The Silent Tears

Hi, I am new to writing and this is my first ever story. Its not about any serial character. Everything is pure fiction from my imagination. I hope you like it. Thank you....😳😳

nice start

Originally posted by: cute.arsh

nice start

do contd soon

and pm me

Part 1

"Love has reason, which reason cannot understand" Blaise Pascal

This storyline takes place in London.

It was such a lovely weather when I first met him, I was with Erika my best friend. Erika has always been here for me, we used to share the same dollhouse when we were kids. She stays three blocks ahead of me and we often have sleepover.

Economic Lectures has always been boring for me, until I saw him sitting 4 rows in front of me, each time glancing at the back. It was the first time that I felt something, I was actually blushing.

"What's wrong, why are u looking down each time" nudged Erika

"Nothing just writing notes"

"What! Notes, but we never took notes, economic is boring" Said Erika

"Oh... Wait are u blushing" teased Erika

I never lied to her and she followed my eyes and saw me looking at him...

"Its Jakes, new entrance, he is doing Economics and from what I have heard he has brain" Wink Erika

"What... I didn't ask anything about him but how do you know all that" I fluttered

"You know me, Mike told me and he also told me that Jake was asking about you"

I didn't know what to say. So, Jake was asking about me but why, I was feeling really happy but it was new feeling that I never felt before.

Just then the bell rang, he pass by me but he looked down and I was disappointed, I wanted to talk to him.

"Hey Honey" said Mike

"Hey love, come here, tell Keira who was asking about her" said Erika.

Mike is Erika's boyfriend and they are perfect for each other. Sometimes I envy them as they were so perfect. They always tease each other and made each other laugh.

"Yeah, Jake was asking about you keira, I think he likes you, he is new in London though. He was just asking me your name and where you're from"

"Oh was he" that was all I could manage to say.

Part 2

"To be your friend was all I ever wanted; to be your lover was all I ever dreamed."

Homework's homework's, there was always tons of them. You might miss the train one day but you can never miss having home works one days. I was walking back home to get the tube station. It was always a hectic times and the underground was always pack at such times. Knowing that I might miss the train, I started walking really fast when I bump into someone. When I looked up I was staring into a pair of dark black eyes. I shuddered, his eyes was so piercing. His eyes met mine and I couldn't move, I was stuck into the ground not realising where I was when we heard the announcement that the train was delayed.

I came back from my trance.

" I am sorry, I was actually in a hurry and didn't see where I was going, you are Jake right"

" Ehh yeah"

I know he was a bit tense, then I realised that Mike told me that he was new in London.

" Mike actually told me your name, so where are you going"

"I am actually lost, I am new around here, I have to get to Southwark"

"That's three stop before my place, we can go together if you want"

He just nodded and we started walking together, we had to walk really close as the station was really pack in such busy times. I didn't know what to tell him, I was afraid of my own feeling. He is gorgeous and I was comfortable around him even if I don't know him at all but I didn't know what to tell him. So I thought of starting from the basic since I figured it out that he was not such a talker after all.

"So, Jake where are you from"

"Australia, hmmm' its Keira right"

"Yeah you are right" I smiled

He remember my names, my heart was jumping around, I didn't know what to ask him. To be safe I started asking him just some basic question about him but the strange thing is that he just answered my question and never ask me anything. It was irritating, was he not interested about me. I was angry and I didn't know why. We kept silent till we reach Southwark.

"Here we are, will you be okay then going back home"

"Yes, I'll be fine, thank you for everything and it was nice knowing you Keira"

"Same here" I told him

He step down from the tube and disappear from the crowd. I didn't know what to make out of him. He was an enigma, I though he likes me but now I have my doubt whether he does or it was just my imagination. Letting my mind wander about this, I thought maybe he is new, that's why he does now want to talk much. But he did ask about me. I was confused of my own emotion and feeling.

both parts were lovely

Originally posted by: cute.arsh

both parts were lovely

wonder y jake is so nervous in front of her it should be other way round

thanxs 4 pm

Part 3

"To fall in love is awfully simple, but to fall out of love is simply awful."

He change me and my life. Everything was upside down, I couldn't concentrate in any of the lectures. I found myself looking at him each time but to my utter disappoint he never glance at me once. I was confuse, bewildered at my own feeling and emotions.

"Keira I think you like him" said Erika

The voice of Erika came as a shock to me, I didn't know she was there sitting beside me in the library. I came to finish my Economics assignment but for some weird reason I couldn't concentrate.

"What are you talking about?"

"Oh come on now Keira, am talking about Jake, you like him, you keep talking about him and never stop looking at him in classes"

"That's not true, am just curious about him"

"You are in denial, catch you later I got to go see Mike" Erika said

And she disappear through the door, I was trying to figure out what she was talking about. Do I like Jake? Was it like or something else? Just then to my surprise Jake came through that door, he look at me but then look away instantly and went to talk to the librarian. I couldn't hear what he was talking about as I was too busy looking at him. He was tall and his body looks like he goes to gym every day. His eyes are so intense, I look at his lips moving but I couldn't understand what he was talking about as I started dreaming about him. That's when I saw it, he has a strange tattoo at the back of his neck, it was like a circle with stripes along it, just like the sun. What was it I don't know, and I could not think about it anymore since I saw Jake leaving. He look at me again, this time for a few more seconds, he approach me but then he stops and turn and left leaving me daze behind.

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