.;mere jaan:.last part page 19 (maneetul & kash) - Page 5

Geet and maan got ready

Maan: hum ja rahe hai papa'yaha agar koi important kaam ho toh mujhe call ker lena

Dev: nahi beta tum log jao n have sum fun yaha ki bilkul tension na lena

Maan n geet left

Armaan thinking: ridhimma must be thinking keh uss ka husband kaisa hai jo uski bilkul parwa hi nahi kerta'..hmm'I have an idea!

Rahul came there

Rahul:hey armaan!!

Armaan: hi yaar'tu kaha gum hai ajj kal nazar hi nahi ata!

Rahul: haan thora buzy tha'.btw maan kaha hai?? Mujhe use kuch kam tha

Armaan:big b aur bhabhz dono kuch dino ke liye paris gaye hai

Rahul got shocked

Rahul:KIYA!!?

Then changed his expressions totally

Rahul:okay'chal mujhe kuch kam hai mai chalta ho

Armaan: ruk yaar!..mujhe bhi tujh se kuch madad chahiye!....

Rahul: madad'tu order ker!

Armaan: okay

N said sumthing in his ear

Rahul: u sure it will work??

Armaan: haan'tujhe jitna kaha hai tu bas utna ker

Rahul: kuch zyada hi filmi hai don't u think so!

Armaan: filmi nahi armaan style hai'tujhe jo kaha hai tu who ker bas!

They both left then

In plane

Geet & maan r sitting

Maan is reading sum magazine

Geet fell asleep

As there was no support her head fell on maan's shoulder

Firstly maan was just going to scold her but then as he saw her she was sleeping soooooo peacefully hee couldn't utter even a word

They reached paris

Went to there suite

It was HUGE!!!.....

Geet was just staring @ everything nsaid:yeh sab appne??????

Maan: yeh sab armaan ne kiya hai maine use kaha tha ek room ka arrange kerne ko aur usne yeh itna bara suite le liya'but its nyc

Geet: ya'

Maan: mai fresh ho ker ata ho

Geet got buzy in unpacking bags'..

Maan came out of washroom n saw his beautiful wife doing sum work n he was just stading n adoring her beauty he never felt this way ever before

Geet saw maan

Her eyes got bigger n she screamed because of which maan came out of his dream land

Maan: kiya hua???

Geet: COCKROACH!!!!!!

Maan kiya kaha??

Geet was just screaming'

Maan also got frightened n started looking here n there

Maan: kaha hai??

Geet pointed towards his houlder

N maan slowly looked towards his shoulder n it was right there

Maan:AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA'.HATAO HATAO!!!.....

He was just screaming n jumping n didn't even thought once to remove it from his hand'.lol

N while jumping n screaming he ended up falling on geet

They both fell on bed

Her hairs were blowing n touching her face

Maan removed her hair from her face

He was staring her right there in her eyes n then geet stater feeling the awkwardness

Maan got up

Maan: woh cockroach'..chala gaya'.hat gaya

Geet also got up

Geet: app cockroach se darte ho???? N laughed

Maan: nahi woh itna kareeb that oh mai woh'

Geet: toh mai woh'sedhe sedhe maan kyun nahi lete'..

Maan: ab bate hi kerne hai ya kuch khana bhi hai?

Geet: haan khana toh khana hai

Maan: to jao tum tiyar ho jao

Geet:okay

N geet left

In india

Ridhimma got a msg

It said " ajj sham theek 7 baje tiyar rehna armaan"

Ridhimma:ARMAAN?????..weird'.okay'.

N continued her work

It was 7

She got ready she was looking prettiest!!!..in a red saree with minimum accessory n her hair closed with a catcher

Shashank: beat kahe ja rahe ho??

Ridhimma: ji papa woh ajj mai aur armaan baher ja rahe hai

Shashank: jalde lautna

Ridhimma got missed call by armaan

She went out

Armaan was there in a black suit looking dashing!....at first they just stared each other

Ridhimma: yeh sab??

