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i hope u ppl like it!...😃

FIRST PART!....

It was the result day of ridhimma n she passed it.She was in her last year of mbbs.She was feeling as if she was on the top of the world!.Her biggest dream was now her reality.

A big house is shown

Ridhimma opened the door without any voice.She wanted to give everyone a surprise as she came iin the lights were off

Ridhimma:arey sab kaha chale gae???

And then all lights were on now n everyone was stading their with gifts in their hands

Everyone:CONRATULATIONS!!!!!

Geet:ridz congo yaar!..u have done it!

Ridhimma:thanx di!!...tumhare bagher mai yeh sab kabhi na ker pate

N hugged her

Ridhimma: but app logo ko kaise pata keh mai pass hogae??

Shashank:'hume pura yakeen tha keh tum pass ho jao ge isiliye

she went to her mom dad n hugged them then to her bare maa n bare papa they also gave her gifts she hugged them too'then armaan was standing there

Ridhimma: big b kaha hai??

Armaan: wohh'..

Ridhimma: okay I can understand meeting ho ge buzy honge'.

Ridhimma made sad faces

Armaan: but I have sumthing for u =D

Ridhimma: tum aur mere liye kuch lao!...impossible!!

Armaan: chocolates!

N gave her chocolates

Ridhimma:ahan ahan!..mr.Armaan'tumhare dimag mai bhi thore akal aa rahe hai

Shashank: bas larte hi rehna pure zindagi!

Dev: jao ridhimma dadji se bhi mil lo

Ridhimma: haan mai abhi jate ho

Geet: haan phir jalde aao party bhi toh shuroo kerne hai

Ridhimma: PARTY..WOW!!...mai abhi gae aur abhi aye!

Ridhimma went upstair

She entered a room

It was dark there just a dim light was present as the sun rays

Ridhimma went near to the chair where sum1 was sitting

She sat near him n touched his knees

Ridhimma: dada ji!..ajj ka din mere zindagi ka sab se khushi ka din hai!...aur yeh sab sirf aur sirf app ki wajah se hua hai!....agar app mom dad ko na manate toh shayad yeh sab mai kabhi na ker pate'.pata hai maine apne university mai top kiya hai!...sab buhat khush the'.sab hi keh ache marks aye'.woh mayank haina apke friend ka beta who mujhse bara jealou tha coz mera pura ek mark usse zyada hai'(she laughed)'.lekin dada ji!

N she looked up

Dada ji didn't respond

She touched his shoulder n said:dada ji??

N his face fell towards a side

She screamed

Everyone came in

Ridhimma was in shock she didn't respond at all she just kept staring her dada ji

Armaan checked his pulse shashank n dev just keep calling his name: papa ji!.....

Then there was darkness complete darkness in there lives'''.

In the evening after postmortem n all rituals n customs they came to their home

The phone rang

Armaan received it: hello

Doctor: doc here'.is this mr.Malhotra's house?

Armaan: yea doc'

Doctor: his postmortem repots r in my hands can any1 from ur house come n receive them

Armaan: yea sure..but what was the cause of his death?

Doctor: it was a natural death

Armaan: okay ill send sum1 to receive the repots

Maan came there

Armaan: bhai who dada ji ki postmortem reports aa gae hai'

Maan: toh jaker le ao!

Armaan: doc keh rahe hai dat it was natural death!......but!...

Maan: jane wale toh ja chuke hai toh phir kaise mare kyun mare iss baat ko discuss kerne se kiya faida!

Armaan stared him with a question in his eyes

Rahul arrived there

Armaan hugged rahul

They both were crying

Armaan: dadaji hum sab ko chor ker chale gae!.......

Rahul: hmm'.unki kami koi pure nahi ker sakta lekin ab jane wale ko koi kaise rok sakta hai!

Rahul looked towards geet

She was crying' she was sitting in the stairs

Rahul went to everyong n consoled

And atlast came n sat near geet

Rahul:..im sorry jo bhi hua nahi hona chahiye tha!

Geet rested her head on rahul's shoulder

Geet:'buhat bura hua!...yeh nahi hona chahiye tha'dadaji hum sab ko kitna pyaar kerte the!....

Maan was staring them both from a distance

The door bell rang

There maid opened the door: whos this??

The man: im mr.Malhotra's lawyer'.app unke sab relatives ko bula sakte hai

After sum tym they all gathered in the hall'..and pin drop silence was their

Lawyer begin it:..jaisa keh app sab jante hai keh ab mr.malhotra humare bech nahi rahe'im really sorry abt this'mai yaha unki wasihat parhne aya ho

Shashank: abhi toh unke death ko ek din bhi nahi hua aur app abhi hi aa gae!...hume paise se koi matlab nahi hai!..woh paisa kis kam ka jo hme humare papa hi wapis na ker (to lawyer)

Lawyer: okay so jo wasiyhat mere pass unho ne banwae the uske mutabiq unke total property 50 million crore ki hai

Everyone stared him!...:WHAT!....

Nainatara: yeh kaise ho sakta hai!?

Lawyer: ji aisa hi hai unho ne kuch investments ki the jis ke badle unhe yeh paise mile the

Lawyer: but iss will ke mutabiq kisi ko kuch nahi mil sakta jab tak unke kuch khwahishe hai who pure na ho jae

Ridhimma: khwahish???....kaise khwahishe??

Lawyer: app ke dada ji ki khwahish the keh app yane keh ridhimma ki shaadi armaan se ho jae aur maan ki shaadi geet se ho jae

Everyone stood up

Maan: yeh kiya bakwas ker rahe hai app!....dada ji kabhi aisa na kerte!!!

Lawyer: dekhiye agar app ki shaadi na hue toh yeh sare property including this home!...sare orphanage mai chale jaege aur app mai se kisi ko kuch nahi mile ga

Everyone was in confusion a BIG confusion!

