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seema mittal

@seemamittal

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#41

heyyyy ruchi:)

really nice concept n loved the part 1

waiting for suspense to disclose

do continue soon

n plzzzzz add me to ur pm

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sariska sujaini

@sariska_mnarti

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#42

So mean of u ruchi

u didn't pm me

it's ok next time don't forget

but lovely update

do cont soon

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Faria Ferdousi

@Faria.

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#43

Hi ruchi
i read ut first chapter jut now
loved it dear
it was not boring at all
loved the way u proceed the story
good update.
keep it up

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Beet

@Beet

Rocker

Posted: 15 years ago

#44

Ruchi, it was a very intersting read.

Very well written. I am quite itching to know what the big secret is....

Really awesome 1st part Ruchi. I loved it.

Will be looking forward to the next parts.

Please do continue soon.

-Daania

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Mansi bhatia

@-Mansi-

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#45

Hey I liked the story..PM me too please! :)

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prerna_agrawal

@prerna_agrawal

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#46

awww ruchi........i'm so glad tht u r back n writing........ welcome back dear!!!......

well concept is really nyc....

and u've got a brand new set of parents for nupur!!!!.....lolzzzzz......

but u know wht....

i was so pissed with this prerna-rishab funda......

in school everyone was after my lyf..... at tht tym this serial was really famous....... i'll start connecting everything!!!!..........lolzzzzzz!!!

anyways!!!......

lovely update!!!.....

nupur seems so happy wth her current lyf........ but wonder wht's her past........ plzz keep mayank's character clean!!!......

update soon!!........ really looking forward to it!!!!

n plzzzz add me to ur pm list!!!!!

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shweta

@cool_shwets

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#47

It isn't boring at all hun😳...ur 1st part is quite interesting,,,lovely update...waiting eagerly for d story to unfold further...next time u update pls do pm me...

Love,

Shweta

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Let-It-Go

@Let-It-Go

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#48

@sariska_mjht : ..i am soo sowwie dear... i actually forgot to pm u ... i am really sorry...

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adi_gupta

@adi_gupta

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#49

ruchiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii

jadddu ki jappi welcome back yaar today is my best day
sachi

yaar tera update

update soon
ub jaldi suspense bhi thoda thoda unwrap karna
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and nice update
i love nups father and her realtion