|AN Writing Challenge~Closed*UPDATE pg 150* - Page 41

Created

Last reply

Replies

1.1k

Views

178.5k

Users

34

Likes

3.6k

Frequent Posters

Khushboo_AN thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: ANfan_1810

Once again ..... my dhamki .....

I am waiting for atleast 2 people to update ...... I am ready with mine, but wont till I get to read some nice, updates too ......
😃
where are u fellow writers?

LOL....I'm so glad I wrote a one-shot! 😆
Meera01 thumbnail
Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 15 years ago
Okay here is a one shot...I wrote it ages ago but never had a chance to come to it or post it buthope u all like it :)




Just Another Day...

Abhi begins to pace in his office frustrated at Nikki. "God this girl, I haven't been able to see her the whole day; she's been busier than I have and I'm her boss!" Sitting back down he looked at her picture on his laptop and all his frustration immediately disappeared. "It hasn't even been 24hrs since I last saw you and I'm already missing you like crazy, tumme aisa kya jadoo hai jaan?" he smiled to himself
Unknown to Dr. Modi his prayer was about to be answered as he saw his favourite intern in the corridor when going on his rounds.
Before Nikki knew it she was pulled into the fire escape. All she could do was gasp before pair of hands was placed on her mouth. Successfully pinning her to the wall he moved his hands as Nikki's eyes widened to see who it was.
"Abhi tum ... kya kareho?" holding her heart with her hand to slow her heartbeat. Looking into his eyes she knew her question had been answered. They burned so deep with passion she didn't have the courage to keep looking into them. Abhi smiled seeing her shy demeanour and couldn't help but pull her closer by her waist and nuzzling her neck, making her gasp.
"Abhi ... choro na"
Pulling her closer, he replied seriously "Maine tumhe chodne ke liya yeh haath nahi thama. Tum to mujhe ek baar nahi mili. Only I know how I've spent every moment away from you"
"I'm sorry I have had so much work, first I had to do all the rounds and then I also have to study the file for the surgery I am assisting Dr Shashank in and..."
Before she realised his lips had found hers. At first he was gentle teasing her bottom lip. Responding, she put her arms around his neck to pull him closer, making him deepen the kiss, more passionately then she could imagine. It didn't take long for her to realise what they were doing and where. Slowly she pulled away. Abhi admired her dazed expression as he pushed a strand of her away and leaned his forehead next to hers.
"Looks like i was being missed too."
She pushed him away, blushing and headed towards the door. But Abhi held her wrist only to look into her pleading eyes. Frustrated he let her go.
Walking in the corridor Nikki felt bad, "I really upset him, and all he did was want to spend time with me. I'll have to make it up to him."
Nikki entered Abhi's cabin at lunchtime, only to find him not there. So she decides to leave him a note. On a piece of paper she draws a heart and writes inside it:
"I'm really sorry, I'll try and spend time with you soon promise...don't be mad!" and adds a sad face.
Just as she turns to leave she bumps into Abhi himself; he grabs her waist to stop her from falling.
"And what are you doing here? I thought you had too much work?". Feeling too shy to reply she just looked at the table. It took him a second to discover the note she had left. Reading it, he looked up at her expectant face with a grin. Seeing a mischievous grin form on his face, she narrowed her eyes.
He was touched by her letter but thought it was a good time to make her do whatever he wanted, looking at her guilty expression. "I want something else too...A kiss and I mean a proper kiss" Seeing her shock, he raised an eyebrow. Nikki knew he was serious... she had no choice. Raising her head slightly she kissed his lips gently. Before she had a chance to pull away he tightened his grip around her waist and deepened the kiss, crushing her against his body. She desperately needed to breath but he wouldn't let her go. Eventually when he did, she grabbed his shirt, to pace her breathing. He loved the effect he had on her, knowing full well that she would always give in to him. Smiling, he had to fight back the urge to tease her, thinking it was not the best time because he had already put her in such a state.
She ran out before he had a chance to stop her. Leaning against the wall in the corridor, she closed her eyes. Trying to slow her heartbeat, she thought to herself how did he manage to have such an effect on her, that she could lose all her senses.
That evening as Nikki began to make dinner, the doorbell rang. Opening the door she was shocked to see the sight before her. Leaning against the doorframe with a grin on his face, Abhi took in the sight before him. Showered and changed into black Punjabi dress, she looked like an angel. No make up or anything, just pure innocence. Abhi sighed as he had to take in the idea that this angel was all his. Nikki was too shocked to say anything as she wasn't sure if he was real or her dream.
