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Thank You To All The Readers Who Have Liked The 1st Part Of 'HumraahI' ..😊

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Hiiii Guys.. dekhiye jaise maine aap sab se waada kiya tha, I'am back early with the second part of "HumraahI"… I'am keeping up my promise of posting the next part quickly… waise guys thanku all so much for the feedback you have given me for "HumraahI"… I see that there are many new readers for the fanfic, I welcome all the new readers to this fanfics thread… I hope to see all of your comments & feedback regularly…. guys the updates will be regular till the 10th of August.. after that I'll be a little inactive for 25 to 30 days… I hope all of you are ok with it…. Sorry but in August I'am a bit busy with my petsonal life… even now I'am busy… but still I'am typing the update only for you guys…. I hope all of you like the 2nd part of "HumraahI"… thanku very much for the comments you have been giving me…… & guys you need not worry, our hero, heroine will surely meet soon… it will not take long before the hero & heroine come face to face…. But then for them to come face to face we first have to see how seher's life is in California, just like how we saw Agni's life in part 1, in the second part you will see seher's life….. so here's presenting the 2nd part of the fanfic "HumraahI"… lekin agge badhne se pehle ek nazar daalthe hai recap par aur jaanthe hai kii 'HumraahI' part 1 mein aakhir kya hua tha… tho here is the recap…

Recap:- well pichle part mein zyada tho kuch bhi nahii hua tha… because it was the 1st part of the fanfic… in the first part we saw our hero's life at the 'utpal villa'… we saw the bonding between the people staying at the 'Utpal Villa'… we also that damini & prachi tho bas agni ke peeche hii padd gaye hai for agni to choose a life partner… lekin agni is dodging the issue… & we also saw that damini & prachi, arrange a date for agni with a girl.. aur agni bechara apni jaan bachakarr bhaagtha hai us ladki se durr.. & then everyone at home is having fun talking about how agni escaped from the girl…. We also saw that agni has some bitter memories of the past, which he just wants to wipe out of his heart, mind & soul….. The people in the 'Utapl Villa' were happy & content… now let us have look at Seher & her life in the 2nd part of 'HumraahI'….

