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Posted: 15 years ago

Contents:

Part 1 - pg1
Characters sketch - pg1
Part 2 - pg2
Part 3 - pg3
Part 4 - pg6
Part 5 - pg7
Part 6 - pg10

I am writing a FF based on the characters of MJHT some in different avatars. I have based the story for after when their studies have been completed and they have settled in their respective careers. Some things are open for interpretation, such as the characters ages and the nature of the Shergill and Sharma family businesses.
Please do press the like button if you like the story and feel free to leave comments on how to improve my writing. I would appreciate if no one leaves outright negative comments. If you don't like the story please just avoid it.

Also my main languages are English and Bengali. Any Hindi I know is from watching Indian Movies and Serials so sorry for any mistakes.

Part 1

Scene 1
Location ~ NGD Decorators Office
Characters in scene ~ Nupur, Dia, Gunjan and Ranvijay

Nupur & Dia are sitting at their desks in the office. Dia is wearing a purple short skirt with a white shirt and a lilac jacket. Nupur is wearing fitted black trousers and long white shirt and a black beaded waist coat.
Nupur - Finally, kaam khatam hua. Kamse kam aaj ke liye! (she sighs)
Dia- Haan finally! Abhi Ranvijay aatha hi hoga, mujhe pick up karne ke liye. (she looks around) Gunjan kaha hai. Use ghar nahin jaana kya?
Nupur- Woh client ke saath conference room main meeting kar rahin hai. Woh kuch details discuss kar rahe hai. Khatam hi hote honge.
Dia- Woh Mrs Shukla ka naya ghar? (Nupur nods) Mujhe bhi unse kuch baat karni, mai abhi athi hoon.
Nupur smiles at Dia and starts to get her things together ready to go home, when she hears a voice.
Ranvijay- Aaj humari kismet ki daat dehni paregi. Athehi pehli nazara tum. (he smirks and walks right up to her) Apne dost ki boyfriend ko gale nahin lagaogi? (Nupur takes a step back)
Nupur-Ranvijay (she cringes) kyuna tum Dia ki desk par behto, woh agle hi room mein hi hai, aur tumhe aise dekhegi to accha nahin hoga.
Ranvijay-Oh come on Nupur (he laughs) Main toh mazaak karaha tha, Dia ko beech mein lahne ki kya zaroorath? Aur tum agar kehti ho toh mein beht jatha hoon. (He brushes past her unnecessarily as he goes and sits at Dia's chair and put his feet on the desk, he looks Nupur up & down) Kya maine tumhe bataya ke tum in office ke kapro mein bohut.... Hot lagrahii ho? (he smirks)
Nupur-Hot toh tum bhi lagoge jab Dia yeh sab sunke tumhe kas kar ek...
Ranvijay-Kiss! (Ranvijay interrupts Nupur) Kiss, karogi na Dia?
Dia-Ranvijay! (Nupur turns around and sees that Dia & Gunjan have just entered the room, Gunjan is wearing white churidaar trousers with a knee length kuti top. Dia looks down shyly) yeh kya keh rahe ho?
Ranvijay-Sorry Princess main toh mazaak kar raha tha (he winks at Nupur and she cringes) Are you ready Princess, hum chale?
Dia-Ha Ranvijay, I'm ready, main tayar hoon. Chalo. (she goes to Ranvijay as he stands up and puts her arm through his, they both walk to the door, once there Dia looks back) Gunjan, tumhe hum ghar chor de?
Gunjan- Dia... (She looks at Nupur and recognises her expression as anger) tum dono jao, Nupur mujhe ghar chordegi.
Dia-Ok, see you at home, Gunjan. (Dia and Ranvijay leave)
Nupur- Uhhh!!! I can't stand that guy. Dia isme kya dekthi hai? Woh room se gayi nahin ke woh kisi aur pe line marna shuru kar detha hai.
Gunjan-Kya hua Nupur? Usne phir se kuch kaha kya?
Nupur-Phir se? Usne kehna kabhi band kiya ke phir se kuch kahe? Hume Dia ko samjana chahiye ke Ranvijay sahi ladka nahin hai!
Gunjan-Shanth ho jao Nupur. Tum jaanthe ho ke humne koshish ki hai, par agar Dia nahin maane to hum aur kya karsakthe hai..
Nupur- Phir bhi Gunjan...
Gunjan-Aur vaise bhi, Ranvijay kehtha bohut kuch hai, par kiya to kuch nahin. Shayad who ithna bhi burah nahin, jithna hum sochthe hai.
Nupur- Gunjan... (Nupur looks at Gunjan with her hands on her hips) woh sirf tum hi ho jo ithne bure insaan mein bhi acchai dhoond na chathi hai. Kaash tum bhai ki bhi acchai dekh paathi.. (Nupur holds her hand and head up as if praying)
Gunjan-Nupur humne thai kiya tha ke hum is bare mein ab aur baath nahin karenge. (Gunjan looks down, while playing with the end of her scarf)
Nupur-Gunjan, tum jaanthi ho ke Samrat Bhaiya, tumhe kitna pyar karte hai, phir bhi...
Gunjan- Nupur please... (Gunjan holds Nupur's hand and Nupur sighs)
Nupur-Acha teek hai, nahin baat karni toh nahin karenge, par soch na zaroor.
Gunjan- Nupur... (Nupur smiles)
Nupur- Ab chalo, itni baat kyun kar rahi ho ghar nahin jaana kya?
Gunjan- Mein baat...? (She sees Nupur smiling and smiles too) Chalo.

