A wonderful Life...(update on pg 145) - Page 13

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Posted: 15 years ago
nahiiii!!....nothing tragic please!!!! lol
your fanfic is amazing!!!
loved the sam-armaan part!! dostana!! hehe
cute!!
please continue soon!
thanks,
Sanju
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Posted: 15 years ago
Funnnyyyyy....
Liked The Dostana Part...
And The Precap...
Romantic And Scary....'
Arre Kuch Accident Toh Nahi Naaa?😒
Cont Soon..
Thnnxx For PM...
*Sana*😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome part
loved sajan
hmmm scary precap
continue soon😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
nice update....but why something tragic 😭 ....thanks for the pm 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
heyy manjari ......really cool ff .......and m really truly waiting 4 d next part .......
sam armaan gunjan parts are gr8 ........1 suggestion ......u can include ridz with gunjan n nupur .....the gals convo will be fun !!!!!
and yup ....thnx 4 pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
Heyy thanx,... even i was thinking what to do wid ridzz.... Now ill make it fun... thanx neeraja!!
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Next Morning Sanjeevani..

R: Congrats Gunjan.. tumhari shaadi 4 dino main hai...

G: thanx ridhima.!! I hope tum aa rahi ho..

R: obviously... Par tum chhuti kyo nahi le leti! Sirf 4 days hai... shopping kab karogi...

G: di hai na... aur aaj main aur samrat shopping ke liye ja hi rahe hai!!

R:Wao! Enjoy!

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Later that evening....

G: Kaha the tum samrat... main kab se wait kar rahi hoon?

S: office main kaam tha isliye phas gaya.. aur nikla toh mayank ka phone aa gaya ki Bachelors party ke liye....(he realises he shouldnt hv mentioned it)

G: bachelor's party??

S:woh... bas normal hi hai... bas.. sare friends saath milkar maze karenge...

G: hmmm.... Main bhi soch rahi thi spinsters party ke baare main!(she makes it up)

S: Par spinsters party nahi hoti sirf bachelors party hoti hai!!

G: samrat... normal party hai.. bas friends milkar maze karenge (she says teasingly)

S:theek hai theek hai.... chale ab...

They shop for 3 and a half hrs..... Gunjan buys alot of stuff and poor samrat has to carry them! She picks some 4 samrat and makes him try it many others! He gets so tired after some time...

S: basss... baass chashmish ab main aur nahi chal sakta... wapas chale...

G: samraat.. abhi toh bahut cheeze baaki hai...

S: (lies) par mere paas paise nahi baaki hai.. plz chalte hai naa...

G: mere paas kaafi hai... ab chalo..'

Poor samrat has no choice but to listen.. but he convinces gunjan to go saying they'd come back the next day!!

S to himself... : ab gunjan ke saath kabhi shooping nahi jaoonga... baap re yeh larkiyaan kabhi shopping karte nahi thakti na... mujhe toh zoro ki bhook lagi hai..

G: Tumne kuchh kaha?

S: nahi toh.. bas keh raha tha ki aaj kitna MAZA aya!!

G: i noe.. maine bhi bahut enjoy kiya!!

S: bahut bhook lagi hai chashmish... kahi dinner pe chale...

G: ghar chalo na... main khana bana doongi tab tak tum bauji ke paas baithna... Woh bhi wait kar rahe honge!

S: chalo...

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They reach home.

S: namaste bauji...

B: beta.. itne thake hue kyo ho?

S: bauji kya batau? Aap ki beti ne poore mall ka chakkar lagwaya.. main toh thak hi gaya,.,,,

G: jhoote!! Abhi toh keh rahe the ki bahut maza aaya??

S: agar woh nahi bolta toh tum mujhe ghar invite nahi karti naa...

G makes a face...

B: beta gunjan nahi bhi imvite kare toh kya... yeh tumhara hi ghar hai.. kabhi bhi aa sakte ho!!

Nupur and Riddhima come from the room...

G: riddhima tum yaha kya kar rahi ho?

R: woh main aur nupur kal ke party ki planning kar rahe the...

S: Party? Mujhe kisi ne kyo nahi bataya? Main toh hamesha ready hoon...

N: jija—JI! Ye sirf girls ki party hai... woh kya kehte hai spinsters nite out!!

R: haan... aap log allowed nahi ho...

S: bauji dekhiye naa... Boliye inko ki larko ke saath ye log safe rahenge!!

B: main tum bachho ko kya boloo.. tum jaano aur yeh.. mayank ko poochho shayad woh madad kare!

S: haan woh hi help karega...

Bauji leaves..

N: mayank kya karega haan?? Usse waise bhi pata hai!!

R: aur tum log nahi aa sakte..

G: pata hai guys ye log bhi bachelors party plan kar rahe the!!