****HumraahI – Part 2 ****

In the United States, along the west coast was situated the city of California… this city was one of the most populous state in the United States… it was the third largest city in terms of area in the USA… we can see that everything around is very organized, the city, the roads, the traffic everything was in order…. We can see that there are a certain people who are walking down the streets, some are travelling by the underground trains… while some are taking the trams to reach their desired destination… each & every person seems to be lost in their own world…. Nobody even bothered to look at the other… the relationships developed here were just cordial & formal… it was like the people living there were so worked up with their own lives that they did not care for strangers around them.. yes may be life was like this in the developed countries, were every single minute, every single second is as important as your life…. This was the life of people & the people there were happy with this…. People living their did not complain or crib about their busy life, they were happy with the busy life & they were happy with the success they were attaining with every passing of a day.. in the state of California as we go to it's northern California, we see that the northen side of California this region contains the San Francisco Bay Area, San Francisco, San Jose, Oakland & other places etc… while Southern California consists of the regions of Los Angeles, San Diego.. the Eastern California region is sparsely populated.. it consists of the region of Lake Tahoe…. The Upsate California region, consisted of mostly rural sections… the people at each place had their type & standard of living… here one could not match upto the other or live like the other, if they wanted to.. every person in USA strived hard to make a fortune & live a luxurious life… this was no different in California… people were busy & happy with their lives…. now as we zoom in to the Northern region of California, we can see the 8th largest city of the United States of California, that was Oakland… as we zoom in from the streets we can see that some people are rushing to their work place, while some people were just tourist, who have come to enjoy their vacation their… we can see a juggler entertaining kids with his juggling acts, while some couples are walking hand in hand totally lost in love…. The city of Oakland was about 13 kms away from the city of San Francisco… it was a major West Coast Port City… it was modern yet traditional… there were all kinds of people staying in this city…. As we move about the city we reach the Downtown Oakland, the core are of Oakland… it was California's business district… as we go forward we see that the road leads us to the old Oakland area…… this was a place which was mostly covered with residencies… here the place was quiet & away from the main city's hither thither… as we walk down the old Oakland we can see that it consisted mostly of independent houses… in this area there is one such house which catches our attention… the house was away from all other house in the area… the house had open area in front of it… as we reach the gates of the house, the house name is engraved outside 'New Beginnings', this was the name of the house…. We can see that a car is parked in the porch on the left side of the house.. the house was small yet elegant… the house looked classy… it had the look of the houses in the older generations… the house had a nice sit out area in front of it…. it was away from the hustle bustle life… the house had a friendly feeling to it… it was warm & welcoming… as we zoom into the doors of the house, we first enter the hall, the hall is a small area covered with sofas & bean bags… the hall area was connecting to the kitchen & the dining area.. the dinning area & the kitchen were separated with a thin frame of wall… the kitchen was rather a small one, but it consisted of all the things which is a must have for a kitchen.. the kitchen was connecting to the dinning hall, which had a glass dining table which could accomadate seven to eight people at a time….. as we come out of the kitchen, we walk down the passage of the hall, here there is a 'Puja' room… opposite to the hall there were two bedrooms… one of the rooms was occupied by the inmates of the house while the other was a guest room…. There was a staircase which was leading to the first floor of the house… the first floor consisted of four rooms.. in these four rooms only the two of them were occupied, one at the either ends of the floor… while the other two had no inmates staying in them… in one of the rooms at the either ends, the room opened to a huge balcony area, from where the whole street could be gazed upon…. This balcony had a swing at the center… this particular room had nothing expect for certain files & papers…. It looked as if the person who lived in that room was a quiet person & it also showed that the person staying in that room was not very open about their feelings…. The room was conveying a lot about the person staying there….. we can see that there are some photo frames placed at the side table of the bed… the photos looked like they were family photos… the room looked liked it belonged to such a person joh bheed bhi kho jaana chahtha ho.. as we come out of this particular room, we now go into the other room which is at the other end of the first floor…. As we peep into the room we see that the room looks in a total mess… everthing is spread out around… we can the Doctor's coat lying there carelessly in the corner.. we see that there is a laptop, placed along with a cell phone & pager on the table…. There was a bed, but no one was there on the bed.. the bed just had a blanket which was equally in a messy condition as the whole room… suddenly a person walks out of the washroom, ready to go for work….. the person is getting ready to go to her work place… she is humming a song to herself & carrying on with her work.. she keeps getting irritated because usse apni koi bhi cheez time par nahii mill rahii hothi hai… she is walking all around her room in the mess & sighing with irritation with every passing by second…. The girl finally loses her patience & shouts at the top of her voice:- mommmmmmmm… as soon as the girl shouts with in the net two minutes, there is a woman who walks into the room… the woman is in her early 60's… the woman walks inside the room & says:- kya hai muski… [yes the other girl is Muskaan Garewal & the woman who walked into the room is Veena Garewal..] muskaan looks at her mother & she says:- mommm.. please help… mujhe mera coat nahii mill raha hai…
Veena:- muski tu apna ek bhi cheez sambhal ke nahii rakh sakthi hai kya… tum itni badi hogayi ho phir bhi harr chotti se chotti cheez ke liye tujhe hum logon kii zaroorat padthi hai….
Muskaan:- mommmmmm… please… I'am already getting late… mujhe hospital jaana hai… please mera coat dhoond dijiye na…..
Veena:- ufffff… muskii… isiliye main tumse kehthi hoon kii tum apna yeh room saaf rakho… organized rakha… agar tum is kamre ko thoda aur organized rakhthi na tab tumhein tuimhari cheezein aasani se mil jaathi.. aise dhoond na tho nahii padtha……
Veena starts walking around the room, cleaning the things & also looking for the coat….
Veena then suddenly finds the coat lying at the corner of the room, on the ground, veena picks it up & shows to muskaan… & she says:- muskaan yeh kya hai.. koi apne coat ko is tarah phektha hai bhala… this is so irresponsible of you…. Tumhe patah hai na kii aaj tumhein hospital jaana hai tho atleast is coat ko pehenne ke layak tho rakhthi…
Muskaan:- mommmm… it is ok… wahaan hospital mein woh log yeh dekhne nahii waale hai kii Dr. Muskaan Garewal ka coat kaisa hai… woh log mujhe mere kaam se pehchaanthe hai…. So all these things don't matter… main bas chahthi thi kii aap mere liye mera coat dhoond de.. aur abhi aap ne coat dhoond diya hai… tho bas hogaya…
Veena:- [hits muskaan on her forehead & says..] bas hogaya.. pagal hai tu muski.. muskaan main hamesha tho tere saath nahii rehne waali hoon….. tho tu tab kya karegi jab main rahoongi nahiii..
Muskaan:- [like a kid says..] mommm.. aap kahiin nahii jaa rahii hai… aur na main aapko chodkarr kahiin jaa rahi hoon… main hamesha aapke saath hii rahoongi… tho aap please aise baatein matt kariye… mujhe achcha nahii lagtha…
