Sajan and Mayur ff(Pyaar Ki Rahe), updt pg95 - Page 37

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: sharma.nat

Lovely update really loved the part continue soon

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Originally posted by: -afsha-

Haaye It was jus so fab Benia were reallu cute n adorable

Liked Sayank n Ben convo
Loved it
N that sng sequence was haaye

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tht was sooooooooo awesomeee

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Originally posted by: preety88

amazing fabulous lovelyyyyyyyyyyy update..........i loved all the parts...........thanks for the pm...........cont soon

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Originally posted by: luv_gunjan

Awsome, Awsome, Awsome update! 👏 Love ur ff swetha dear.. Keep giving us rocking updates! 😉 Thanks for the PM..
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wowowow really nice part and i am blushing badly😳 thx alot for this wonderful update and thx for the pm
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Originally posted by: zarfishan1983

wowowow really nice part and i am blushing badly😳 thx alot for this wonderful update and thx for the pm

Thanks a lot😃 I'm glad you liked itEmbarrassed
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Part 10

The next day.....

Doorbell rings 'Ting Tong'

This bell served as a wake up call for Dia, to be honest it was not only a wake up call but also a dream breaker for Dia, yes dream, a dream about the after marriage life of her and Benji.....

Dia: Kaun hai itni subah subah, mere itne achi need aur sapna bhi karab kar dia......(saying so she goes to the hall to greet her morning guest who turned out to be ..................a message with a rose?!)

Dia: Yeh kya hai?

The message reads :

A Rose For A Rose

Dia'smiles': Benji, kahaan ho tum?

Benji: Morning sweetheart(gives her a peck on the cheek)

Dia: How romantic, thanks Benji.....aisa har subah karna....

Benji: Oh shit, mar gaya.....(Dia punches him playfully)

Benji: Sab kahaan hai, Excel nahi jana hai kya?

Dia: Sab so rahain hai

Benji: Wow, that's great news phir toh humme extra time milega romance kayliye.......(Dia blushes)

Sajan's room

OMG, the scene here is shocking.................................................................. Samrat's up and even ready BEFORE Gunjan and is admiring his Chashmish sleeping

Samrat: God Chashmish bilkul out of the world dikhti hai when she's sleeping. Mujhe uska photo keechke, US mein apne kamre mein blow up karke lagana chahiye........(he picks up his cell phone and clicks a pic of her, the click of the cell phone camera wakes her up and she is puzzled to find Samrat taking a photo of her)

Gunjan: Samraaaaaat, yeh tum kya kar rahe ho aur tum itni jaldi ot kaise gaye?

Samrat: Woh main tumhari photo le raha tha, socha US jakay isse blow up karoonga!

Gunjan: Kya?! Tum na Samrat ut patang harqat karthay ho aur pata hai mujhe tumhari inhi harqatho se pyar hai!

Samrat: Toh tumhe sirf mere haraqtho se pyar hai, mujhse nahi!(expression of an angry child!)

Gunjan: Main tumse aur tumhare har harqath se pyar karthi hoon!

Samrat(moves closer to her): Acha?! Kaun se harqath CHASHMISH?

Gunjan: Tum bhi na Samrat?! Main ja rahi hoon nahane, humme aaj Excel jaana hai, I can't wait!

Samrat: Haan Chashmish, Excel, jahaan humari zindagi ne ek naya mode liya tha......

Mayur's room

Mayank was the first to wake up, he returned from the washroom to find Nupur still sound asleep....

Mayank: Nupur sothi hui bilkul ek choti bachi ki tarah dikhti hai, how cute.....(he couldn't resist himself from giving her a peck on her cheek but the response to this peck left him dazed!)

Nupur(still sleeping): Raj, tum aagaye, mujhe pata tha ki tum zaroor aaogay, mere pyar tumhe keech layega.......

Mayank(still near Nupur): RAJ?!

His scream awoke Nupur from her beauty sleep and also dream.....

Nupur(sits up): Kya hua?

Mayank: Raj?!

Nupur: Raj?!

Mayank: Wahi toh main pooch raha hoon, Raj kaun hai aur tum uska naam kyun ley rahey thay?

Nupur: Raj, tum thay!

Mayank: Main?! Mera naam Mayank se Raj hogaya aur mujhe pata nahi chala?!

Nupur: Mayank sapna tha aur woh bhi itna acha, tum aur main ek film kar rahay thay jaha main Simran aur tum Raj.....(Mayank cuts her)

Mayank: Bas Nupur, agay ki kahani mujhe pata hai.....tum jaldi tayaar hojao humme Excel jaana hai!

Nupur: Arre haan, aaj toh Excel jaana hai, bye god kitne saal hogaye, I just can't wait to see ki Excel ab kaisa dikh raha hai!

All the three couples have their breakfast and are all set to revive and re-live the moments in Mumbai's most happening college EXCEL!

They all reach the Excel gate and are exited, the same exitement which they felt when they first set their foot in Excel!

Benji: What are we waiting for guys lets go!

They all enter Excel college......

Nupur: Kuch bhi nahi badla yahaan, sab kuch waisa hi hai jaisa pehle tha, waise permission li tum logo nein?