Precap:

Dev: ho sakta hai yeh papa ki akhre khwahish ho aur yeh sab kerke unhe ki atma ko shanti mile

Second part....

Shashank to lawyer:..app jaiye hum apko jald hi apna faisla suna denge

Lawyer left

Naintara was blabbering: pure 50 million crore!!!.....

Padma: kuch kaha apne??

Naintara: nahi hum toh yahe soch rahe the keh ab kiya hoga?

Dev: dekho agar yeh sab kerne se papa ki atma ko shanty milte hai toh kerlo na!....aur waise bhi kisse se toh shadi kerne hi hai toh kyun na ghar ke bache ghar hi mai settle ho jae'shashank??

Shashank: baat toh theek hai'agar mere bachio ko koi aetraaz nahi hai then im fine with it'.

Geet n maan luking towards each other but behind maan rahul is standing n geet watch him too

Ridhimma n armaan luk towards each other

Shashank: bolo beta tum logo ko koi problem toh nahi hai

Ridhimma: dad yeh buhat bara faisla hai hum aise hi do minute mai yeh kaise ker sakte hai hume thora waqt to dijiye

Dev: okay beta take ur time

They all left to their respective rooms

Ridhimma was awake n it was 1:00 AM''.she was just roaming around n thinking wat to decide

Then she went to armaan's room holding her teddy with her

Ridhimma: knock knock!

Armaan opened the door he was yawning n was in his Bermuda'

Armaan: tum yaha itneeee raat ko kiya ker rahe ho!

Ridhimma: soe hoe shakal banana ki koshish band karo mai jante ho tum soo nahi rahe the!

Armaan: haan haan raat ke 1 baje mai dance practive ker raha tha

Ridhimma just moved in his room n sat on his bed

Ridhimma: tumhe tension nahi ho rahe kiya!!??

Armaan: kis baat ki tension!

Ridhimma: don't act as if u don't knw anything'.ek din mai itnaaa sab kuch ho gaya keh humare zindagi pure tarha badal gae aura b yeh shaadi n stuff!!....

Armaan: toh tum yaha shaadi discuss kerne aye ho!?

Ridhimma: nahi itne raat ko yeh pochne aye ho keh tumhare latest girlfriend koun hai!...armaan plz serious ho jao kabhi toh!!

Armaan:ab dada ji ne wasiyhat mai likha hai to hiss ka koi maksad toh zaroor hoga..so I think hume haan ker dene chahiye

Ridhimma: WAT!!....u serious!...n we should live lyk typical husband wife!?..u have lost it!..mai apne pure zindagi uss insaan ke sath kabhi nahi guzaar sakte jo har roz ek naye girlfriend ki talaash mai rehta hai aur jisse dosre ke emotions ki koi kadar nahi hai aur jis ke liye larkiya sirf aur sirf train ki tarha hai!

Armaan: train???

Ridhimma: haan train!...jo agar ek jae toh dosre aajate hai aur dosre jae toh terse aa jate hai

Armaan: mere thinking itneee cheap nahi hai okay!....

Ridhimma: look armaan this all is complicated really complicated!...agar mai tumhare harkato ke bare main a jante toh shayad mai haan ker chuke hote!

Ridhimma was about to leave so she stood up n started walking towards the door

Armaan: but mujhe atleast ek mauka toh mil hi sakta haina

Ridhimma stopped'

Armaan went near her n held her hand

Armaan: matlab humare rishte ko'..n don't worry tum aise train ho ge jis ka mai permanent passenger ban jaonga'.

Ridhimma gave a shy smile n left

Outside armaan's room

Ridhimma thinking: may be dadaji ne humare takraar mai armaan ki ankho mai chupa hua thora sa pyaar dekhliya''

In geet's room..her cell rang

Geet: hello!!....tum!!...itne raat ko!.....kal subah milna hai?...par baat kiya hai??...theek hai mai pohnch jaonge

Next day morning

Geet left quite early n without being noticed by any1

She was in a restaurant when sum1 came n touched her shoulder

Geet:thank God tum aage..betho!

he was rahul

geet: itne subah subah mujhe yaha kyun bhulaya hai

rahul: dekho geet mai tumse kuch kehna chahta ho'keh'.mujhe nahi lagta keh dadaji ki death normal death the I think keh unka murder hua hai!

Geet:WAT!!...u crazy!....kiya bool rahe ho tum'dadaji ko koi kyun marna chahe ga!???

Rahul: maine issi liye tumhe yaha bulaya hai keh tum sab se practical larki ho apne pure ghar ki!...mujhe aisa lagta hai keh dadaji ka murder hua hai!...im yet not sure

Geet: par tumhe aisa lagta kyun hai?

Rahul: dadaji ko koi problem toh the nahi keh unki death normal ho'sirf sugar hi toh the unhe par zyada important baat yeh keh mai dadaji keh kamre mai gaya tha aur who khirke yaad hai tumhe jo dadaji ke bed ke bilkul samne hote the

"flash back"

Geet: dadaji mai yeh khirke khol do mausam buhat acha ho raha hai'.thande hawa ayege appke sehat ke liye acha hai!

Dadaji: arey nahi beta mujhe yeh khirke kholna bilkul pasand nahi hai isse sare soraj ki kirne mere moo per parte hai isse band hi rehne do

"flash back over"

Geet:haan!

Rahul: who khirke dadaji kabhi nahi kholte the but jab maine dekha toh who khirke khole the aur mujhe shak hai keh waha se koi ya toh baher gaya hai ya ander aya hai'

Geet: I still cant believe all this!

Rahul: aisa karo uss din subah se le ker dadaji ke death tak jo kuch hua sab ka pata lagwao'.mujhe lagta hai keh hume koi na koi sabot zaroor milege

Geet: okay but im very sure keh yeh sab sirf tumhara weham hai

Geet's cell rang

Geet:hello

Ridhimma: di kaha ho!...