Listening to what muskaan has said, veena has a distant look on her face…. It is like she is thinking about something… when muskaan does not get any reply from veena, muskaan says:- mommmm.. kya hua. Kya soch rahe ho aap.. kin khayalon mein kho gaye ho..
Veena comes out of her thoughts, she sighs & says:- nahii muskaan.. kuch nahii… darasal mujhe kuch beete pal yaad aagaye the… muskaan ek baat hamesha yaad rakhna, is duniyaan mein koi bhi cheez ho woh shaswath (forever) nahii hotha…. Badlaav zindagi ka usool hotha hai…. Aur humein aur ek badlaav ko maankarr zindagi ko khulkarr jeena chahiye.. issi ka naam tho zindagi hai…
Muskaan:- mom aap aisa kyun keh rahii hai… maine keh diya na main hamesha aapke saath rahoongi.. tho bas hogaya final….
Veena:- muskaan, agni bhi mujhse hamesha yahii kehtha tha.. lekin aaj woh yahaan humare saath nahii rehtha.. na hum uske saath rehthe hai.. humare rishthe mein badlaav aaya than a muski che saal pehle aur aaj thak rishton mein woh doorie kayam hai….. tum khudko hii dekhlo muski, tum apne bhai se kitna zyada pyaar karthi thi, lekin aaj kyat um usse baat karthi ho, nahii tum agni se na baat karthi ho aur na uski koi bhi baat sunnthi ho… che saal se tumne usse baat nahii kii hai… tho bas yeh samaj lo kii sab kuch hamesha ke liye nahii hotha.. agar sab kuch ek samaan chalthe rahe tho zindagi, zindagi nahii keh laayegi….
Muskaan face looses it color as she hears veena talking about agni…. & she says:- mom please aap unke bare mein mujhse koi baat nah ii kijiye tho behtar hoga… mera joh bhai tha woh che saal pehle kahiin kho gaya tha… aaj thak mujhe mera bhai wapas nahii mila hai… aur aap please unka zikar mere saamne matt kijiyega…. Achcha theek hai mom, main ab chalthi hoon.. mujhe dair ho rahii hai…
Veena knows that muskaan is telling that she would leave because she wants to stay alone.. though muskaan tries to hide her emotions from her mother, veena understands it very well that chahe muskaan kuch kahe ya na kahe lekin she misses her elder brother very much.. veena keeping those thoughts aside for now tells muskaan:- muski dekh tu breakfast karke chali jaa… phir agar tu hospital chali gayi tho tujhe waqt ka andaza nahii rahega aur tu theek se lunch bhi nahii karegi…. Chal pehle breakfast karle phir chali jaana…
Muskaan:- nahii mom… mujhe hospital jaane se pehle 'B' se milne unke office jaana hai… aur aap fikar matt karo main wahaan 'B' ke saath breakfast kar loongi..
Veena:- seher ghar par nahii hai kya…. woh office ke liye kab nikli…..
Muskaan:- mom aap tho aise pooch rahe ho jaise kii aap 'B' ko jaanthi nahii… 'B' tho hamesha yahii karthi hai na… woh roz tho aise hii office ke liye nikal jaathi hai… aur phir aap unhe sham mein samjhathe ho kii unhe breakfast karke jaana chahiye, lekin 'B' par tho koi asar nahii hotha hai… che saal se tho aise hii ho raha hai na mom.. 'B' khudko sabse durr rakhthi hai.. hamesha apne kaam mein mashroof hothi hai… che saal pehle meri woh 'B' kahiin kho gayi hai tho hasthi thi, gaathi thi, muskurathi thi… apne pariwaar ke saath waqt bitathi thi… aaj woh apne pariwaar ke saath hothe hue bhii nahii hai… woh harr waqt harr pal apne hii khayalon mein rehthi hai… unhe dekhkar tho mujhe aisa lagtha hai kii woh bas zindagi jeene ke liye jee rahii hai… jaan tho unmein baaki nahii rahii.. unki muskurahat unke aankhon thak nahii pohanchthi. Aisi hogayi hai unki zindagi pichle che saal se… aur aap harr roz yeh umeed karthi hai kii kuch badal jaaye… humari bikhri zindagi sawar jaye…. Lekin harr roz kuch nahii badaltha… aur na kabhi kuch badal ne waala hai… yeh sab sirf aur sirf unke (muskaan means agni, woh agni ka naam apne zubaan par nahii laathi as it hurts her….)(muskaan continues saying):- sirf unke wajah se hua hai.. unke ek faisle ne humari zindagi ko kuch is tarah bikher diya hai kii agar koi chahe bhi tho is bikhri zindagi ko samait (gather) nahii saktha. 'B' kii zindagi aaj jaisi bhi hai sirf aur sirf unke wajah se hai… unhone mere 'B' se unki zindagi, unki khushiyaan hii cheen li hai… tho bas mom aap yeh umeed karna chod dijiye kii humari zindagi mein phir se wahii khushiyaan aayengi joh 'B' ko aur hum sabko phir se khulkar jeene seekhayengi… kyunke aap jitna yeh umeed karenge utna hii aapko takleef hoga jab aapke umeed toot jaayenge… tho bas joh jaisa chal raha hai usse waise hii chalne dijiye… kyunke yahaan par kuch nahii badal ne waala…. [then in haste, muskaan hugs veena, tells her bye & she leaves the room…] veena is left standing in muskaan's room brooding over what muskaan has said… veena then tells herself:- change is inevatible… jis tarah humari zindagi che saal pehle bas kuch hii palon mein badal gayi thi ussi tarah shayad aaj, kal ya aane waale kal mein humari zindagi phir se badal jaaye aur hum apni wahii purani zindagi jeene lage jis mein sab khush the aur ek saath the…. Waqt badalthe dair nahii lagthi aur mujhe lagtha hai kii aisa ek na ek din zaroor aayega jab sab kuch theek ho jaayega… ek barr phir garewal house mein khushiyaan hongi.. ek barr phir seher kii hasi is ghar mein goonjegi…. Ek barr phir is ghar ka beta hum sabke saath hoga… aur us din yeh khushiyaan dil se nikli khushiyaan hongi…. veena sighs, she wipes the tears in her eyes… & starts walking out of the room.. what veena does not know was that muskaan was standing right outside her room listening to her mother's words… veena kii baatein sunnkarr muskaan ke aankhon mein name si aajaathi hai… when muskaan realizes that her mother is coming out, woh foran wahaan se chali jaathi hai & she literally runs out of the house.. muskaan sits in her car & then she opens the glovebox, she takes out a picture from there… we can see that the picture has veena, prerna, anurag, muskaan & in the center seher & agni were standing together.. all were smiling to the camera… muskaan touches agni's face in the photo & she says:- I miss you bhai… & then she looks at seher standing next to agni in the pic, she says:- how I wish everything is back to normal… how I wish I could get back these happy days…. Muskaan then keeps the picture where it was in the glovebox & she wipes the teats that are forming in her eyes & she drives out of her house… this is what muskaan did when she was alone in the car… though she showed the outside world that she did not care for her brother but the fact remained that she missed her brother terribily & loved him very much…. This was muskaan's way of hiding her pain from others.. but what she did not know was that her mother & her "B" both understood her perfectly well.. muskaan then drives to the 'City Bisiness Center' area.. she reaches the 'Maan's Media Firm'… once she is there people working there seem to recognize her… muskaan walks around the office & finally she reaches 'Maan Khurana's' cabin…. As she enters, we can see that a guy is sitting inside engrossed in the file which is laid out in front of him. As soon as the door opens, the guy looks up to see muskaan… the guy gets a smile on his face seeing muskaan.. but his smile changes into a expression of worry when he sees muskaan's eyes are red… he immediately get up from the chair, goes to muskaan & asks her:- muskii kya hua… tum ro rahii thi kya.. muski kya hua hai bolo na.. muskaan does not say anything she is over powered by her emotions & she just hugs the guy tightly & cries.. the guy soothes her rubbing his hand on her back… then the guys makes muskaan sit on one of the chairs there.. the guy sits by her side, he takes muskaan's hand in his & says:- muskiii.. baby.. what's wrong…. Who has made my baby cry….
Muskaan who has stopped crying says:- maan… it is just that today mom in my room, she suddenly mentioned about bhai & it bought back some sweet & bitter memories for me…. I miss my brother maan.. but I can't express my thoughts to anyone… because I know even today it hurts just as much as it hurt us six years back…. I know this is our life now, but still I don't know why but I miss my brother…. We have everything here, a home, a family.. but still that family is not complete without my brother…
