AR FF: Taming of the Shrew- Part 10 8/18 - Page 16

Originally posted by: Arushi.

Hey :) I am finally going to comment. I love Shakespeare, he is like the most ideal writer for me, and its great to see someone set the base of their FF on his writing. Its seems to be a good storyline which is just starting, and its a well thought out one. There is clarity in what you are trying to say and it does reach out to the reader.

Some of the dialouges are maha cute :)

Though I agree with you, it was just a bridge to what is possibly going to come. But again, a bridge is always important. I liked the part, and I like the FF. Great !!

Much Love,

Arushi

PS: Thanks alot for the PM :)

hi arushi! thanks for the really thorough comment. honestly, i think i could've added more details to make the story a bit more like the shakespeare version. i wanted to add more characters but i didnt want to make the whole ff a big confusion and wind myself into a story that i myself wouldnt know how to continue. thanks for liking the ff (:

Originally posted by: Laila.N

LOVE your story !! Please continuuue ^^

Laila

thank you laila (:

Originally posted by: anumeha_rajat

hey u said its not a good part......
its marvelous buddy.......
loved this part.......
sooo amazing......
waiting for next one......
thnx for the pm..............

thank you. :D

Originally posted by: Armaan-KSG

hahah going crazyy? LOL

and about the earthquake, i went to go for an orientation and a tour to my university today for the first time and then, this earthquake happened and im like waitt wahhhhh does this mean? haha

and then, when i was coming out with a couple of friends, we saw this random guy yelling 2012 and RUNNING AROUND...hahaha it was soo funnyyy

Butttt wheres the updatee todaayy :O I checked for your pm and this thread already 10 times LOL..updateee soonnn :D

devu

hi devu! lmaoooooooooooooooooooooooo! omg that 2012 thing just made my day. lmaoooooooooooooooooo. omg! thats hilarious. and the fact that u were at your university and u saw a guy doing that. 😆😆😆😆😆😆😆
arre sorry yaar for not posting yesterday. my parents made sudden plans to head over to nj and i didnt hav time to update. i have to go to school today for 2-3 hours (for no reason whatsoever. exams are over. what's the point?! but w/e. ill take it as a couple of hours to hang out with my friends 😆). but yea i am hoping to post later on today. ill try to make it longgggg to make up for not posting yesterday. 😊

Originally posted by: Sani_Rani

*sani looking down and holding ears*

solly teacher for the late comment. pleash don't kill me, mere itne saare crushes ko kaun sambhalega😆

kk coming to the part.

yaar armaan na is so despo for riddhima😆

and riddhima is also despo for armaan's touch. gosh dono hi despos hai🤣 wonder who is more?😆

i loved their changing room scene, gosh it was soooooo hot. well agar tu kisses ko itna hot bana sakti hai, then ahem ahem scenes ke liye to muje fige brigade stand by par rakhni paregi😆 what if my laptop goes on fire🤣

btw where do u live sweetheart and be a bit more specific than earth😆

the part was simply awesome and tere dimaag ke screws kahi gir gaye hai that u called this part boring. man it was a right entertaining package😆 and madam aaj ka update kaha hai? *sani tapping her feet impatiently*😆

love

sani

hi sani!!! while u hold ur ears u better be doing those squat things. 20 of them. 😆😆 mwahahhaa. my gym teacher would be proud. 😉😆😆
roflmaooooooooooo! i doubt ur laptop will go on fire. put an ice pack underneath. 😆😆 but fire brigade should come in handy. 😛
😆i liv on earth. 😆 kidding. lol. i liv in the eastern part of u.s.a. amrika as my parents call it. 😆😆 how about you?
meri maa, i knew u would be like where's today's update. now its my turn to hold ears and do squats. im only doing 5 though. mein buddhi hu. 😆😆 tumhari tarah jawaan nhi. 😆😆

Originally posted by: desire_20

awwww im lovin this ff!! just read the last few parts n they all were super-cute, please continue soon with a very very very long part😆

hahas. thank you :D. i will hopefully continue today (:

Originally posted by: cuteshilpa

hey i hav stared reading ur ff i just loved it plzzzzzzzz pm me

thank you. i will pm u the next time i update. 😊

Originally posted by: nidha1983

woah dear its really rocking superb one just read who ff its different one but cool and interesting one plz continue it & add me in ur pm list plz

such a cute teddy bear. mwah. 😆 and the flowers r very pretty too. 😃 glad you liked the ff so far and i will pm u the next time i update. 😊

superb part. i love their bickering first and then they suddenly become so passionate for each other. the way armaan just tries to find ways to kiss her here and there r amazing. plz jaldi se update kardo

OMG!!!! OMG!!!!
where is the update???????????????

OMG! Even though I'm not that great of an AR fan, you've got me hooked on! Pls update soon and add me to the pm list!

heyyy dear,
when r u planning
to update next part



love
Riddss

Hey
Where are u?
I'm missing my updates.......
Update soon

wow luvlly... armaan was great / pooor riddhima... plz pm when you update

where is the part

love ar relation....they r some kinda couple .......n diff
pm me whn u update 😊

:O Is it possible to write such good and interesting stories? The characters are so developed! :) I love them, and the storyline! God, I fell in love with the plot as soon as I read it! I love how they're both totally in denial that what they're feeling is a bit more than physical attraction. Maybe it's not more than physical attraction, but I would like to believe there is. Plus it's an AR ff, so people can imagine whoever they want as Riddhima! :]

I absolutely LOVE Armaan and Riddhima's dialogues. Their fights are so believable, but I feel so sad for Riddhima. Armaan's ok. I mean I don't like him only marrying her for the money, but you know we all know he's going to fall in love with her soon after. Or he might have even started falling in love! ;D

Continue please, and update regularly! Such a great story!

Oh and can you PM me when you update? Thanks! :)