S: waise riddhime.,,, Armaan ko bhi mana karogi...

R looks down..

G: kya matlab?

S: tumhe nahi pata??

G:kya??

R: samrat... nahi...

G: nahi mujhe batao... tum aur armaan kya discuss karte the...

R: bahut raat ho gayi hai.. main chalti hoon...

N: main tumhe baahar tak chhod kar aati hoon

After they leave..

G: samrat bolo naa...

S: riddhima aur armaan ek doosre se pyaar karte hain!!

G: kya?? Sachi? Armaan ne mujhe bataya hi nahi ... woh dono toh larte rehte hain...

S: larte larte hi toh pyar hota hai... Yaad nahi ki hum kitna larte the??

G: haan... woh toh hai.. par main armaan ko abhi phone karti hoon.. usne mujhe bataya kyo nahi.. aur riddhima ne bhi kuchh nahi kaha....

She calls samrat.. puts phone on speaker...

A: haan gunjan bolo?

G: armaan... tumne mujhe batana zaroori bhi nahi samjha..

A:kya? Tum kiss bare main baat kar rahi ho?

G: mujhe abhi samrat ne bataya ki tum aur riddhima ek doosre se pyaar karte ho!!

A: samrat ne? Uske pait main koi baat nahi pachti na... Pata nahi maine usse kyo bataya...

S: oye!! Tune mujhe toh nahi kaha tha na ki gunjan ko nahi pata hai... aur ussne mujhe poochha toh maine bata diya...

A: theek hai.. theek hai...

G: kya theek hai theek hai? Mujhe kyo nahi bataya?

A: Ab gunjan... main kaise batata... riddhima ko batana tha na tumhe...

G:zaroori nahi hai... challo chhodo ab mujhe kaam hai.. kal main tumhari khabar leti hoon...

A: kal tumhari chhutti hai na?

G: oh haan... taabhi bhi... dekh loongi tum dono ko...

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She makes dinner and mayank also comes over...

On the dining table...

M:mmm kya khana banaya hai!! Kaash nupur bhi itna achha khana pakati!

N: Mayank!! Tum bhi naa... main khana nahi banati kya ghar par...

G: haan... jiju.. di ne hi toh mujhe sikhaya hai!!

S: par ek baat toh hai... main aur mayank dono mote zaroor hone wale hai agar aisa khana roz mile toh...

M: by God!! Mujhe lagta hai mujhe koi sport khelna chaloo karna chahiye..Kyo samrat?

S: haan. Yaar main bhi challooo kar loonga...

B: Tum dono meri betiyon ki tareef kar rahe ho ki burai?

G: burai hi kar rahe honge bauji... humari tareef toh karna aata hi nahi..

N:bilkul sach kaha bauji...

S: nahi.. hum toh tumhare khane ki tareef hi kar rahe the...

(he winks at mayank)

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That nite... Mayank samrat and armaan on conference.... and gunjan nupur and riddhima on conference..,.

M:yaar... kal kya kar rahe hai?

S: pata nahi yaar.. girls ko toh bol diya..

A: mere paas ek idea hai!!

S: kya? Jaldi bata...

A: hum toh kuchh kar nahi sakte girls ke bina.. toh chalo na pata lagate hai ki girls kya kar rahe hai... unki party ko chupke chupke dekhenge aur sahi waqt par entry marenge...

On the other hand...

G: guys kyo na hum.. ek sleep over party rakhe...

N: achha idea hai.. mere ghar par... kyoki waha toh bauji hain naa....

R: theek hai.. aur koi salwar suit nahi pehnega...

G:ryt!! Bahut maza ayega.. par ek baat dhyaan rakhna ki boys ko pata na chale...

N:haan... main khane ka intezaam kar loongi...

G: main aaj hi bahut saare dresses lai hoon.. toh main sab ke liye dresses la sakti hoon..

R:theek hai.. Aur hum baatein karenge.. dance karenge.. aur bahut saari gossip...

G:bahut achha idea hai.. chalo phir kal baat karte hai..

N: gudnyt..

R:gud nyt!!

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Precap: Boys watch from the window... Girls are having fun wearing short dresses.. Gunjan wears a black sleeveless dress..(the top of the dress like diyas) Nupur wears Another red dress with thin straps on top and riddhima wears a skirt and a top... mini skirt... Boys thrash their party .. girls get angry.. but then...
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Posted: 15 years ago
hope ull like it.. plz comment!
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Posted: 15 years ago
but Then?????????can't wait. Update soon dear.
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Posted: 15 years ago
wow wow awesome update dear loved sajan scene lol poor sammy he has to carry all da bags lol n den in der home loved da scene cant wait for next update now wow wow all girls wearing shorts n all boys will go faint lol continue soon n thnx for pm

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