Armaan: shhh'.(put his finger on her lips)

Armaan sorta hugged her

She was frozen

N armaan took that catcher out which opened her hair

Armaan: tum khule balo mai zyada ache lagte ho

Ridhimma stared @ him weirdly: okay!.....

Armaan: chale..

Ridhimma: lekin kaha??

They both sat in the car then they reached sumwhere

Armaan came and opened ridhimma's door

She came out n red carpet was lying on floor

Ridhimma got happy n stepped on it

Then after few stpes they reached a place where there was a table with a light music

It was all red with red red decorations

Ridhimma: ahan..nyc nyc'im impressed Dr.Armaan

Armaan: oye hoe'abhi aage aage dekho hota hai kiya!

Ridhimma:achaw'.hmmm'..

Armaan asked her for dance n she gave her hand in his

They danced on a light tune

Ridhimma: maine socha tha keh tumne mujhse shadi sirf majbori mai ki hai

Armaan stopped

Armaan: kiya??!!!

Armaan: yane keh tum ne ajj tak woh mehsoos hi nahi kiya jo mai tumhare liye feel kerta ho??

Ridhimma: nahi aise baat nahi hai..woh'..

Armaan: bas ridhimma! im trying my best keh mai iss relation ko successful bana sako aur tum'

Ridhimma: armaan??....

Armaan: mai tumse kitna pyar kerta ho tumhe kabhi nahi dekha mere ankho mai?

Ridhimma: lekin armaan mere baat toh suno'

Armaan: bas mujhe ab kuch nahi sunna'..mai jar aha ho tumhe ana hai toh aa jao

They both left

In AR's room

Ridhimma: lekin armaan tum mere baat toh suno

Armaan: kiya suno yahe keh mai tumse pyaar nahi kerta ya phir yeh keh hum sath sirf dadaji ki waja se hai!!!

Ridhimma: im sorry'

N a tear broke from her eye

Ridhimma: mai jante ho keh tum mujhese pyar kerte ho par tumne ajj tak kuch kaha hi nahi''.aur waise bhi tum ere baat sunte kaha ho'..

Armaan wiped her tear

Armaan: ro kyun rahe ho???

In a rude tone

Ridhimma: roo nahi toh kiya karo??....tumhe kaise yakeen dilao keh mai bhi khush ho

Now as she saw armaan he was not there

Ridhimma: armaan?

He looked down n he was there sitting on his knees

Armaan: im really really really really really really sorry

Ridhimma: armaan yeh sab kerne ki koi zarorat nahi hai '.armaan utho!

N armaan just held her legs

Armaan: ridhimma mujhe papi bande ko maaf ker do'ridhimma!

Ridhimma:armaan!!...armaan!!....choror armaan!!

Sumhow she escaped n went to change

Armaan: oye hoye!!.....

Rahul was in the same house n he was searching for sumthing really important'.first of all he went in dadaji's room'..he searched all the cupboards n as when he was leaving his foot got injured by a sharp piece he bent n picked it up it looked familiar then he opened the lower door od the cupboard n many pieces of similar design were there'..he held them all n put them in a packet

He crought them home n started trying to glue them all up without leaving his finger prints on them'..he remembered the same texture n designed vase was there in malhotra house n it was padma's facourite one n it was missing that day when he went to the home'.

He glued them all up n it was ready now it was exactl the same vase!!....n even it had sum spots of blood on it n they were dry he took it to his laboratory tried to search sumone's finger print on it he thought for sumtym then thought if he had to kill sum one then he would held the vase from its base n hit the person with the initial part of it so he speciafically tried to find out fingerprints on that section'..n he was damn shocked to see whos finger prints was there '.he told himself " No ur wrong!..how this can be!!"'.but this vase was the evidence of who was the murderer'..then he thought that now he will definitely keep an eye on that person n he thought to call geet but then he thought that first of all he will get everything eonfirmed then he put his mobile back in his pocket'.now he was in a new confusion of everything!!!