Nupur then drives Gunjan home, Gunjan invites her inside and after a cup of tea she makes her own way home.

Scene 2
Location ~ Shergill house
Characters in scene ~Samrat, Nupur & Ratna (their mum)

Samrat is wearing black suit trousers a black and grey striped shirt ( arms)and a black waist coat. Ratna is wearing a light blue saree with lilac boarders and designs.
Samrat is pacing the foyer when Ratna Shergill comes by.
Samrat-Maa! Adhiraj aur Nupur ghar aagey kya?
Ratna-Abhi thak tho nahin. Adhi ne phone kiya tha. Use nayi restaurant ki opening keliye bohut kaam hai toh woh late ayega. Sirf ek hi hafte bachi hai opening ki.
Samrat-Aur Nupur? Usne phone kiya kya? (stressed that she is not home yet)
Ratna- Samrat.. (she comes and puts her hand to Samrat's face) itna chinta kyun karrahe ho, abhi to sirf ath (8) bage hai. Ajayegi.
Samrat-Kaise chinta na karron maa. Roz saath (7) se pehle ajaathi hai, aur abhi.... (just then the door bell rings)
Ratna- Loh agayi! (Ratna is about to open the door, but Samrat rushes past her and opens the door)
Samrat-Nupur! (On seeing her he hugs her, then hold her at arms lenghth) Itni der kyun kardi? Kaha thi thu? Tujhe kuch hua toh nahin? Phone kyun nahin kiya? (He fires questions one after the other)
Nupur- Bhai, bhai shaanth. Der hogayi kyunki office mein bohut kaam tha aur Gunjan ko ghar chorthe wakth usne chai pe bulaya. Phone nahin kiya kyunki battery dead hai. Aur mujhe kuch nahin hua. Dekho (she step back and twirls to show nothing is wrong)
Ratna-Agar bhai behen ka gale lagna ho gaya toh, is maa ko bhi thori bohut chinta ho rahi thi.
Nupur- Maa, mein teek ho. Sorry apko chinta karwaya. (she hugs her mum)
Samrat-Maa aap abhi abhi mujhe samjha rahi the, ke mein chinta na karo, aur aap khud...
Ratna- Woh toh mein isliya keh rahi thi kyunki mujhe chinta karthe hue dekh kar thu tu pagal hi ho jatha.
Samrat- Maa.. !
Nupur- Maa! Bhai! Undher chale. Chai toh peeli, par ab bhook bhi lag rahi hai!
Ratna - Are haan! Chalo andhar ao, khana kahlo.
Nupur- Maa? (She looks around) Adhi bhaiya kaha hai?
Samrat- Use kaam se phusaath kaha. Woh abhi bhi naye restaurant pe hai.
Nupur- Adhi bhaiyah bhi naa. Malik hone ka fayda outah kar ghar kahne ke liye nahin aa sakthe the? Mein unhe phone kar kar pooch thi hoon ke unhone kana kaya kya. (she takes her phone out of her bag and tries to on it) Ab ise kya hua?
Samrat- (he hands over his phone) battery dead, remember? (He shakes his head and laughs)
Nupur- Main bhi naa (she takes the phone and goes to the side of the hall,Samrat looks at her and sighs)
Ratna- Mujhe pata hai, woh ghar ajaye toh man halka ho jatha hai.
Samrat- Haan, ab dekhthe hai ke humari doosre man ke bojh ne kya kaha (He says in a dramatised way. Nupur ends her conversation and makes her way back to Samrat and her mum)
Nupur-Bhai ne kaha ke aaj naya chef unke liye sample dishes banane wala hai, aur hum bhi waha chale kana kane ke liye. (she looks at her mum and brother)
Samrat-haan haan, kyun nahin kabhi kabhi ghai ko bhi paani taak jaana partha hai.
Nupur- Bhai aap bhi na (they all laugh) main fresh ho kar aathi hoon, phir chalte hai.

