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amrutha,akhila

@ammuakhi

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Posted: 15 years ago

#61

superb concept mahak...... i would definitely love to read more.......... pm me whenever you update... do start it sooon..............

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Mahak

@FragranceOfLove

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Posted: 15 years ago

#62

Thanks a lot guys!

i would definitely try and update the first part as soon as i can!

Even i am desperate to show that i can write romantic stuffs!

Thanks a lottttttttt for the love and support!

I love u guys soooooooooooooo much!

love,
Mahak

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..pebo..

@..pebo..

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Posted: 15 years ago

#63

u have to meri maa

ina speed

coz i really want to read it

its just more and more intesting like every time i see the vm mi just get more unexpected ideas

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Mahak

@FragranceOfLove

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Posted: 15 years ago

#64

Originally posted by: ..pebo..
u have to meri maa

ina speed

coz i really want to read it

its just more and more intesting like every time i see the vm mi just get more unexpected ideas

coz yeh story hai hi unexpected!

main har baar jab bhi twists laati hoon, people say this was unexpected!

so is baar poora ff hi unexpected hai!

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anju011

@anju011

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Posted: 15 years ago

#65

hey mahak love the concept.
would love to read it.
continue soon.

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Varsha

@-krazyriya-

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Posted: 15 years ago

#66

Hey....first of all my heartiest congratulations to you dear on your new FF !!

Now....

the concept is just awesome.... brilliant..... amazing...... marvellous..... mindblowing..... super duper rocking !! 👏👏

I just loved it to the core...... n more because u r writing it......n that too a super romantic one ....wow !! 😍😍

It will be a real treat for all of us !!

loved the siggy u used for it....... n Daksha....u made a brilliant VM jaan !! 👏👏

loved the song..... nice start dear !! 👏👏

its great that u accepted the challenge ........ that's like my brave and determined cutiepie friend !! 🤗

And I know....like everywhere....u will succeed here too......u'll gonna totally rock it !! 😉

and besides that..... main hoon na tujhe har din encourage dose dene ke liye 😆😆 !!!

Wow....so its a long long one FF..... gr8 .... now I'm gonna surely fall in love with it !! ☺️

Aur ab tu ready ho ja bcoz ab main tujhe updates ke liye bahut pareshaan karne wali hoon.......😆😆😆

Me n jeni .... won't let u sleep or go lazy now......hai na jeni...?? But whr r u my jaana ?? 😕

Hey....just wanted to ask u mahak....that is it the same one about which u had told me....?? or that one is still pending ?? 😕

anyways......awesome work....as always !! 😉😉

Good Luck for the challenge darling !! 👍🏼👍🏼

love u loads......... 🤗🤗
varshu

Edited by KrazyRiya - 15 years ago

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Aishwarya

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Posted: 15 years ago

#67

Nice.... Will surely read yaar!

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Nikki

@dmgmjht4ever

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Posted: 15 years ago

#68

Mahi definately pm me

and I will remind you to update them

ps: update Life in a Movie too

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prerna_agrawal

@prerna_agrawal

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Posted: 15 years ago

#69

hey mahak.....sorry for late comment!!.........

i really loved the concept!!!!!.............bhala ho uska jisne tumhe challenge kiya!!!!...........can't wait to read some really really romantic n passionate stuff!!!!!.............plzzzzz update soon!!!!!!!.............looking forward to the first update!!!!...........