"Won't you call me in, or are you planning to keep me outside all evening?" He put his arms around her waist and pushed them in.
"Huh...Yeah.. But you were...weren't you??"
"Meeting cancelled, if that's what you're trying to ask"
"Oh ".
As she finally came out of her shock she smiled and hugged him. Abhi kissed her forehead and hugged her tightly. As he went to kiss her lips she pulled away, "Eaten yet?". He nodded in the negative. "Then I'll get started on dinner". "Ah not so fast" he said pulling her back so she crashed into his chest. Pulling her close he eyed her lips that looked so welcoming; he slowly pressed his lips against hers teasing her bottom lip and then her tongue. He loved the way she tasted like honey, every time he sought her lips. He knew exactly how to take things slowly with her at first because this was new to her. He could tell how much she trusted him every time she was with him, she would give herself completely to him, letting him lead her and show her how to be loved. Slowly pulling away before his desires got out of control, "I think we'll save the rest for desert" he whispered in her ear. "Abhi" she exclaimed slapping him lightly on the arm before running into the kitchen. Abhi smiled at her, this is why he loved her, no matter how strong feisty she tried to be, there was this vulnerable side to her.
Kneading the dough she didn't realise when Abhi's warm hands came around her waist and he began nuzzling her neck. God this guy knew to kill her sanity; she knew if he stayed longer she would find it really difficult to finish cooking.
"Abhi go inside I'll come in a bit once I'm done. At this rate I won't get anything done".
He in response was just to caress her stomach, which began to tickle Nikki. She tried to push him away, laughing but he wouldn't have any of it.
Abhi heard her mutter, "God so stubborn" under her breath, "Fine stay here, but no badmashi, got it" she said looking up at him, trying to have a stern face. He nodded like an obedient child and just held her as she finished cooking.
Once dinner was prepared, they laid it on the table. Abhi smiled silently as he noticed she had made all his favourite dishes. No matter how tired she was from work, she still thought about his needs first. Before she could sit down, Abhi pulled her into his lap. "I love you, you know that" he said looking into her eyes. "Umm no I didn't know that" she shook her head, laughing she added "I love you to".
Before Abhi could grab the first bite, Nikki stopped him and fed him. They finished dinner, feeding each other. As Nikki began to take the plates, Abhi's hand stopped her. "No, you made dinner, so I'll clean up, you go rest in the living room." He said caressing her cheek with one hand, she silently nodded knowing he wouldn't have it any other way.
When Abhi came into the living room, he found Nikki flicking through the TV channels through the remote. Going over to her, he took the remote off her hand switched off the TV, before sitting down next to her on the couch. "I would appreciate your 100% attention madam", saying this he cupped her face, leaning forward to kiss her as she leaned back. Before they knew it, Nikki was lying underneath Abhi. Holding her by the waist he kissed her softly at first; when he found her responding he deepened the kiss. His hand began caressing her waist and stomach, as he felt her soft curves, whilst her one hand was around his neck bringing him closer and the other on his arm. Nikki's stomach had butterflies as his hands touched her; a part of her couldn't believe she was giving him permission to touch her the way he did, but what was more shocking to her was how right it felt, how his one touch could make her feel so safe yet stir the craziest emotions in her. She silently realized that she could never give this right to anyone else ever. The more he explored her body, the more his desire grew. Her duppatta accidently fell of her shoulder, making her feel shy; before she could put it up his hand stopped her. "You're beautiful" he whispered huskily in between ragged breaths, as his lips came to her shoulder and neck. He knew if he didn't stop know, he wouldn't be able to control his emotions, slowly but reluctantly he pulled away. Abhi noticed Nikki's flushed face, and dazed eyes; lord was she beautiful. Slowly tucking her hair that covered face behind her ear, he leaned his forehead against hers, trying to catch his breath. Touching Nikki's hand that was over his heart, he whispered in her ear, "What are you doing to me, when I'm with you drive me crazy, and when you're not with me, hell that's worse,". Seeing how shy and uncomfortable she became, he hugged her. When he felt her grip tighten, and Nikki slightly shiver, he became slightly concerned; "Are you okay". He could feel her nod yes against his chest. He wondered if she was just saying because she thought it was what he wanted to hear, lifting her chin with his thumb, he looked into her eyes knowing they could never lie; he saw slight confusion but more than that total trust; trust she had in him.
Soon after, Abhi left. Back at his house, he remembered the night whilst taking a shower, whilst Nikki did the same going to sleep.
😊 😊

