MayUr FF: All You Need Is Love-New thrd link-pg145 - Page 47

Originally posted by: tellycrazy

Hey Akansha, Hey!

I am new to this fan fiction forum and also a huge fan of your fictions. Thank you so much! And welcome aboard! 😆 I have read all your OS and the other FF. ( I have a soft spot for 'Irresistable', dunno why😆 Hehehe! I am glad!). I just stumbled across this FF of yours today and read all the five parts in one go. Girl, your ending had me smiling idiotically for its perfection😃 . Just as I was thinking how the problem between Mayur could be solved, you just came up with a pleasant surprise. Uh oh, Samrat looks a tad possessive about Nups but I like his character too though you have not revealed much about him. I also liked the conversation between the conscience and the self of each character. This FF brings fond memories of my school days as I too was in similar situation of Mayank when I had to change my school in Grade 11. I can totally relate to Mayank in this FF😆. Ah! i am happy the school feeling came out! All of us can relate to Mayank somewhere. He's this approachable guy, you see! Do update soon😊. I will try my best! 😊

Originally posted by: mjhtnupurmayank

Hey Akansha, Hey Pooja! Good to hear from you after Long! I am doing fine! Hope you are too!

Hows life???

Wow.... This update was amazing.... as usual....Thank you girl!
And the best part of this update was Nupur not being that stern girl this time....Yup Nupur's changing. or may i say, showing her true self!
Samrat punched Mayank.... Hmmppphh......
But, what exactly does Samrat know about Nupur that you have not revealed to us yet....????Err..there's a reason i have not revealed! I dunno myself! 😆

OMG.... The last para was............ *iam speechless* *yeh kaise hua?????*....nupur ko pucho! [=
))].
because when the crazy girl kissed Mayank, I completely became CRAZY.....
Yaar.... I loved all the consciences... Seriously, they are just perfect.... It makes the serious situation very light..... Yup! I have been through this actually~! When you are angered to the extremes, you tend to think something so very different. Its like a reaction from the brain! I dunno if many of you experience this, but me..err..i tend to think crazy things when i am arngry!


Pls continue soon.......I will try my best!

Originally posted by: naina0123

Are you freaking kiddin me????????????????????No!😎

*closes mouth* Girl! At least show a different reaction! I thought you were used to me! 🤣 But Good to know , i still havent lost my charm!

I love you Aki..so so so so much!!! i mean..after all the hitting and blood n tears..i couldnt have asked for anything better!i mean..OMFG!!!! *jumping in excitement* Err...someone save me from the crazy girl! 😆 Okay! let me forget my callous self! Thank you Nain! Love you too!

this is surreal!

in fact even i was on the verge of crying..seeing nupurs desperation..but the last para!!

*sigh*

even i hate Mayanks conscience!!but now i am looking forward to its comments n other vishesh tippani.. I cant hate anything that's Mayank's! 😍 Vishesh Tippani...zaroor aayegi!

OMG!!

he he he..am so happy!! I know! Thank you hun! You are a complete sweetheart!

-Aki! *loves you* *misses you*

Originally posted by: ..pebo..

akki !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
it was sucha an coolio .. awesome , superb mindblowing update .
i truly loved it and it was truly fascinating .
update soon madam ji
pebz

Originally posted by: -madhvi-

nice update
i wonder y nupur kissed mayank.......update soon :)

Originally posted by: armayurfan

awesome update ak.
i so hate samrat for beating mayu.
but nupur kissing mayank😲 😲
can't wait for the next part.
continue soon.

Originally posted by: kirti123

wow just superb fab
the last para was total surprise
loved it
continue soon
thanks for the pm 😊

Originally posted by: Kool_Naina

Hiiiii Aky
How r u?

update was superb,fantastic,mind-blowing....too good
Nupur character is wierd, Samrat is so caring
now Mayank avoided Nupur n she cant tolerate it
their consceince talk just loved it
magical ending dear
w8ng eagerly for next part
thnx for pm

Luvs
Naina

Originally posted by: bhavana92

sigh! that felt like......a mini roller-coaster ride??!!😆 Oh! Are you nauseated? 😆
grrrr8888 part Akansha!👏[i now feel the need 2 figure out a nickname 4 ya] Nick? err..okay! I'd be glad if those are not curses! 🤣

& the 1st step 2 the big change happens! *drum rolls* Yeah! 😃
the utmost reserved Nupur unreserves herself 4 Mayank, bringing a punch from Samrat, a shocked reaction from Mayank & an even gr8er shock 2 Nupur herself over the sudden chain of events!😲

u've left me confused abt whose side 2 take...so unfair yaar!
on one side, Mayank has decided 2 stop bothering & turn himself away from Mumbaiites 4 good & on the other side, Nupur is geniunely feeling sorry 4 him...Samrat isn't wrong too...he isn't used 2 the changes that Nupur's undergoing...come 2 think of it, Nupur herself isn't! Precisely summarising my story! You must write!

but the ultimate amazement came n the form the ending para! ☺️😍
u'll think i'm silly! but the moment i saw this sentence abt 'some crazy gal', i was like, now who's this???😕
anyways, i admit i'm tubelight...😳
but it surely seems like its my lucky day, first the confession in Kanky's FF & now this! Yeah! Glad you liked it girl!

wow! that was long....i'm proud of myself!😎 Me too! 😳
cont. soon plz.... I will!