Maan holds muskaan's hand tighly in his & he says:- muskiii… I know what seher has been through six years back.. I know why you guys have shifted here to this place, a place which is so alien to you… but muskaan you have to understand this is life… life gives you both sorrow & happiness & we have to accept both in the same stride… muskaan we should always accet what comes your way… life is better off like this… muskaan there is no use if you cry & brood over what has happened, when there is a outcome from it…. muski ek baat hamesha yaad rakho joh bhi hua, jaisa bhi hua.. that is our destiny & no one can change it… muski main jaantha hoon that you miss 'my saala' & may be he is missing his younger sister too.. but there is nothing we can do now, you have taken your decisions six years back… & now there is no use crying over it…
Muskaan:- oyeeee khotte… mera bhai tumhara saala kaise hogaya.. woh sirf mera bhai hai….
Maan:- well madam agar main tumse shaadi kartha hoon tho tumhara bhai, yaani mera brother-in-law mera saala hii tho hua na…
Muskaan:- very funny.. waise tumse kisne keh diya kii main tumse shaadi karne waali hoon…
Maan:- kya matlab hai tumhara.. obviously tho tum mujhse hii shaadi karogi na, jab hum dono ek dusare se pyaar karthe hai tho tumhari shaadi mujhse hii hogi na…
Muskaan:- well Mr. Maan Khurana main tumse shaadi nahi karne waali hoon.. atleast tab thak jab thak tum mere gharwaalon se aur apni dadi se nahii keh dethe kii hum ek dusare se pyaar karthe hai.. tab thak tho no chance…
Maan:- arre lekin tumhare 'B' ko tho humare rishthe ke bare mein patah hai na… aur tumhare 'B' ne approval bhi de diya…
Muskaan:- oyee sunn. 'B' ko bhi yeh baat tumne nahii batayi woh tho 'B' ek din hospital aagayi thi aur unhone humein saath mein dekh liya tha aur tab humein unhe humari baat batani padi thi.. tumhe yaad hai 'B' kitni shocked thi us din…
Maan:- haan yaad hai mujhe… tumhare 'B' kitni shocked thi… aur mujhe yeh bhi yaad hai tumhari 'B' ne humein kitna lecture diya tha.. lekin waise socha jaaye tho main aaj thak surprised hoon kii mujhe tu kaise pasand aagayi… teri jaisi pagal jhalli, se mujhe kaise pyaar hogaya… tujhe yaad hai jis din se hum pehli barr mile tu mujhe kitna tung kiya karthi thi… aur tung tho mujhe tu aaj bhi karthi hai.. lekin shuru shuru mein tere jinn aadaaton par mujhe ghussa aatha tha aaj unhi harkaton par mujhe pyaar aatha hai…
Muskaan:- [teases him saying] achcha tho tujhe mujh parr pyaar aatha hai… kya baat hai aaj Mr. Maan Khurana ka mood romantic kaise hogaya.. did the sun rise in the west today… kyunke the ohhh.. so serious maan khurana is talking about love… waahhh….
Maan knows that muskaan is teasing him & he says:- ruko muskii main abhi tumhe dikhatha hoon kii mujhe tum par kitna pyaar aa raha hai… maan starts taking his face closer to muskaan, while muskaan keeps moving back.. both their lips are just about to meet when the rooms door opens & in comes a elegant girl dressed in her business suit… she sees that maan & muskaan are lost in their love land so she just clears her throat & says:- ahem.. ahem… lagtha hai love birds yeh bhool gaye hai kii yeh Maan's Ka media firm hai.. aur yahaan par log romance karne nahii balki kaam karne aathe hai…. Maan & muskaan come out of their dream world, they see that seher is standing in front of them….. they both are embarrassed and seher has a naughty glint in her eyes & she says:- agar tum dono chaho tho apna romance continue karr sakthe ho… aur agar tum dono chaho tho main Maan Khurana ke office ke bahar ek do not disturb ka board laga sakthi hoon.. phir tum dono jitna waqt chaho yahaan par romance karr sakthe ho aur woh bhi koi interruption ke bina….
Muskaan blushes at this & she says:- 'B' aap bhi na…. aisi koi baat nahii hai… aap please humein is tarah chedna band karo.. jis din se aapko patah chala hai hum dono ke beech kya chal raha hai us din se aap aise hii karr rahe ho…
Seher:- ab muskii main kya karr sakthi hoon agar jab bhi main tum dono ko dekhthi hoon tho tum dono ya tho romance karthe rehthe ho ya ek dusare kii aankhon mein khoye rehthe ho ya phir ek dusare se baatein karthe rehthe ho.. sambhal jao dono bhi.. kya patah agge chalkar tumhare is pyaar ke wajah se 'Maan's Media Firm' par taala lag jaaye aur Dr. Muskaan Garewal ko 'CSH' I mean California State Hospital se barkhast kar de…. You never know…
Muskaan hugs seher & says:- 'B' aap bhi na…. main tho yahaan aap se milne aayi thi… main aapke saath breakfast karne aayi hoon.. aur aap hai kii..
Seher smiles & says:- kyun muski tu mujhse milne aayi thi tho kya tu apna raastha bhoolkar yahaan maan ke kamre mein aagayi.. agar aisa nahii hai tho mujhe bata de.. kya yeh maan tujhe yahaan zabardasti uttakar laaya hai… aur breakfast kii jagah apne romance ke doses de raha hai… agar aisi baat hai tho tum mujhe batao main is maan ke kaan kheechoongi…
Now muskaan & maan at the same time say… muskaan says 'Bbbbbbbbbbbbbbbb'… while maan says:- Sagsssssssssss….
Muskaan:- 'B', ab agar aap ne mujhe chedna band nahii kiya tho main yahaan se jaa rahii hoon….. seher stops her from going & says…. Seher:- achcha.. ok… ab main nahii chedthi tum dono ko… main bas dekhne aayi thi kii muski yahaan hai ya nahi.. woh mumma ne phone karke kaha tha kii muski mujhse milne aa rahii hai.. tho bas issi liye main yahaan aayi hoon.. tho ab tum dono chalo mere saath maine apne cabin mein theeno ke liye breakfast order kar liya hai…. Chalo….
Muskaan & Maan do as they are told… all the three walk out together & go towards Seher's cabin….
Once they reach there, muskaan, maan see that there breakfast is already placed there…. When maan tries to tell seher that he does not want to have breakfast, seher simply cuts him off saying that she knows he has not eaten breakfast home… when maan tries to tell her that he had tea & biscuits, seher cuts him off telling him that she has already spoken to his dadi & she has informed her about skipping his breakfast regularly…
Seher:- main sab jaanthi hoon 'BF'… tum roz subah office jaldi aa rahe ho taaki tum mujhe company de sako.. dekho mujhe office mein kaam hotha hai aur is wajah se main office jaldi aathi hoon, lekin tumhe yahaan aane kii koi zaroorat nahii hai… phir bhi patah nahii kyun tum yahaan aajaathe ho… na jaane kyun tum yeh baat bhool jaathe ho kii main koi chotti bachchi nahii hoon… main tumhari best friend hoon, tho tumhe yahaan subah jaldi aane kii koi zaroorat, yeh koi kumbh ka mela hai kya jahaan mein kho jaaunga.. nahii na… yeh office utna him mera hai jitna hii tumhara.. tho I can take care of myself. Tum kal subaah se office jitna late aana hai utna late aaoge.. meri khatir tum yahaan jaldi nahii aaoge… main tumse keh rahi hoon samjhe 'BF'…
Maan:- common Sags, please abhi mujhe lecture matt do.. main lecture sunne ke mood mein bilkul bhi nahii hoon.. aur rahii baat mere yahaan office aane kii, tho main tumhe batadun kii tumhe itni jaldi subaah ke aath (8) baje ko aane kii koi zaroorat hii nahii hai.. lekin iske bawajood tum yahaan roz jaldi aathi ho.. chahe kaam ho ya na ho lekin tum yahaan is office mein baiti apne khayalon mein khoyi rehthi ho.. aur bas maine yeh tay kar liya hai kii tumhare khayalon ka saathi main bhi banoonga aur tumhare saath baitkar main bhi khayalon mein kho jaaunga.. kyun achcha idea hai na…
Seher:- you think it is very intelligent…. Naah it is not funny….. you get that… & mark my words from tomorrow if I see you in your cabin before 10 AM, in the morning then I'll will personally kick you out & see to it that you are not allowed to enter the Maan's Media Firm premises once again.. it is not a joke I really mean it.. [seher tells him in a warning tone…]
Maan:- Sagss, not fair yaar… yeh kya baat hui… dekho agar tum jaldi aa sakthi ho tho main bhi tho aa saktha hoon na.. I don't like to leave you alone yaar… mujhe achcha nahii lagtha to leave you, all by yourself…..
Seher in a mischevious tone says:- kyun 'BF', darr lagtha hai kya kii main tumhare company se saare paise lekar bhaag jaaungi…..
Maan gets irritated at this comment, he says:- sagsss, are you out of your mind…. Pagal.. aisi baatein kyun karthe ho… [maan hits on seher's head…. & he continues..] agar agli barr tumne is tarah kii baat kii tho main tumse dubara kabhi baat nahii karunga… samjhi tum.. agar aisa ek aur barr kaha tho tum bhool jaana kii Maan Khurana naam ka tumhara koi bhi dost hai….
Muskaan adds in saying:- aur 'B' aap yeh bhi bhool jaana kii aapke zindagi mein muski naam kii koi shaqs thi.. aur main yeh baat mumma, dii, jijuu aur sneha se bhi keh dungi.. agar aap ne aisi baatein kii tho hum mein se koi bhi aapse baat nahii karega… aur aap se koi rishtha bhii nahii rakhega…
