Unfortunate: AK FF: Epilogue: Page 36 - Page 23

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Posted: 14 years ago

Youu added more to the part! Yay :D

And hmm the litttle encounter between AK, awkward! But needed, YOU GO KRIPA..she needs to be more pissed off at angad, and hmm the precap..the getting back together already?! I say you get angad straight, so he doesnt screw her over AGAIN!
and YOU GO KRIPA..show natasha what you got, shes definetely standing up finally ;) loved the last bit..and yeahh take this natasha out already lool
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Armaan-KSG

Great part once again!

There was barely any AK in it, but it was a good filler. So Kripas out to get revenge and to ignore Angad..hmm lets see how that goes for her ;) But im liking this strong and confident kripa, lets hope she quits crying even though she truly loved Angad. If hes meant to come back, he will and again, like you said he wasnt that drunk and he was in his senses, yet he ended up screwing up lol Cant wait to read about him in the next chapter !
And i feel so bad for Alia..and this Natasha girl is definetely screwing things over for aloota people, so Kripa you go girl, go teach her some lol!
and Yesssssssss homie im candian..lol I kinda just guessed and About us is by a canadian band **LOVE THEM** so i figured you were lol Im glad to meet you on IF lol
Awesomeee partt once again and i promise to always give you long comments if you promise to keep writing lool! andd oh yeah, ending this fanfic already? dont think about it girl, i want to see some damage control between AK lol Cant wait for the next twists and turns lol
Continue soon!
p.s. pleaseee make your next updates longer, lol i just cant get enough of it lol



Hey.
Eh..well i edited it. It wasn't finished it. ROFL. Yupp..we'll see how she does this stuff.
So i lied. *hides* He wasn't in his senses..i changed it at last minute.
Cool! Canadian pride dude. 😎
...Glad to meet you too. =)

Haha..i'll try to write longer chaps. And aww thanks dude.

-Jot.
Edited by Angel-Jot. - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Aaanndd..i didn't want to put the two together again so soon but i have other things in mind so it won't be so easy.

And Natasha..*grins* You'll see what happens.

Me gonna go eat dinner now. Hungry.
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Posted: 14 years ago
LOVEDDD ITTTTTTTTTTt!!
omggg i hate natasha!!! i hope kripa gets her back in a very rude manner!! she deserves every bit of horribleness!! sighhh...people like that disgust me!!!!!

Awww poor aalia <333 that is the worst thing ever that could happen to someone!!!!!!

OMG i love kripa!!! GO HER for standing up against stupid natasha!!! Make natasha pay for all her behaviour!!

So angad wasn't in his senses....hmmmm...i hope things get ok between them <3333 MY HOT ANGAD <33

sighhhhhhhhh this was a good part...i loved kripa standing up for herself and her friend <33

boootttiiiiiphhoooolllll <3333333 hehehehehe

continue sooonnn <33...next part someone dead??? make it natasha =D
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Posted: 14 years ago
wonderful!!
loved the part...loved to see kripa confident😉
bechari aalia😔...good kripa stood up for her....
go Kripa go teach a lesson to Natasha!! 😆

update the next part soon😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
seriously i feel like hitting angad badly....................thats the only explanation can he give to her????????? he wasn't in his senses.................that natasha is 😡....................cont soon......................
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hiiiii
Awesome update
Loved it
Can't wait 4 more
Con soon
Thanks 4 da pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
awww such a sad part...😔
angad and kripa are separate now....😭
kripa should do something about this stupid natasha....😡
anyway nicely written....👍🏼
continue soon....😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
great part
liked this more stronger kripa
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Posted: 14 years ago

Chapter 23
Gone


I didn't know what on earth Natasha wanted now but she had called everyone to the dorm and i had no choice but to go. Elena, Nuper and Noelle weren't going to be there due to some things they had to do.
I was left all alone to face Queen B.

I entered the dorm and took a seat with everybody else. Once everyone was there, Natasha stood at the front. She pulled out a few small bags and grinned. "First, i want to announce that Aalia Kapoor, Kiki Lola and Dania Chou have officially joined us." She motioned toward the door and Aalia and the other newbies stepped forward grinning. I smiled. Finally.
Natasha had given up. The new ones weren't going to be hazed anymore.
"And, now. I have gotten necklaces made for everyone." She pulled forth the bag and distributed boxes to everyone. I opened mine and found a B in nice intricate hand writing and filled with diamonds. I smiled once again. Then i noticed the sad faces of the new comers. Their boxes were empty. I glared at Natasha who seemed satisfied. Aalia got up and stormed out of the dorm and i sighed.

