I love u too much to lose u#2(Rajeev)EpiloguePg-14 - Page 3

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Posted: 15 years ago
#21
superb part. pls try n cont soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#22
Hii sumi...
How r u? aur teri lappy ka kya haal hain?
so sorry yaar for commenting so late
Congratulations Comments
For the new thread dear πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘i am so happy for u...your fic is awesome n you r a fabulous writer ...love this fic so much
Now coming to the update hamesha ki tarah its beautiful πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ lovely πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘
the song u selected for the sangeet cermony is so nice ..asmi to mehandi ko ghur rahi thi ...jab pass main ayaan hain to ye mehendhi ko kyun ghur rahi thi..paagal ladhki
Ayaan singing the song..oh lovely scene...the words of the song n how the way he came closer to her while singing the song..beautifully written n its such a lovely song too
Mauli n nishants scene is also nice
I loved all the scenes between ayaan n asmi..wo paani pilanewala scene ..its so cute n romantic..n the mandir wala scene..ayaan kitna pyar kartha hain yaar asmi se ..she is soooooo lucky
Ayaan ka surprise to asmi ...wow ..loved it..ayaan n asmi such s sweet n cute couple
Loved the whole part sumi..plz continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#23
Hello...Sumi... Hulollllloooo Sumiiii.... Sumi baat sun na...... Plzzzz.....
Ahemm ahemm....anyone listening to me.....ya mujhe tere paas aakar aasman mein fireworks karne padenge....at 12 in the nite out of sumi's window....Rajita ko fireworks se likhna padega....I AM SORRY!!!!....hehehe....and maybe if sumi is tooooooo angry she would just put a rocket under me and i would be history......πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
Ok Ok...assuming that u are too sweet to be angryπŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰.....i Rajita go down on my knees with a bouquet of yellow roses with a few white ones signifying peace....heheheheheπŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†.....
Cumin to the wonderful Mehndi loaded update....hehehe....i don't understand how can Asmi stare at the mehndi instead of Ayaan.......never mind i guess there are tooo many people who are already in a queue to stare at him......😳😳....
yaar....i didnot know yeh Mauli aur Nishant bhi itni intelligent baatein karte hain....hehehehe....ahem ahem....another couple in the making....πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰.....waise so true it was ...we really need to see some destination b4 moving.....main bilkul opposite hoon.....bas chalti jati hoon....u knw wid the flow.....jo bhi manzil aati hai usse hi apna maan leti hoon.......but sometimes i feel i was a lil more goal directed....phew....this is wat u do....main teri fic ki saari philosophy apne par hi try karne lag jati hoon....πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
Now the most amazingly romantic scene....the kitchen one....yaar, i loved it wen Ayaan said....haan janta hoon yehi dekh rahi ho na ki main kitna handsome hoon....waala dialogue.......the way he tells asmi had her henna is dried and it won't spoil his sherwani....his helplessness....how much he loved her....both willingly and unwillingly....😳😳😳😳
i laughed like a maniac wen asmi said haan tum completely unnoticiable bhi nahi ho....and the one when she says abhi tak to aap jaisa ek hi mila hai.......
He is worried abt his busy working schedules.....i hope i get a husband like him....just wid an added clause....he better mend his ways and give me time....and not just remain worried....πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†...........
Fireworks made the air romantic...hehehe....sooo this was why he was sooo childhishly irritated on their date.......πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†.....
Waiting for the shaadi.....we are self invited guests....πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†.....
love,
rajita......
PS: i am not willing to think that this is soon gonna end........
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Posted: 15 years ago
#24

Hi Sumi😊

How r u?πŸ˜ƒ

I am sorry again, mein phir late hoon na par me kya karun yaar, mere college walon ne mujke pagal kar ke rakha tha, bahut busy thi. But dekho free hote hi mein tumhe bore karne aa gayi and I know tum bahut achi bachi ho to tum mujhse gussa to nahin hogi………..Kyn? Sahi kaha na mene………..😳

Now, coming to updates.

Part 31:-

Ghar me sab wedding preprations me lage hue hain aur hamare ayaan sahab har roz bahane se asmi se milne pohanch jate hain, par kya kare wo apni asmi se pyaar hi itna karte hain ki unhe mile bagair nahin reh sakte. πŸ˜ƒ

I just loved their phone conversation. Its so sweet specially the dialogue when asmisays that ayaan is a unique piece.πŸ˜‰ Ayaan ke pass har question ka jawab hota hai. It seems to be so cute. Sach me ayaan na bahut dramebaaz hai. πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

Aur ayaan ki dramebazi ka koi ant nahin hai but what to say, We all just loved it, wo aise dramebazi karta hua kitna cute lagta hoga na….😳 😳 😳 Hmm…….coming back to update…..In dono ki baatein to khatam hone ka naam nahin lene wali, mujhe lagta hai in dono ko disturb nahin karna chahiyeπŸ˜‰