Geet: mai kuch zarori kaam se baher ho kyun kiya hua?

Ridhimma: di papa humara jawab janne ke liye sab ko bhula rahe hai toh jalde aa jao

Geet:mai bas aa rahe ho

Ahul: kiya hua??

Geet: who ridhimma the papa humara jawab sunne ke liye bhula rahe hai'shaadi ke bare mai

Rahul became a bit sad n started luking to the other side

Rahul: toh phir tumhara jawab kiya hai?

Geet:'dadaji ne kuch soch ker hi yeh sab apne will mai likhwaya hoga'.

Rahul: lekin tum kiya chahte ho?

Geet: mere chahne ya na chahne se koi farq nahi parta''aur waise bhi ajj tak tumne mujhe nahi bataya keh tum kiya chahte ho toh mai kyun batao!...mujhe chalna chahiye'bye

rahul thaught

Rahul: yahe toh kabhi bool nahi paya mai!..lekin tum toh samajh sakte the na!

Third part.....

Rahul:chalo mai tumhe ghar drop ker deta ho

Geet:nahi mai khud chale jaonge

Rahul: lekin mai chor deta ho!!

Geet: tum aoge toh sab ko shak ho jae ga..so plz mai khud chale jaonge..bye!

N she left

@ home

Shashank:lo geet bhi aa gae

As geet entered '.everyone was there including armaan ridhimma and ofcourse MAAN!

Dev:chalo ab bolo tum sab ka faisla kiya hai?

Geet sat on the sofa next to maan

Shashank:okay toh ridhimma armaan tum logo ka kiya faisla hai

Ridhimma:'dad u knw keh shaadi koi chota faisla nahi hai'pure zindagi ka faisla hai yeh'apt oh jante hai abhi toh maine sirf mbbs kiya hai abhi internship baki hai

Armaan:..dad'mai kisi ko internship kerne se nahi rook raha

Ridhimma found dat tune rude so she continued talking indirectly

Ridhimma(looking towards armaan):par DAD!!...agar kisi ka irada badal gaya toh!

Armaan: lekin dad agar koi bharosa karega kisi par toh kisi ka irada nahi badle ga

Both staring @ each other but talking to their dads'lol!

Naintara:'ab bas karo tum dono!!...kiya shuroo ker rakha hai!...its serious!!....

Padma: haan bacho yeh buhat serious mamala hai

Ridhimma and armaan looked towards each other

Then towards there parents then'

Ridhimma: okay fine!..ek try dene mai mujhe koi problem nahi hai!

Everyone staring her

Everyone: TRY?????

Ridhimma: I mean okay 'lyk yes'lyk im ready for marriage!

Armaan: same here :D

Shashank: okay fine'..1 down 1 to go..geet beta

Geet was continuously staring maan

Shashank: geet!!

Geet:..ji papa!

Shashank: okay yaha se bhi haan ho gae

Geet: nahi'mai toh who

Dev: nahi??

Geet: I mean agar maan ko koi problem nahi hai toh mujhe bhi koi problem nahi hai

Maan:'mujhe kiya problem ho sakte hai!...im fine with all this!....

Shashank n dev hugged n congratulated everyone!

From the corner of the door's house a face is shown'it was rahul'she heard all this n a tear rolled over his cheek

He got back n wiped his tears

N came in

Rahul: hello everyone!...toh phir kiya final hua??

Dev: all set!

Rahul: okay congratulations everyone!!......

He hugged armaan congratulated ridhimma then shook hand with maan n it was quite sorta different hand shake. Then he went to geet and without eye contact n seeing towards the fllor said congratulations she noticed the sad waves coming from rahul she could feel that how badly he wanted to cry she noticed that he wanted to announce that he luved her but all in vain he could not do anything n neither can she!.......

A small function happened and now marriages just happened'.

The very first night!

Armaan entered the room

Armaan blabbering: I wonder y do people marry!....itne tension itne heavy sherwani n no gain

Just @ dat moment ridhimma entered the room from bathroom.her hair were wet n she was just trying to dry them'.he stood there watching the most beautiful scene of his lifetime.he just stood still there

Ridhimma: OYE!!!!

N he just got out of his imagination or rather the beautiful reality that he was watching n ridhimma wasn't noticing dat he was watching!...lol

Ridhimma: apne biwi ko bhi koi aise nazar se dekhta hai kiya!..che! tho!..yukh!

Armaan: ab biwi ko kaise ghorte hai??...maine iss per classes nahi li hoe!....

Ridhimma while sitting on her bed

Ridhimma: arrrghhh!!..woteva!....buhat late ho chukka hai dr ji ja ker soo jao warna subah sare patients dar jaenge'..

armaan: kal hospital jab hi koun raha hai(while lying on the bed n stretching his arms)

ridhimma: yaha se utho yaha maine sona hai!

Armaan: aa aa'correction required maine nahi humne sona hai

Ridhimma immediately stood up

Ridhimma: hum yane keh mai aur tum??!!

Armaan also stood up

Armaan: haan hum yane keh mai aur tum!

Ridhimma: impossible!!

Armaan: okay u wanna say that " I M POSSIBLE"

Ridhimma:'?????

Armaan:sona toh tumhe yahe pare ga "mere sath"

Armaan lyed on the bed

Ridhimma came close to him

Ridhimma: agar aise hi baat hai armaan toh'toh'toh!......

N then grabbed the pillow on which armaan was lying

Ridhimma: MAI NECHE SOO JAOGNE LEKIN TUMHARE SATH NAHI SOONGE!!

Armaan: ouch!

Sceen shift

Geet n maan in the room

There is complete silent

Geet: ek din ne hi humare zindagi pure tarha badal di haina maan!