After getting ready they all get in the car to go to the restaurant.

Scene 3
Location ~ Sharma House
Characters in scene ~ Mayank, Suhaani and Shilpa (their mum)

Mayank knocks on the door of his house and it is opened by a servant. He is wearing a grey suit and a light blue silk shirt, grey tie and is carrying a briefcase.
Shilpa- Are waah! Aaj toh mera beti aath (8) bajeh hi ghar agaya. (she takes the briefcase from Mayank) Itni Jaldi kaise Mayu?
Mayank-Maa! Ghar jaldi aagaya hoon par abhitak kaam khatam nahin hua, woh to Suhaani ne kaha ke useh mujse baath karni hai to mein...
Shilpa- haan haan baat baad mein karle na, abhi living room mein aa. (She takes his hand and guides him to the living room, once in the room Mayank notices the coffee table)
Mayank- Yeh saab kya hai maa?
Shilpa- Photo's hai aur kya?
Mayank- Woh tho mujhe bhi dikh rahan hai, par kiske aur kyun?
Shilpa- Pehle tasveer chun toh le, phir bataoongi kiske, aur kyun toh tujhe pata hai!
Mayank- Maa, mujhe kaam hai, mujhe is bare mein abhi baat nahin karni!
Shilpa- Tera abhi to kabhi nahin ayega. Tasveer nahin dekni to kumse kum bata toh deh tujhe kaisi ladki chahiye!
Mayank- Maa...! (Just then Suhaani enters the room; she is wearing a green churidaar)
Suhaani- Bhai, bata bhi doh, aap toh maa ko jaanthehi hai. Woh nahin maaneh wali.
Mayank- Suhaani meri behen, mujhe bachale.
Suhaani- Nahin bhai jaannah toh main bhi chathi hoon ke aap mere liye kaisi bhabi laana chathe hai.
Mayank- Suhaani, tujhe mujse baat nahin karni thi?
Suhaani- Topic math badlo bhai, batao (she starts tickling her brother and her mother joins in)
Mayank- Acha acha batata hoon, batata hoon. (he goes and sits on the sofa) Mujhe aisi ladki chahiye...
(Suhaani and Shilpa come and sit on the sofa opposite him lean their heads on their hands and stare at him)
Shilpa-Ruk kyun gaye, ageh bolo
Mayank-Maa!
Suhaani- Bhai bolo na!
Mayank ' (He sighs) Mujhe aisi ladki chahiye joh meri guseh koh bhi takar deh sake (Flash back of Nupur venting out her anger at Ranvijay to Gunjan). Mujhe aisi ladki chahiye joh apni dosto ko parivaar jaisa samjhe (flash back of Nupur-Dia, Nupur-Gunjan). Mujhe aisi ladki chahiye joh apni baro aur chotoh ko izaat deh (flash back of Nupur with her mum and Samrat). Aur jiska dil itna bara ho keh woh apne parivaar ko, mere parivaar ko, aur mujhe der saara pyar kare. (Scene of Nupur in the car happily talking to Samrat and Ratna)

End of part 1

If you like Part 1 I will write a second part. Part 2 will have Adhiraj & Benji's entrance and also a Samrat and Gunjan scene.
If many of you have a problem understanding it because of my broken Hindi, I can translate it into English.