Samay was so right yaar, yeh dono bina kisi topic ke ghanto kaise baat kar sakte hain par samay ne mauli ko jaise samjhaya na it was so true😊 πŸ‘ πŸ‘. He had expressed nervousness of a girl in such a beautiful way. Bechara Samay, itna kaam karne pe bhi usko bekar word sunane ko mila. So sad for him na.πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

Chalo, Asmi aur ayaan music school bacho se milne chale hi gaye, par yeh bache na bahut naughty hain, aur wo kid 2 to sach me kuch zyada hi naughty haiπŸ˜‰ πŸ˜†, aur ab to wo asmi ko bhi compete karne ke liye ready hai, par piano ki baat par ayaan ko phir se pari ki yaad aa gayi,😭 😭 😭 kyunki wo pari se bahut pyar karta tha aur zindagi ke har pal me pari uske saath hi rahegi chahe jo marjhi ho jaye. And that naughty kid reminds him of her pari also.😭

Usne to ayaan ko bhi chup karwa diya, ayaan ke samne wo asmi par line mar raha tha, uff yeh bacha bhi na.πŸ˜† πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜†

Asmi is confused for her new life and ayaan too…as thy r entering a new phase of life, but ayaan tackles her in a beautiful way. πŸ˜ƒ He has the ability to make her smile in every situation. U knows na he is very sweet, cute and caring.😳

Par ab yeh ayaan kahan chala gaya yaar? Wo bhi asmi ko bina bataye……..A new mystery

Are yeh kya function me ayaan jaldi pohanch gaya, yeh kaise ho gaya???😲 😲 😲 Chalo kabhi kabhi shock bhi dena chahiye na….Between Ayaan's dress is beautifulπŸ‘ ⭐️ ⭐️

Nishant ne Ayaan se panga lene ki sochi par koi fyada nahin….koi bhi ayaan se panga le hi nahin sakta. Wo sabko chup karwa deta hai.πŸ˜†

Asmi neeche aayi aur ayaan unhe dekhte hi reh gaye, kya baat hai,par wo is baat ko manenge nahinπŸ˜†β€¦β€¦..aur na hi apni nautanki se baaz aayenge,πŸ˜† is baar bhi asmi ko compliment dene ki jagah kinjal ko compliment de rahe the. Par kya Karen…he is too sweet in this also😳. He was so right ki asmi kabhi use gussa ho hi nahin sakti. 😳Mauli bechari……..yahan bhi ayaan ne usse sidhi tarah se answer nahin diya. πŸ˜†

Usne sahi kaha he is really too sweet.😳

I liked his scene with pratyush and was funny too. U know pratyush is also gud as he admires our ayaan so much vese to wo hai hi admirable par phir bhi its sounds so gud naπŸ˜‰ πŸ˜†

The end was very sweetπŸ˜ƒ. Asmi was so happy to hear gud thinks about ayaan and yes truly the love is in the air.😳 😳

It was just a superb part dear. I just loved it. It was very sweet. πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ ⭐️ ⭐️

Now, I will come to next part

Luv Preet πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—

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Posted: 15 years ago
#25
Amazing dear,
They r so much in love and each point of this update showed it really excellently.
They both have a different bonding which is beyond love. This is really tough to understand sometime that how much he loves her. He is really unable to express his feelings through words but i know Asmi can very well understand his feelings through his eyes.
The fire work he used to express his love or the temple scene, after that the kitchen scene all were nice and presented beautifully. Mehndi ceremony was quite nice and song selection was g8. I love the way Ayaan performed when he didn't want to do that ( i mean dance). Asmi knew that but he managed it really well.
I hope know i am up to date with ur updates and waiting for new part.

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Posted: 15 years ago
#26

Hi Sumi πŸ˜ƒ

Now comes the reply for next part……….all the best, bore mat hona.πŸ˜†

It was superb, very romantic and just fantasticπŸ‘ ⭐️. I just loved every scene and each and every dialogue.⭐️

Starting is nice with a song,😊 then asmi ayaan scene is so sweet, asmi kabhi ayaan se naraz ho hi nahin sakti.πŸ˜† He is to sweet but bechara asmi ki mehndi ko le kar kitna pareshaan ho gaya, asmi ke haath baar bar ayaan ke gallon par ja rahe the aur saath me asmi ka usse cute kehnaπŸ˜† πŸ˜† ……….aur bechara is baat se bhi bahut pareshan hai ki sab usse dance karne ko kahenge to kya hoga, par ayaan jaise marjhi dance kareπŸ˜† πŸ˜†. I know he will look so gud while dancing na, just too sweet and too cute.😳 😳 😳