Meera xx
Just Anot
Just Another Day...
Edited by Meera01 - 15 years ago
Khushboo_AN thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 15 years ago
*EDIT*
Yep, read it full! 😃 I like the name...
Talk about raging hormones...😆 what's up with Abhi? 😲 Not that I mind...I'm sure Nikki doesn't either lolz! 😉 *giggles*
But yeah, pinning her against the wall is one of my fav things that Abhi does 😃
And just imagining him leaning against the doorframe is 😍 I love the guy!
Looking forward to more from you! 😃
Edited by Khushboo_AN - 15 years ago
..Naina.. thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 7
Posted: 15 years ago
wowow Meera! awesome one shot....hehe loved how he pulled her into the fire escape...and sighh imagining him leaning against the door😍

hehe awesome thoughh and you're a great writer =D

Cheers!
~Naina
Meera01 thumbnail
Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 15 years ago
@ Khushboo: as requested titled it (wouldn't we want all our days to be in the arms of hunky Dr Modi!!)

@ Naina thankyou so much, yeah i thought I would use the fire escape for Abhi Nikki, seeing as it is left vacant by Armaan and Ridzy atm!
AbhiNikiLuver thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Networker 3 Thumbnail
Posted: 15 years ago

Awesome shot Meera....I loved it!

Pls do continue your one-shot on the Fiction Thread too...I'm looking forward to it! ~Sheena😃
Khushboo_AN thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 15 years ago
@Meera...I edited my res comment! 😃
-----------------
And Sheenu...I'm waiting for your reply to my PM! :P
ANfan_1810 thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Khushboo_AN

LOL....I'm so glad I wrote a one-shot! 😆

Dear, am I missing something here? where is your one shot? I want to read it asap!
hapinezz13 thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 15 years ago


LOVE WAGER

PART 9


Abhimanyu was pacing in his room. Nikki had run away from the party and he had let her go and then went through the motions of the party like a robot. He had cooked, cleaned and helped his mom and brother in everything without uttering a single word. He was tired but he couldn't sleep. The restlessness was killing him. He had thought that Nikki might understand why he was here but that hadn't happened.

"Bhai……are you asleep?" Sid's knock and his appearance in his bedroom made Abhi snap out of his thoughts.

"No….come on in" he invited his brother who came in and stood in front of him.

"What?" Abhi asked Sid's questioning gaze.

"What the hell happened between you two bhai?" he came right to the point and Abhi ran his hand though his hair.

"Nothing…….I think she hates me" he mumbled irritated.

"Hate you? You guys are the biggest idiots on this earth……she calls you in the middle of your night, worrying about your health….which you obviously lied about and you follow her back home as soon as you see all the pictures I posted on Facebook and you think you hate each other? "his little brother asked him infuriated.

"Those pictures….. I didn't" as Abhimanyu starts to lie; Sid stops him by raising his hand.

"Spare me bhai…….I know how irritated you got and am glad it served the purpose but please…..don't spoil all my hard work" Sid shot back and Abhi raised his eyebrows.

"Your….hard work?" he asked turning towards him.

"Yeah…..to make you jealous and to keep Thomas away from her……now you sound like you are giving up on her" Sid asked.

"Giving up?" Abhi laughs sarcastically; "I think that is the best way" he sits on the bed.

"Are you kidding me bro?" S id goes and sits right next to him, unable to believe that Abhimanyu Modi was giving up so easily.

Abhimanyu looks up and when Sid sees the determination creep in his eyes he smiles. Nikita Malhotra was a goner now.

"Heck no" Abhi replies and the brothers smile at each other.

"So what now?" Sid stretches himself on the bed.

"Now Dr. Nikita Malhotra is not going to be able to run away from me" Abhimanyu announces and smiles and the brothers high five each other.

The next day a subdued and serious Nikki enters the hospital and ignores Sid's greeting but greets everyone else curtly.

"Hey Nikita…..what happened?" S id goes next to her and she looks at him with fire in her eyes.

"Dr. Sidhhant Modi…..I really do not think I want to talk to you……ever" she snaps and starts walking away.

"Why not?" Sid follows her and steps in front of her to block her way.