Seher face becomes dull as soon as she hears to what muskaan has told.. both muskaan & mann observe the pale color forming on seher's face… muskaan immediately regrets what she has told… while seher composes herself & says:- nahii muski agge se main aisa bilkul bhi nahii kahoongi.. waise bhi main kuch rishton ko pehle hii kho chuki hoon, aur main nahi chahthi kii meri zindagi mein joh bache-kuche rishthe hai woh chin jaye…. Main tho bas mazaak karr rahii thi…. Sab kuch tho kho hii chuki hoon ab mujh mein aur himmat nahii kii main apne baki ke rishthe kho doon.. shayad agar maine yeh rishthe kho diye tho phir meri zindagi mein kuch bachega hii nahii… shayad us din main zindagi jeene ka aas hii choddoon..
Muskaan gets emotional & says:- 'B' please aap aisi baat matt karo.. humara pariwaar aap se hii poora hotha hai… aap please humse durr hone kii baat matt kariye.. seher hugs muskaan in a side hug & she says:- muskii, jab thak main tumhare pariwaar ka hissa rahoongi tho shayad garewal pariwaar kabhi poora nahii hoga… issi liye kabhi kabhi sochthi hoon kya maine sahii kiya… shayad jab maa aur tumne mere saath yahaan aane kii baat kii mujhe aap logon kii baat maanni hii nahii chahiye thi…
Muskaan:- 'B' pleaseeeee…. Jitna woh is ghar ka hissa hai.. aap bhi is ghar ka hissa ho… aap dono mein se koi bhi humare saath na ho tho humara pariwaar poora pariwaar nahii hai.. garewal pariwaar pehle hii apne ek sadasya se doorie bana chukka hai… garewal pariwaar waqt ke us vaar se che saal pehle hii ghayal ho chukka hai… ab aap is ghar se durr jaane kii baat se.. khudko garewal pariwaar se durr karne kii baat se aap bas is pariwaar ko aur bikher rahii hai… please 'B', joh hai, jaisa bhi hai usse waise hii rehne dijiye.. joh rishte choot gaye hai, unhe wapas pane ka koi fayada nahii hai.. kyunke zakhmon ko kured ne se sirf dard hoga… aur joh cheez humein dard detha hai usse hum durr hii achche hai…. [then muskaan gets up & says…] achcha main ab chalthi hoon mujhe hospital jaana hai…. Mera breakfast khatam ho chukka hai.. seher knows that muskaan is upset, she just let's her be.. woh muskaan ke sarr parr apna haath pherthi hai, aur kehthi hai:- achcha theek hai tu jaa. Lekin zyada kaam matt karna aur apna khayal bhi rakhna… hum shaam ko ghar par milenge.. waise bhi kal weekend hai tho dii, jijzz aur sneha aayenge.. tho bas abhi tum jaldi jaldi jao aur apna kaam karke jaldi aajaana… muskaan knows that seher is trying to divert her mind, she says:- haan ok 'B'.. main chalthi hoon…. Seher stands beside muskaan & she says:- arre yeh kya tumhara chehra itna utra hua hai aur tum aisi haalat mein tum yahaan se jaaogi…. Naah mujhe nahii lagtha.. [seher then keeps her fingers on the either side of muskaan's lips… & she acts as if muskaan's smile is getting bigger. & as she does this muskaan ke chehre par automatically ek smile aa jaathi hai… all her frustration vanishes in thin air. & seher says..] ab yeh hui na humare muskaan kii asli muskaan.. dekho tho 'BF', yeh kitni achchi lagthi hai itne pyaare se muskaan ke saath…
Maan:- haan sahii keh rahii ho Sags, muskaan ke chehre kii muskaan tho ek dum jaan lene waali hothi hai… sirf iski muskaan nahii.. iski aakhein, iske kaan, iska naak, sab kuch bemisaal hai…
Seher:- [gets back to her teasing mode & says] ohoooo… kya baat hai Maan Khurana aaj bade romantic mood mein ho… kya baat hai… subah subah drink karke aaye ho kya…
Maan comes back to his senses & he says:- na…hii.. actually main baad mein aatha hoon..
Seher:- waise agar tum chaho tho muski ko chodne bahar thak jaa sakthe ho.. ya chaho tho is street ke end thak jaa sakthe ho.. ya phir agar chaho tho CSH mein bhi jaa sakthe ho.. you see I do not mind at all.. aur tum yahaan kii chinta matt karna, main yahaan par sab kuch sambhal loongi… okie.. tum chaho kitne bhi dair kyun na chahe Oakland ke gardens aur lake ke pass jaakar gaane gaana ek dum love birds kii tarah… main kissi se kuch nahii kahoongi…
Maan:- sagsss.. common yaar…
Seher:- kya common yaar… arre bhudhu.. you are a typical love sick puppy when you are around muskaan… you know agar log yeh baat jaanenge tho bada achcha rahega kii Maan Khurana joh itna serious type businessman hai, he is a love sick puppy around his girlfriend… aur maan khurana joh sab par hukum chalatha hai, us par uski girlfriend roub jatathi hai… muski tu zara soch 'Maan's Media Firm' ke publishing house mein agar yeh news chap jaayegi kii maan khurana is a love sick puppy around his girlfriend tab kya hoga… don't you think maan ka chehra dekhne laayak hoga… muskaan giggles at this thought & she says:- absolutely right 'B'… muskaan & seher hy-fy each other…. Now maan says:- waah kya zamana aagaya hai, meri girl friend aur meri best friend, mere khilaaf gang up karke, mera hii mazaak udaa rahe hai… meri tho koi value hii nahii bachchi…
Muskaan & seher, smack maan's either side of his arms & muskaan:- oyee khotte.. tujhe itni dramebaazi karne kii koi zaroorat nahii hai… waise bhi yeh pehle meri 'B' hai phir baad mein tumhari best friend.. samjha…
Maan:- haan haan sab kuch samaj gaya… ab main yahaan se chaltha hoon mujhe apne cabin mein dher saara kaam hai… muski main tujhse kal 'New Beginnings' mein miltha hoon… bye… seher mujhe tumse ek zaroori baat karni hai ek naye deal ke bare mein.. uske details main tumko mail kartha hoon tum zara check kar lena, taaki hum us naye deal par faisla kar sake.. seher nods her head.. maan hugs muskaan wishes her a good day & then he leaves.. idhar muskaan is also about to leave jab woh seher ke pass wapas aathi hai, she hugs her.. seher is confused kii muskaan ko kya hua, seher asks muskaan:- muskiii. Kya hua… muskaan:- 'B' please aaj ke baad aap khudko garewal pariwaar se alag matt samjiyega… mujhe achcha nahii lagtha. Bhale koi mane ya na mane lekin aap humare ghar ka humare parivaar ka hissa the, hissa hai aur hamesha rahengi.. bas… seher very lovingly pats muskaan's forehead & she says:- achcha theek hai.. agge se aisa bilkul nahii kahoongi.. aur agar maine agge chalkar aisa kuch kaha na tho tum mere kaan kheench lena..
Muskaan separates from seher & says:- haan agli barr se yahii karoongi… agar aapne ulti seedhi baatein kii tho main sach mein aapke kaan kheench loongi…. Bilkul aise.. [muskaan seher ka khaan pyaaar se pakadthi hai… seher smiles at muskaan…]
Seher:- haan theek hai… ab tum jao.. late ho raha hai tumko…..
Muskaan sees her watch & exclaims:- arre main tho sach mein late hogayi… byee 'B'… bhago.. bhago…
Seher is smiling looking at muskaan's antics to run out of the place.. muskaan reaches the cabin's door, when in comes seher's secretary with a cup of black coffee in her hand…. Muskaan sees the black coffee in the secretary's hand, she looks back at seher & says 'B', aap yeh black coffee without milk & sugar kyun peethe ho… when you know that you don't like it…. seher has a smile on her face, the smile seems to be a forced one she says:- muski, mujhe yeh black coffee, without milk, without sugar bohat achcha lagtha hai… tum tho jaanthe ho na mujhe kadwi cheezein kitni zyada pasand hai… tum hii bolo agar mujhe yeh black coffee pasand nahii aatha tho kya din mein theen se chaar barr main yeh coffee peethi… nahii….. tho bas mujhe yeh black coffee peena achcha lagtha hai…
Muskaan in a stern voice says:- 'B' yeh tho aap bhi jaanthi hai aur main bhi kii aakhir aap yeh black coffee kyun peethi hai….'B' meri baatein maan lo aur yeh aadat chod do… waise bhi as a doctor main aap se keh rahii hoon itna coffee peena aapke sehat ke liye theek nahii hai…..
seher:- arre muski chod na… kuch aadatein ko waise hii rehne dena chahiye kyunke un aadaton mein yaadon kii meethas aur kadwahat chupi hui hothi hai… aur main un meethi aur kadwi yaadon ko kabhi khud se durr nahii karna chahthi hoon..
muskaan sighs & says:- 'B' aap kabhi nahii badlengi….
