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LAST PART......
Rahul's body was lying right infront of them

There was silence purely silence..they both didn't dared to say even a word!

It was all raining heavely as if clouds were crying on sum1's death

Maan got out of the shock

Maan: :mai car se le ker ata ho

As he got up

Maan: tum yahe rehna mai abhi ata ho

She hardly nodded

All those moments starting filling her mind..evertytym he cared everytym he cheered everytym he smiled''.nothing else she could think at that moment

Maan was near rahul's car as he was just passing by

He felt sum really unknown attraction towards that car which was puuling him towards it

He opened the door

N found nothing then his foot hit sumthing he saw down n found a file lying under seat he just picked it up n didn't even thought of opening it at that tym'he just rushed to his car n just took it to the place'..

They reached hospital n filled all formalities n asked doctor to do the post mortem

Geet saw that file n asked a question with her eyes

Maan: yeh'who rahul ki gare mai the'

Maan recalled geet saying rahul ne hume ajj dada ji ke katil ke bare mai kuch batana hai

He opened the file urgently

Scene shift to malhotra house

Ridhimma shashank dev naintara r in the hall sitting n waiting for rahul to cum when suddenly all lights went off..

Ridhimma: yeh light ko kiya ho gaya???

Naintara: mai candles le ker ate ho

They all stood up

Ridhimma was feeling eccentric cause of sumthing really unknown

Dev:beta armaan kaha hai??

Ridhimma: who toh naha raha hai!

Sumthing was literally beating the door'..ridhimma went n open the door it was bua ji

Ridhimma:app??

Bua ji: haan rahul ne mujhe ane ko kaha tha

Ridhimma: ander aye'.

She came in

Naintara looked from the corner of his eyes @ bua ji

Naintara:yeh yaha kiya ker rahe hai??

Ridhimma:rahul ne inhe bhi bhulaya hai

Then armaan came down

Armaan: I tell u I hate this unscheduled loadshedding!

Ridhimma: abhi thori deer mai aa jae ge..mai khana garam karo??

Armaan: rahul aya??

With a raised eye brow

Ridhimma: nahi'.

Armaan: hum sab saath mai hi khana khaenge

It was raining heavily

It was lightning outside

Ridhimma: yeh barish ko bhi ajj hi hona tha!....pata nahi who sab kaha honge??

Armaan: aajanege!!..mai big b ko call kerta ho

He called maan but no one was picking the call

Armaan: bare baat hai ajj big b ka number nahi mil raha 'dats sumthing!

They looked at each other armaan gave ridhimma a satisfactory smile

Ridhimma: mai bua ji ke liye juice le ker ate ho

She went to the kitchen

Without her knowing armaan was following her

She felt sumthing gripping her from her waist she tried to turned but

Armaan: ridhimma''

Ridhimma: armaan yeh kiya ker rahe ho'abher sab wait ker rahe honge

Armaan released her

She was abt to go when he held his hand

She turned

Ridhimma:armaan!

N found armaan on his knees with tears in his eyes

Armaan: I love you ridhimma

The atmosphere was filled with love!..she could feel the passion care n affection of his love tears rolled over her cheek

Ridhimma: me 2

He stood up

She rested her head on his chest

Ridhimma: I would luv u till the end of my life armaan!.....u r my life!

Armaan felt sum kinda satisfaction

Sum1 just hit the door so badly as if it breaked they both went outside

Maan was there burning with anger!

Dev:maan'kiya hua???

Geet was with her

Maan: armaan ridhimma kaha hai??

Armaan came

Maan: mai app sab ko kuch batana chahta ho..jo keh rahul khud batana chahta tha lekin ab'who issduniya mai nahi hai'haan rahul is dead!

Everyone was shocked

Maan: but woh kaam adhura chor ker gaya hai mai use complete karonga!

Shashank: adhura kam kounsa kam??

Naintara:..lekin rahul'kaise??

Maan: bua ji!....app ko pata tha keh dada ji pareshan the!

Bua ji nodded

Maan: aur pareshani ki wajah?

Bua ji: pata nahi

Maan: unka koi buhat close drug addict tha

The room was dark a bit lightened by candles'.the lightning outside caused continuous flashes of light that was making all ofthem too horrifying abt what maan is saying

Geet:haan!!....wahe insane jo unke buhat zyada close tha itna close keh apne pyaar ka izhar bhi unhe se kiya kerta tha!....lekin use insane ne unhe katal ker diya!

Everyone shocked

Geet: ya he murdered him!!

Everyone looking at each other!

Dev:wat???

Maan: ji dad'.uss subah'jab dadaji kid death hoe subah koi dadaji ki medicine rakhne wale room yane keh store room mai gaya tha

Naintara: aisa kaise ho sakta hai??....uss subah toh waha koi nahi gaya!...i knw!

Maan: u don't knw it maa!.....uss din app ki chabiya kaha the??

Naintara:..mere pillow ke neche asusual'.

Maan: wrong!!..us din kisi ne app ke pillow ke neche se us room ki chabi nikal le the'uss din kisi ne dadaji ke glucose injection ko poison se exchange ker diya!....aur dadaji ko chain ki neend sula diya!