"None of your business" she tells him and tries to move but he again blocks her path.

"If you are going to give me attitude I'd like to know why" Sid snaps and Nikki turns to him furious.

"Attitude……you lied to me…..you knew who I was and still you didn't tell me that he was your brother….you played with me….I think that's a hobby with you Modi's" she said furiously and saw anger enter Sid's eyes.

"Really…….I knew? Well let's see…..you pine over him……are calling him at insane hours …..can't concentrate as you are worried about his health and then you turn around and say that you don't care? Are you kidding yourself Nikita?" Sid finally confronts her and watches as her lips tighten and she closes her eyes to rein in her temper.

"Don't decide for me……and listen carefully when I say this…..I don't care about him….get it" she says slowly, so as to make him understand, her eyes still shut tight. When she opens her eyes, her eyes meet Abhimanyu's. She takes a step back in shock and looks everywhere for Sid.

"He left" Abhimanyu states, watching her with hooded eyes. The color drains from Nikki's face and she gulps helplessly. She had done it again. He was wearing the same expression on his face as the one he had when he had opened the door to his house when she had gone to ask for forgiveness.

She tries to move but her feet refuse to obey her brain. He had heard what she had said and his temper had soared. I don't care about him…..she had said it this time and he had had enough.

"Nice to know your feelings Dr. Nikita…….thank you for the truth" he tells her taking a step closer the open mouthed girl.

"I…Abhi…I mean…Abhimanyu….Dr. Modi… I.." Nikki flusters, taking a step back.

"Don't worry Dr. Nikita……since you don't care….ignore me" he says and Nikki shakes her head.

"I didn't mean" but is halted by Abhimanyu's hand.

"I was here to tell you that your adviser called you……we have a meeting with her" he says in a professional tone and marches towards his mother's office with a lost Nikki following him.

"Dr. Nikita……Dr. Abhimanyu is visiting here for a month……..he will be taking a few lectures and you and him can team up for those…..they will help you with the few prerequisites you have and also you can share your experiences regarding working in India and here" Aarti explains and Nikki nods.

"Ok mam" she says and heads out back to her duties.

She had again said those words which she knew tore his heart…..she hadn't meant for him to hear them but he had. Tears flood her eyes but she keeps walking towards the caf. She needed some time to gather herself. Today she sorely missed Riddhima. She wished she had someone to talk to. She orders a coffee and sits in the utmost corner of the caf. A sob escapes her when she feels a hand on her shoulder and stiffens.

She looks with tear filled eyes into Sid's brown ones and tears start flowing freely. Sid gathers her in his arms and lets her cry.

"Bhai heard it na?" he questions and she nods.

"Do you care for bhai?" he asks and he again feels her stiffen.

"I…it's complicated" she replies, wiping her tears.

"Oh I know that…….but you need to know the answer to this Nikita" Sid tells her soothingly.

"I don't want to talk about it" she says and Sid gives her the space and walks away.

Two days pass without a word between Abhi and Nikki. He communicates with her through email and she does the same all the while preparing presentations. He gives the lecture series which is a huge hit but refuses to acknowledge her presence as anything but a colleague. Her heart cries at his behavior but she too maintains the distance.

"Nikita…..it's James birthday" Jessica gushes and Nikki smiles.

"Don't smile….we are going clubbing….you have to come" she says and Nikki shakes her head.

"No Jess…..it won't be possible" she tries to excuse herself but fails when the whole group decided to go out and celebrate. Dressed in a halter neck royal blue dress, with her hair tied in a pony tail, Nikki reaches the club with the group. She sees that everyone has brought a date which makes her miss Abhi even more. She sits with a wine glass on the bar trying to enjoy herself. She even half heartedly joins Sid and gang on the floor but then goes back to their reserved table. She sits down next to Jess and James, who are kissing each other and turns her face away.

"At least someone looks happy" she hears Abhi's voice and looks up to see him standing before her in black slacks and an open necked white shirt. His eyes were on the couple who was happily lost in each other.

"You?" she gasps.

"Why surprised? Am here to join the party" he shrugs and looks around , totally disinterested in her, which irks her.

"Sure…..enjoy it" she snaps and gulps her wine down and orders another. Abhi watches her and cancels her order.

"Who do you think you are?" she gets upset at his high handedness.

"Someone you don't care about" he throws on her which infuriate her. She pushes him away but he catches her from the waist.

