Childish Dosti (Mayur ff) Updated 16/05/11

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XDevilsDesireX

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Posted: 15 years ago

#31

hey yaar i really love the intro!!

bohat bvohat bohat cute tha!!

pls pls jaldi cont karna shoo shweeet!!

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Posted: 15 years ago

#32

pls add me in!!!!

nice concept!

continue soon!

love

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Shruti_0505

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Posted: 15 years ago

#33

nice concept dear

chalo ab isse jaldi update karo

n add me in the pm list

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Beenish

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Posted: 15 years ago

#34

the character sketch and the concept was very nice and thanks for the pm

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pari sharma

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Posted: 15 years ago

#35

sweet concept

continue soon

love ya

add me to yur pm list

pari

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Anamika.5

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Posted: 15 years ago

#36

Tumhari Katti, Nanchie.... Jao, me tum se kabhi baat nahi karugi

Ok ok.... ab mujhe jaldi se PM list me add kar do to phir se FRIENDS 😆

Loved the CS and concept

Hmm... strangers to neighours to frnds, best frnds and I hope the journey continues till soul mates

Start soon

And thanks for PM

Love,
$hrey@

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kulsumd

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Posted: 15 years ago

#37

haey dear
Nyc concept.
Add me 2 ur pm list

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nanchie sharma

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Posted: 15 years ago

#38

Part 1 (PEHLI MULAKAT)
Let tell you that both Sharma's and Bhushan's are very rich and lives in big bunglows opposite to each other.Sharma's have shifted there early in the morning and are now
arranging their things

It was sunday morning and Nupur was sleeping holding her teddy
NM-nupur beti uth jao
N-mommy pleej sone do na
NM-beta table pe nashta lag chuka aur aapke pyaare daddy aapka wait kar rahe hain
N-(waking up) okies mommy main nahake aati hu
Nupur leaves for washroom
NM-(smiling) papa ki ladli

Mr. and Mrs. Sharma were arranging the stuffs in their new house and our hero was playing PSP
M-dad mera room set hone mein kitna time lagega
MD-beta ji aapka kamra 2 hrs mein set hojayega tab tak aap bahar society garden mein khel lijiye
M-theek hai dad main thori mein jata hoon
MD-ok so yeh aapka gift for being a obidient boy
He gives him a box of chocolates
M-wow dad thanks

Nupur came and sat on the dining table
N-good morning daddy
ND-good morning gudiya
N-mom aaj nashte mein kya hai
NM-cereals (nupur face dulls) and ur favorite aloo ke parathe
N-wow mommy u r the best (kisses her cheek)
ND-ahem ahem
N-and u r the best daddy (kisses his cheek also)
ND-thanks aur yeh aapke liye
He gives a gift to her and she opens it with excitement.It was beatiful barbie doll set
N-wow dad yeh toh wohi doll hai jo maine aapse kal mangi thi
ND-yes aur meri gudiya mujhse kuch mange aur main usse na du yeh toh ho hee nahi sakta na
N-yes daddy
ND-ab jao aur bahar garden mein jaake khelo, ani aapka wait kar rahi hogi
N-daddy ani woh sirf mere liye hai aur baaki logo ke liye anamika
ND-theek theek hai ab jayie and enjoy urself
Nupur smiles and goes to park

---------------------In the Park----------------------
Nupur and anamika were sitting on swings
N-ani aaj papa ne mujhe woh nayi wali barbie doll di
A-wow woh toh kitni achi hai na
N-haan its awesome bilkul mere daddy ki tarah
Suddenly a ball came and hit at the back of nupur's head (it was a air filled rubber ball)
she turned at looked from where it came and saw a boy (Mayank) standing and laughing.She fumed in anger and walked towards him with the ball
N-yeh tumhari ball
M-(controling his laughter noded in yes)
N-TOH DEKH KE NAHI KHEL SAKTE KYA (she shouted)
M-itni halki ball se tumhe lag gayi, maine jaan bujke nahi phenki thi sorry
Nupur turns and started walking
M-tum mein manners nahi hai kya, maine bola toh tumhe its ok bolna chahiye na
Nupur turns
N-tum jante nai ho par nupur kisi ko itni jaldi maaf nahi karti
M-maine sorry bola na aur kya karu
Nupur turns her head other side showing her anger
M-acha ek minute
Mayank jake ek plant se pink flower todh ke lata hai
M-(forwarding the flower)Sorry
N-(she looked at the flower and smiled then took it)yeh huyi na koi baat chalo maaf kiya waise bhi bade bade shehro mein aisi choti choti baatein hoti rehti hain
Both laughed
M-mera naam mayank hai
N-hi i'm nupur naam toh suna hee hoga
M-(forwarding his hand)mujhse dosti karogi
N-hmmmmmm waise toh main kisi se itni jaldi friendship karti nahi (mayank was sad and was about to back his hand off when nupur shaked it) par tumse kar sakti hu
Mayank smilled showing his dimples
A-hello main bhi hu yahan pe
N-oh sorry yeh hai meri bestest friend anamika
M-hi
A-hi friends?
M-friends (both shaked hands)
N-tum yahan pe naye ho kya?konse ghar mein?konsa school join karoge?.......
M-(interupting her)arey zara saans toh lelo, haan main yahan naya hu, uss blue wale bunglow mein rehne aaya hu aur st. anflem school mein parhunga
N-(hitting his head with her little finger)budhu st. anflem nahi st. anthlem school aur main aur ani bhi wahi parte hain
A-wow tumhara ghar toh nupsi ke ghar ke samne wala hai, matlab hum sab neighbours hue ghar mein bhi aur school mein bhi
M-thats gr8 aur nupsi interesting name
N- tumhe bhi koi nick name dete hain, hmmmmmmmmm hum tumhe mayu bulaenge
M-nahi yeh bohat stupid hai
N-but bohat cute bhi
M-(pointing his finger)nahi bulaogi
N-bulaungi, MAYU MAYU MAYU MAYU
A-ab ladai mat karo nupsi chal khaane ka time hogaya hai
N-haan chal
M-main bhi chalta hu bye
A-byeee
Nupur and anamika were going home when nupur turned and shouted
N-bye Mayuuuuuuuuu
and ran from there
M-(smiled) yeh nahi sudhregi
He also went home
Sorry guys for the delay.I know this part is boring but please tolerate
Please comment and tell me whether it is boring or not and whether u like it or not
Silent reader please press the like button

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nanchie sharma

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Posted: 15 years ago

#39

Guys i have updated the first part and sorry for delay but i'm busy in holiday homework projects

i will update it on saturday or sunday

love
Nanchie 😊