when u say nothin at all(mayur ff)NOTE-PG 17 - Page 7

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Posted: 15 years ago
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poo cute updateee plzz cont soon m waitingg..

story intresting hai.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#62
luv it sis
u totallly rock
luv ya
ruhi;)<3its amazing n plz update sooon
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: coolfire98

luv it sis
u totallly rock
luv ya
ruhi;)<3its amazing n plz update sooon
pretty plz wid a cherry on the top👍🏼😊



hey sui
thanx sooo much m really glad u liked it😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: waterbaby_tanu

poo cute updateee plzz cont soon m waitingg..

story intresting hai.



thanx soo much tanu

m sry bt u'll have to wait lil longer as m nt getin time to write the next part
bt i'll try 😉
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Posted: 15 years ago
#65
awesome 1st part!!
bt thoda chota hai!!
update soon!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Nice FF n concept

Liked the 1st part
Update soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: ..pebo..

awesome 1st part!!
bt thoda chota hai!!
update soon!!
pebz


hey thanx a lot n i know chota tha but ill try to give a long update next time n m really sry coz i wont be able to update for sum time really sry

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: -afsha-

Nice FF n concept

Liked the 1st part
Update soon
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thanx
i'll try to update soon n i've added u to the pm list
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Posted: 15 years ago
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m sry but m having sum net problem i m nt getin time to update ....😒..bt i'm tryin let c ill pakka do it this week
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey guys..... First of all a big sry for updating soo late bt I've got sum net pblems soo n second of all I knw i've got many mayurians as readers but I've also got sum sajan fans reading the ff soo a big big thaks to all of u'll .. the next part might be boring but u'll like it n i've kept my promise n replied to every comment nw time to get back to the story I've givin a bigger update this tine

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Part 2

Love ho ya infatuation ..one definitely takes time to get over it........but this wasn't difficult for nupur, she kept herself busy so as not to think too much but today in the battle against herself, she lost. she dint know what to do. She felt messed up. She kept on asking herself as to why did she ever let this happen, why couldn't she have control over her mind , why couldn't she jus let go. She cursed herself for letting people affect her so much. She was upset, angry, frustrated all she wanted was a little peace of mind.

Unable to fold on to the turmoil going on within her she decided to go some place alone where she can just be herself cry her heart out. She never shared her pain or problems with any one may be she dint want to see them upset or worried for her or because of her. There was this whole world inside her in which she dint let anyone. It was like there was a much more sensitive person who was not willing to come out may be in a fright of not getting accepted or not willing to show her weakness. She went to worli seaface as she found peace there and she thought that the sound of the waves cracking on the seashore and the beautiful twilight with the setting sun couldn't be more of a pleasing sight to her confused mind. She went there since she was a child when ever she would be upset or worried hoping to get some answers

She was in her deep thoughts when she felt a hand on her shoulder which jerked her out of her thoughts

N: tum yahan??(surprised to see samrat)

S: haan mai yahan ..waise tum yahan..kuch hua kya?? (in a low voice.speaking with concern)(samrat knew there was some thing wrong. She seemed pretty disturbed lately n today he dicided to talk to her. Though he knew he might not be successful coz she'd never tell him abt her problems but he'd always try)

N: kuch nahi..... mai to bas yuheen.....

S: nupur .mai janta hoon koi problem hai warna tum........yahan

N: waise tumhe kaise pata ki mai yahan.......(trying to change the topic)

S: nupur main tumhe bachpan se janta hoon jab tumhe kuch hota hai to tumse phele mujhe pata chalta hai aur jab bhi tum upset hoti ho toh yahi aati ho .....aur aapne doston ke barame mein itni information toh rakhani hi chahiye

N: aise koi baat nahi hai I'm fine sam (tryin yo convince him )

S: dekho nupur mai tumhe force nahi karunga so if u don't wanna tell me its fine......... but plzz don't be upset im sure u'll figure out a way to handle things.

