new mayur ss - once met married..pg 58!end & eplog

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hazra

@hazra66

Voyager

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Posted: 15 years ago

#461

sorry for late reply jenni

aussum and mindblowing ending

i loved it

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Divya

@dbr_kmichi

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#462

hey read ur full ff...its jus awesome....:)

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jeni

@jeniluvmayur

Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#463

thank u for all of ur comments friends...will reply all of ur comments soon...love u all....!

jeni!

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Varsha

@-krazyriya-

Inactive

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Posted: 15 years ago

#464

hey... hi my sweeeeeeeetest jaanu....🤗

first of all I'm really very sorryyyy jaan..... as I'm reading this.... and commenting so late.......

I know this time..... I'm really very late nah.....😭😭😭
😭
But what a mindblowing.... super duper fantabulous update my jaan.....👏👏👏

I'm just so spellbound dear.... don't have words to describe how much i loved it !! 😳😳😳

Its so beautiful.....😳.😳..... gosh...😍.😍..... u have written par excellency my jaanu !! 👏👏👏

loved the last part to the core jaan....🤗.🤗... n the Epilogue....now what to say about it.....🤔 ...oh god...😍😍... am still madly drooling over it jaan...🤪..🤪🤪... completely lost in mayur magical world 😍 😍😍 !!

omg.... So Mayank loved Nupur from her college days...❤️.. woww.... he met her in Excel College... n it was love at first sight..😍.. woww.... too romantic jaan.....😍😍😍

aww... bechara mayu.... he was so sad about Nupur's leaving just like that..... without giving any answer......😭😭

but really loved Nupsi n Mayank's mom plan.... how clever these Saas-Bahu are....😉😉

but they gave such a lovely surprise to him....😉... he was so happy...😃 n excited.... and i was just more happier than him... for him 😃😃 !!

loved ur epilogue yaar...🤗.. it damn hot...😳... damn cute..😳.. damn romantic...😍.......... and what not yaar 😍 !!

oh my gosh....😍... why u wanna murder me girl...😆😆... the kitchen scene was damn hawwwwwtt dear...😳😳.. can't bear it......😆😆

i didn't knew that u write hot romantic scenes so fabulously .....😲...😲.... so beautifully yaar 😳 !!

omg.... loved Mayu being naughty with Nupsi...😳😳... n Nupsi too responding passionately......😉😉

Nupsi... blushing after that kiss..☺️... oh my my..😍.😍... sorry cant explain it further.... not good for underages...i guess 😆😆

and... love the beach scene..😳.. Mayu trying to make Nupsi jealous...😆.. but our Nupsi is far more clever than him......😆

loved it... when Nupsi talked about that boys..😆.. bechara mayu..😆... he was literally burning.... i guess !! 😆😆

and... woww..😍.. loved the scene when finally Mayank told her... how, when and what made him love her ........😳😳

on the whole.... it was an awesome blossom.... lovely.... marvelous.... fantastic... mindblowing... stunning.... cute.... n damn romantic update yaar.....👍🏼

👏

I just loved it from the bottom of my heart......🤗🤗🤗

u are really a rockstar my jaanu..... ⭐️⭐️⭐️

superb... fabulous.... oustanding work done !! 👏👏👏

today am really proud to be your reader.......n an ordinary friend !!

love u so much......🤗
ur varshu😉

Edited by -krazyriya- - 15 years ago

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kirti123

@kirti123

Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#465

thanks jeni for the link
truely enjoyed this ss
loved all the parts
nice story really cute romantic it was fab
😊

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topsyturvy23

@topsyturvy23

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#466

seriously you can beat me up to a heap if u wud like to i am extremely late at commenting at ur ff..........i just read whole of it in one go'loved every bit of it
was lost so much in reading it didnt remember that i was cooking side by side n i burnt it........so i have to that burnt food now
but seriously the ff was mind blowing
thanks for pm otherwise i wud have missed this beautiful piece written by you

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Krushi

@mayur-arti.4eva

Navigator

Posted: 15 years ago

#467

i just finished reading ur ss.....it ws mindblowing
all the parts were gud
and the way mayur marriage tuk place oh god neva expected tht way it ws really gud
luved it
but it finished 😔
i really loved this ss and wud luv to read more of ur ss

Krushi

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Mahima

@Mahima_13

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#468

Originally posted by: jeniluvmayur
thank u for all of ur comments friends...will reply all of ur comments soon...love u all....!

jeni!

will be waiting for your reply

and love ya too jenni

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-NightDreamer-

@-NightDreamer-

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#469

Wonderful ,amazing ss jeny luved it it was really perefect one...in da starting fe parts i was not gtting wat is story abt....but it was one of my fav one.........