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afsha

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Stunner

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Posted: 15 years ago

#431

Nups kissed Mayu its highly impossible

Its dream or sumthg rght

Actually my mouth went open reading the last part

Cuming to strting part

It was nice

Liked it

Sam's eyes were quite sharp

Loved his care for NUps but kuch zyada hi care hogaya

Mayu was really behaving lik Jerk

Singing cartoon songs😆😆

That was hell funny

Nups was changing

Sort of didnt liked or expected her to chnage so soon

But liked the way she wanted Sam to apologise as it wasnt his mistake

Update soon

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Ally

@.PINK.

Inactive

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Posted: 15 years ago

#432

Part 1

hey sis this partzzz gr888

correction

mind blowing, superb,

OuTsTaNdInGGGGG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

so Mayu comez in her school n then he was to sit next to her

n she really was nice to him at first, but then when he asked if she would help him, she said that he should ask otherzzz, and then when he said that she waz his friend, she got mad at him, and screamed at him in front of the class.

wow I wonder why shezzz like that???🤔

anywayzzzz I enjoyed

correction again🤣

LOVED

reading this part!!!
this FF seemzzzz soo interesting

can't wait to read more!!!

P.S. luvv how u divide Mayu n Nupzss POV, luvvv how u describe both of their feelingzzzzzzz,

and the way u described Mayuzz dimple n him

ufffffffffffffffffff😍😍

-Lina-

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Ally

@.PINK.

Inactive

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Posted: 15 years ago

#433

Part 2

uFFFFFFFFFF sachi mein

I just love this part❤️

u'r amazing writer sis !!!!
sachi mein from the starting Nupur sitting alone during snackzzz thinking about how rude she waz with the teacher n Mayank

I am soo curios about wat happened with her that she is like that !!!
anywayzzzz the whole part with Samrat is amazinGGG!!!

they r good friendzzz na!!
n Mayu looking for "No one in particular!" 😆😆

is chooo cuteee😳😳

n later he sees Nupur n goes up to her

then again she tells him to go leave her

😭

why she soo mean to him?????!!!
poor Mayuu

anywayzz loved this part !!
-Lina-

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Mansi bhatia

@-Mansi-

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#434

Wow..A nice long part! Loved it! Samrat is so caring! Though I wanna know about Nupur's life now! Wow! She kissed him! Awww 😍

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_ArTi4ever_

@_ArTi4ever_

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#435

all i can say that i m craving 4 the next part..its irresistably outstanding...😊plzzz continue soon yaar.🤗

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Ally

@.PINK.

Inactive

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Posted: 15 years ago

#436

Part 3

awwwwwwwww "no one in particular" xeroxed her notezzz

n gave them to Mayu

ufffff how cuteeee???!!!!!!!!!!!!!
sachi mein just love love love this part !!!
from the begining to ending!!
u describe everything soo well !!
just love reading this entire part sis !!
but still wondering why Nupur so miserable??!!!
wat happened to her??!!!
ok so Sam lives with Nupur thatzz nice,

just luvv his n Nupurzz convo together !!!
n haan haan Nupurzz soo different na !!
I mean her mood alwayzzz changing !!!
n haan I luvv when she fightzz with herself

about Mayank =P

one side of her telling she is stupid thinking about him

while the other telling her that he is soo nice n hot looking guy

-Lina-

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Ally

@.PINK.

Inactive

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Posted: 15 years ago

#437

Part 4

awwwww this partzzz chooo cuteeee

sachi mein

I am speechless!!!
Deepika tellz Mayu that something happened to Nupur when she waz in 9th standard

wow wonder wat happened?!!!
then Deepika tellzzz Mayu that Nupur likes him !!!
n then he later gives her roses!!!
uffff just love how u describe that whole part !!!

Nupur have nothing to say

goshh this scene is just

itzzz just

itzz just

goshhh me speechless

but wowoowowowooww

Samrat punches Mayu at the end?!!!!!!!!!!😲😭

didn't see that one coming !!!
-Lina-

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Ally

@.PINK.

Inactive

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Posted: 15 years ago

#438

Part 5

ufffffff Ankiiii this partzzz just

outstanding !!!!
love it into bitzzzz!!!!!
sachi mein everything u describe is superb sis !!!!!
can't put it into wordzzz!!

so Mayu waz really mad at Nupur n Nupur told Samrat to say sorry to him but he refused

Nupur tried to say sorry for Samratzzz behaivor!!
she even send him a message on his phone !!
but Mayu didn't reply!!!
n wowoowow

she kissed him the next day??!!!!!!

Wat????how ???

goshhh em aoo eager to read the next part !!!
do contninue ASAP na !!!
n soooo sorry for late commentzzz sis!!!
n plezzz do add me in ur pm list na

-Lina-

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Divya

@dbr_kmichi

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Posted: 15 years ago

#439

hey...it was an awesome part...mayank jealous..n and their kiss ...awesome man..😊

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abb01

@abb01

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#440

I am so happy to see the update after long time

Must say one of the best update and too long too

I loved the flow and it was absolutely flawless Akansha

All were right and Loved samrat his concerns ,protective nature

And the end was "i am shocked"

and you stopped right there YYYYYYYYYY????????

Sorry can not comment long got to go now

please update when possible and take care

Luv,

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