N: (sounding really upset)samrat mai khud nahi janti ki mujhe asise achanak kya hua hai toh mai tunhe kya bataoon and finding a solution toh dur ki baat hai

S: nupur first of all stop worrying...............magar mujhe yeh samaj nahi aa raha ki jis problem ka koi aata pata nahi hai us pe tum aapna sar kyun phod rahi ho....... shayad koi problem ho hi na!! ek aise problem jo ho hi na usse itna importance de kar tum apne liye aur problems create kar rahi ho aur apna BP bhi badha rahi ho ..soo just relax n take it easy everythin will be fine

(nupur is thinking about what samrat said)

S: tum bhi na nupur..mai jo bhi kehta hu aska exactly opposite karna jaruri hai

N:kya?

S: aur nahi toh kya........... maine kaha socho mat toh tum aur zadya sochne lagi

N: aisa nahi hai.....I was just thinking that may be ur right......I was unnecessarily thinking soo much

S: I told u soo'. ab zadya sochna bandh karo and remember tumhere face pe 32 wats ki smile hamesha honi chahiye..........that's like ur trade mark yaar

N: ok bubba waise what r u doing here weren't u supposed to "study"???

S: first of all my frnd needed me aur uss "dukhi maan" ko mai akela nahi chod sakta tha n second of all its my break sooo.......

N: oh plzz I'm not sum "duhki maan mere " kind of person n u knw that

S: yaa ur nt but sumtimes that "duhki maan mere " kind of person takes over ur mind n I cant leave u alone in such conditions..it could be dangerous

N: yaa rite......apni bakwaas bandh karo aise kuch nahi hai( she she playfully hits him on his arm)

N: aur waise sam break leneke liye pehele padhai karani padati hain

S: oh plzz mai padhta hoon

N: mai bachpan ki baat nahi kar rahi .jabse term shuru hua hai tumhare break shuru hua I think its time u take a break frm ur breaks aur waise bhi tum trustee ke bete nahi ho ki aise hi pass ho jao

S: ok plzzz ab bhaashan mat do aur padhai se yaad aaya ghar chalo mujhe tumhari help chahiye ek concept hai jo mujhe samajh nahi aa raha

N:baas ek hi concept....looks like sumone's paying attention in lectures nowadays hmm

S: please nupur u got to help me infact I cant get anyone better than u after all ur doing majors in that subject

N: aur meri padhai kaun karega mere bhi toh exams hai

S: oh plz ab bhav maat khao mujhe pata hai that u've already studied n u know that I cant do anything without ur help

N: sochna padega

S: plzz help me... plzz help me.... plzz help me........ plzz help me.... plzz help me...... plzz help me.. plzz help me(he went on n on)

(Giving up nupur agreed to help him n they left to go to sam's house. Nupur helped samrat with a few concepts.she tought him as though she was explaning to a small kid, confirming at least ten times whether he was understanding or not.)

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As time flies their exams get over n everyone's done well. Sheena n RV get into the university n they leave after a couple of days. The gang bids them farewell and their lives carry on.....

After 1 yr

At Bhushan house...............

"omg......bahut der ho gayi" thought nupur,as she was getting dressed. "ab tak toh der nahi hui lekin agar tum aise hi khud se baat karti rahogi toh hum definitely late ho jayenge" interrupted dia "arre main kya pagal hun ki khud se hi bak bak karati rahungi ...ab chalo bhi kya statue ki tarha khadi ho........ CHALOOOO" said nupur n left the room going towards the car followed by surprised dia who was busy giving stupid looks to her

On the other hand at the sharma's shilpa aunty is trying hard to wake her sleeping beauty from his deep slumber .

