AR Short FF-Tears in Heaven Note Pg 26 - Page 18

Originally posted by: janu1610

nice part....i dunno why but still a hope lies in me,to watch them together......
still they crave for each other.thats great......

thanks for pm.
love
ritu

Originally posted by: Hannah.

Hiiiiiiiii Shreya :)

So Armaan has cancer, which is sad :( I like how you have stayed true to Armaans character :)

I am glad you have got Minnie in, it will be nice to get some AR scenes on Minnies pretext :)

But I feel that there should be one point in your FF where Armaan takes his anger out on Riddhima for choosing Sid over him and how she did not think about the consequences of her decision would play on his life. Just my POV. Otherwise it seems like she has got away with hurting him.

Hope you don't take offense to my suggestions

Much Love
Hannah xxxxxx

P.S Loved talking to you on the KaJen AT :)

Originally posted by: JULIEL

Awesome!!! Loved reading it and looking forward to the next update!!

Originally posted by: i_clueless

shreyuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu 🤗 thnxx sooooo much for such an awesome part dear! and i'm sowwy for the harsh comments on KaJen AT..i was frustrated coz all my writers had stopped updating 😡 but now they've all updated so i'm veryy happy..😛 hey! the letter was really good..very well written and very emotional..😭

their interaction at the hospital, with Mini was like old times..loved it! 😃 Mini is my sweetheart..😳

then at Armaan's house..wahi puraani yaaden, woh haseen pal...beautiful 😳

thnxx for the PM and soooooooooooo sorry for the late comment..i wasn't at home all these days and would only login for written updates of shows

_miya_

Originally posted by: cute_n_sweet

miyaaa🤗 Thanks a lot dear!!! @bold-thts ok...I didnt mind that at all....😊

@red-Thanks again...Hope u like Armaan's feelings...😊

@blue-welcome 😃

@pink-that's ok...Very glad that u commented inspite of ur busy work!!!😊

Originally posted by: i_clueless

well uuh busy..? umm..i was out celebrating..birthday tha na!so was out with my Aunt and her cute lil son who loves to dress up. We watched Twilight, IHLS, Karate Kid and Toy Story 3D..😛 and bought lots of books too! have you read Twilight..? if you did i'd like to recommend the "Vampire Academy" series..it is very good! and "the short life of Bree Tanner"

oh i specially loved the letter and the way you've described Armaan's emotions..it really was a treat to read..😳

Originally posted by: amruta04

Hey dear sorry for late reply update was awesome loved it do continue soon take care and thanks for the pm.