Maan: taking her shoes off:hmm'

Geet:pure zindagi ulat ker rakh di!.....

Maan:geet buhat deer ho chuke hai mujhe subah office bhi jana hai

Geet just nodded

Maan took his pillow n was leaving to sleep on the sofa

Geet: maan!....

He stopped without looking back

Geet: mai jante ho app mujhse buhat nafrat kerte ho agar yeh property ka mamla na hota toh app kabhi mujhse shaadi nahi kerte'.

Maan just turned

Maan: MAI''..!

Geet looked up right in his eyes

Maan: tum kabhi nahi samajh paoge!

N just left

Geet was sitting there on the bed

Reliving all those moments which she thought that wont matter a lot but all his life was now revolving around those moments

*flash back*

Geet:maan mujhe kuch iss topic mai madad chahiye the app plz merehelp karona

Maan: BOLO!.....

Geet was about to say sumthing

Maan: ek minute'yes mr.malhotra!

Geet waited for quite sumtym there

*flash back over*

In maan thoughts

*flash back*

Maan: geet do minute ruko!

Geet waited for quite sumtym

Then

Geet:: rahul!!!...

N she went to him n just talked laughed n then went sumwhere

Maan just stood there having nothing else but just his anger that was just growing inside n was just waiting to burst out lyk a volcano!

*flash back over*

Geet in her thoughts

Geet: jis insaan ne kabhi mujhe importance nahi di who ab pure zindagi mere sath kaise guzare ga

Maan: aur jo larke dosro ko importance dete hai uske liye mai kabhi important nahi ban sakta!

Next morning

After all her work done geet went to meet rahul in the same caf

Rahul:okay so us din kiya kiya hua uski details bolo!

Geet: asusual dada ji subah morning walk ke liye uthe tab mai bhi uthe hoe the dadaji mere kamre mai aye aur

*flash back*

Dadaji put his hand on geet's head

Dadaji: beta ji ja ker bed per soo jao

Geet: nahi dadaji ajj ek important interview hai so behtar ho ga keh mai apne knowledge ko thora polish kerlo

Dadaji: aur yaad haina ajj choti(ridhimma)..ka bhi result hai

Geet: dadaji itne important baat mai bhool sakte ho kiya?

Dadaji: buhat sare tiyariyan kerna hai toh abhi se mat thako!....beta g ek baat kaho'tum log mera sab kuch ho!....tum log mere zindagi ke sitare ho'..agar kabhi mujhe kuch ho gaya toh'..

Geet: dadaji!...ap aisa kyun sochte hai'hum haina app ke sath mai ho ridhimma hai armaan hai maan hai!

Dadaji: haan maan bhi hai!...beta maan dil ka bura nahi hai bas uske zindagi mai kuch ghatnao ne use aisa bana diya hai!

Geet: ??...kiya matlab???...kiya hua hai??

Dadaji: nahi kuch nahi!...yahe baate kerta raha toh walk ke liye late ho jaonga'shukla sahib mere rah dekh rahehonge'bye beta

Geet: bye dadaji

*flashback over*

Geet: aur phir jab dada ji aye toh humne sath nashta kiya aur phir who aa gae''.

Precap:

Someone is gonna die!....someone who is very dear to all of them n quite really close to them

fourth part...

Rahul: woh kaun?

Geet: bua ji!

*Flash back*

Dadaji n bua ji in a room when geet enters

Geet: dada ji!

She was happy when entered but then her facial expressions just changed totally

Geet: mai baad mai ate ho'

Dadaji: bolo na beta kiya kam tha?

Geet: nahi dadaji abhi app buhat buzy hai mai baad mai ate ho!

*flash back over*

Rahul remembered that geet never liked her bua ji

Rahul: but tum un se itne nafrat kyun kerte ho??

Geet: kyunki unki waja se mere dadi!.....

Rahul: toh unhe kisi ne dada ji ke bare mai bataya hai??...

Geet:'pata anhi kam as kam maine nahi bataya!

Geet got a call

Geet: hello!...okay mai aa rahe ho

Geet: rahul baad mai baat kerte hai abhi maan bhula rahe hai

Rahul: okay!

She left

@ home

As she entered a woman was stading in the middle n literally screaming on everyone! She was bua ji

Bua ji: tum logo ne mujhe kyun nahi bataya!!

Dev: bua ji humne app ko call ki the lekin app ka phone mill nahi raha tha!

She started crying

As geet all this

Buaji: geet'..

She tried to hug her

Geet: app mujhse door hi rahiye toh behtar hoga

Bua ji: lekin beta'.

Geet: dadi ji ki bhi death app hi ki waja se hue aura b dadaji ke marne mai bhi zaroor app hi ka hath hoga!

Maan: GEET!!

N he grabbed her to the room

Maan: kiya bakwaas ker rahe te tum!!?

Geet: sach hi toh keh rahe the!

Maan: dadi ji ki death ek accident tha bus!

Geet: accident!...u kidding??

Maan: ek road accident tha remember

Geet tum sach nahi jante!

Maan: phir kiya hai sach????

Geet: toh suno

**Flash back**

Geet(a child) is sitting near dadiji

Geet: dadi maa app kaha ja rahe ho?

Dadiji: beta mai tum sab se door jaa rahe ho

Geet: lekin kyun?

Dadi: beta tumhare dada ko mai ache nahi lagte na isi liye

Geet: nahi dadu toh app ko itnaa dheer sara pyaar kerte hai!

Dadaiji: geet tum mere ache bte hona

Geet nodded

Dadiji: toh ek baat yaad rakhna mere jane ke baad dada ji ko bilkul pareshan mat kerna aur haan jab dada ji aur ragini(buaji).. ki shad ho jae gen a'

Geet: unke shaadi kyun hoge?