Seher smiles & says:- ab tu jaa… late ho raha hai tumko… muskaan suddenly realizes that she is getting late & she says a wuick bye to seher & she runs away from there… yahaan seher's secretary keeps her black coffee mug on her table. Seher thanks her & then the secretary leaves the place… seher is once again alone & she is enjoying her space, which she gets every now & then.. this was exactly how seher's life was today. She had forgotten to smile & live life to the fullest… the girl who was jubilant & cheerful… a girl for who the world did not matter. The girl who had made her own world until she was 20… one day with unexpected events are life changed… and after that her life turned upside down in a matter of six months & here she was today… yes she was the same seher, yes she had the same face, but in these six years seher had forgotten to smile & live for herself… seher now had lost all hopes from life & she was just living for the sake of living… she was not happy in her life… she knew that very well but she always put up a fake smile on her face just for her family's sake… even her family knew she was not happy, but they never said a word.. may be if they had said something life would have been better.. but they also knew that seher was right & so they stood by her… this was seher's way of life, where she felt guilty of separating a mother from her son… a brother from their sisters.. a niece from their maama…. If it would not have been on the insistence of veena then seher would have moved away from the garewals a long long long time ago… but the garewals were not ready to let go of her nor was the guilt ready to let go of seher… now in these six these seher made up her mind that she has to live with the guilt & also with the bitterness of the past… she knew that it was how her life was meant to be… seher did not blame anyone for the life she was living today… she just thought it was destiny & whatever has happened was destined to happen… she did not regret her life.. but still she had forgotten to smile whole heartedly & live a life which had only happiness… seher, the word which meant the sunrise, the dawn & a sort of magic but today from her life everthing was missing, her charm, her spirit in life, her glowing smile.. everything was lost… seher ko dekho tho maano aisa lagtha, uski saansein tho chal rahii hai lekin uska dil dhadak na bhool gaya hai… seher never complained against anything.. she who just life just as it came, was put across the most difficult situation six years back.. & even now seher just could not come out of the bitter memories of her past… & more so the fact remained that seher did not want to come out of her bitter memories, chahe beeti yaadein seher ko kitni hii zyada kyun na takleef de de, lekin seher apne unhi beete lamhon mein apna jeevan bithana chahthi thi… though the bitter memories pained her, that pain gave her happiness…. This is how seher was… the girl who saw something positive in everything around her, now led a life where she was just living for the mere sake of it..
Seher is sitting in her cabin… she is stirring the coffee mug in her hand… she is staring intently at the coffee…. Achanak seher ke kaano mein kissi ke shabd goonj ne lagthe hai…. The words were as such… "tumhe tho ek cup coffee bhi banana nahii aathi…. Agar tumhe coffee banana nahii aatha tho kyun banaya tumne… akal naam kii cheez nahii hai kyat um mein.. ya phir akal hone ke bawajood tum usse istamaal nahii karna chahthi ho… ab tum kuch kahogi yap hit bhut bane mere saamne khadi rahogi… say something…. Damn… hell…. Yeh ghar tumhari wajah se jahannum bann gaya hai… ab please yahaan aise matt khadi raho… jao yahaan se tum"…. Seher comes back in the present world jab ghalthi se woh apni garam coffee ko apne mooh ke pass rakh lethi hai. Seher says:- aah…. She then looks at the black coffee mug in her hand & says to herself:- ab tum mujhe nahii keh sakthe kii mujhe coffee banana nahii aatha… khair ab in baaton ka tho koi bhi matlab nahii hai… che saal pehle na mujhe zindagi banana aatha tha aur na coffee banana… aaj che saal baad coffee banana tho seekh hii gayi hoon… lekin chahun bhi tho ek zindagi nahii bana sakthi.. kyunke meri zindagi mujhse kahiin choot gayi thi… aur aaj us baat par afsos jatakar koi fayada nahii.. joh beet gaya woh humara kal tha.. mujhe is baat kii koi umeed hii nahii kii main apni ek zindagi bana sakthi hoon.. tho bas joh jaisa chal raha hai waise hii chalne do… kitni ajeeb baat hai mere kal ne mujhe dard diya, mere aaj mein koi khushi nahii aur mere aane waale kal mein na jaane aur kitne kaante honge… lekin joh bhi ho yeh saansein jab thak chalengi, us din thak main hoon, jis din yeh saansein saath choddengi, us din tho sab kuch khatam ho jaayega.. joh dard seene mein chubhan bannkarr chubtha hai, us din woh dard bhi mitt jaayega.. seher then comes out of her thoughts.. uske aankhon mein name hothi hai… she hears a soft knock on the door, seher kudh se kehthi hai:- Sag, tumhe tumhari zindagi par koi adhikaar nahii hai… tumhari zindagi tumhare apno ke liye hai, jinke liye tum jee rahii ho.. common sag, plaster a smile on your face & get back to work, get back to the life you have been leading for the past 6 years…. There is another soft knock on the door… seher plasters her fake smile, now all one could see on her face was just a smile, though that was not a real smile… only a few understood her real smiles.. seher tells the person to come in, it is her assistant who tells her that maan is waiting for her in his cabin… seher immediately goes to maan & they both get to work…
The day passes by & the night comes.. in the evening it was the three of them in the garewal house, muskaan, seher & veena.. while muskaan talked about her patients continuously.. veena was advicing both seher & her to eat properly… all this while seher was just a silent spectator as always.. after dinner all the three go to their rooms to retire… seher is sitting in her room, with a book in her hand.. but she was not reading the book.. she was lost in her own world of thoughts… some old memories start ringing in her ears… she has a vision of being a plump girl in her teens, she was sitting at her home & reading a book, when a guy who looked in his teens but a year or so elder to her comes in.. he tries to the girls attention…. Finally the boy pulls the book away from her hand & the girl shouts:- vashuuu mera book wapas do… the boy replies:- first stop calling me vashuuu… my name is agni bashist garewal… I'am not vashu you get that…. Agni is very rude… the girl is reduced to tears & she says:- but vashu is your pet name.. agni:- no it is not my pet name… it is the name you have given me, seher gujral & you at nobody to give me a pet name.. you are not close to me… you get that…. Seher says:- butt vashuuu.. agni:- for the last time I'am telling you get this fact in your little brain stop calling me vashuu…. Seher:- ok, fine I will not call you vashuu… now please return my book.. agni with a challenging look on his face says:- no way I'am not giving you the book.. pehle hii tumko inte mote mote chashmein lag chuke hai.. aur agar zyada padegi na tho tho aandhi hojaayegi…
Seher:- agar main andhi hogayi tho tum mujhe sambhaloge na…. tho mujhe no fikar…. Agni laughs sarcastically & says:- ohhh….. please tum meri kaun lagthi ho kii main tumhe sambhaloonga.. achcha tareeka hai kissi ke gale padne ka.. seher:- jab main teri kuch nahii lagthi tho laa de mera kitaab wapas.. aur chala jaa yahaan se.. mujhe teri koi baat nahii sunni hai na mujhe teri shaqal dekhni hai.. samjha tu..
