Maaneet FF: A Twisted Fate #1: Link Pg. 148 - Page 60

u said that u wil update before new yr

CHAPTER 1: It's so fascinating!! I love Geet's confidence and Maan's smartness!!! She calls him khadoos…too funny!! Excellent job!! I'm so glad Geet is standing up for her rights and is so strong! Excellent writing! Dev is such a trouble-maker…UGH! But can't wait to continue reading!!

CHAPTER 2: Muskaan!!! I love Muski Partner….so glad you wrote her in…small part, but love her to death!! That scene was so funny…irritate Maan is cute! AWWW!! Maan smiled while Geet was sleeping…that's super sweet!! And he thinks he likes her….I loved it! Pre-cap is so deadly…very nice cliff-hanger!!

CHAPTER 3: Muski also calls him khadoos….ha ha!!! NICE!! Dev is the baby daddy…Maan's anger…love it!! Justice to be served!! And Geet trying to control his anger!!! OMFG!! Loved loved loved how he takes her hand and drags her inside!!! "Lion's cave"….so hilarious…love this phrase!!! Dev is an idiot and Maan is the Man…love the slap Geet gives and the slap Maan stops!!! New entry…EXCITED!!!

CHAPTER 4: AHHH!! Maan wanting to marry GEET…YIPPEE!!! But I totally get Geet's point! I rather Maan marry her b/c he loves her!! Geet is so strong…just love that about her! Dadi is too much!!! She think Geet is pregnant with Maan's child…this is getting too good yaar!! Marriage on track….YAY!! Love this! It's so interesting and exciting!! You're such a mind blowing writer!!!

CHAPTER 5: Maan and 3 days….LOL! It's awesome!! Awww…Geet sensing Maan's happiness was nice! Dadi is such a sweetheart! Love her!! She wants to know about Dev…nice way to end it!!! So glad everyone is happy for now!!

CHAPTER 6: Love how he drives her home and holds her hand!!! Maneet staring and Angad teasing was so cute!! I love all the wedding preparations and nok jhoks!! Geet thinking MSK is GAY….lol…this is just too funny!!!!!!!!

CHAPTER 7: The WEDDING!!! YIPPEE!! Geet thinking Maan is gay…this is gonna be so much fun…can't wait to see how this unfolds! So hilarious!!! Maan staring at a beautiful Geet…awwww so romantic!!! Bedroom scene was super fantastic!! And the kiss….EXCELLENT!!!!

CHAPTER 8: OMFG!! Love bite….this is just so good!! Attraction between them is so effin' HOT!!! Geet as a shy bride and Maan's puzzlement was so funny to read!! Spicy halwa….ROFL!!!! This is a classic Maneet moment….love the fun and masti you captured in the writing!! Truly brilliant!!

CHAPTER 9: Dori scene in kitchen was so hot!! Score is even….this little war is so much fun!! SO honeymoon for now, but I hope it happens soon!! Ending was so interesting and I'm truly left intrigued!!

CHAPTER 10: Kripa and Ridz are so cute!! Love how they jump to conclusions!! Geet is the bomb…throwing him out of the room!! I couldn't stop laughing! This is such a cute fight!!! YAY!! Honeymoon time…super excited!!

CHAPTER 11: Time for Switzerland….AWESOME!!! Rahul Garewal enters….this is phenomenal!! Jealous, anger Maan is so awesome!! Love that you wrote this!!! I can't believe Maan actually said he can't stand Geet going "fida" over some guy!! OMG! I just love this part so much!! Excited about the next part!!!!

CHAPTER 12: awwwww!! Romance in the air!!! I love Maan the Romantic!! The magic of Switzerland!!! And now Geet getting jealous…this is just too much, but I love it!! The room with roses, champagne, chocolate covered strawberries….so awesome!! OMG!! The "oh God" at the end…how will they keep their hands off each other!!!

PLEASE do update soon!! This is so good! Loved it so much!!

YOU gotta update soon (:

Originally posted by: ambbiha

do u hav any idea of how badly we r waiting 4 this ff

pls update soon 😭

u said u wil update on jan 1st 😕

Originally posted by: Naina2127

shit really?! I said I would update on january 1st?! 😕 I totally don't remember😳

This weekend definitely though, and it will be an extra long update...don't worry!😆

Thanks for being so patient with me!

Cheers!
~Naina

ps. My weekend ends Monday this time, so anytime before Monday😆

i will be waiting pls dont disappoint