MayUr FF: All You Need Is Love-New thrd link-pg145 - Page 14

Originally posted by: deepikavasudeva

ressssssss
*edited*

you freak!! Oh thank you very much! *raises collar"

ankit... ankit.... ANKIT!!! yaar ab tu mujhe confuse na kar... i was falling for mayu in this ff and now.... GOOD LORD!! Nah! Mayu's mine...(Nupur's) You are not even in the picture...I am going to torture you by giving you scenes with mayu still no love story! Not even one sided..Muahahahaha!

yes, now i know its me only, though with "kesh kala" in my hair and lens in my eyes!
ankit...*sigh*... i gotta kill u in real, go make me dream more woman. Why do you have to kill me every time? *pout* Dreams turn real one day..If not..you can always keep dreaming..lol..That was a profound statement BTW! Wasn't it?

and whats up with this extra rude nupur, can't she be 1% nice? i hope u reveal her pboblems in next or coming parts... real tension now. I love seeing you in tension of these kinds! *smirks*

aisa hua kya that she became so rude and unsocial!?!?! Yaar ye toh mujhe bhi nahi pata..Coz as usual i dunno what i'd be writing in the next chapter! I have no freaking idea..i am scared now that you asked!

i told u this POV style is awesome and so is the title. beetle's song, i haven't heard yaar. dumb-ass u see! Beatles it is..not beetles! You cant insult a retro band like that! The greatest band of the century! No probs if you havent heard..you can always do it now..you want the link?

this was mast part but very short (as per ur past parts and stuff 😉 ) How can you even say that yaar.. I update in just one day..that too 5 pages in times new roman font size 12..and you say its short? Gosh!
*wipes off sweat from forehead!*

i want loooonger one next time and sooooooooooon too I dunno about that..haven't written a word yet...You know why though!

love u loads....Love you back..just more than how much you sent me..
*D*
*Devils*
p.s.- sorry i wasn't the first to comment 😭

P.s. Oh thats k...😊 You're forgiven!

P.s.s. Blah blah blah!

P.s.s.s Blah Blah blah Blah!

P.s.s.s.s I love P.s.(s)

Originally posted by: sam-18

Hey Bud,

I didnt mean you are rude Ofcourse..i know that..I didnt take it that way either! BTW..i know i am Rude! *wink*

You made me remember my hugher secondary, its the same... Yes, i miss school too!

old building, mess, ground....

kaash koi mayank hota.....😍 Hahahahahahahah!

I love this

Thank you..=)

Akansha

Originally posted by: NidzCole_ArTi

Aaaaaaaaaaaaaah😃
I'm in love with this FF😳

AK I totally LOU it 🤗

This is your best one so far and update ASAP!

Nidz😃

Originally posted by: arunabehere

Beautiful title Thank you di..But i wont take the credit..its the Beatles!

and lovely update i was just lost in the campus it was reminding me all my school days Yeah! school is school!

there talk was lovely

Mayank's curiosity about nupur

deepika feels bad for mayu though she is nupur's friend and wants her to change her behaviour

No idea why nupur is so tough must be something so no guessing Yup..there is something..i dunno about it either..havent thought of it..

Mayank knew that he is gib time fool still repeating he suppose not to do 😆

Loved Ankit ,Gunjan and Samrat too

GLad you liked it so much!

Luv,

di

Love you back,
Akansha

Originally posted by: Jiah.Angel

Did I tell you you are awesome writer? Did I? 😉 Umm thank you so much.😳.U are no less either!

The whole thing is written GORGEOUSLY! 😃 And Nupur, aaish . . I dint like it no . . she hurt Mayank! That poor thing! i know! But love hurts!😉 I like Samrat and Gunjan here. Gunjan is just the same as in the show, though. 😳 Yes, she is!

Commendable job, you've done. Absolutely! 😛 Thank you again!

-Kanky

-Akansha

Originally posted by: naina0123

She turned around to look at him.I couldn't help my smile.

Thats my favourite line...😳

the reactions,thoughts are spot on..exactly what goes on in one's mind..i mean even i have the habbit of thinking like this..u knoe..talking to myself.thats why am enjoying this thoroughly.. Glad you 're enjoying this..

I liked the Nupur-Samrat convo here..though they were silent..it shows their friendship..the hug was very sweet Thank you very much..It's always been silent friendship that i have cherished!

Mayanks interaction with Gunjan,Ankit were apt..esp loved Mayanks restlessness😉 n Deepika startling him with her answer was fab😊

On seeing Nupur..he actually had the guts go stand right in front of her??n then look her in the eyes??Boy!he is gutsy😆 Oh yes, he felt some magnetic ATTRACTION, you see.. it ain't the guts. But Mayank is gutsy..you'll know why...

cant wait to see what happens next..will mayur be friends??they will sit together right?? Umm..........Dunno! Until i write i dunno whats coming up..and that probably means i havent written even a word of the next update!

will wait for the next update for the answers..

great goin gal!!!u just keep gettin better n better👏 Thank you...😳

🤗

Hug returned,
Aki..

p.s-you are welcome *smiles*

p.s.s-thanks!(u know why)😉 Yeah..*raises collar* Freak..i am wearing a t-shirt!

Originally posted by: Alini-mayur

Amazing work....

asusual loved it....

Continue soon.....

Originally posted by: Sindhu92

Hey Akansha!

That was wonderful. I loved it. Well, I don't understand what's the problem with Nupur. She is so weird!! Samrat and Nupur's relationship... no comments. Mayank and Nupur's eyelock!! And Nupur broke it? 😡 But she turned back to look and him but he didn't notice? Aww... poor Mayank! Continue soon.

- Sindhu

Originally posted by: sonali..

awesome....