Agni then stay quiet for two minutes & then slowly he walks to seher & says:- heyy… chashmish… golu molu.. yeh kitaab chahiye.. [seher nods her head.. when agni continues…] tho theek yeh lena… agni book ko seher kii taraf agge kartha hai, seher apna haath agge badathi hai to take the book lekin isse pehle kii woh book ko seher apne haath mein le sake…. Agni us book ko padh detha hai… & he runs away saying that:- golo molo, chashmish… tu kissi se kuch umeed karne ke laayak hii nahii hai… ab tu us pathe (torn) book ko padh….. seher comes out of her thoughts when she feels someone by her side.. it was veena… veena looks at seher, seher quickly wipes the tears which were rolling down from her eyes & says:- arree maa, aap kab aayi.. mujhe tho patah hii nahii chala.. veena smiles & says:- main bas abhi aayi beta.. mujhe bas laga kii mere bachchon ko meri zaroorat hai tho main chali aayi… muskaan ke kamre mein gayi thi woh tho so rahii thi, isliye yahaan aagayi tumhe dekhne ke liye.. kya hua beta kuch pareshaan si lag rahii hai.. seher:- koi baat nahii hai maa.. main bas yun hii soch rahii thi kii hum chahe kitna hii kyun na apne ateet se bhaagne kii koshish kare lekin phir bhi humara ateet kabhi na kabhi humare aaj par haawii hotha hai.. aisa kyun hotha hai maa… veena understands what seher is trying to say… she just sits beside seher & says:- seher humein hamesha unhii baton ko yaad karna chahiye joh humein khushi detha hai… aur humein un baaton ko bhool na chahiye jisse humare dil mein takleef hothi hai.. yahii zindagi ka usool hai.. humein hamesha agge kii taraf badhna chahiye… seher:- maa agar aisi baat hai tho humein dard kyun hotha hai.. humare dil ko takleef kyun pohanchthi hai… kyun is duniyaan mein khushi se zyada ghum hothe hai.. kyun maa… veena does not say anything, woh seher ko ishara karthi hai to sleep on her lap… seher does as she is told… she places her head on veena's lap.. both veena & seher are quiet.. but unke dilo-dimaak mein there were innumerable number of questions which were not letting them stay in peace… veena pats on seher's head lovingly for a while & after sometime seher goes to sleep… veena sees that seher is asleep, she carefully places seher's head on the pillow, she covers seher with a blanket & kisses seher on her forehead & walks out of the room glancing once at seher before switching off the lights & closing the door… the night then turns into dawn & the bright sun rises, showing to the world that it is morning time… the 'New Beginning' home is the same as yesterday but still there was something different to it & the difference was that today being a weekend the eldest daughter of the garewal household, prerna anurag basu has come there with her husband anurag basu & with them was their five year old daughter sneha basu… veena was talking to anurag, while sneha was busy in her own world in the house… prerna was with muskaan… prerna observes that muskaan looks a bit worried, prerna enquires to muskaan about it.. muskaan takes prerna to her room… & she tells to prerna:- diii, kya kahun main aapse… kal raat phir se ek barr 'B' ko woh nightmares aaye… phir woh darr ke marre so nahii paa rahii thi… aur phir unhone sleeping tablets liye sone ke liye.. dii as a doctor mujhe yeh baat patah hai kii Sleeping Disorders ek insaan ke zindagi ko kis hadh thak nuksaan pocha saktha hai.. aur dii main 'B' ko us haal mein nahii dekh sakthi… [yes seher has this problems, she gets up in her sleep & unable to sleep again she takes tablets for sleep… this problem of seher arises only when seher is very upset thinking about her past..]
Prerna:- lekin muski, is problem ka koi tho remedy hoga….
Muskaan:- diii is cheez ka remedy humare pass nahii hai. Kyunke jahaan thak main 'B' ka case dekh paayi hoon, unko yeh problem isliye aatha hai kyunke woh depressed hai… depression ke patient mein insomnia common hai dii.. aur dii 'B' ko jab nightmares aathe hai uske baad woh ek tarah se insomiaic bann jaathi hai. Unhe neend nahii aatha.. woh restless ho jaathi hai aur unhe sleeping pills kii zaroorat padthi hai… diii unke yeh nightmares kis baat se related hai yeh aap aur main achche se jaanthe hai.. in sabki wajah sirf aur sirf bhai hai… bro ke wajah se aaj 'B' kii yeh haalath hai.. kyun kiya bhai ne aisa dii.. unke ek faisle ne hum sabki zindagi ko ulat pulat ke rakh dii hai…
Prerna consoles muskaan & says:- muski, joh hua shayad usmein na agni kii ghalthi thi aur na hii seher kii.. yeh tho bas bhagya ka likha hua hai… aur joh hona tha woh hogaya, ab humein yeh koshish karna chahiye kii seher khush rahe.. kyunke jitna woh khush rahegi utna hii usse sukoon kii neend aayegi aur usse sleeping pills kii zaroorat nahii padegi..
Muskaan sighs & says:- shayad aap theek keh rahii hai dii… humein yeh koshish karna hoga kii 'B' kabhi apni beete dardnaak palon ko yaad na kare… aur yahii shayad unke Insomnia aur unke depression ka ilaaz hai.. then muskaan goes onto explain to prerna that seher's problem is very trival & it can be cured if seher is happy with her heart…. prerna & muskaan continue to discuss in what ways they can keep seher happy… when they keep talking, anurag & sneha walk into the room… sneha tells muskaan to come along with her so that they can go & wake seher up… muskaan accompanies sneha, while prerna tells anurag about seher's condition… anurag is worried because for him seher was like his younger sister…. Prerna & anurag talk about what they can do for seher, when in the other room seher is in deep slumber… sneha & muskaan enter her room, sneha takes small steps & she sits beside seher on the bed. aur sneha bade hii pyaar se seher ke chehre par apna haath pherthi hai… seher feels some sensation on her face, sheslowly opens her eyes, as she sees sneha sitting by her side, seher smiles at her & says:- good morning baby… sneha smiles at her & says:- good morning best friend… seher smiles at her & then she gets up & pulls sneha into her lap.. sneha then starts playing with seher & telling her what all she did that week… seher was listening to her conversation as if she was just sneha's age…. Suddenly seher sees that muskaan is observing both of them from the door. Seher calls her in & asks her to join them.. seher apne aankhon se muskaan ko yakeen dilaane kii koshish karthi hai that she is fine.. muskaan understands it & she nods his head.. soon seher & muskaan starts tickling sneha on the bed… all the three were having a time of their life laughing their lives out… listening to their screams anurag, prerna & veena come to the room… they are happy to see the scene in front of them.. as seher sees anurag & prerna, she goes forward to meet them.. she sees worry in their eyes for her, she in a quite tone tells both of them that she is fine.. she tells them that until she has such a beautiful family to take care of her nothing will happen to her… both anurag, prerna hug her making her feel choked with emotions.. as she knows they care for her very much.. when anurag, prerna & seher are having this family moment, muskaan throws a pillow at seher, which hits anurag.. & now the pillow fight race begins where everyone gets involved hitting & playing with each other.. seher, muskaan, anurag, sneha & prerna all the five were on the bed hitting each other with pillows, veena is enjoying this session from the door… maan & his grandmother Savitha Maan, come to the 'New Beginnings, they are informed that everyone is upstairs & when they go near seher's room, accidently a pillow hits maan right on his head.. maan is like what the hell.. he sees it is muskaan who was hiding from him, maan charges in & he joins everyone on the bed kneeling down & there is a second round of pillow fight going on.. seeing all this veena & savita go out of the place leaving the young to have their share of fun.. this was the way weekend was spent at the 'New Beginning Home'…. In the weekend, the laughs could be heard the most…. People in this house looked forward for the weekend because they knew that weekend was the time when they all could be together.. may be one person from there family was missing, but that did not stop the rest of them from smiling.. because they pretty well know that time & tide wait for none.. they knew that the decisions they may have taken in the past may be in haste… or what so ever but today they have to stick to them.. & let bygones be bygones… yes they all felt that in all the fun one person was missing, agni, but there was nothing one could do about it…. as we now see what is the state in the new beginnings home, we see that seher, maan, sneha, anurag, prerna & muskaan are playing carom… muskaan was trying to cheat while maan was trying to stop her… while sneha was playing a carom of her own, seher was trying to teach her to play.. anurag, prerna were having a lovers tiff… savita & veena sitting on the couch were observing all of this with sweet smiles on their faces… this was their life, this was how they chose it to be & they were happy with it… though not fully contented but all knew that what has gone cannot be reverted back…. Seher was happy this way… uski zindagi joh thi, jaisi bhi thi woh ussi mein khush thi…. Kyunke uske dil mein aaj bhi yeh ehsaas tha kii jis faisle ne uski zindagi che saal pehle barbaad kii hai, uski barbaadi mein uska pyaar abaad hogaya… then we see the people in the new beginning chatting & laughing with one another…. This was the 'New Beginning' homes way of life…

