DIL SE DIL KA CONNECTION - Page 5

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Posted: 15 years ago
#41
awsome update !!!
just loved it !
do cont soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#42
loved the introductions continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#43
amazing loved the update...........cont soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#44
awesoem update
well now everything is clear lovley update
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Posted: 15 years ago
#45
hey nyc cs
pm me wen u update
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Posted: 15 years ago
#46
awesome character sketch
plus concept dear
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Posted: 15 years ago
#47
cool start dear
mindblowing
keep writting
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Posted: 15 years ago
#48
part-3
nupur was driving ther car.....when she stops at a signle.....her cell rings..
n=heloo....
p=nupur...ma prem..
n=ha bhai....
p=accha nsun..woh zara tu hospitalse mere reports lelegi...
n=reports????? bhai tum thik to ho??
p=are im fine..woh bass zara us din....siriose gir gaya tha...to hospitalme check ups keliye....
n=bhai..tum bhi na...mujhe kyu nahi bataya?????
p=accha tujhe daatna ha to badme daat lena..samjhi?? abhi tu mere reports lelena..aur ma gunjie ko leke uske college m,e admission keliye jarahahhu.,..
n=ok bhai....kaunsa hospital????
p=sanjevani....
n=theek ha bhai..bye...see u...
p=bye...
excell college....the match was going on...samrat was doing one after one baskets....n finaly excell won the game...all were gathered at the canteen...
s=well...another game...
d=sammy...tumse bb me jitna mushkil hi nahi...
s=namunkin ha....i no candy.....wase sameer kaha ha????
sa=sorry...samrat..ma late hogaya..
b=nahi nahi..tu to sabse pehle aya na....
sa=shut up benji.meri di aj wapis ayi ha..unko lene ma airport gaya tha...isiliye late hogaya..
s=di???? kaisi ha dikneme???
sa=samrat..shes older than u....woh ek docotr ha..aur kalse hospital join karrahahiha...
s=im just joking yaar....tujhe paata ha na ke ma love me vishwas nahi karta...ya yu kahu ke ajtak woh ladki nahi ayi ha...jo samrat ko pasand aye..ye sab to just flirting yaar...
d=pata ha sammy...ke tumhari manpasad ki ladki humhe computer me desighn karni paregi..
sa=exactly..kyuki iske man ki ladki hona...impossible...
s=guys ma ye sab nahi janta..bass itna janta hu ke...agar duniyame love ha..to duniyame woh ladki bhi ayegi..jissse samratko pyaar hoga......
saying samrat leaves...
sa=abe kaha jaraha ha????
s=us ladkiko dhundne....
sa=kya????
s=abe locker room jarahahu.....bass thorider me aya....
scene shifts...gunjan n prem comes to the college,...they come infront of the principals room...
p=tu yaha beth..ma principalse milke ata hu..
g=theek ha..bhai..ma tabtak yaha dekhjlu.....
p=theek ha..dekhle sab kaisa ha....
g=thanks bhai.....
gunjan starts walking around the place..she was liking all of it...gunjan stops infront of a room..it was the music room...gunjan was fond of music...n could sing very well..she won many prizes.....gunjan went inside...noone was there....only music instruments n a window.... from were the other corrider was......gunjan started to see all the instruments...there was guitar..drums...cd pplayers n cds....gunjan saw there was noone.....soo she started to sing a tune(ye zindagi)...meanwhile samrat was passing from the other side......he heard the tune..n stopped...
s(in mind)=woh....itna khubsuraat awaz.......kiska ha.aur kahase araha ha...
he walked hearing the sound..n stopped at the window of the music room..he saw a girl wearing a pink salwar facing her back..was singing....it was gunjan who was facing her back....samrat was lost in her voice......he was stunned to hear such a beautiful voie...
s(in mind)=woh......kitna khubsuraat awaz ha...par ye ha kaun??? excell me ajtak kisine salwar nahi pehna......kaun ha ye??????dekhna parega...
samrat headed for musci room....meanwhile prem came there...n took gunjan..samrat saw there was noone....
s=kaha gayi?? yehipar thi...jo bhi thi...mujhe usse milna ha.....
he was about to leave when he saw an anklet lying on the floor..samrat picked it up....n was smiling..
s=yehi nishani mujhe ustak kisina kisidin leke jayegi...
he kept it with him,........scene shifts to sanjeevani......nupur comes there...
n=excuse me......mujhe mr prem juneja ke reports chahiye..
re=ek second mam...ma zara dekhti hu...
n=plzzz zara jaldi...