Edited by Parvin86 - 14 years ago

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Part 2

Scene 1
Location ~ Sharma House
Characters in scene ~ Mayank, Suhaani and Shilpa (their mum)

Continued from previous scene. Mayank , Suhaani & Shilpa (their mum) in the living room.
Shilpa - Hi, mera beta kitna romantic hai. (She looks at Mayank then Suhaani grinning. Mayank looks down shyly)
Mayank - Maa...
Suhaani - Sach bhai, aap itne romantic ho sakthe hai humne kabhi socha bhi nahin. (Also grinning)
Mayank - Maa, joh aap chahte the maine batadiyan ab main apne upar ke office mein jahke apna kaam khatam karu?
Shilpa - Acha jao (Mayank gets up and picks up his briefcase) Are kana toh kake ja!
Mayank - Nahin Maa, mujhe bhook... (Shilpa gives him a stern look) Maa please mujhe bohot kaam hai.
Shilpa - (She sighs) Teek hai, phir main khana tere office mein bijwathi hoon (Mayank is about to decline) Aur teri na nahin chalegi. Tu ya upar khana kayega ya neche humare saath....
Mayank - Teek hai aap upar bijwadena.
Suhaani - Saath kahte to acha lagta bhai.
Mayank - Nahin Suhaani aaj sachi bohut kaam hai. Kal saath kayenge, pakah. Bye Maa (he hugs his mum) Suhaani (hugs Suhaani and is about to leave when he remembers) Suhaani, tujhe mujse baat karni thi naa?
Suhaani - Bhai woh.. (she looks at her mum)... woh (and then her brother)..Kuch nahin bhai, itni zaroori nahin hai. Aap apna kaam kariye.

Mayank goes to his office and works. Shilpa and Suhaani sit down to dinner after sending food up for Mayank.

Scene 2
Location ~ Adhiraj's New (yet to open) Restaurant, Nupur's
Characters in scene ~ Samrat, Nupur Ratna & Adhiraj

Samrat, Nupur and Ratna arrive at the restaurant. When they enter Adhiraj is talking on the phone. He is wearing a light blue short sleeved shirt and faded denim jeans.
Nupur - Bhai! Aap ab bhi kaam karahe hai? (She goes and gives him a hug)
Adhiraj - (Into the phone) Bye. (He puts down the phone, smiles & hugs her back) Nahin...
Samrat - Mujhe to laga humare bina hi tumne kana shuru kardiya hoga (He and Ratna walk over to Adhiraj)
Adhiraj - Bhai...
Ratna - Kaam ke vaje se waqt hi kaha milta hai mere bache koh kane le liye. Dekho kitna pathla ho gaya hai.
(Adhiraj puts his arms over Samrat and Ratna's shoulders and kisses his mum on the check)
Adhiraj - Ab mujhe bhi koi bolne dega? (he smiles) Main kaam nahin karaha tha. Main Benji's se baat kar raha tha.
Samrat - Benji? Dost aur Manager mera hai, tujse kyun baat karaha tha?
Adhiraj - Aapki burayi karaha tha. Just joking bhai. Main use keh raha tha ke woh ugle Friday aapke liye koi meetings ya plans na banaye, kyunki aap ko yahan meri restaurant opening mein hona hai.
Samrat - Adhiraj, main use yeh already kehchuka hoon.
Adhiraj - Ha bhai par aapka kya barosa, pichli baar yaad hai?
Samrat - (He sheepishly looks down) Woh main bhool gaya tha aur... woh bohut important meeting thi.
Adhiraj - Haan aur us vajese mujhe apna opening postpone karna para!
Samrat - Acha mere bhai tune teek kiya Benji ko bata kar! Ab hum chale? Hum sub ko bhook lagi hai.
They all go to the table and start to eat. When they are almost finished a phone starts ringing.
Nupur - Bhai aapka phone baj raha hai. (to Samrat)
Samrat - (Samrat checks his phone ) Mere nahin hai
Nupur - Bhai aapka? (To Adhiraj, who shakes his head)
Ratna - Tere bag se lag raha hai, tera hoga!
Nupur - Haan Lag to aise raha hai, par mera phone ka toh battery dead hai. (She looks in her bag and takes out a phone) Oh god! (She makes a face and answers it) Hello Mrs Shukla... jee nahin main Nupur bol rahin hoon ... woh uska phone galti se shayad mere paas a gaya..... Acha..... Nahin koi problem nahin, main use batha dungi ke woh aap ko aaj hi phone kare. Accha bye.
Ratna - Kiska phone tha?
Nupur - Woh humari ek client hai jiske saath Gunjan kaam kar rahi hai. Woh apne pati ko surprise karne ke liye apna naya ghar decorate kar rahi hai. Achanak unhe aaj patha chala ke unke husband kal raat apne business trip se wapas a rahe hai. Jo business trip agle hafte khatam hone wali thi.....(She looks at her brothers) Bhai main aapme kisiki car le sakthi hoon, mujhe Gunjan ko uska phone lautana hai, thaki woh saab kaam kal subha khatam kar sake.
Adhiraj - Itni raat ko akele? (He frowns shaking his head) Nahin, main chala.... (Then he sees a golden opportunity, he winks at Nupur grinning) Bhai jayenge naa.. Hai na bhai?
Samrat - Main? Adhi....
Nupur - Haan bhai (Also grinning) Bhai aap Gunjan ko uska phone lautayenge, aur main aur Maa Adhi bhaiya ke saath ghar chale jayenge.
Samrat - Adhi bhi toh ja saktha haina phone dehne?
Ratna - Nahin. Nupur aur Adhi sahi ke rahe hai, Adhi itne der se kaam kar raha hai, woh thak gaya hoga (Adhi gives a fake yawn), Tumhi jao Samrat. (Nupur and Adhiraj grin at Samrat)
Samrat - Acha teek hai (He holds out his hand and Nupur hands him the phone, he leaves the restaurant to go to Gunjan's house)
Ratna - (She looks at Nupur & Adhiraj) Kya baat hai tum dono useh itna force jyun kar rahe the?
Adhiraj - (Looks at Nupur) Nahin Maa woh to bhai ke balai ke liye keh rahe the. (He bites his tongue when he realises he said too much)
Ratna - Balai? (She looks at Nupur) Nupur beta tum batoa, kuch chal raha hai kya?
Nupur - Maa (Nupur holds Ratna's hand) Aapko bhai par vishwas hai?
Ratna - Haan...
Nupur - Aapko Gunjan pasand hai?
Ratna - Haan, par...
Nupur - Toh phir par var kuch nahin. Waqt aane par aapko sab patha chaljayega.
Ratna - Main toh sirf ye keh rahi thi ke kuch agar chal raha hai toh... (she suddenly smiles) toh main Samrat ki fikar chor ke Adhi ke liye ladki dhond thi.
Nupur - Maa (She smiles and hugs her mum)
Adhiraj - Maa aap bhool rahe hai, ke meri shaadi nahin ho sakthi. Woh isliye kyunki....
Nupur/Ratna - Jab tumhari shaadi hogi Mumbhai ki sari ladkiyan ghum ke mare suicide karlenge. (The say together, as they have heard it all before)
Ratna - Par ek din aisa bhi ayega bachu, jab tumhe aisa lagega ke ek ladki ke elava, Mumbhai mai kya, is duniya mein koi aur ladki nahin hai.
Adhiraj - Aisa kabhi nahin hoga Maa, kyunki is duniya mein kahi ladkiya hai, kisi ki ankhen achi hai to kisiki baal, kisiki....
Nupur - Bhai Shahrukh khan ki Dialogue choro. Mujeh toh us din ka intazaar hai jab aap sari duniya ko bula kar ek ladki se pyaar karenge.

