been aiming for...although i have read and seen twilght so many times i was inadvertly writing the same dialogues at some places...😆😆...................very good try on something this different.....variety is my new motto😉😉..................

if u r finalizing on Angad and kripa then too u r not losing me as ur reader..............so no worries.................thank god for tht then😊😊

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Posted: 15 years ago
#79

Originally posted by: dazzling_glory

Fantastic ending to a very different story. .awww thanks so much for saying tht😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😃😃😃😃😃😃

Sujal and Kashish are both hopelessly in love and caanot survive without each other..nope they cant.. although i repeat.. i hope the desc wasnt too boring..
Sujal took all the care to ensure Kashish's safety and all the while that Sujal was away Kashish kept prayinf for his safety.not so much for his saftey, but rather tht he return to her quickly. when he told her he wud be fine, she wudnt belive otherwise.😆😆
Superb!! completely enjoyed reading the whole story..i am very happy tht u found it so😊😊



.and thankyou so much for the lovely comment😊😊😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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.i am glad u found it so..

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