P.S:(1) long live ur love 4 blues!👍🏼 ROFL! I thought you'd sympathise with me! 😭
P.S:(2) i love the tiny hints of humour u add in the form of the conscience convos, like this:
"I, Mayank Sharma, vow to start going to the gym from tomorrow. Maybe then I could take him up in the actual ring. Never Back Down was my favorite movie.'🤣🤣🤣 Glad, you can connect! i like craziness!

Originally posted by: -Jess-

Sweetu.... chuk the blues.. Miffy wouldn't mind the dedication...😉 Miffy wants more dedications?😲 Dun give so much competition to my blues!

Will have to read this update in peace....

Rukaavat ke liye khed hai....Kripaya intezaar kijiye...😆 Zindagi...do pal i...intezaar...kab tak karenge bhala???????? *Screams* (BTW, I loved that VM of yours!

RES....🤣

EDITED:

I'm glad I read this update tonight in peace.... this was mind-blowingly awesome update...!! Thanks! *smug* Okay! sincere thanks!

I love the rude heartless Nupur.. who is changing... who is feeling her heart alive again.... and it's beating loud and clear for it's one and only ruler....Mayank....!!! You love the rude and heartless Nupur? Really? As in really? Thanks!😳

Oh Akki... you are really good at describing pain and the battle between them and their conscience.... the pain Nupur felt when Mayank was hurt... the pain Mayank felt when his conscience told him that Samrat might be her boyfriend... I loved everything about this update...Glad!

Jealous Mayank and angry and hurt Mayank is a dangerous combo... glad Nupur tackled this dangerous combo with a KISS... the urgency from her side, the desperation.... mind blowing...!!Precisely the urgency! You got it right, Madame!

Can't wait for the next update... why do you have to end it at such exciting point?I derive sadistic pleasure out of it! Its more fun than deriving formulaes of MAth!🤣

Update soon.... really really soon...!!! I will!

Love u loads...🤗 Me too! LOve You more!

Miffy's Sweetu!

Originally posted by: -Daania-

Ahhhhh *screams in fan girl mode* *closes ears* 😆 Sorry..Just Kidding!

Akki, Akki, Akki, I could just hug you so tight right now 🤗 Please do! I am waiting! Oh! wait! Control! *scared*

Gosh, it was such a beyond awesome update. Thanks hun!

The way you described the emotions from each of their perspectives was just too good. Totally loved it to bits. I could feel each of their pain, the confusion, the sadness. Especially Mayank. Why do we all feel so much for Mayank? *ponders*

Though I am a bit off that Samrat hit him, but if that led to MN's kiss (😍)then I am kinda, sorta a teeny bit fine with it. Ask Mayank, how fine he's with it? 😉

It was a brilliant update. I am just gaga over it. Thnks so much hun!

Akki, I love ya, I really love your FFs and all your updates. 😃 Aww...you flatter me beyond words!

Please continue soon. Please, pretty please. I will try my best!

Love you loads <3<3<3 Love you more!

Daania

-Akki!🤗

Originally posted by: dua_adil

super awesome update

just fab

too good

nupur kissed him omg now i cant wait yar

thank u so much for such an excellent ff

Originally posted by: love.mayurarti

outstanding
mind blowing
awesome update
wonderful
cont soon

Originally posted by: -afsha-

Nups kissed Mayu its highly impossible

Its dream or sumthg rght Wait and watch! All i can say is highly impossible is highly possible in this crazy Ff!

Actually my mouth went open reading the last part

Cuming to strting part

It was nice

Liked it

Sam's eyes were quite sharp

Loved his care for NUps but kuch zyada hi care hogaya

Mayu was really behaving lik Jerk

Singing cartoon songs😆😆 Yeah! Mayank's lost his marbles!

That was hell funny

Nups was changing

Sort of didnt liked or expected her to chnage so soon Aww! I am sorry if you didnt like it! But yeah Nupur has been keeping everything to herself for so long..And so this...Sorry to have disappointed you!

But liked the way she wanted Sam to apologise as it wasnt his mistake

Update soon I will!

