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asmara

@asmara19

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+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#31

OH my GOD that was sooooo awsomely sad dear and i cant believe that this was ur first one. you shud write more as u are a brilliant writer. every single emotion was expressed and i cud feel every pain inside them.
do pm me if u write any more OS or FFs

great job

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@awarapan.

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#32

Tinu, this was BEAUTIFULLY written. I'm jealous of your creative mind, I really loved this <3

This was Sept 21st, '09 all over again for me - I cried at the end too! Ahhh. this was heart wrenchingly beautiful. You've got immense talent as a writer - I look forward for more from you!

Do continue to write, you did a wonderful job! I cannot believe this is your FIRST OS! Well, this was beautiful nonetheless.

👏

XO.

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armaanridhimma4

@armaanridhimma4

Explorer

Posted: 15 years ago

#33

OMG that was such a good OS but it was so sad. it reminded me of the shootout episode in DMG except in this AR actually got to hug each other as opposed the shootout episode where they couldnt even hold hands. 😭 it made me cry. poor armaan. i felt so bad for him and i even felt sorry for ridhimma.

keep writing and pm me when you write

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annihilation

@annihilation

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#34

Tinaaaaaaaaaa....🤗

I tell you...You are too good yaar....👍🏼👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️👏👏👍🏼

This OS was just so...so....heart-wrenching....

It bought tears to my eyes...😭

Kya yaar..Not fair...Aise rulate hain kya kisi ko...😭

But yeah, I agree all love stories do not have a happy ending....😔

But I hope it doesnt happen with AR...😊

They meant to live together....If not...then die together...

But not live without each other...

I seriously recommend you to write FF's incase you havent written one yet...

But haan....I'm hurt...You didnt PM me!!!...

Next time you write an OS or FF...

You better PM me....Otherwise....😈

Take Care...

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Maitree

@..Maitree..

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#35

God!

It was So...So...I just don't have words..I'm crying so much..

Its like..WOW.WOW.WOW.

I just can't stop crying..I still have tears...O God Tina,They love each other So much..O God,tina,I LOVE this OS so much.<3

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-Deepshikhaa-

@-Deepshikhaa-

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#36

This FF made Me cry ! :(

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Niharika

@Altaira

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#37

OMG thiss made me cry....awesome OS

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Riddhi

@Riddss

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#38

heyyy dear,
nice OS
do write more

love
Riddss

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Sahar

@MissDior

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#39

Very nice Os 😊, but It was sad . Felt really bad for Arman and Ridz😔.

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deepa

@crazy_4_karan

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#40

omg this was awesome... d most heart touching OS i have ever read... i had tears while reading it... very beautifuly written... the end though sad was perfect n the way u put up ther heart touching convo n emotions was simply amazing.... i totally loved it...

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