Dadiji: kyunki who ek dosre se pyaar kerte haina toh mujhe bech se hat jana chahiye na beta'lekin tum promise karo tum kabhi shashank padma ko tang nahi karoge!

Geet:..promise dadi'lekin app jalde laut ana haan!

Dadi ji just smiled

**flash back over**

Maan: aisa nahi ho sakta

Geet: aisa hi hua hai!

Maan: lekin dada ji aur bua ne toh kabhi aisa kuch nahi kiya!

Geet: mai nahi jante phir kiya hua lekin jo hua hai acha nahi hua aur yeh sab kuch use aurat ki waja se ha hai jisne mere dada ji aur dadi ji ki zindagi barbad ker di!

In the evening

Ridhimma was standing in front of her cupboard

Armaan wasn't in the room

Ridhimma: yeh armaan ke shirts itne hai keh cupboard mai thore sib hi jaga nahi hai!....kitne messed up cupboard hai yeh!

Armaan entered

Ridhimma: oye hello mr!...apne cupboard toh kabhi saaf ker liya karo kitne smell aa rahe hai yaha se!

Armaan: hato mere cupboard ke pass se!

Ridhimma: kyun tumne iss mai kuch personal cheze rakhe hua hai??

Armaan: haan!

Ridhimma: love letters ke siva aur kuch ho bhi sakta hai tumhare pass!

Armaan was quite at a distance

Ridhimma let me check

Armaan ran towards her

But she had already started checking for armaan's so called love letters

But she ended up in falling sumthing

She bent to check

Armaan: mere chezo ko hath bhi mat lagana!

Ridhimma: kyun tumahre cheze achoth hai??

Now as she was checking there were loads of papers

Along with a sort of album

First of all she was heading towards the papers but then she grabbed the album

Armaan looked quite relieved!

Ridhimma opened it n in in there were pix of armaan n ridhimma together from childhood uptill there wedding

Ridhimma picked it up

She was just checking it all n got sorta emotional

In the other room

Geet was struggling with her zip

Maan looked @ her n offered help

Geet refused it

Maan: mai ker deta ho!

Geet:..nahi

Atlast maan just got up n tried to close the zip but as it was badly stucked he tried harder n harder n he touched her neck n also geet's her flyed on his face

Geet was just freezed

Maan was just feeling the moment

When suddenly they heard a screaming sound!

Geet moved a step ahead away from maan

Maan looked @ geet n they ran towards the hall

Ridhimma armaan dev shashank maan geet everyone was there they all were freezed by seeing wat was actually infront of them

N infront of them near the stiar case padma's body was lying with all blood over her n nain tara was sitting beside her calling her name holding her hand

They all ran n stared checking her pulse

Shashank: dev jalde se ambulance ko bulao

There voices started echoing the hall they all were around her,checking her pulse calling her name begging her to open her eyes but all of no use

In few moments ambulance was there

Outside the operation theatre

Ridhimma n geet sitting together n crying everyone nervous n waiting for doc to come out

Doc came out

Armaan: ji doc!...

Doctor: abhi kuch keh nahi sakte injury buhat gehri hai aur khon bhi buhat beh chukka hai'..agar 24 ghante mai hosh nahi aya toh kuch bhi ho sakta hai!

Ridhimma moved towardsthe doc

Ridhimma: kiya matlab kuch bhi ho sakta hai who mere maa hai!....unhe bachana ap ki responsibility hai!..agar unhe kuch ho gaya toh!.......

Armaan consoled her n tried to calm her

Shashank n dev too heard it all they were also in great worry

Shashank: doctor mai un se mil sakta ho?..

Doc: abhi toh'.

Shashank: plz'.

Doctor: okay'

Shashank went in the ward

Geet was still sitting @ the bench constantly crying maan came n sat near her

N put his hand on her shoulder

Geet looked @ him with tears in her eyes

He blinked his eyes showing gesture of everything is gonna be alright!

Geet looked @ him n hugged him n started crying really badly

Without saying anything they both said everything to each other

It was late @ 1

Shashank was still with padma holding her hand n watching her lyk never before

Armaan: papa app aur maa ghar chale jaiye hum haina yaha

Dev: magar beta!...

Armaan: dad!...plz hospital hai ye yaha zyada logo ko rehna allowed nahi hota hum haina!

Armaan: bro app aur bhabhi bhi chale jae

Maan: okay..

Armaan ridhimma n shashank were staying

Maan: geet tum mom dad ko le ker chalo mai bill pay ker ke ata ho

Geet: okay

In the ward

Nurse: sir ab app baher chale jaiye hume inhe injection dena hai aur waise bhi ab app ki mulakat ka tym khatam ho chukka hai..

Shashank left

Nurse: oh mai injection toh lana hi bhool gae

N she left

Armaan to ridhimma: mai coffee le ker ata ho

Now @ this point everyone was alone no one knew where the other person was maan was off to pay bills shashank left the ward but still didn't met ridhimma who was sitting alone in the reception armaan who was in the caf to get coffee n padma who was alone in the operation theatre!

After lyk an hour

Nurse started screaming: DOCTOR DOCTOR!

Doctor: kiya hua??

They all ran in the ward

Armaan ridhimma shashank all got up n sticked to the door of the ward

After 15 minutes

A doctor came out

Doctor: im sorry she is no more

''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''..

Fifth part......

first of all i want to clear the confusion abt bua ji that bua ji is shashank n dev's bua i.e dadi ji's sister but everyone calls her bua ji
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As the doctor uttered those words'a wave of sadness sorrow darkness was felt by everyone

Armaan started questioning doctor but the doctor had nothing to say but was just standing still n consonling him'shashank looked shattered he was broken totally broken'.armaan went near him tried to console him but all of no use then he went towards ridhimma who was just sitting on the bench expressionless totally expressionless

Armaan: Ridhimma kuch toh bolo!....ridhimma!