"Let me go" she pants, struggling to get out from his grip.

"You behave ok" he instructs and throws her away from himself and walks towards the dance floor. He joins her group and starts dancing. She watches when a girl comes and clings close to him and dances with him. She can't take her eyes away from him, so stands watching as he dances. At sharp 12 am, the DJ announces that James and Abhi's birthday and she gasps.

The whole club sings the happy Birthday song and Sid drags her to the group. She joins the celebrations but her eyes are riveted on Abhi. It was his birthday. She couldn't believe it.

She hugs James and wishes him. The group starts dancing again, when she moves towards Abhimanyu. He looks at her and she notices lipstick marks on his cheeks and her hand rises to wipe them away. As soon as her hand comes in contact with his cheek, the expression in his eyes flares to that of desire.

"What are you doing Nikki?" he grips her hand and asks huskily.

"Lipstick marks" she turns innocent eyes towards him and hears him growl in his throat.

"So?" he questions, bringing her closer. In the dim light, all her senses are attuned to him and she goes willingly into his arms and sighs.

"Nikki" he says huskily and she opens her eyes.

"Yes" she asks, looking at him and reveling in his closeness.

"What do you want" he asks her and she smiles.

"Just wish you happy Bithday" she grins and starts rubbing the marks off his cheek.

"But there is no space for me" she frowns and keeps rubbing.

"There is" he looks into her eyes and she understands his meaning. Nikki stands on her tiptoe , places her arms around his neck and places her lips on his for a kiss.

"Happy Birthday" she says trying to move away.

"Oh no….you don't go anywhere" he pulls her closer and his mouth swoops down on her catching her lips with his and he kisses her passionately. She responds, opening her mouth for him. A moan escapes her, which puts Abhimanyu on the edge. He pushes her away but she refuses to move away.

"Nikki….stop it….I am human…..there is so much control I have" he pleads but she is enjoying her power on him refusing to stop. He drags her out and realizes that she is drunk.

"You need to get home" he shakes his head.

"Nooooooo……..this is so much more fun" she laughs and tries to come closer to him.

"Right" he mutters and puts her in his car. He asks for directions and she tells him. They reach home amongst drama and he drags her to her apartment and opens the door.

"I hate this……you will leave me alone now" she starts sobbing like a child and Abhi rolls his eyes.

"Go to sleep" he instructs and she catches his collar.

"Only in your arms" she lifts vulnerable eyes towards him.

"Nikki….please" he begs.

"Nooooooo…..no please……I want you" emboldened by the drinks she keeps going.

"Fine…let's go then" he drags her inside and makes her lie on the bed.

"Noooo…..my goodnight kiss" she holds his hand, refusing to let go. He sighs and plants a kiss on her forehead.

"Noooooo…….like you love me…..please" she makes a face.

"Nikki….go to sleep" her words were becoming bolder by the second.

"Not without a kiss" she fights and he places his lips on hers. She kisses him with her heart poured in the kiss. When they come up for breath, she announces sleepily, "I love you Abhi" and rolls over to sleep.

..Naina.. thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 7
Posted: 15 years ago
wow! awesome awesome update honey...loved how stubborn she was hehe but she kissed him!! have to say that was cute...along with her trying to wipe off the lipstick marks on his cheeks😆😆
lol do continue soon! oh yeahh. i forgot the most important part...the i love you! :) great update though...can't wait to read more!

~Naina
Edited by Naina2127 - 15 years ago

Related Topics

Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: LizzieBennet

3 years ago

✍️Submit a Writing Prompt ✍️

Hello, shello, IFians, readers and writers! Here we are again with a brand new initiative! To make a good story, writers add a healthy dose of...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: desidillse

3 years ago

Ink-Stained Pages: Aditi's Writing Index

[NOCOPY] [MEMBERSONLY] Tags Credits to Quantum-Dot Hello people! This is Adv. Aditi Jain aka Adi or AJ. I am a writer and here is the...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: FFEditors

7 months ago

Love-O-Rama #3: Frame it with Ishq: Closed

Are you ready to turn love into art? Take part in our Valentine's Day graphic challenge Frame it with Ishq. Theme : Love in all its forms!...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: FFEditors

7 months ago

Love-O-Rama #1: Pyar ka Trope-fest : Closed

You feel it in your fingers, you feel it in your toes Love is all around you, and so the feeling grows Yes, the day of feeling love, giving...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".