She moves her hand through her sons hair. ...."hey babes......wassup?? itne dino baad.. huh" muttered samrat still engrossed in his dreams. "nalayak!!" yelled shilpa on getting an unexpected reaction from her son. Though she was aware of his behavior of flirting with every girl possible n she was ok with that as it was just time pass but he did respect them as well but he never experimented with her." Oye mr. utho ... mai koi teri babes nahi.....ab tak toh tu sirf ladakiyon ke sath flirt karta tha lekin lagata hai ki ladakiyan tujhe bhav nahi deti isliye aapni maa ke sath hi shuru ho gaye" reacted shilpa "maa aap..mujhe laga .."said startled samrat trying to explain but was abruptly cut by his mother"tujhe kya laga who mai janti hun soo don't explain ..waise jaldi uth aur tayar ho ja airport jana hai naa... bhul gaya kya"

"oh shit ....maa aapne phele kyun nahi uthaya....mai toh aaj gaya kaam se"said samrat rushing towards the bathroom

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At the airport....

The flight coming from Bangalore landed

Among the first few arriving near the luggage belt was gunjan..gunjan bhushan, nupur's younger sister. (She was younger to nupur than 2yrs, she has been in Bangalore for the past three yrs with her bua n has now transferred to excel to be with her sister. Nupur n she are similar in nature as in ..fun loving, extrovert, fully bindas but there was a major difference between them. Gunjan was very impatient n took hasty decisions, she was very straight forward absolutely muhfat she was a really practical girl n was aware of the reserved side of nupur. She was not at all a good listener unlike nupur but always heard out nupur n kept on encouraging her in her decisions. She was the only person who nupur would talk to without any hesitation. In short she was the only one who knew n understood the real nupur n was her only support system.)

Nupur n dia were waiting at the arrival gate when her cell buzzed she had received a messege frm gunjan" hieeeeeeeeeeeeee di ..waise I've reached n I'm waiting for my for my luggage hope u've already reached.... will be out soon.."

Gunjan was waiting for her third bag when she got nupur's reply saying that they have already reached. She was very excited at the thougt of finally meeting her sister when she noticed the bag. She took the bag and rushed out to meet her sister

Gunjan hugged nupur n dia n they greeted each, other. Nupur got teary on seeing her sister after so long."di no senti-senti plzzzz..mai sirf tumhare liye aayi hoon aur agar tum rone lige toh abi vapas chali jaungi mere presence mai meri di roye.... never" said gunjan " achha bubba no senti ab chal ghar chalte hai aur vapas jane ki baat toh sochna hi maat.teri di itni jaldi tera peecha nahi chodegi"

" haan di chalo waise bhi pet mai chuhe daud rahe hai "said gunjan n they leave

As gunjan left to go out the last few passengers of the flight arrived, among them was mayank. He went towards the luggage belt collected his luggage n walked towards the exit ( mayank was samrat's elder brother. He was older to samrat by two yrs. Initially the sharma's lived in Bangalore .samrat was just five yrs old n mayank was seven when their father expired in an accident. Mayank was a total papa's boy. He was very naughty infact even samrat looked like an angel in front of mayank. But he never had too many friends his only best buddy was his dad n samrat to an extent. After his dad expired he lived his life like a loner the only people he would talk to was his mother n brother. He had a very friendly nature but never willed to make any friends

2 yrs after his fathers death shilpa was transferred to the Mumbai branch. Mayank was very adamant about staying in Bangalore n dint want to move. Shilpa tried to convince him but he stuck to his decision . shilpa even tried to explain to him that she would have to put him in a boarding school if he willed to stay here but mayank was still very stubborn n finally lived n bangalore with his masi while shilpa n samrat moved to Mumbai. They would spend their vacations together in Bangalore. Mayank was away from his family but still he really loved them but expressed it..his insecurity of losing the person he loved the most made his push every one away frm him but he stood by his family always. Lately shilpa was not keeping well so he decided to transfer to excel)

Finally samrat reached the airport n he was as usual late

S: sorry.... sorry... Sorry.. sorry.. sorry" (walking towards mayank)

M: its ok sam (they hugged each other)

(they left towards the parking discussing about what their mother had cooked n other random stuff)

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PS: plzzzzz leave a comment n press the like tab....... feel free to comment n criticize n m sry but the next update will be late...... m really sry

Love u'll


pooja😉

Edited by koolwaters_poo - 15 years ago

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