Dev:lekin kyun??

Maan:ek drug addict paise ke siva aur kiya chah sakta hai!.....usse sirf paise chahiye the aur jab dadaji ne mana ker diya tab usne dadaji ko maar dala!!

Everyone was shocked because maan's tone was filled with vilolence n anger n pain!....

Maan: aur phir jab use shaq hua keh who pakra jae ga usne apne app ko bachane ki koshish ki'lekin jab usne dekha keh padma aunty uski sachae jaan chuke hai usne unhe bhi maar diya'yaad hai woh vase jo gayab ho gaya tha..rahul ne who dhondh liya tha''aur padma aunty phisle nahi the unhe giraya gaya tha!.....aur phir jab plan flop ho gaya toh ghabrahata mai who gaya aur ghalti se use hospital ki pharmacy se again same poison le ker padma aunty ko inject ker diya!..........lekin iss sab ke bawajood rahul ne himat na hare aur yeh uske hath mai lage

Showing dada ji's diary

Maan: jo pata nahi kaise usske hath lag gaye

*flash back*

That night when rahul was sitting sum thoughts came in his mind

He at that tym have took all the finger reports and was quite sure abt the killer then he remember the murderer use to jog there n once in their childhood the murderer used to hide things at that particular place that was near the jogging track that's y he just went to the place and took that diary which was dada ji's diary

*flashback over*

Maan: aur woh aur koi nahi mera apna khoon arm''.

N he turned to luk that armaan wasn't there

He started screaming

Maan:armaan!!

Everyone was there they suddenly got shocked after hearing armaan's name they all were just shocked!

Maan:armaan mai sachae janta ho!...woh tum hi ho jisse paise chahiye the who tumhe hi ho jisne dadaji ka murder kiya padma aunty ka bhi kkhoon tum hi nae kiya aur ab tumne rahul ka bhi atal ker diya!...armaan! baher ao!

He just started searching him infact everyone was

The house was all dark!....n now the lightning have also stopped

They all spread in the house

Then after sum minutes truggle they except ridhimma n geet were in hall

Geet and ridhimma rrived

Geet was standing at sum place and ridhimma was also standing along with her

Armaan appeared

He grabbed one of themn put a pistol on his head n other hand wrapping around her

she was geet

N strated talking hysterically

Armaan:wat do u ppl think!....keh mai pakra jaogna..u wish!....maine toh sab theek theek kiya tha then where did I went wrong!...dada ji ko buhat pyaar kiya paise mange toh mana ker diya I warned him!...lekin nahi sunne unho ne mere!!.....marna para unhe!..phir padma aunty unho ne merebate sun le the

*flash back*

Armaan talking to himself

Armaan: dadaji ko maar ker maine theek kiya unhe nahi marta toh who mere zindagi kharab ker dete!.....

Padma was standing just behind

Padma: armaan!!....tumne!....papaji ko!!

As she left armaan followed her n then when she was near stair case hit her right on her head!.....n then pushed her

*flashback over*

Armaan:mai kiya kerta mere paas aur koi choice nahi the!!....but phir bhi maine socha koi risk nahi lena chahiye so maine unhe completely mardiya

*flashbacks from armaan going to pharmacy taking that poison n then signing a sheet then injecting it in padma*

Armaan: sab kuch theek chal raha tha'mai khush tha..infact hum khush the

Looking towards ridhimma

Ridhimma: par kyun armaan!...kyun!...hum khush the toh phir kyun!....

Armaan:''ker diya maine yeh sab ab!....ab kuch nahi ho sakta!..tum log mujhe jail bhej do ge!...isi liye mai yaha se chala jana chahta ho yaha se buhat door'.ridhimma tum mere sath chaloge na!... ridhimma I luv u!...pata nahi kaise but I luv u!.....plz ridhimma mere sath chalna'

Maan: armaan pehle geet per se pistol hitao dekho hum tumhe jail nahi bhejenge

Armaan: big b app toh kuch na hi bole toh behtar hai!....mai app ki ek nahi sunonga!.....

Geet was scared as her lyf was in armaan's hand now

Maan was luking towards armaan saying plz don't kill her with his eyes n then luked towards geet as he had never ever saw before

Shashank: araman tum se humne yeh expect nahi kiya tha!

Dev: haan armaan tumhe toh hum apna acha beta mante the!...

Armaan: bas yahe toh humesha se app logo ki expectations app logo ke asool app logo ke rules pe hi toh jeta aya ho mai!..lekin ab nahi!...ab mai ja raha ho ridhimma chalo

Ridhimma: tum jaise katil ke sath mai kabhi nahi aonge!.....maine bhi tumsey pyaar kiya lekin jis insaan ko apno ki hi fikar nahi use mere fikar kaha honge..i hate u armaan I hate u!

Armaan luking towards ridhimma n ridhimma nodded a no!

Armaan:'plz'.

N ridhimma again nodded a no

A tear rolled off armaan's eye he luked down n then luked up as he luked up his eyes were full of sorrow n anger

Armaan: toh mat ao!!.....mai tumahre bina bhi jee longa!