re=mam.......ap dr maaynkse millijiye..reports unhike pass ha....
n=ye dr mayank kaha milenge?????
re=mama woh abhi ot me ha...ap bethiye..abhi unki surgery khatam hogi....
n=ok...
nupur sits on the bnch...she was waiting for her mayank.....mayank came out fo the ot.....he was on his way.....
m=are...armaan se case ke bareme bolna hi bhool gaya...
he goes to armaan....nupur was furming in anger.......it was 2 hours......
m=thanks yaar...accha mujhse koi milne aya tha.....ma ata hu..
mayank comes there were nupur was siting..
m=sister mujhse milne koi aya tha???
re=sir woh...
n=oh..to ap ha dr mayank.....
m=yes app..
n=apko isse kya??? wase apki fursata milgayi apne kaamse ye dekhne keliye ke koi apkeliye wait karraha ha??????
m=ji ma..
n=meri baat abhitak khatam nahi hui ha......ma apka pichle do ghantese wait karrahiha....ar ap ha ke...manti hu ke ap doctor ha..par agar meri jaga ek patient hota to..
m=excuse me.......apke maan me joaraha ha..ap bole jarahiha...mujhe bolneka mauka...
n=mauka???? apjaise ladkoko bolneka mauka nahi diya jata ha..samjhe?????? thaank u mera itna sara vtime waist karne keliye.........all men are sickk!!
m=excuse me...
n=no...excuse....me...thanks ....n gud bye.bhooll ke bhi mere samne kabhi maat ana....
nupur leaves..mayank was also very angry......everyne was surrounded there......mayank leaves...
suhaani was walking on the road.......she wasnt able to find any taxi....
su=ab kya karu??? ek bhi taxi nahi rukh rahiha...kya karu???????
she wa standing at the bus stop..it was empty..adhiraj was moving from there..he saw suhaani standing...suhaani tried to stop..but he didnt...
ad=ladki..no ways.....
he went far but then stopped...
ad=nahi yaar....galat hua....akeli ha..help karni chahiye...
he drove the car....back....n stopped...suhaani was surprised...
ad=lift????
su=mujeh sanjeevani jana ha....
ad=sanjeevani????????
su=ji ha...
ad(in mind)=bhai bhi wahi ha..
su=hello..
ad=ab sure......ayiyena..
su=thanks.......
excell collge.........heer n avni comes.......they were walking on the corrider...
av=woh di...cool..place......
h=tujhe pasand aya....
av=bohot.........
prem n gunjan were coming from the other side........n heer n avni......when prem n heer crossed eachother.....heer's shpulder hit prem..but heer didnt notice.....
p=ooucucchhh......
g=bhai sambhalke...
p=kaun ha...
prem turned n saw heer gong....he didnt see her..
p=iski to..
g=bhai chalo.....comeone.....
gunjan took her....heer n avni came to princis office.....
h=avni..tu yehi bahar wait kar..ma form lati hu....
av=ok di......
avni sits outside........sameer was going to the find samrat...when he saw avni sitting there...
sa=ye kaun ha???? shayed new student ha...chalo..mil lete ha...
sameer went upto her....avni looked at him...
sa=hi behenji...
av=sorry....
sa=what????
av=ma samjhi nahi...ap kya kehraheha....
sa=tum kaun ho???
av=ma??? avni.....
sa=yaha kya karrahiho?????
av=bethihu.....meri di andaar gayi ha....meri admission keliye..
sa=yahapar????
av=tum samajhte kaam hokya?????
sa=kyu??????
av=agar yaha admission nahi lena tha...to phir yaha ati kyu?????
sa=dekho..dont act smart ok....
av=i am smart...thanks....
sa=u....
av=what?????
avni also stood up......
sa=dekho..tum mujhe janti nahi..
av=janna bhi nnahi chahti......sorry..mere pass itna faltu time nahi ha.....
sa=u.........ill see u...
av=bye....
sameer leaves.......
sa=ye janti nahi ha..ke isne sameerse panga lia ha..dekhlunga isse...
scene divides in seven sections.......girls up,...n boys down.....at first kash.....both r working..sajan.....gunjan is smilign..sam seeing the anklet....mayue..both r angry.....benia.. siting in the canteen.....savni...looking at eachother....premeer......talking to others..... n andhani sitting in the car.....
KYA MIL PAYENGE INKE DIL????? KYA HOGA EK DUJEKE DILSE CONNECTION??????
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Posted: 15 years ago
#49
awesomee updt dear
loved it
cont soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#50
awesome update!!!!!!!
it has all my fav couples!!!!!!

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