Originally posted by: rkmnsg

Part 1

hey sis this partzzz gr888

correction

mind blowing, superb,

OuTsTaNdInGGGGG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

so Mayu comez in her school n then he was to sit next to her

n she really was nice to him at first, but then when he asked if she would help him, she said that he should ask otherzzz, and then when he said that she waz his friend, she got mad at him, and screamed at him in front of the class.

wow I wonder why shezzz like that???🤔

anywayzzzz I enjoyed

correction again🤣

LOVED

reading this part!!!
this FF seemzzzz soo interesting

can't wait to read more!!!

P.S. luvv how u divide Mayu n Nupzss POV, luvvv how u describe both of their feelingzzzzzzz,

and the way u described Mayuzz dimple n him

ufffffffffffffffffff😍😍

-Lina-

Originally posted by: rkmnsg

Part 2

uFFFFFFFFFF sachi mein

I just love this part❤️

u'r amazing writer sis !!!!
sachi mein from the starting Nupur sitting alone during snackzzz thinking about how rude she waz with the teacher n Mayank

I am soo curios about wat happened with her that she is like that !!!
anywayzzzz the whole part with Samrat is amazinGGG!!!

they r good friendzzz na!!
n Mayu looking for "No one in particular!" 😆😆

is chooo cuteee😳😳

n later he sees Nupur n goes up to her

then again she tells him to go leave her

😭

why she soo mean to him?????!!!
poor Mayuu

anywayzz loved this part !!
-Lina-

Originally posted by: rkmnsg

Part 3

awwwwwwwww "no one in particular" xeroxed her notezzz

n gave them to Mayu

ufffff how cuteeee???!!!!!!!!!!!!!
sachi mein just love love love this part !!!
from the begining to ending!!
u describe everything soo well !!
just love reading this entire part sis !!
but still wondering why Nupur so miserable??!!!
wat happened to her??!!!
ok so Sam lives with Nupur thatzz nice,

just luvv his n Nupurzz convo together !!!
n haan haan Nupurzz soo different na !!
I mean her mood alwayzzz changing !!!
n haan I luvv when she fightzz with herself

about Mayank =P

one side of her telling she is stupid thinking about him

while the other telling her that he is soo nice n hot looking guy

-Lina-

Originally posted by: rkmnsg

Part 4

awwwww this partzzz chooo cuteeee

sachi mein

I am speechless!!!
Deepika tellz Mayu that something happened to Nupur when she waz in 9th standard

wow wonder wat happened?!!!
then Deepika tellzzz Mayu that Nupur likes him !!!
n then he later gives her roses!!!
uffff just love how u describe that whole part !!!

Nupur have nothing to say

goshh this scene is just

itzzz just

itzz just

goshhh me speechless

but wowoowowowooww

Samrat punches Mayu at the end?!!!!!!!!!!😲😭

didn't see that one coming !!!
-Lina-

Originally posted by: rkmnsg

Part 5

ufffffff Ankiiii this partzzz just

outstanding !!!!
love it into bitzzzz!!!!!
sachi mein everything u describe is superb sis !!!!!
can't put it into wordzzz!!

so Mayu waz really mad at Nupur n Nupur told Samrat to say sorry to him but he refused

Nupur tried to say sorry for Samratzzz behaivor!!
she even send him a message on his phone !!
but Mayu didn't reply!!!
n wowoowow

she kissed him the next day??!!!!!!

Wat????how ???

goshhh em aoo eager to read the next part !!!
do contninue ASAP na !!!
n soooo sorry for late commentzzz sis!!!
n plezzz do add me in ur pm list na

-Lina-

Originally posted by: -Mansi-

Wow..A nice long part! Loved it! Samrat is so caring! Though I wanna know about Nupur's life now! Wow! She kissed him! Awww 😍

Originally posted by: palz_ArTi4ever

all i can say that i m craving 4 the next part..its irresistably outstanding...😊plzzz continue soon yaar.🤗

Originally posted by: dbr_kmichi

hey...it was an awesome part...mayank jealous..n and their kiss ...awesome man..😊

Originally posted by: -shabnoor-

ahh...tht was fab update dear !! 😊
loved it...poor mayank he gt beaten due to samrat...
wat d hell is samrat's problem??? when nupur is telng him nt to interefere then too....

god this is so complicated.....wat is nupurs past..??...is it realted to her parents ???

and tht kiss in d end ?? wat was tht..?? hmm 😳

do continue soon

take care,
fatima

Originally posted by: achoose

great update dear...........

Originally posted by: .rumki.

like it

con soon

Originally posted by: thithutop14

hey jus came across ur ff...

and it ws...WOW....❤️

👏

loved it.....superb...

plz add me in ur pm list!!😃

Originally posted by: rads14

what an amazing update..!!!
really loved it..!!!
awesome..!!!
cont soon

Originally posted by: mayadika11

awesooooome..
superb.......
wonderful........
loved it...
thanx for the pm........