KYA PYAAR HO JAEGA(new ff)

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Sparkler

Posted: 15 years ago

#221

Bohuut Acha Tha Keep It Up Dear!!👍🏼
Looking Forward For SaJan And MaYur Story To Go Like A Lovestory
Because It Will Be Very Much Fun To Read Thanks For Your PM
Aur Jaldi Please Cont Karna😛

*Sana*

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sai

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Posted: 15 years ago

#222

Thanks 4 the lovely update
loved it
can't believe mayank rang samrat
can't wait 4 them 2 meet at the airport
can't wait 2 read more
con soon
thanks 4 da pm

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zarfishanzahid

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Posted: 15 years ago

#223

very nice part loved it plz cont soon and thx alot for the pm

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Senny

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Posted: 15 years ago

#224

Oh gosh MN can never do something like this, I would like to spank them both!

Thanks for the pm!

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daniella

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Posted: 15 years ago

#225

nice update
thanks 4 the pm

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fahi

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Sparkler

Posted: 15 years ago

#226

Nice part Hazra, i am shocked at Mayank's behaviour tho, he says that Samrat will feel bad knowing his wife still loves another man but does he not feel the same when it comes to his wife? I hope both these guys see sense soon. Hope Mayank enjoys his fave dish cooked by Nupur, and hope he compliments the cooking too even if he doesn't know it was made by Nupur. Plzzz let them enjoy their honeymoon and get close without meeting the other couple. So sad about Sonia tho.. continue soon. 😃

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Purplevalley

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Posted: 15 years ago

#227

awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

loved it

thanx 4 d pm

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seema mittal

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Posted: 15 years ago

#228

Heyyyy hazra..:)
nice update yaar
waiting to know wat will be mayu's reaction on nupurs food
do continue soon
n thanx for pm

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kareena

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Posted: 15 years ago

#229

hey hazra...ur so lucky u have tym 2 update ur ff's.....i toh bloody dont even get tym!!
well.....luv ol ur ffs....n keep pm ing me

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hazra

@hazra66

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Posted: 15 years ago

#230

hi guys..updated 6th part..i hope u like it..dont forget to comment...read njoy..

then riddhima kept her finger on sonia's mouth...

r-nahi...pls aisa mat bolo...😔

so-maine kuch galat kaha kya didi..😔

r-...sonia..ye sab baate chodo na...tum kya khaogi..aj tum jo bhi bologi vahi tumhe milega..bolo kya chahiye..😊

so-mujhe jo chahiye vo mujhe milega??

r-ha...😊

so-to mujhe mere mummy papa chahiye..

r-sonia..tum...😭

so-didi..ap ro kyu rahi hai...😔

r-kuch nahi..😭

riddhima went from there...

so-arman bhiaya..riddhima didi ro kyu rahi hai??

ar-kuch nahi sonia..mai ata hu..

arman went to riddhima..

ar-riddhima kya hua??

r-arman...mai sonia ka dukh samaj sakti hu..kyuki mai bhi apne parents ko bohot miss karti hu..😭

ar-riddhima...i think tumhe ghar jaana chahiye..chalo mai tumhe drop kar deta hu..

r-nahi arman..mai thick hu..😭

ar-chalo riddhima...mai bhi ghar hi jaa raha hu..

both went to dr.kirti..

r-dr.kirti mai ghar jaana chahti hu...meri tabyet kuch thick nahi lag rahi hai..😔

dk-ok u may go riddhima..

riddhima went from there...

ar-dr.kirti..mujhe lagta hai riddhima ko sach bata dena chahiye kyuki agar use baadme pata chalega to use bohot bura lagega...😔

dk-arman...waqt ane par sab pata chal jaega..abhi riddhima ko kuch mat batao..

ar-par fir bhi..

dk-dr.arman..mujhe bohot kaam hai...

dr.kirti leaves from there..other side..nupur made chola puri..

n-maa..agar mayank ko pasand nahi aye to..

mm-aisa nahi hoga beta..meri pyari bahu ne itni mehnat se banaya hai aur mayu ko pasand naa aye aisa ho sakta hai..😊

n-😊

then bell rang...nupur opened the door..mayank was there..he came inside..

m-maa aj bohot bhuk lagi hai...kya banaya hai aj??

mm-beta..aj tumhari favourite dish bani hai..😊

m-matlab chola puri..

mm-ha mayu..😊

m-maa...mai abhi fresh hokar ata hu..ap ready rakhiye..😊

mm-thick hai mayu..😊

after sometime...all were having dinner..mayank taste one bite of chola puri..

m-waah maa..bohot tasty banaa hai...😊

mm-beta...ye maine nahi nupur ne banaya hai tumhare liye..😊

mayank stopped eating..

m-kya...

mm-ha beta...nupur ne specially tere liye banaya hai..😊

m-pehle kyu nahi bataya maa..😡

he got angry

mm-kya hua mayu..

m-maa..mujhe nahi khana hai..😡

n-par mayank..tumne to kaha ki tumhe bohot acha laga..😔

m-tab mujhe pata nahi tha ki tumne banaya hai...mujhe laga maa ne banaya hai..😡

mm-mayu..ab chalo aur kha lo..

m-maa pls..mujhe nahi khana hai..😡

he went from there...

mm-mayu...mayu...

nupur became upset...

mm-nupur beta..tum bura mat mano..vo gusse mai hai isliye usne ye kaha...use tumhare haath ka chola puri kitna pasand aya..dekha na tumne..ek kaam karo..thodi der baad tum khana lekar mayank ke room mai jaana..uska gussa thanda ho jaega..thick hai..

n-thick hai maa...😳

other side..at samrat's home..in samrat's room..

g-samrat...apna bad pack kar lo..

s-mai baadme kar luga..

g-par samrat...

samrat gave an angry look to gunjan..samrat mom came..

sm-packing ho gayi tum dono ki??😊

g-ha maa..samrat ki thodi packing baaki hai..

sm-samrat beta..tum dono ki kal 10 baje ki flight hai...packing kar lo tum..

s-mom..mai baadme kar luga..

g-par samrat...

s-tum chup raho..mai mom se baat kar raha hu..😡

hey guys..here ends my 6th part..i hope u like it..dont forget to comment..so kya hoga ab??janne ke liye wait kijiye mere next update ka..love u all..

hazra

Edited by hazraluvsalman - 13 years ago

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