Scene 3
Location ~ Sharma House
Characters in scene ~ Mayank and Suhaani

Suhaani enters Mayank's office.
Suhaani - Bhai? Aap busy ho? Main baad mein athi hoon.
Mayank - Nahin Suhaani (He switches off his computer) Kaam aaj ke liye khatam. Ao kya baat karna hai?
Suhaani - Woh... (She comes and sits on the seat opposite Mayanks desk) Bhai woh...
Shilpa - Knock knock (She comes in holding 2 small bowls) Apne do sweet bache ke liye garma garam sweet rasmalai (She looks at her children) Kya hua? Disturb kiya kya?
Suhaani - Nahin Maa, undar ao. (She looks at Mayank) Main woh bhai se keh rahi thi ke..... ke.... (She remembers an article she read in the paper) ke agle hafte Friday, woh Nupur's line ke restaurants ka naya branch yaha paas hi kul raha hai. Hum sab ko saath jaana chahiye.
Shilpa - Are wah kitna acha idea hai. Kitni din hogaye, kahi bahar kane nahin gaye. Mayank tum apne calendar par note kar lo ke Friday raat tum koi kaam nahin karoge, Hum sab saath jayenge. Ab jaldi rasmalia kahlo, tandi ho jayegi. Main chali sone, tum dono bhi dehr math karna. (She leaves the room)
Suhaani - Main bhi chali sone bhai. (She gets up to leave)
Mayank - Suhaani. Kya tu yehi kehne ke liye ayithi? Restaurant ke bare mein?
Suhaani - (attempts to smile) Haan bhai, yehi kehne ayithi. Good night bhai. (She leaves the room)
Mayank (THOUGHTS) - Suhaani itni pareshaan kyu lagrahi hai? Zaroor koi baat hai. Woh restaurant jaane ki baat karne nahin ayithi.
Suhaani is walking down the passage to her room.
Suhaani (THOUGHTS) - Kyun main bhai ko bata nahin pa rahi? Main jaanthi hoon woh samjenge to phir...? Aur agar main bhai ko nahin bata pa rahi, mai maa ko kaise...? (Lost in thoughts Suhaani goes to her room and eventually falls asleep)