In Paris

Geet got ready n they both left for a hotel

They sat n started talking generally

Idher udher ki bate etc etc idher udher ki bate etc etc idher udher ki bate etc etc'..heheheheh''

Maan:u knw yaha ka food buhat acha hota hai''specially Chinese!

Geet: Chinese..yum I love Chinese 'pata hai rahul se jab bhi mai naraz hote the tab who humesha mujhe kisi Chinese restaurant mai le jata tha'.

Maan's expressions changed

Maan: lets dance'

Geet:abhi''okay

They stood up n started moving on a light muziq'..

Geet : muziq buhat acha hai''

Maan: yea..

Geet: pata hai rahul'.i mean maan'.

Maan got really angry this tym'.

Maan: ghar chale???

Geet:lekin??...kiya hua??

Maan: tum aa rahe ho ya mai khud hi jao??

Geet:'par'

N maan left geet followed him

They both reached hotel

Maan dropped geet n went sumwhere else

Nineth part....

Back to India

Rahul is in search of sum solid proof that would prove who is that murderer

Then he just went to that hospital where padma took her last breath

He went to the doctor and then to the nurse constantly searching for sum proof

Then he thaught of sumthing n went to the pharmacy of that hospital

He asked the pharmacist

Rahul: hi im rahul umm'I wanted to ask keh 6^th june ko yaha se kisi ne lyk kisi aise ne jo keh doctor na ho koi medicine li the

Pharmacist: yaha toh har roz buhat sare log ate hai medicines lene app ko koun si medicine ke bare mai pata kerna hai?

Rahul:koi aise medicine jis ke zyada lene ki wajah se kisi ke death ho sakte ho?

Pharmacist:'I don't knw

Rahul took sum money out of his wallet

Rahul: its urgent

N gave him sum money

Rahul: plz!

Pharmacist: okay ryte..lemme check!

He took out the register n opened 6^th june's page

N surprisingly he find ot that it was torn from the end

Rahul: yeh kiya!!...appke records se koi kuch bhi kare app ko koi parwa hi nahi hai!!

Pharmacist: nahi ye hajj subah tak toh theek tha'.

Rahul was soo tensed

He looked at that corner carefully

N find out that the column where the name of the person would be written,there sumthing was left written

And he closely watched it and the last two letters were visible that were "an"!

Rahul: ab yeh koun hai!!!!

In paris

Geet waiting for maan n it was really alte

Then the door opened with a bang!

And maan came in

He was drunk his shirt button were hald opened n hair messed up

He came in with his coat in his hand n with a bottle

He was abt to fall when geet held him

Geet: maan!!!??....ur drunk????

Maan: drunk!....really'hardly noticed!...(in a weird tone)

Geet:okay'I think tumhe ab soo jana chahiye!

Maan: nahi maine abhi nahi sona!!..geet mai kuch kaho

Geet:haan bolo par plz pehle beth jao!

N almost threw him on bed as it was getting impossible for her to handle him

N geet was abt to leave when maan held her dupatta

Maan: ruko!!!

Geet:maan'kal subah baat kare!...

Maan stood up n touched geet's hairs

Maan: geet tum buhat khobsorat ho!

Geet:'maan?????

Maan: but buhat pagal ho!.......because u don't luv me!!.....tum mujhse pyaar kyun nahi kerte?

Geet was just listening to him

Maan: tumhe dikhae nahi deta mai tumse kitna pyaar kerta ho???

Geet: really??

She knew that he was talking all this because he was drunk but still a ray of hope lightened that he might luv her

Maan: haan!..tumhe mere ankho mai pyaar nahi dikhta??...

He was getting close to her

At last he put his face on her shoulder

Geet was feeling really awkward kinda feeling'maan's behaviour was eccentric!!

Geet:maan??

Maan held his head up and looked at geet right in her eyes

Maan: I LOVE you geet!

And then suddenly his behaviour changed!..drastically!!

He held geet from her shoulder firmly

Maan: geet tum mujhse pyar kerte hona!!

Geet:maan choro mujhe!...dard ho raha hai!!...maan!!