Benji: Don't worry, maine kal hi baat ki, I told them ki we all will be coming.....waise kahaan se shuru karain?

To which everyone silmultaneously gave different answers!

Benji: Ek minute mujhe kuch bhi samaj mein nahi aaya, one by one guys, Samrat se shuru karthe hai!

Samrat: BB court

Gunjan: Pehle Music room and then Library

Mayank: Library

Dia: Canteen :)

Nupur: Men's loo :D

The entire gang: Men's loo?!

Mayank: Tumhari tabhiyat toh teek hai na?

Nupur: Of course!

Benji: Toh phir men's loo kyun?

Nupur: Woh isliye lyunki main Mayank se pehli bar Men's loo mein mili thi.......

Samrat: Kya?! Tum men's loo mein kya kar rahi thi?

Nupur: Dia se poocho.......(she looks at Dia and then Dia remembers Nupur's first day in college and how she and her group of friends sent Nupur to the men's loo)

Samrat: Tum bhi thay men's loo mein? Yeh sab ho kya raha hai, mujhe toh kuch nahi pata........

Dia narrates the whole incident to Samrat(guys if you want I will include that scene as a flasback, do tell me if you want me to include it!)

Samrat: Really? Dia this is too much yaar, tumne Nupur kay saath yeh kiya aur mujhe bataya bhi nahi........Poor Nupur

Dia: Sorry Nupur, main us din kayliye aaj tumse mafi mangthi hoon.....

Nupur: Hey its ok Dia, yeh toh purani baat hai.....

Gunjan: Par di hum men's loo mein nahi ja sakte!

Nupur: Haan haan pata hai mein sirf mazaq kar rahi thi.....Anyway let's start, BB court paas hi hai toh wahan se shuru karthay hai...............

They all reach the BB court and Samrat gets flasback of those glorious times when he used to captain Excel and make them win all the matches and he remembered something else as well which brought even a wider grin across his face........

Nupur: Arre arre Samrat, sambalo apne aap ko, itna kyun muskura rahe ho.....

Mayank: Haan bilkul, aisa lag raha jaise kissi chote bache ko amusement park mein le aaye hain......kyun Gunjan(Gunjan was too busy blushing too hear to Mayank's talks)

Benji: Ab Gunjan kyun itna sharma rahi hai?

Samrat: Guys, tum log bhool gaye, yahe hai jaaha maine Gunjan ko pehle baar kiss kiya tha.................

Gang: Arre haan, tabhi toh tum dono itna muskura rahe ho!

Then the move towards that empty classroom where Mayur spent their first night after marriage

Mayank: Yaad hai Nupur, yeh jagah

Nupur: Kaise bhool sakthi hoon, yahi se tho humari zindagi ki shuruwath hui thi.....

Mayank: Yeh humra pehla kamra hi nahi balki yahi woh jagah hai jahaan maine aur tumne bhaag peeney kay baad..........

Gang: Ohhhhhhhhhhhhh

All of a sudden Benji leaves the gang saying that he wants to go to the washroom, the department of Benji was shortly followed by an sms recieved by Dia, she also left saying she has to make an important call......

Samrat: Humne kaise kaise din face kiye na Excel mein?

Mayank: Haan yaar, usse badi baat toh yeh hai ki maine kabhi socha bhi nahi tha ki hum dono kabhi itne aache dost banega, rishtedaar toh dur ki baat hai.....

Nupur: You guys have to thank the mowrena sisters, humne hi aap dono ki zindagi ko sudara hai, we made it worth living!

Gunjan: Di bilkul sahi keh rahi hai!

Sayank smile

Mayank: Waise Dia aur Benji hai kahaan? I guess we should proceed, Library chalte hai phir Music room, then canteen!

Dia moves towards the store room.......Benji pulls her inside.....

Dia: Benji, why did you sms me and call me here aur tum toh loo jaane wale thay na?

Benji (puts his finger on Dia's lips): Dia tum bolthi bahut ho! Well, maine tumhe yahaan issliye bulaya thaki we can also leave our mark!

Dia: Leave our mark?!

Benji: Yes, dekho.......BB court mein Samrat ne Gunjan ko kiss kiya so they have left their mark there and Mayank aur Nupur ne upar wale classroom mein so I thought ki hum iss store room mein apna mark chode thaki jab agli baar hum yahaan aye toh we can proudly say store room mein maine aur Dia ne kiss kiya..........(Dia blushes)

Sajan and Mayur after seeing the places they wanted to and re-calling memorable moments decide to move towards the canteen(their fav place of hangout) when Gunjan spots the store room..........

Gunjan: Mere pehle stage performance ke pehle main yahi par lock hui thi........

Nupur: Arre haan, chalo ander chalte hai.......(just when they are about to enter Gunjan spots a guy pushing a girl against the wall, she couldn't make out who it was as it was very dark!)

Gunjan: Arre nahi di ander koi, woh.....hum canteen chalte hai......

Nupur: Arre Gunjan don't worry ab tumhe koi lock nahi karega hum sab hai na!

Gunjan: Nahi di woh ander.....