She started blabbering

Ridhimma: woh maa ne kaha tha apna cupboard saaf kerna'maa ne mana kiya haina ice cream nahi khane gala kharab ho jata haina'..

She just went on n on she didn't knew what she was saying what she was uttering

Armaan held her shoulder n just gave her a jerk trying to make her realize that her mother was no more

Armaan: RIDHIMMA!.....maa ab nahi rahe!

Ridhimma didn't had even a tear in her eyes

Ridhimma: choro mujhe mujhe tum se nahi baat kerne'.maa ko kuch nahi hua woh abhi ate hi honge

Shashank called dev n told her abt padma

Dev: WAT!....hum abhi aa rahe hai!

Dev naintara maan n geet were just in their way to home dev turned his car towards hospital again

Geet: kiya hua papa??

Dev: kuch nahi beta padma ki tabiyat thore kharab hogae hai toh ab hospital wapis chalna chahiye

He didn't found it appropriate to tell her abt her mother death

As they reached hospital

Geet ran towards shashank

Geet: papa!...maa ab kaise hai??

Shashank was just crying!

Geet: papa!...

Shashank was sitting geet sat on her knees

Geet: papa

N looked towards his father whos eyes weretotally filled with tears

He gave a gesture of no just after this very moment sea of tears starting coming out from geet's eyes for her it looked lyk as if her life was now meaningless!...she could not do anything except cry cry & cry'

Both daughter n father was crying n at the same tym trying to console each other

Geet: ridhimma??....

Shashank pointed out @ the ward

As geet went in

Ridhimma was sitting near the body of her mother just staring her n trying to realize her mother was no long there with her!.....

Geet came sat beside her n put her hand on her shoulder

Ridhimma didn't respond

Geet: ridhimma

N shaked her abit n ridhimma just fell on a side

Geet: PAPA!!.....

Ridhimma was unconscious'.

Armaan came in checked her pulse'held her in his arms n took her to the other room

As everyone left geet was there

Maan came in

He put his hand on her shoulder

She turned n her eyes were full of tears he wiped her tears

Maan: agar tum aise toot gaye toh uncle aur ridhimma ko koun sambhale ga

She tried to control herself

After all rituals n customs they returned home

Rahul was also with them'

Door bell rang

It was police

Dev: ji boliye!

Police: yaha kisi ne mrs.padma shashank aur mr.malhotra ke death ki report ki hai keh unke death nahi murder tha

Everyone looked shocked!

Everyone was luking @ each other

Rahul came out

Rahul: ji maine kerwaye hai!

Police inspector: hello mr.??

Rahul: rahul'rahul garewal

Police: hello mr.rahul mr.karan here'app hume bataiye keh app ko aisa kyun lagta hai keh yeh sab hadsa nahi balkeh preplaned tha

They both went in a room

Then police left

Dev: RAHUL!...yeh kiya kiya tumne??.....tumhe pata bhi hai tumne kiay harkat ki hai isse humare reputation ko kitna nuksan pohnch sakta hai!

Rahul: unclemai app logo ko bilkul dukh nahi pohnchana chahta lekin yahe sach hai

Shashank: proof kiya hai tumahre pass????

Rahul: uncle doctor se yeh sab discuss kiya hai aur mujhe sab pata hai'aunty ki death theek 11 baje hue aur 10 50 per ward mai koi nahi tha nurse bhi nahi aur jab 10 55 per nurse wapis aye tab use door khula mila'..

Naintara: lekin dada ji??

Rahul:aunty app ko yaad hai keh jis din uncle ki death hue tab unke room mai koun koun gaya tha????

Naintara: kuch theek se yaad nahi kyunki unke kamre mai toh sab hi jate the

Rahul: aunty uss din dadaji ne glucose ka injection kab liya???

Nainatara: wahe jab who humesha liya kerte the'12 baje

Rahul: yahe toh baat hai!....uss din dadaji ne glucose ka injection nahi balkeh kuch aur hi liya tha!....kyunki uss din jab mai dadaji ke kamre mai gaya toh store room jaha dadaji apne mostly medicines rakhte hai waha

*flash back*

Rahul entering a room

There was lots of dust there except that cupboard in which dadaji's medicines were kept it was quite clean

Rahul opened its door

As he looked down there were some sort of foot steps it looked lyk as if sum1 must be coming from sum muddy place and the mud was on his shoes n then

*flashback over*

Rahul: mujhe toh use din se shak tha keh kuch problem hai

Geet n maan were also there

Maan: lekin tum yeh sub kuch ker kyun rahe ho??..akher ho koun tum humare!!??

Rahul looking towards geet: ho toh mai kuch bhi nahi lekin app sab ne specially dada ji ne jo mere liye kiya mai us ka ehsan kabhi nahi chukka sakta issi liye mai app sab ke liye kuch acha kerna chahta ho!

Shashank: bas ek request hai tumahre jo dil mai aye karo jo marzi karo lekin plz iss sab ka pata ridhimma ko na hone dena!

Coming up: really romantic scenes between maan and geet & sum really emotional scenes between armaan ridhimma n rahul really trying hard n harder to solve the mistery

sixth part....

Upstairs in the room

Ridhimma is sitting on her bed

Armaan come in the room

Ridhimma is sitting expressionless

Armaan put his hand on her shoulder

Armaan: u okay??

Ridhimma didn't respond

He gave a slight jerk to her

Armaan: RIDHIMMA!

Ridhimma: hun'.

She looked @ him then don't knw what came in her mind she hugged armaan she hugged him as tightly as she could n started crying

She was just crying crying and crying

Mixed expressions were running in armaan's mind he was quite happy that she hugged him for the very first tym but at the same tym he was extremely sad that she is crying badly he tried to consle her but of no use

After lyk half an hour she slept n she was somehow scared so she held armaan tightly through out her sleep

In maan n geet's room

Geet was sitting at one corner of the bed

Maan came n sat beside her

Geet was sitting with her hands on her face

Maan: geet!?