Maan: yahe dard yahe dard tumhe mere ankho mai nahi dikhta!...jab tum uss rahul ke bare mai baat kerte ho!...jab tum uske paas jate ho!!.....jab tum!!!

And then almost threw her away!...

Maan: u don't deserve me!!...tum kabhi mujhse pyaar nahi karoge!....toh kiya hua agar mai tumse pyaar kerta ho!..tum toh nahi kerte!!....mai sirf tumhare majbori ho aur sirf tumhari majbori hi bana rahonga!!

And then he fell on his bed blabbering all these words again n again

Geet just sat there where maan threw him

She started crying!

N cried almost all night!

In India

As ridhimma came out after changing her clother

She was in her night suit

The room was lightened with candles everywhere!

Atmosphere was romantic

Ridhimma: armaan??

He came from the back n held her from her waist

Armaan: bolo sweetie pie!

Ridhimma: yeh sab kiya hai?

Armaan:ridhimma!!...tumhe chashma lagne wala ahi????...dikhae nahi de raha kiya

Ridhimma giggled

Ridhimma: dikh raha hai!!

Armaan kissed her neck

And then bluuuuuuuuuuuuurrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr''.

Next morning!

As maan woke up

He sat on his bed trying to remember wat did actually happened last night

Then geet came with a cup of tea

Geet: ahem!...

Maan took the cup and sat

Geet: good morning!

With a wide smile!

Maan: kal raat??

Geet didn't wanted him to remember anything

Geet:'yaha ek buhat acha shopping mall hai ajj hum waha chale???!

Maan: hmm'but'kal raat??

Geet: app ke kapre nikal do'.mai abhi nikal ker ate ho

Maan: par'.

Geet went

Maan with a BIG question mark on his face was sitting there n just wondering"isse kiya ho gaya??"

They went out had loads n loads of fun!...now slowly n steadily they were getting friendly

Atlast they came to a caf

Maan: (smiling) geet'.tum kitneeee shopping kerte ho!!....mai yeh bags pakar ker thak chukka ho!

Geet:'yeh mera had hao'lol

N they both started laughing

The waiter came

Waiter: ur order sir??

Maan: two black coffees'.on with one table spoon sugar n other with no sugar

The waiter went

Geet: u knw???

Maan: I knw wat??

Geet: mujhe black coffee pasand hai appko pata tha?...kaise??

Maan:mujhe pata tha!

Then a pause

N they both started seeing here and there

Maan stared at geet

Maan: geet'kal raat??

Geet: yeh jaga ache haina!

Maan: geet its not working!

Geet:'kiya farq parta hai kal raat ko kiya hua tha!.....ajj ek naye subah aye hai so just forget it! Aur waise bhi'..

Maan: im SORRY!

Geet with her mouth right there on the floor just staring at maan

Geet :WAT!!!

He knew he would have never said this five lettered word to anyone!!..not even his very own mother!

Geet: app ki taibiyat toh theek hai!!!

N started touching his forehead!

Maan: im alryte!...i knw I was drunk last night!...i knw keh maine kuch zyada bola hoga!..i really don't knw keh kiya bola but job hi bola hoga'.

Geet:'appne jo bola theek bola!...ab mai uss sab ko aur discuss nahi kerna chahte !

Meanwhile coffee arrived!....

Maan: btw iss ke baad kaha jane ka irada hai??

Geet:'dekhte hai!...aur kaha kaha ache bags milte hai

And they laughed!

In India

Rahul went to malhotra house

Naintara and shashank were there

Rahul: mai app hi se milne aa raha tha!

Naintara: bolo!

Rahul explained everything n asked for her help'can u actually help me out keh tab sab kaha the??

Naintara:uss waqt geet aur maan toh humare sath the'par kuch tym ke liye toh maan baher gaya tha!

Shashank: n mere baher an eke baad armaan kuch der ke liye coffee lene gaya tha!

Rahul: okay so muskaan aunty app ke sath the???

He was actually praying she would be out of this mess! So that he can tell her everything!