He was being aggressive now!

Armaan starting walking towards the front door

Maan: armaan plz geet ko chor do

Armaan: big b app hat jaiye mujhe jane dijiye..warna mai get ko mar donga!

As he was moving few steps forward

Naintara was standing quite near to him she grabbed a vase n threw it on armaan

As the vase hit armaan's forehead he fainted a bit then again came into sense meanwhile geet got herself escaped n kinda ran towards the opposite side where maan n ridhimma were standing armaan expecting another attack just shot the pistol!...twice!....

Geet's back was towards armaan n ridhimma's front

Maan screamed: GEET!!!.......

N stretched his hand towards her!......

Armaan was shocked too wat he has done it wasn't his plan he wanted to go to the gate n then leave geet n grab ridhimma n take her with him forever!.....now he was shocked

A wave of sadness passed by everyone standing there

Then geet n ridhimma both fell!

Maan armaan dev naintara shashank all ran towards them

Maan dev naintara towards geet and shashank n armaan towards ridhimma

Maan grabbed geet geet was smiling

Maan held her arm n got her in blood

Geet touched his face

Geet:maan!....

And fainted

Armaan held ridhimma

Armaan:ridhimma plz plz ankhe kholo ridhimma!...ridhimma'..

N found that he had shot ryte on her forehead!..which caused her instant death!

Screaming was of no use then

Shashank: ridhimma ridhimma!.....

Armaan raised her hands in one hand it was blood and on the other it was that pistol he killer her killed the most beautiful person of his life killed his very very own'RIDHIMMA!

1 month later

Maan: dhiyan se!...

Geet was with her her hand was covered with a bandage

Doctor:u r discharged..thank God goli sirf cho ker nikal gaye'..

Maan smiled n luked towards geet

Dev and naintara were there too along with bua ji

Dev:chale phir

He gave a formal smile

Maan: ya sure

They moved to the court

Today was armaan's case hearing

He was stading ryte there where the prisoners would have he was standing with his head down no respose nothing he luked pale''as if he was just physically alive but mentally he was just murdered

Judge: tamam saboto aur gawaho ko madenazar rakhte hoe adalat dr.armaan malik ko mental asylum mai shift ker diya jae ga aur jab unke dimagi halat theek ho jae tab unhe umer kaid ho jae ge'..

N then as the policemen were taking armaan maan stopped them

N hugged armaan

A tear or two rolled off his eyes

N then he aparted from the hug

N the policemen took him

Shashank was sitting there too he came there

Geet hugged her

Shashank with wiping off his tears

Shashank: jo hua acha nahi hua

Geet:lekin jo hogaya who toh hogaya toh ab use bhol jana hi behtar hoga

N they all left the court

in the background this song was played

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=v_X_giYLff0

finally im done!!

this ff was quite real fun....it had loads of my wild imagination ..i knw it was not at all glamours kinda ff....now here is the thanx list..first of all i wanna thank madam agatha christie for writing such wonderful mystery novels...i hope u ppl havent got even a glimpse of dat dat this ff was kinda inspired from agatha christie's famous novel "the crooked house".....it is a must read book..plz ppl do read it!....n secondly i wann thank u ppl who commented read n liked this ff...n amde me feel that im not the only onee who is bak baking who ppl r hearing too😆😳.....luv u all ALOT!!....last but not the last i wanna thank maaneet n Armaan ridhimma for being soooo beautiful couple that they made my ff even more beautiliciously beautiful😃.....

thats it from me

i hope that i MAY write sum maaneet ff soon INSHALLAH!....but now i m on kinda short break so stay tuned on if for reading sum more of me😃

thanx a ton again

n do comment this tym too😃

tcz

luv ya all

n ramadam mubarak..as it is quite really near

dEEjAy

Edited by xXdEejAyXx - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
^^thanx a ton..u liked it??...i was sooo confused that how did it went...thanx for relieving me ab chain ki neend aye ge =D
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Posted: 15 years ago

hey...

nice but sad ending...😭

my doubt was right the murderer is armaan...

ridhima is dead n armaan in mental asylum... so sad

thnx for the pm....

Edited by ryka_27 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
sad ending!!!!

anyways i loved iT!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
awsome ending dear. keep izt up
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Posted: 15 years ago

noooooooooooo, why Ridzi dead and Ammy is in asaylyum??????? U can make it happy ending by their union in heaven. Pls do this.

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Posted: 15 years ago
armaan the murderer noooo
was not expecting this
anyways nice part
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Posted: 15 years ago
Nice ending sweetheart
Was having lil shak on Armaan but never thought he wuld do kill Ridz also
Senti ending sort of
Strt new FF soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome update
loved it
cant believe armaan was the killer
aww ridz died and armaan went to mental asylum
aww manmeet are together
thanks 4 da pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome ending
loved it
so shocked
armaan is the murder
cant believe it
ridzy died and armaan mad
so r a awesome writer
ploz do pm when u write more
thanks 4 da pm
and thanks 4 this beautiful ff

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