Geet looked up with eyes full of tears

Maan didn't knew wat to do how to console her

Geet: yeh sab kiya ho raha hai pehla dadaji ab maa'.yeh sab koun ker raha hai kyun ker raha hai kuch samajh mai nahi aa raha!!

Maan: geet tum shant ho jao

Geet: kaise shant ho jao mai!.....tum papa ko dekha kitne tot gae the who aur ridhimma woh toh apna ghum bhi theek se show nahi ker pa rahe the!

Maan: aise situation mai geet tumhe hi sab ko sambhalna ho ga'infact hume sab ko sambhalna hoga

Geet looked @ his eyes their was sum sorta satisfaction some kinda feeling that made her calm down n made her feel that she is not alone

Geet: app hona?

Maan gave a gesture of yes

Maan held geet's hand: hum sath mai sab kuch sambhal lenge

Geet was sumwhere happy dat maan is showing sum kinda love and affection towards her

Geet nodded

Maan: chalo abhi so jate hai subah uth ker baat kerte hai

Next day morning

Ridhimma woke up n she was still there in armaan's arms

As she woke up she saw armaan sitting beside her he was still sleeping

Ridhimma without making noise got up

After sumtym

Armaan woke up

He looked here and there but couldn't found ridhimma

He was quite worried just then ridhimma entered the room with a tray in his hands

Ridhimma: gud morning

Armaan: gud morning..tum kab uthe??

Ridhimma: bas abhi hi uthe the'.yeh lo coffee

Armaan: thanx!.....

Ridhimma: raat ko'..tum'.woh ''thanx

Armaan: thanx kyun??

Ridhimma: coz kal raat ko mujhe kisi apne ki zarorat the aur tumne woh zarorat pure ker di

Armaan: in that case mai tumhara husband ho remember!.....

Ridhimma gave a kinda shy smile

Armaan: by the way tumhe kaise pata keh mai subah coffee peta ho??

Ridhimma: har roz tumhare bed ke pas se mug mai uthate ho toh mujhe hi pata hoga na!!

Armaan: oh yea'

Ridhimma: bare maa ne mujhe bhulaya tha mai chalet ho'

Armaan: ridhimma'ruko!

Held her hand

Armaan: thanx!

Ridhimma: kis liye??

Armaan: coffee!

Ridhimma: yea..welcum

Ridhimma was abt to leave but he just turned

Ridhimma: waise armaan'..

Armaan:hmm'??

Ridhimma came close to him n kissed his cheek'.

Ridhimma: tum itne bhi bure nahi ho'

N left

Armaan: oye hoye!......

In maan geet room

Maan came out of washroom n geet was drying her hair an unusual attractiveness was felt by maan towards geet he felt lyk just get close to her n hug her but he is THE MAAN so his ego stopped him

Maan: geet!

Geet:hmm'.

Maan: who maa ne raat ko bataya tha keh ajj bua ji ane wale hai

Geet suddenly got angry: ab who kiya lene aa rahe hai!!!

Maan: geet tumhe apne ghusse ko control mai kerna hoa iss tarha agar tum itne ghusse mai rahe toh baat aur bighar jae ga..

Geet: mai koshish karonge

They both left

Rahul is still in search of some witnesses

He went in the hospital were padma took her last breath

He talked to the doc n asked him about postmortem reports

First of all the doc hesitated but then rahul gave him sum money then doctor explained

Doctor: patient ki halat dekh ker lagta tha keh forhead per kuch laga hai

Rahul: who toh stairs se girne ki waja se

Doctor: but unke forehead ke ilawa unke head ke pichle region mai bhi ek kaafi gehra ghao tha jaise kisi ne koi buhat bhare cheez unke sar per mare ho

Rahul:hmmm''.aur doctor unke halat raat tak kasie the??

Doctor: raat ko jab mai ward se nikla tab tak toh who stability ki taraf ja rahe the maine nurse ko kaha bhi tha keh unhe injection de dena'au raise cases mai normally patient ki jaan bach jate hai but iss baar'..

Rahul: jab death hoe toh app unke pass the??

Doctor: nahi mai nurse ko unke pas chor ker gaya tha

Rahul went to the nurse

Rahul: excuse me'patient padma shashank ko apphi handle ker rahe the?

Nurse: ji haan!

Rahul: app mujhe exactly bata sakte hai keh unhe hua kiya tha??

Nurse: ji'pehle unke husband unke pas bethe the phir maine unhe baher jane ko kaha kyunki patient ko aram ki zarorat the phirmai injection lana bhool gaye the toh mai panch dus minute ke liye baher gaye the'.

Rahul: uss tym mai ward mai koi aya tha?

Nurse: maloom nahi!

Rahul: aur uske baad hi unke death hoe??

Nurse: ji haan!

Rahul was thinking sumthing

Rahul: okay then thank u

He came out of the hospital

Rahul: agar in sab ki bato per believe kiya jae toh pehle kisi ne aunty per hamla kiya then unhe Dhaka diya ya siriyo se giraya phir uske baad jab woh bach gaye toh kuch ker diya'.jisse''mujhe jald hi kuch kerna hoga pata nahi katil koun ho!?

Seventh Part....

Rahul went to geet's home

Naintara was in the hall

Rahul: hi aunty!....baki sab kaha hai??

Naintara: sab shayad apne apne kamro mai hai….

Rahul: aunty ek glass pane mile ga

Naintara: ya sure

She went to get a glass of water

Meanwhile rahul suspiciously looked everywhere then he went upstairs n the place near stairs he was standing there

Naintara came

Naintara: rahul…

Rahul: ji aunty!

