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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: pagli91

Heyy Jeni..

Nice update, loved Mayank's closeness to Nupur and her trying to act indifferent.. and loved the end too... Mayank came and saved her from the TC just in time, lol... can't wait to see if she goes with him, afterall she does now owe him for getting her the ticket.. hehe. But mujhe abhi bhi yeh samajh mein nahi aa rahi hai ki what on earth happened to make Nupur so angry? Why is she wanting to deny she has any relationship with him? Aakhir kya kiya Mayank ne? Jaldi batao na plz... can't wait for the next part. 😃

thx huny...!
nupur angry becoz....wt yaar?i f i said now then i shuld think some other new reasons so better u wait for the 5th part....😆reason would make u all to support for mayank...!😃😃
so next part am posting now itself😉😉am so active...
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Mou.

Nice update jeeny! whats the mystery here? Why Mrs. Nupur is so angry at her husband? but it is really cute though..........update next part soon!

mystery only revolved at the 5th part only monu...so you continue to read huny...
thx for ur cute comment...
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: i_clueless

awww awesome part! but very short 😡 do post a longer part next time

you kept ur promise! yay! luvvd MaYur romance 😆😆 Mayank was having the time of his life and poor Nupur..hehe victim to her husband's silly antics
the guy on the bus is Mayu right? bahaha she darted her handbag at him..a woman's most handy tool 😆😆i've done it way too many times but never forgot it anywhere
continue tomorrow! longer part please
thnxx for the PM
-Miya-

thx miya...!ya am giving u guys a longer part too!!!😳😆
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: rose.mn

Jenni awesum SS, loved it.........

Mayank and Nupur are married but Nupur is not in talking terms with Mayank..........

Cont soon han, as u already have written all partss..........

waise baki ff update karney ka koi plan hai ya nahi............


wer r u dese daz...? ya darling i would continue soon...but u only upd once in a month...
think abt it tooo huny...!
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Posted: 15 years ago

Part three

Am back for disturbing!!!😆😆😆

She was much relaxed looking at him not wanting to show face expression peeped out of the window, felt his aroma entering within her giving so kind of feeling,he sat closer not leaving an inch space between them

Mmh I thought you would say thanks…!

Why should I say it was my money..!she just then noticed him holding some white cloth on his cheeks and was he smiling...is anything wrong at her sentence she couldnt catch his expression in clear.

Yup nupur your right my money is yours too he said smirking yet not leaving the white hanky down

She glared at him angrily remained silent and once again looked at him as he was still holding the cloth she wanted him to say the reason

Do I look beautiful…!

She stopped looking at him gave a look in front asked what do you mean raised her brows...!

No no I asked because you were looking at me like wonders …

Very funny she tried to stop interacting with him

Ssssssshhhh ahhhhhhhhhh hearing him moaning in pain

Being so kind hearted not thinking further what happened r u okay..!she looked at him holding his cheeks ...she took her hands towards his cheeks

someone hitted you huh...
yup my wife hitted me with her purse...!
He looked at her being so concern he loved it a lot played more seriously along with her see it had turned so reddish he said out removing the handy...He holded her hands made her touch his cheeks trying hard not to laugh yet watched her various actions...she was so caring...!
But I just throwed my purse am sorry…is it paining she was much more worried just then noted something was so miserable...

He looked at her being so innocent he admired....said did said you look hot in this saree…

She looked at his eyes which was laughing... she avoided his gaze pulled her hands which were in his touching she felt so stupid to be concerned towards him ...she ignored him started peeping out the windows silently

He could just maintain 2 minutes breaked the silence wall between them said…

Your neck might be in trouble darling…!

She could understand his statement he is saying because she looking at one direction just avoiding his gaze she turned towards him

Can't you look you have much more spaces are free in the bus..

Thank god you turned else your neck else it would be struck😆…by the way I can sit only near my loving wife…

She looked at him in astonishment once again peeped out not willing to continue his talk with him...by this time she know he would irritate her..so better to avoid to talk...!

she can feel his hands moving and getting placed behind her he had not touched her shoulders placed the hands on the seat, her heart skipped out in sudden she felt as if he was holding her..she can feel her hearts excitement raising for him…she felt herself suddenly feeling out of breath…she tried to hold on some fresh air..if someone look at them then for sure it would like he was holding her...!

He looked at her face reactions which were changing often…

Somewhere both heard someone praising them as a couple…

Am I devil he asked looking somewhere..

she looked at him
he too catched her eyes said no no i asked since you were afraid much of me...
She can feel her going so weak towards him in a sudden, made her mind stubborn said

Mr.mayank am not afraid of u okay ..!now I guess you don't have any job huh...!

Wow thank god at least my sweet heart had opened her mouth now he said looking up …

Mayank please understand see am not really.... she stopped as bus was not moving further..

Bus will not be moving further..said someone standing in front...!

What but why..our stop haven't come

Ya your right but i can stop the bus nah!

She looked at the back peeping out of the window as they were standing in the traffic ...look better stop making jokes , see what could be done to solve the problem?

For me it is not at all a problem it is in your hands to decide on..

What she asked confusingly looking at the car which was standing in front giving a trouble ..she stood up to move was forced to sit

Listen say your coming with me without asking further questions then there will not be more traffic...!

Your confusing me mayank
nothing to be confused my sweety simple that i want to spend some time with my wife in alone...so
so what ? she asked raising her tone

Car standing in front is mine nupur

she stood from there to move from there sat on the seat as mayank pulled her in a force to sit...he was holding her hands smilingly ..mayank what are you doing just leave my hands...she said in lower tone...
she looked at him for leaving her in a pleading tone...mayank was looking at her lovingly, when nupur showed her hatred tried to remove her hold...was bit left mesmerized in mayanks eyes....both was sharing a cute eyelock...
mayank said touching her nose bringing her to the world look nupur i love to keep on romancing with u but now ...he came bit closer said...it is a time for a kidnap he said smiling
how dare you think i will come with you...!seeing her sitting in stubborn...!

so i have no problem he left out deep breath said..i love to keep my wife in my arms...

she remained siting in silence
If your not coming no probz for me...simply am gonna carry you ...mmmh i guess you like it...!
she gave him the most disgusting look ...!
i stop boring you all here😆😆😆!!
2mrw no update....

Edited by jeniluvmayur - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
dat is really longer one guys!
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey Jeni😊
1st one to comment😆
mayur was too good n adorable😳
nupsi gets irritated with mayu n his talks
she is so caring n kind hearted she gets worried for mayu wen he acted as he is in deep pain
mayu jammed traffic for nupsi coz he wanted some tym alone wid her
overall update is superb n nice👏
its longer than previous one
thnx for pm
do cont soon😊

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Edited by Kool_Naina - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Heyyyy jeni
Nice update yaar
N ya it was longer than previous ones
One thing...y nupur hates Mayank????
Do continue soon
N thanx for pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
Sorry for double posting
Edited by sakura_mayur - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

nice update jeni!

continue soon
nd thanx for the pm 😊
Edited by Favouriteofall - 15 years ago

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