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It was the middle of the night when Elena shook me awake. "Natasha!! She's..dead!" She cried. I ran out of the room with her to Natasha's and we found the dead body. There were pills lying around near her. She had ODed. But why?
Rose and Portia sobbed quietly. They were the closest to Natasha.
I gulped feeling the frog in my throat grow bigger. This was horrifying. Just horrible.
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I got up next morning to find Natasha's body being put in an ambulance. I shook with tears. She was dead. And i felt guilty and i didn't even know why but i still felt guilty.
I stopped breathing and just sobbed. Tiny little pink dots swirled in front of my eyes. Cant...breathe. The dots... Angad ran toward me and pulled me to him. "Thank god you're OK." He mumbled against me.
I sobbed clutching his shirt. "She's dead." I whispered in between my crying. He nodded solemnly. "I know." I stopped breathing again and once again, those pink and purple dots swirled in front of me. Angad pulled away to look at my face. "Kripa, breathe." Purple..pink...dots... Angad pushed me back to the cold wall of the school and i started breathing again. The cold wall brought me back to reality. I put my head against my knees due to the onslaught of dizziness. I looked up and stared at Angad's concerned face. "Why are you so nice to me?" I asked my voice shaky. He looked confused and just shook his head. "What do you mean?" He asked gently taking my hands. "I was so rude to you." I mumbled. He laughed quietly. "And you had a good reason. It was my fault for what i did. In my senses or not, it happened and i can't change that right?" I just nodded mutely feeling sick.
I felt tired and crummy so i leaned forward and leaned my head against his shoulder.
He put his arm around me and kissed my hair.
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The next morning, i dreaded getting up. Why was this happening to me? I stared at the wall for a long time. Finally, i got up and entered the bathroom to take a shower.
A while later, i walked to the cafeteria and found Angad sitting at a seperate table. He saw me and waved and i waved back. After getting my breakfast, i made my way to his table and sat down across from him.
"So, Dash is having a party tomorrow at his house." Angad mumbled. And that's exactly when Noelle and Dash walked in hand in hand. Dash dropped a card in front of me and grinned. "You're invited." That's it. That's all he said. I rolled my eyes but smiled back.
Noelle waved to me as she and Dash walked off. Angad chuckled under his breath. "I'll pick you up at 7 then. Then we'll drive to his house."
"Dash lives in Easton?" I asked surprised. Angad shook his head taking a bite out of his donut. " Well, no. His parents built a house for him here. He pulled some bullshit about his privacy and shit." Angad replied rolling his eyes.
"Wow." I mumbled.
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Elena, me, Nuper and Noelle all sat in Noelle and Nuper's room after breakfast. "I'm so excited. I ordered a dress specially from New York for Dash's party." Noelle gushed.
"Of course you did." Elena mumbled rolling her eyes. "Someone is in lovvee" Nuper said in a sing-song voice. Noelle blushed. "Kay, so i might be." Noelle said quickly. All of us laughed. "Dash is just so great, you know. He means a lot to me. " Noelle said biting her lip. "I thought Stefan meant a lot to you." Elena blurted out. Silence followed afterwards.
Elena and Nuper glanced at both me and Noelle nervously. "I think we should dress up together tomorrow!" Nuper suggested clearly changing the subject. And i was grateful to her for that. Noelle perked up almost instantly. "Yeah!" Elena and i agreed.
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At dinner time, i walked over to AJA to see Aalia and was shocked to see her crying. "Hey Aalia. What's up? Why are you crying?" I asked concerned. "She died because of me." She whispered tears rolling down her cheeks. "What? What do you mean?" I asked dreading the answer.
"I told Headmaster Cromwell that Natasha was hazing me and so he expelled her. She came to me before ODing and she told me that i would be to blame for her death." Aalia said quietly her voice cracking. Of course. Billings was everything for Natasha. It was her whole future. And also a family legacy. Her family would have disowned her if they had found out she was expelled. I hugged Aalia feeling bad for both her and Natasha.
But then, the Natasha chapter was over i realized with a start. No more hazing. The new Billings Girls could enter Billings without any problem now.
I hoped for everything to be OK now.

PREVIEW: Dash's party. Kripa gets kicked out of Billings? Noelle's hatred?

-Jot.

Edited by Angel-Jot. - 14 years ago

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