Naintara:ummm'..nahi yaad aya!..jab hum gar eke paas pohnche

*flash Back*

as they reached near the car

muskaan:oh!..car ki chabi toh maan ke paas hi hai!...app log yahe ruke mai abhi ate ho

*flash back over*

sumthing pinched in rahul's heart!...she was hurt!

Shashank: hume iss tarha sab per shak nahi kerna chahiye!

Naintara: toh app kiya cahhte hai jisne dadaji aur padma ko katal kiya hum usse jane bina hi humare bech rehne de???

Rahul:uncle aunty sahe keh rahe hai!....hume katil tak pohnchna hoga!

Shashank: par kaise??

Rahul: pehel baat dadaji ki death se sab se zyada faida kis ko hota hai??

Dev:MUJHE!

He came from a side

Shasahnk: yeh tum kiya keh rahe ho!

Dev: apne bacho ko bachane ke liye mai pane sar per bhi yeh ilzam lene ke liye tiyar ho!

Shashank: pagal mat bano!!

Rahul: dekhiye uncle mai app logo ko hurt nahi kerna chahta!....bas sach janna chahta ho!

They all sat

Dev:dad ne apne sare property apne marne ke baad hum sab mai kindof bant di hai..just lyk 20%mera aur naintara ka20% shashank ka'.30% armaan aur ridhimma ka aur 30% maan aur geet ka!

Rahul: yane keh property bante bhi couple mai hi hai

Dev:haan

Rahul: yane keh unh one pehle hi in sab ki shaadi ke bare mai soch tha

Shashank: haan

Rahul: aur iss bar mai kis kis ko pata tha??

Naintara: kisi ko bhi nahi!

Rahul: u sure???

Naintara:'haan sirf dadaji unke diary aur unke lawyer ke ilawa aur kisi ko bhi nahi!

Rahul: okay aur who diary kaha hai?

Naintara: unke kamre mai hi hoge'.mai late ho

Rahul: by da way uncle property total hai kitne??...lyk 30% kitna ho ga??

Dev:dad ki pure zindagi ki manaye!.....itnaa paisa jitney se humare agle 7 generations aish ker sakte hai!

Rahul: lekin kitna??

Dev: it would be 10 billion crores!!

Rahul was sshocked on hearing the amount!!!

Shashank: iss ka maltb yeh hai keh koi dad ko paiso ke liye kyun mare ga jab usse sare who property milne hi wale hai!

Rahul: it is the only unanswered question uncle!!

Naintara came meanwhile

Naintara:'diary waha nahi hai!

Rahul:kyun??..i mean kaha gaye diary??

Naintara:..pata nahi!.....

Rahul:weird!...okay I think ab mujhe chalna chahiye..but plz keep this in mind keh kisi ko bhi iss sab ke bare mai pata anhi chalna chahiye!

Rahul was in sum dark place'..he stepped two three steps forward n then a iron rod came from behind which hit him badly n it was blood all over now

Rahul:tum!!

He opened his eyes with a jerk n found himself in sweat!

He keep thinking of what he saw..it might be a dejavu moment!...a vision or sumthing really unknown to him!

He opened his cupboard n started searching sumthing

He found sum papers

He started going through them

It was raining heavely outside

Then due to sum unknown reason he went to a joggin track where armaan and maan came every morning to jog

He saw a bench n started digging near it

N he found a diary

In the lightening it was all quite dark n everything was too mysterious to be known!

He opened that diary

At sum pages ink had just scattered a bit coz of water

He quickly dried it and tried reading it

" aaj..mujhe uss ke bare mai ek sach pata chala!..keh who ek drug addict hai!!...aisa kaise ho sakta ahi!...hum sab usse itna pyaar kerte hai par who!!......................................maine buhat koshish ki usse samjhane ki lekin who kisi ki sunne ko tiyar hi nahi!!....mai nahi janta mai kiya karonga!!.....................bas ab waqt aa chukka hai!!......ajj ya toh woh ya mai!!...hum dono mai se kisi ek ko dosre ki baat manne hi hoge!"

Tenth part....

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