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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey Guys.Finally the last update is here and thank you all for the encouraging comments so that i can continue with this OS.I really appreciate it adn thanks to all the silent readers who press the like tab.Here goes...CAMERA...ACTION!(MY STYLE GUYS)

Realisation and Confession

Finally THE day arrived which everyone had been waiting for so that they can confess their true feelings to their soulmates and that day was none other than "The Valentines Day".Everyone was getting ready for the great V-day ball tonight in Excel but looks like someone is still tense and this person was out sweet,innocent Gunjan,thinking about Samrat that what will he think about her when she will enter the ball.
Gunjan,s POV
Uffo!! gunjan.Itna bhi kya sochna.Wo thodi na tumhe khajaaye ga jo tu itna ghabra rahi hai.Dekh be confident Samrat hamesha tujhe yahi to sikhata hai to phir tu kyun itni nervous ho rahi hai.OH no!!Hphir Samrat.Har baat ushi se shuru hokar ushi pe khatam horahi hai.I think i,ve got mad.😆Acha ab kaun sa dress pehnoon....Ummmmmm...Yes this one it will be just perfect for the ball(Guys it was the same dress which she wore on roshni se date).Finally after half an hour,she got ready and she was looking just ravishing!.OH i,ve to make sure ke aaj main uska rose usse lautadoon.Shayad usko to apne rose ka yaad bhi nahi hoga.Well ab mujhe nikalna chahiye warna i,ll be late.POV ends.
Here at the ball,everyone was dancing with their partners but looks like someone was eagerly waiting for his dreamgirl and that guy was our cooldude Samrat.Suddenly his heart started beating at the maximum level when he saw his angel entering the ball,looking fully gorgeous.
Samrat,s POV
Gosh!She looks so beautiful in Red.Just like a beautiful rose which had landed here just for me.Chashmish not fair.College main itni simple and aaj ball main sabse gorgeous.Manna parega tum to chupi rustam nikli.
Chal Samrat ab Chashmish ko surprise dene ka waqt agaya but thoda thoda karke khule ga😉aaj ka biggest secret.POV ends
As soon as Gunjan reached the hall,Samrat reached her and he was just staring at the preety lady."Hi chashmish.Wow you really look beautiful in this and hey!ye rose!ye rose tum aaj yahan kis keliye laayi ho chashmish"samrat said teasingly to which gunjan answered"wo ye rose tum...Samrat interuppted"Wait a second lagta hai tumhe finally apna boyfriend mil hi gaya hai issliye shayad tum ye laayi ho haina.Wais ekabhi tum mere liye to flowers nahi laye.Very bad chashmish"in a teasignly manner."aray nahi wo ye rose tum kal music room main gira ka chale gaye thay na isslye main tumhe lautana chati thi.Waise aaj main yahan nahin aane waali thi magar mujhe ye tumhe lautana na tha isliye main aayi"Gunjan ended her answer and notice that Samrat was laughing while she was speaking."Chashmish..Tum bhi kitni innocent ho.Well tumhari information ke liye tumhe batadoonn ke jisse main ye rose dena chahta tha aaj ye ushi ke haaton main hai😉".Hearing his words,Gunjan got shocked.It was like she was going to faint in any minute if she won,t control herself."Samrat tumhara matlab kya hai?She asked curoiously and so Samrat greabbed her hand and took her to the rooftop od a building where there was a beautiful og the whole city.The whole city was decorated and above all the view was the most beautiful which Gunjan had ever seen."Ye tu mujhe kahan le aaye ho Samrat?Gunjan asked a little confusinlgly.Samrat came near her and then the dark place wher ethye ahad been standing was fully lightened up and a fountain start flowing beautifully.Gunjan had never expected such thing for Samrat and moreover as he moved towards her,Thousands of roses came rushing down on obth of them.It was like they will never stop and time will not move again for both of them.Their was a cute eyelock but then Samrat finally spoke"Chashmish aaj main apne dil ke saaray raaz kholdena chahta hoon.Jo aaj tak nahi keh paaya wo aaj tumhe batana chahta hoon.Tum soch rahi hogi na ke maine tumhare saath itna alag behave kyun kar raha hoon to uski sirf ek hi wajaah hai chashmish aur wo wajjah ye hai ke main aaj tak un feelings ko samjh nahi paaya jo maine tumhare liye har pal mehsoos ki.Tum jaana chati thi na ke wo ladki kaun hai jisse main pyaar karne laga hoon to wo ladki koi aur nahi tum ho chasmish.Main tumse bohat pyaar karta hoon chashmish.Tum hi ho jo meri life ko jeene layak banati ho.Tumhi ne mujhe jeene ka reason diya aur tumhi ne meri life ko beauutful banaya aur main itna buddhu tha ke apne pyaar ko dosti ka naam dediya.Sack kahoon main shayad tumse uss din se hi pyaar karne laga tha jab tum mujhse pehli baar mili thi par wo feelings samjh hi nahi paaya.To kya kehti ho Chashmish mujh jaise buddhu ko pyaar kar paaogi?After hearing Samrat,s word,a tear escaped thorough Gunjan,s eyes.She had never thought in her dreams that a guy like Samrat would love her the way she is.She didn,t said anything and wrapped Samrat,s in a tight hug.Finally she spoke"Haan haan main tum jaise se buddhu se bohat pyaar karti hoon kyunke agar buddhu tum jaisa ho to koi pyaar karne se inkaar kyun karay😆Sach boloon Samrat to main bhi tumse usshi din se pyara karti thi par...Samrat interrupted while breaking the hug"par ye par hamara pyaar ke beech nahi aana chahiye chashmish.Hamesha tum iss PARRRR ko gussha deti ho."Samrat said with a glowing smile on his face."ok ab nahi gusshaoon gi"Gunjan replied."To cahlain chashmish ek olong drive par"Hearing Samrat,s word Gunjan blushed a deep red but agreed.The END
Ok OK guys finally this OS has ended.I hope you liekd the confession part.Do press the like button.Will be waiting for your awesome comments.Untill then Goodnight lovely people😊
Love
Ash😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
wow it was beautiful
mindblowing
superb
sab kuch thaa
sorry words khatam ho gaye compliments ke liye
but it was really rocking
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome......
wonderful OS......
loved it.......
thanx for the pm....
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey ash great part really njoyed keep it up
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Posted: 15 years ago
wow ash awesome...........
very well written...........
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Posted: 15 years ago
Lovelyyyy OS Jii...
Loved It...
Very Touching..😳
Mazza Ayaa Parne Main...
Keep it Up...
Kash You Made This Too FF...😛
Thnxx For PM...

*Sana*

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