(Here Is The Pic Of New Beginnings Home…
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(This Is Maan's Dadi - Savita Maan… Played By Suhasini Muley
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With this ends the second part of 'HumraahI'… I hope all of you enjoyed it… if anyone of you did not like the part please do let me know… I'll wait for your comments & suggestions please do send them soon….. guys I see that there are many new readers, I welcome all my new readers to the thread… I hope all of you will enjoy the fanfic as it progresses too… keeping my fingers crossed… thank you very much for again..

Preview For The Next Part:- A Very Cold Phone Conversation…Woh Bura Nahii Hai… Tumhari Bohat Parwaah Hai Usse… Agar Unhe Meri Parwah Hai Tho Main Kya Karun Khushi Ke Maare Naachun….

I'll try & post the next part soon… Do comment.. & guys I have not proof read the part so if there are any mistakes sorry for that..😊

Love
Surya…😊

Edited by Surya.Ravi - 15 years ago

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Samina

@Iqbal Neha1

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#114

amazing part

i liked the introduction of seher it seems she has gone through a lot in her life but she is still trying to stay happy 4 her family.the first scene between muskaan and veena was nicely potrayed a nd i really liked the way u potrayed muskaans emotions when looking at the family picture.maan and muski scenes were really cute i really liked the way u potrayed the bond between maan muskaan and seher.The last scene between the whole family was beautifully potrayed.

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Purnima

@-purnima-

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#115

Hi 😊...Nice update.....i didn't said gud...coz i missed agni 😉.... Kiding... update is awesome...lovd ur detailed discription of kind of relation evry1 shares.... Recently startd watchng geet....so i liked Maan of ur FF....I'M just guesing he wil play imp role in making AS meet 😊.... Overall episode was njoyable readng & FB my god....agni mein attitude bachpan se hi tha ..no wonder he was such a bully to sehar.... Continue asap...hope to c agni in nxt part 😳... & thanx 4 taking out time & updating FF..its always treat to read ur fics 😊..... By d way u changed ur username... I got confused first lolz... Bye

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amrutha,akhila

@ammuakhi

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Posted: 15 years ago

#116

liked that the part very much

i had tears in my eyes after reading it

you wrote it sooo welll that i am short of words to describe toooo good

cont soonnnnnnnnnnnn

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

Trailblazer

+ 10

Posted: 15 years ago

#117

Originally posted by: togepe30
Lovely part !

thanku...😊

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

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Posted: 15 years ago

#118

Originally posted by: ammuakhi
liked that the part very much
i had tears in my eyes after reading it

you wrote it sooo welll that i am short of words to describe toooo good

cont soonnnnnnnnnnnn

thanku very much.. my intention was never to make you cry.. yes but this fanfic will have it's share of rears.....i'll surely try & continue soon..😊