Nupur: Arre tu bhi na.......(she peeks inside and is equally shocked)

Mayank: Arre ander koi bhoot hai kya, tum dono ke chehre......(Mayank looks inside and starts smiling and pulls Samrat to show him the scene.....Samrat shares the smile with Mayank)

Samrat: Humari tarah yeh students bhi Excel ka naam roshan kar rahe hai.......'hi fives with Mayank'

Gunjan then notices some shiny element, it was a shining purse......

Gunjan's then shocked face turns into a smile

Gunjan: Tum sab abhi ke abhi Canteen chalo....(they all follow her to the canteen)

Samrat: Baat kya hai Chashmish? Tumne achanak humme canteen kyun bulaya....

Gunjan: Bata thi hoon....Pata hai store room ke ander kaunsa couple tha? It was Benji and Dia!

Nupur: Kya?!

Gunjan: Haan di maine Dia ka purse dekha......

Mayank: Shit! Agar koi wahan pauchgaya toh kya sochega! Guys mein abhi unhay bulatha hoon.......(he rings up Benji)

Nupur: Kyun unka romance disturb kar rahe ho?

Mayank: Har cheez karne ki jagah hoti hai Nupur

Nupur: Acha toh phir humne romaance kahaan kiya........(Sajan smile)

Mayank: Humari baat alag thi.......(before he could complete his sentence Benia came)

Nupur(smiling): Hi guys Benji tumhe itna time laga loo mein pait karab hai kya aur Dia kisse tum itni dair tak baat kar rahe thay....'winks at Gunjan'

Benji: Woh woh......

Dia: Mujhe bahut bhook lagi hai, you guys ordered something?

Gunjan: Haan Dia humne order kar Dia, waise hum log store room gaye thay.....

Benia in unison: Store room?!

Mayank: Haan aur tumhe pata hai humne kya dekha?

Benji: Kkkkkkkya?!

Samrat: Kisse couple ko romance karthe hue, unfortunately it was very dark so......

Benia again in unison: Thank god!

Sayank and Gunur: Thank god?!

Benji(changes the topic): Kitna acha laga na college aakar?

Nupur: Haan Benji purane yaadein taaze hogay!

Mayank: Purani hi nahi naye bhi kyun Benji?

Benji gives an uncomfortable smile

Gunjan: Is college ke haar kone mein ek yaad chupi hai, Excel bilkul ek ghar jaise tha humare liye.......

Nupur: Tumhe yaad hai college mein humara pehla din?'Thinks about it'

Gunjan: Haan di aur in sab ki saath humari pehli mulaqat........

Mayank: Bye god aur maine kabhi bhi nahi socha ki hum log itne acha dost banega aur mahino baad Excel aakar is tarah baat karaingay.......

Samrat: Aur main bb champ, college ka flirt kabhi bhi nahi socha ki meri life mein ek pari ayegi aur meri life ko itna sundar banayegi......

Gang: Ohhhhh.....

Dia: Aur main is college ki diwa, ne kabhi nahi socha ki main apne mowranian sisters se itna close hojaugi aur apne bachpan ke stupid dost ko dil dey baitoongi......sorry once again Gunjan and Nupur for all that I did to you guys in the beginning.......

Gunur(hold Dia's hand): Dia humme sirf ache baatein yaad rakhni chahiye........

Benji: Kaash Uday bhi hota humare saath yahaan

Gang: I know phir kitna maza aatha woh apne stupid jokes se humme hasatha :D :D

They spend some more time in the cateen discussing about their college lives and the hardships they faced but yet managed to get through all the troubles as they were always together........

Dia: Ok guys, ab hum chalte hai, ghar jaake thoda aaram karne kay baad we will go to the club jaha hum college ke dino jaathe thay

Samrat and Benji: Good idea

Gunjan: Nahi Dia club nahi, kahi aur chalthe hai na please mujhe woh jagah nahi pasand......

Samrat: Ok in that case hum kahi aur chalte hai

Dia: Please Gunjan, bahut mahinay hogaye club gaye hue please chalna, Nupur tum bolona

Nupur: Waisay mujhe bhi interest nahi hai, par tum itna force kar rahi ho toh ok I'll come aur Gunjan please chalna, Dia really wants to go........

Gunjan: Ok

Dia(hugs Gunjan and Nupur): Thanks guys!

Mayank: Mujhse toh kisine poocha bhi nahi :(

Nupur: Tumhara javab haan ho ya na, tumhe toh chalna hi padega cause we all are going kyun guys.......

Dia: I'm telling you guys its gonna be a memorable night!

Guys, I realized that this Part will become tooo long if I add the club scene so I will include the club scene in a new update but it will be a continuation of this part..........Sorry if you guys got bored with this part! Looking forward to your comments:)

Love

Swetha

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Posted: 15 years ago
hey swetha....
rocking part yr!!!!i love the way u have made them visit all the corners of college...
lovely update.....
waiting for the club scene...plzz continue soon...
thanks alot for the pm...
love,
gunjan mariya...
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Posted: 15 years ago
Nice update
Liked it
They were really cherishing their memories
I really missed Uday here

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