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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey nyc update..n it was very good...thnxx 4 d pm.....
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a very unique and awesome os 😊
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Hey friends. I am back.
With request from my friends Zeejay and Richa, I am continuing the story "Best day in my life" and now it will make it a short story instead of an OS.
I am really thankful to Zeejay for suggesting how I can continue this OS, what I can include so that it will be a better one.
So friends here is part two, hope you like it.......


PART-2:


Samrat's joy knew no bounds. He was happy that Gunjan reciprocated his gesture.

He ran to his friends and hugged them tightly. "She has given me her number…………..dude that means she is interested………WOW !!!!!!!!! I am so happy today!!!!!"

"Yes dude, she is equally interested dude…….. I think without wasting time you shud called her" Mayank suggested Sam.

But Nupur was in a denial mode. "No Sam don't be so desperate dear……. You have…."

"Ok boys its too late, we have to discuss some strategies…….so please get into the court" Suddenly a hoarse voice cut off Nupur's words.

They turned around only to find their basket ball coach, staring at the three especially at Nupur.

Nupur felt uneasiness. "Ok guys c you in the evening……bye…." Saying this Nupur left.

Sam and Mayank walked towards the BB court, leaving their coach behind.

Coach saw Sam's poster lying on the chair where Sam forgot it. He took it and saw some numbers written on the back side.

"Oh……these crazy fans………….this must be a girl……..driving my boys crazy……..I hate these girlfans……..one look is sufficient to distract the boys…….." he ripped off the poster angrily into tiny pieces and asked the guard to throw it away.

The guard obeyed him as a loyal servant and threw the torn pieces into the dustbin. After sometime the garbage truck came and took the garbage from the bin and moved away. No one knew that Sam's heart was going to be dumped along with the garbage.

On the other hand, Sam and Mayank were practicing in the court. Suddenly Mayank reminded "Have you stored the number in your cell dude?"

"O dear I forgot the poster in the hallway……….dude keep practicing I will be back soon……" Saying this Sam stormed out of the court.

"Madly in love…………..ha ha……" Mayank smiled.

Sam came to the hallway and began searching the poster like mad. He searched from corner to corner but all the effort in vain.

Suddenly the guard came and asked Sam if he can help.

Sam queried about the poster.

"Sir, that poster ……….sorry sir………but the coach ripped the poster into pieces and ordered me to throw away………I…..I….."

"Where…….where did you throw that" Sam asked angrily

Now the guard was scared. "Sir…….sir in the bathroom…….I……..I…………mean in the d……..d….dustbin" He answered in a scary tone

"Sir…………..listen"

Sam rushed towards the dustbin, but that was empty.

"Sir………..the garbage van came and took everything away" He answered in one breath

Sam stood there in the same position for a few minutes and suddenly screamed "COACH………….COACH………I WILL KILL YOU" Saying this he ran towards the court.


BB Court:

Mayank, coach and others heard Sam screaming.

"What happened to Sam…….why is he shouting ??????" Coach asked a confused Mayank.

Suddenly Sam rushed into the coach with his eyes burning in anger. "How dare you………..how dare you ………." Sam grabbed coach's collar and shouted.

"Shut up Samrat…….do you know who I am………and what happened……….what I have done" Coach shouted throwing sam's arm away

"How dare you to rip my poster………you know how important that was for me……..now how I wil find her" Samrat became emotional

"O ……..Ii was right then……..case of a girl…….I hate girls………..they drive you crazy…..they distract you from your goal………If you are so desperate then why don't you get married ???" The coach gave a sarcastic smile

"But to marry I need a girl…………n for the girl I need the number…………and for the number I need the poster which you threw away mercilessly" Samrat shouted in a harsh tone and went away wiping his tears.

"Sam………sam please stop………coach Sam is very emotional………he needs my help…………..sorry coach but Ii cant help but go…….." Mayank walked out of the court without even waiting for coach to answer.


On the other hand, Gunjan was waiting eagerly for Samrat to call. She was checking her phone again and again.

"My phone must be in silent mode………ummmm…….no its in ringing……..any messages………….no………" Gunjan was getting restless.

"But why was he behaving differently…………as if………as if…..he wanna talk to me……..gosh I am mad……….he is a celebrity………Samrat Shergill………..dream boy of every girl………….why he wanna talk to me or spend time with me !!!!!!!!!! You are mad Ms. Gunjan Bhushan……for celebs like him girls are like fashion, which changes time to time"

Gunjan switched off the lights and tried to sleep.


On the other hand Samrat was completely broken. He was sitting in his room looking at the sky continuously.

"Why God……why me…….I never asked you for anything……..except true love…….you took away my mom…..then my grand ma……Dad is happy with his business , hardly gets time to talk to me………n now Gunjan……..why I met her………why.." He was crying continuously.

Mayur were watching from outside. They never saw Sam like this before.

Nupur went to him and hugged him. "Don't worry Sam everything gonna be ok……we will find some way out…….dont worry" She tried to console him.

Suddenly the door bell rang.

"I will see" Saying this Mayank went to open the door.

"Sir myself Anurag Malhotra from Excel college. This year we are organizing a youth festival. So we want you and Mr. Shergill to be the Guest of honour, coz you two are the best inspiration for today's generation. It will be a great pleasure for us if you accept our request. "

"Thanks a lot Mr. Malhotra for considering us. I will talk to Samrat and then inform you" Mayank said smilingly.

"Sir this is my card, if he agrees then please inform us in this no. It was nice meeting you sir. Good night." Saying this, the person left.

"Excell College………that will be fun" Mayank smiled and went upstairs.



tO BE CONTINUED..............


Hope you liked it and dont forget to comment.......


love

Aditi
Edited by me_angel - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#24
great part
ugggh hate that coach.poor samrat
but yay! they're going to excel
hope sajan meet there
do continue soon😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
#25
OMG! AWESOME!!
LoVeD it to the core!!
Its nice with a twist in the form of coach...now they will meet in excel *jumping and dancing around*
so cool...!hmm if u liked my idea..then def u r gonna add tht in the next update...m waiting eagerly for that...i knw u r gonna rock it as always!
U Rock hun! It was an amazing read!!👍🏼

Thanks for the PM
n continue soonn....!!:):)

Lots of Luv
ZeeJay🤗
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Posted: 15 years ago
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wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww i loved it
continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey angel ... nice update .. thanks making it as short story.. and the way u have taken is great ... now wating for sajan to meet at excel 😆😆😆 want read sam's reaction on seeing gunjan ...
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey nice twists and turn....now you made it more interesting.....awesome update loved it......please update soon and thanks for the pm 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
#29
awesome update yaar di...gr88 job..do update soon..thnks for da pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
#30
hiii aditi hows u?
as usual awesome ud dear
mindblowing
fantastic
brillant work
keep it up
ud soon will be waiting

love
Deepa

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