N took the glass of water

Rahul: aunty iss table per ek vase hua kerta tha na wahe jo dadaji specially padma aunty ke liye laye the

Naintar:..haan kal tak toh yahe tha zaroor kisi naukar ne idher udher ker diya hoga…..

Rahul got 99% doubt that padma was injured by that vase but still 1% was still remaining

Next day

Ridhimma joined sanjeevani as an intern

Armaan was senior doctor there

Armaan: itne jaldi ki kiya zarorat the??

Ridhimma: waise bhi mai ghar mai bore hi hote rehte ho yaha aonge toh thora dil behal jae ga!...aur waise bhi mbbs maine ghr bethne ke liye nahi kiya

Armaan: okay ur wish…..

Ridhimma: aur waise bhi koi problem hoe toh tum hona!

Armaan nodded

Dev and maan in office

Maan': dad yeh mr.chopra ka project buhat complicated hai…iss mai app ki help chahiye

Dev : ao maan mujhe bhi tumse kuch baat kerne hai

Maan: boliye!

Dev:beta ghar mai itne sare problems chal rahe hai aur itna sab kuch ho gaya aur tum logo ki shaadi ko bhi kitna tym ho gaya hai….mere mano toh kuch din chute le lo aur kahe baher ghomne jao tum logo ko toh honeymoon per jane ka bhi tym nahi mila

Maan: dad itna sab ho raha hai ajj kal aur app chahte hai keh!....

Dev: beta mai tumahre bhalae ke liye hi keh raha ho geet bhi ajj kal buhat dukhe rehne lag gae hai kuch din is atmosphere se door rahe get oh shayad sambhal jae

Maan was thinking

Dev put his hand on his shoulder

Maan nodded

@ home

In geets room

Geet was just sitting n holding a book mayb pretending that she is buzy in reading but she was in her own world

Maan entered room

Geet was still lost

Maan: ahem ahem!

Geet came out of her thoughts

She went to maan took his bag n coat

Maan: woh…geet…

Geet turned: hmm….

Maan: woh mai soch raha tha..keh agar tumhe bura na lage toh hum kuch dino ke liye baher ghomne chalet hai!

Geet was quite shocked

Geet stared him with a big question mark on her face

Maan: coz itna sab ho gaya ghar mai aur…..lekin agar tumhe bura na lage …..baki tumhare marzi

Geet nodded

Geet: shayad ghar se thore din dor rahonge toh better feel karonge….thanx

Maan felt sum sort of satisfaction

Maan:u r welcum

After sumtym on the dinning table

Dev: maan tumhare pariski tickets aa gae the

Everyone: PARIS??...(including geet)

Maan looked towards geet n whispered

Maan: bataya toh tha

Geet: but paris itneeeeee door!

Maan stared her…: toh tum kiya chahte ho yeh agle turn tak gol gappe khane chale

Naintara: maan app kahe ja rahe hai!

Maan: ji maa woh hum soch rahe the kuch din baher ghom aye

Armaan: ahan big b app kab se yeh sab sochne lage(rising eye brows)

Maan stared him

Maan: apne biwi ke sath hi jaa raha ho kisi aur ke sath nahi!!

Shashank: infact armaan beta mai toh yeh soch raha tha keh tum aur ridhimma bhi kuch dino ke liye baher ho aao waise bhi shaadi ke baad se tum logo ko bilkul tym nahi mila ghomne ka

Ridhimma: nahi papa maine ajj hi join kiya hai itne jalde chute nahi milege

Armaan: ji aur waise bhi mujhe bi shayad chute na mile

Shasahnk: okay

After dinner

Geet:hum PARIS ja rahe hai???

Maan: hmm….

Geet: PARIS???

Maan: mujhe ek baar mai sunae deta hai aur jaha tak mai janta ho tumhe bhi deta hai….

Geet:kab ki flight hai??

Maan: kal subah ki hi hai

Geet: KAL!!!

Maan: geet tumhe ek baar mai baat samajh main hi aa rahe kiya????????????

Geet was quite scared

Maan:okay for the very last tym hum kal subah paris jaa rahe hai packing ker lo

Geet: Okay!!!

Geet was packing she remembered sumthing so she went to ridhimma

Geet: ridhimma who tumahre pass pink shade lipstick haina…mujhe chahiye …do gi?

Ridhimma: ye bhi koi pochne ki baat hai

Armaan was sitting on the bed

Armaan: bhabhz!.....packing ho gae??

Geet: bas ho rahe hai!

Ridhimma: ahan di first honeymoon haan…

Geet: kiya??? HONEYMOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Armaan: obviously bhabhi app log ek sath baher ja rahe hai akele aur who bhi duniya ki sab se romantic jaga per paris!!!....toh obviously honeymoon hi hua na!

Geet tried to smile

Geet: mai chalet ho bye!

As geet went

Armaan put his hand on ridhimma's shoulder

Ridhimma: di kitne khush haina!

Armaan: jealous haan??

Ridhimma: jealous????

Armaan: haan coz who "honeymoon per ja rhea hai aur hum nahi…rising eye brows

Ridhimma: armaan…dear…SHUT UP!!!

Precap:

Geet n maan @ their honeymoon rahul got a really strong proof

Edited by xXdEejAyXx - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Amber:it's awesome part Geet is Ridhima's elder sis..gr8..!Ridz passed:)I luv this daarji n his will AR n MaaNeet marriage awwwwww😊😍
awesome updates..
Thnx for the p.m..
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey dear

LOVELY Update
supurb starting
loved it totally
keep continue
Thanks for the PM

love
prinz

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Ahh lovely part. Especially loved when Armaan gave Riddhima chocolates.
Do continue soon.😛
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OMG Amber ..

amazing start yaar ... i sumhow found maan's character a bit rude.. .
well, lets see wat ll happen next .. btw, wont Rahul muskaan be together? 😕

cnt soon .. thanx 4 d pm..

love
Vini

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