Mayur OS- True love updated pg 14

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sehrish

@sizzysehrish

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#91

hey sam
awesum concept
do make it on mayur
be it sad no prob but end shuld be happy one
plzzzzzzz
add me in ur pmlist

luv sehr

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Pooja

@kweetrockstar

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Posted: 15 years ago

#92

hey Sam
great concept
i loved it
do start updating soon
n plz do pm me too

pooja

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fahi

@fahi91

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Posted: 15 years ago

#93

Hi Sam..Obviously would love to read the story on Mayur but plz plz plz give it a happy ending.. 😃

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sehrish

@sizzysehrish

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Posted: 15 years ago

#94

awesum sam loved it yr

so beautifully written touched my heart

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manjeet

@love.mayurarti

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#95

only mayur

n cont soon dear

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-sam-

@-sam-

Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#96

Hello Friends, 😃
Thank you for all the overwhelming response........
Thank you for your lovely comments.........
All are really encouraging...............
I couldnt reply to your comments so genuinely sorry guys..........
You all know the reason.............

Thank you for pressing like tab for my first os and all those who commented..............

salma009, mayur_bigfan, paro_mili, jainypatel, aastu, Kool_Naina, alishaL786, koolwaters_poo, sonam961986, maloo19, angel.ridz, farrda01, mayur-ki-diwani, Favouriteofall, daniella05, ramsha.aslam, kuhus_era, FanOfMAYUR, zarfishan1983, hazraluvroka, ArtiMayur.Meeno, prerana_mjht, love.mayurarti, gopi06, ash_sajan, sariska_mjht, ak12, mayurlovers, kulsumd, VampirePrincess, armayurfan, naina4MAYUR, arunabehere, samiralovemayur, mina_18secret, mjhtnupurmayank, adi_gupta, kweetrockstar, swati05, sizzlingsis, pagli91, nikki028, myownarea, MjhtFan_Mahima, ArTiToTheEnd, -afsha-, rkmnsg, fariaa70,

Thank you for pressing the like tab for my concept..........

Kool_Naina, Alini-mayur, love.mayurarti, mayurg2010, prerana_mjht, deepikavasudeva, hazraluvroka, ArtiMayur.Meeno, xxJaSsIxx, farrda01, maloo19, zarfishan1983, kirti123, rads14, samiralovemayur, t-mayur-sajan-j, Mystique, ak12, Dee.Mayur_Arti, jeniluvmayur, mjhtnupurmayank, kweetrockstar, ..pebo.., MjhtFan_Mahima, Mari-ARtian, fariaa70, nikki028, myownarea, -Jess-, pagli91, -afsha-, annie07, sizzlingsis,

And all those who commented.............

I am not bunking my studies and writing this......

But managing my time out..........

Here is the prologue.....

Scroll down...............

Edited by -sam- - 15 years ago

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-sam-

@-sam-

Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#97

Aku (ak12) story is for you.....
Though its emotional, hope you like it...................
Thank you for everything dear...................

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Prologue

He sat there on the sand. He was at the beach, where their actual story started. Sitting there lost in his own memories. He didnt care about his expensive suit. he didnt care about anything but was lost.

Why you did this to me?
Why did I trust you?
Why i trusted your lie?
Why i forgot that you were an talented actress?
Why?
Why i was so blind that i couldnt see your love behind your lie?
Why you loved me so much?
Why you didnt allow me to be close to you?

so many why's? But no answer. May be this happened because of my insecurities. Somewhere i always had the fear of loosing you,and my insecurities took over me.

He closed his eyes, tears, which were already formed, with the blink they fell on the letter in his hands.

You can never go away from me. I always feel your prescence. I still feel your lips on my cheek. The first kiss which you gave me here,and then the way you winked at me, leaving me astonished. I was in seventh heaven. But then you blushed and ran away.I want to embrace you the same way i did. I can still see you blushing. The excitement in your eyes, the joy, the cheerfullness. I love your eyes, they are so expressive.Your sparkling, twinkling eyes, with long eyelashes. Your cute funny acts. your smile. Your admiring look. Your face filled with innocence and naughtiness. Your sensitive heart, your emotional, stupid acts. Your caring nature and the way you always hide it. Your nature, a confused soul,specially during objectives test. Instead of focussing on my paper, i used to focus on your face.i tried so hard to stay away from you but i failed for good. The way you used to get confused for each single question and then after finding the answer, the way you smiled. It was so soothing. But still the maturity.I thought i knew you very well, but i was wrong.

I didnt notice the hidden truth.

I can see you jumping around here and there. Playing in the water, playing with the kids, helping them to make their sand castles and telling them sweet cute stories about prince and princesses. The way you always praised your prince charming, indirectly me.
The way you collected the shells like a small chid, and when i tried to stop you, your fake anger. The way you irritated me and the way you get irritated just because of me.I miss them all....................
No, I dont miss it, i cant..... because i still see it, i still feel it. No i dont miss you, i dont.........

I want to hate you...really.......i wish i could you hate you but.....................but you make me fall in love all over again and again with you...............I cant help it. I am so helpless.
I love you....i really love you a lot..............

Even when i wanted to hate you because of your lie, i just couldnt.......
my heart always cried for you. I always wanted you..........
I want you, to be with me forever and ever......

When i look at the sand castles, all i can see is you, smiling at me, with your twinkling eyes. When they gets washed away, i can see the dissapointment on your face.

'Nothing is Permanent' is so correctly said. The castles which we make from sand, we know it will get washed away but we dont stop ourselves from making it. Infact we again and again make them. So why cant we dream again, we dreamt of so many things here...........
I remember each and every word of yours so how can you forget that we were and we are always meant to be together.........................
Forever and ever......................
Love is eternal............
I will always love you................

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Done with the prologue.........
Now i dont know, when i wll complete it and all
depends on the flow.............
I didnt use any name for the characters

sorry for typo and grammatical errors...........
I hope you like it ...................
Please do comment , they mean a lot...............
Please press the like tab.................
Thank you for reading.................

Silent readers please press like tab..............

Edited by -sam- - 15 years ago

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Mahima

@Mahima_13

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#98

i am first yay

the dedication to aki was so cute

you are such a nice friend

the intro was beautiful

i could imagine the whole scene

the beach and all...... amazing

i already love your ff

update soon

and don't you dare bunk your studies

luv

mahima

Edited by MjhtFan_Mahima - 15 years ago

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You-Know-Who

@You-Know-Who

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 15 years ago

#99

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aww sami...thank you so much for the dedication...*hugs*

And that was so beautifully described..i loved it...the feelings came out beautifully....

Commendable job sami...

Take care...

N i m sorry..i kinda forced you too much to study. I know how it gets aftr a while...but yeah i just wanna say..study well..

Love,
Akansha..

Edited by ak12 - 15 years ago