MAYUR OS page 4- her lock - Page 3

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Really very nice... Hatke tha... Well written Adi
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Posted: 15 years ago
#22

now dat MJHT is 🤢 4 me... sirf ff & vms ka hi sahara hai..

rockin OS adi...
luvd my M & N...
luvd it 2 d bits...
thnx 4 d pm..
do write more...
luv ya...
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Posted: 15 years ago
#23
Hey it was sweet one
Liked it
Plz may i knw the reason why u never pm me
Wenevr u write sumthg
Plz do give me the reason
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Posted: 15 years ago
#24
Adi

That was really very nice OS

I loved Nupur's craziness for Mr. M... He he he

And Mayank remembered Nupur... Wow

And now meri from heart warning suno... This is NOT your LAST OS, ok? Write more soon and soon

Otherwise....

Love,
$hrey@
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Posted: 15 years ago
#25
awwwwwwwwwwww
so adorable os
i totally loved it
rocking
thanks for the pm

pooja
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Posted: 15 years ago
#26
Heyyyy adi
Amazing os yaar
Loved it
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Posted: 15 years ago
#27
thank you everybody for liking the os
well i have write another os i have posted the os before but i am posting it again ....hope you like it was so small
and this is for my all friends ...i am going out of town so giving my friends another boring one shot so they alwys remember me if i never come again if ..........so never forget me if i left
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Posted: 15 years ago
#28
her lock
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it was my dream .......or she feel ...i don't know but deep inside my heart i know she was their for me ..........she was their in her pony two short pony........

first i saw her that time she made rasana pony only one pony in mid it was look like milk man's horn ........
i alwys make fun of her hairs her pony ......she love her hair so much ..........i must say if anybody say something about her she can tolrate but not about her hair .......very funny na ......i can't understand her........

why girls love their hair so much......i can't understand ........ two time shamppoy ....conditionar and then eggs ,yougart , she must be doing this na......i alwys thought when her image flesh in my mind .....

she alwys look beautifull ........but whenever she open her hair i must say i fall in love with her..........

my mom alwys massage my head and her mom her hairs........

she alwys tease me because i don't have long hairs like her .......and i feel so sad because of this ......
every time i had a fight with god complaining that why he gave nupur long hair why not me...........

i hate this thing the most her hairs........i just want to snatch her hairs.....i was not beast but in my anger i lost my good sense tooooo........

again i fought with her teeth marks on my hand it was enough i want to teach her a lesson so i decide i will do something........so i decided to snatch her beautiful lock.........

at mid night i peep inside her room with my brother samrat who was behing me if their is any danger he will signal me and this will help me to save my self from any trouble........

i just cut her locks and made her hairs look like mine.....

and slowly left the room..............

next day i hear her loud crying ..........that was the last day when i saw her happy ..........becoz of her silly locks i just lost her precious smile tooo.........

she was too angry with me when sam spilt this infront his friend gunjan.........

she ,with her mom ..........and my mom all were ready to kill me ......and i remember this was my last blunder which i did...........

and today the tom boy girl nupur was back in my life to take revenge for the mistake which i made when i was a child .......

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sorry for the short but i want to saw your comment
hope you like it
Edited by adi_gupta - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#29
Adiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii

i read ur os now
but at first u tell me ye tera 1st part hain kya?
kyun ki mujhe lagta hai ye OS abhi bhi end nehi hua.

maynk adore her with her open hair
Oh so maynk was jealous with her silky hair.
and that why he cut her lock and made her hair like tom boy.
Awwwwwww nups was so sad
but u told na that she was back in his life to take revenge for the mistake which he had done when he was a child.
now i want to c how nups took her revenge.

i loved it adiiiiiii
it was really beautiful and a different one
plz write the 2nd part of it.






Edited by fariaa70 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#30
Adi it was so cute i mean itna chotu and choo chweet
Long hair
me too crazy
and loved the way you explained it
Please PM me next time

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