Scene 4
Location ~ Bushan House
Characters in scene ~ Samrat, Gunjan, Dia & Ranvijay

Samrat parks his car outside Gunjan's house and walks up to the door. He rings the door bell and starts to tuck in his shirt.
Gunjan - Kya Dia, tum phirse apne chabi ghar blool gayi? (Her voice can be heard behind the door. She opens the door and sees Samrat) Samrat? (They stare at each other in that romantic way)
Samrat - (Samrat shakes himself out of the trance) Gunjan itne raat ko, tumne bina pooche darwasa kol diya. Koi aur hota to?
Gunjan - (Quietly) Koi aur hi hai Samrat. (She looks down)Tum yaha kyun aye ho?
Samrat - Chinta math karo Gunjan. Main tumhe pareshaan karne nahin aya. (He takes her phone out of his pocket and hands it to her) Tumhara phone, galti se Nupur ke paas agaya. Mrs Shukla ka phone ayatha unhe aaj hi phone kar le na, urgent hai. (He turns around to leave)
Gunjan - Samrat! (He half turns towards her) Tumne mujhe kabhi pareshaan nahin kiya.(He fully turns)
Samrat - Gunjan...
Gunjan - Please Samrat! Main tumhe pehle bhi keh chuki hoon. Main apni bauji ki bohut izaat karthi hoon, aur meri shaadi tab hongi jab woh chahte hai, jiske saath woh chahte hai. Main tumse pyar nahin kar sakthi.
Samrat - Main jaanthi hoon Gunjan. Par tum yeh bhi toh nahin kehti ke tum mujse pyar nahin karthe. Tum apne feeling ke bare mein baat hi nahin karthi. Pease Gunjan kuch toh kaho!
Gunjan - Samrat main....
Dia - Gunjan! (Dia comes running and hugs Gunjan) Main aaj itni kush hoon! (She sees Samrat) Samrat tum yaha? (She hugs him too) Nupur aur Gunjan ko main pehle bata na chahti thi par tum yaha ho to phir....main ruk nahin paoongi! Guys, Ranvijay ne mujhe aaj propose kiya!
Gunjan - Kya? Kab? Kaise? (Gunjan is shocked)
Dia - Gunjan! Congratulate nahin karogi? (She opens her arms wide)
Gunjan - Congratulations Dia (She hugs Dia again)
Samrat - Congratulations Dia
Dia - Thank you guys. I'm so happy! Chalo Gunjan hum Nupur ko phone kar ke suprise karthe hai. Tum bhi ao Samrat.
Samrat - Nahin Dia main chalta hoon. Congratulations again! (He hugs Dia again then looks at Gunjan) Bye Gunjan.
Gunjan - Bye Samrat
Gunjan watches as Samrat walks off and then follows Dia inside. Samrat is walking towards his car when he over hears someone talking. A man is talking on the phone in his car. When he turns slightly, Samrat recognises him as Ranvijay.
Ranvijay - ....ab Dia batch ke jayegi kaha? (Ranvijay drives off)
Samrat (THOUGHTS) - Yeh toh Ranvijay tha. Kya keh rahta?... batch ke jayegi kaha? Koi is tara baat karta hai apne mangetar ke bare mein? Nupur sahi kethi hai, Ranvijay sahi ladka nahin hai! Kuch toh garbar hai!

End of part 2

Kya Samrat ko uska pyaar milega?
Kya Dia Ranvijay ki sachai jaan payegi?
Kya hai Suhaani ka raaz?
Keep reading my FF to find out!
Sorry no Benji, will definetly add him in Part 3.

It is a bit disheartening that I had over a hundred views and only 9 comments. Don't know what to think, is it because readers didn't like it?
Anyway a great big thank you to everyone who left comments on here as well as those who PM'd me. It's nice to know you like my story.

Edited by Parvin86 - 15 years ago