I just loved the song and the way ayaan dedicated it to herπŸ˜ƒ. It shows his pure love for her😳. But he is very smart. He didn't dance just only sings and no one notice that except asmi. He is really too smart naa.😳 πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

Nishant and Mauli's scene is nice. He is feeling better now and the thing which shocked me that mauli is listening to someone. Isnt it a shock?😲

Vese muhe to pata hai ki nishant ke liye bhagwan ne kise banaya hai, mene pehle bhi kaha tha na ki mauli aur nishant ki Jodi bhi achi lagegi, aur mujhe lagta hai ki tumne bhi yeh baat yaad rakhi……..πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜† πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜† πŸ˜‰

Their kitchen scene was superb, it was so romantic😳, I was imaging all that. They must have looked so beautiful. πŸ˜ƒThe scene was really nice and was well explained too, nothing more and less, as always.πŸ‘ ⭐️

This is the thing which I loved in ur ff, that everything is always explained in the best way, and was always upto a mark.⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️

Their phone conversation is really sweet😊. But ayaan ne asmi ko naraz kar hi diya, aura b wo khud soch rahe hain ki wo kabhi kabhi kuch zyada hi bol jate hain, par ab sochne se kya fyada jab naraz kar hi diya. Chalo ab usse manane ka tareka socho.πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

The mandir scene was beautiful⭐️. Ayaan ki shirt par hamesha hi sindoor gir jata hai, but its too sweet na. Asmi ayaan se naraz bhi nahin hai par narazgi bhi jata rahi hai, its really cute😳. I loved her scene when she says that ki uske jine ke liye uska aur ayaan ka saath hona zaruri hai par phir bhi wo ayaan se gussa hai. Its an awesome scene yaar.⭐️

The night scene was the highlight yaar, Its really awesome.πŸ‘ Ayaan ke manane ka tarike to bahut hi acha hai yaar, It was superb.⭐️ So, this was his plan that night par barish ne plan kharab kar diya tha. Thank God ki aaj bearish nahin hui. Asmi was overwhelmed by his act. She was really touched.πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ

The way ayaan made asmi sleep was again superb, uff…..tum bhi sochogi ki mere pass koi aur word nahin tha kya, par kya karun ab scene superb tha to than a, I just loved it yaar.πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

In whole, The part was awesome, lovely, romantic, superb, fantastic and cute. Just loved it.πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ ⭐️ ⭐️

Now, m waiting for the marriage, the day when these 2 souls will officially become one(Aisa isliye bola kyunki dil seto wo kab ke ek ho chuke hain). So, please continue soon.πŸ˜ƒ

Luv Preet πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—

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Posted: 15 years ago
#27
Hi Sumaiya 😊
im new here read ur whole fic its so lovely n beautiful
πŸ‘β­οΈπŸ‘πŸΌ
i thought words were less to describe ur ficπŸ˜ƒ
u have potray all characters beautifully πŸ˜ƒ
ayaan n asmi were so adorable n cute😍
from starting u have a grip over story perfectlyπŸ‘
aisa lagta hai jaise yeh tum apne dil se likh rahi ho πŸ‘
i lyk asmi n ayaan baseless arguements n their cute talks
πŸ˜†
u have shown ayaan's dillema n asmi's detemination brilliantlyπŸ‘
mouly n nishant also argue on baseless reasonπŸ˜†
they love each other so much both willingly n unwillingly ❀️
samay n kinjal were wonderfull bhaiya - bhabhi in the world😊
ayaan ne asmi k parents ko bhi mana liya apne aur asmi k relationship k liye
πŸ˜ƒ
wow unki engagement bhi ho gayi πŸ˜ƒ
wo music school k kids kitne shaitaan hai oh god😲
now in last mehndi function is full of fun n romantic
kitchen scene is so romantic ❀️😳
ayaan gets worried about his busy schedule
πŸ˜” n asmi again understand him n make him relax😊
in night fireworks made the air romantic thats why ayaan was so irritated on their dateπŸ˜†πŸ˜‰
waiting for their marriage😍πŸ₯³
yeh fic end hone waali haiπŸ’” πŸ˜­πŸ˜²πŸ˜”i really miss ur writing
do cont soon
😊
plz add me in ur pm list😊

Luv
NainaπŸ€—πŸ‘πŸ˜Š
Edited by Kool_Naina - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#28
Hi Sumii 😊


KEEP ROCKING



for completing
THREAD 1
successfully

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Luv
Naina😊



Edited by Kool_Naina - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#29
haaiiiii Raaaammmm !!!
Main toh yaha pe comment karne mein chappar phaadke late hoon yaar !!!
Actually pata hi nahi chala Pm kaha kho gaya...😲 and then sab PMs padhne ke baad bhi ek unread aa raha tha...tab maine search kiya toh isse paaya !!πŸ˜›
chalo...but Better late, than never !!! haina !!???πŸ˜›
First of all CONGGGOOOOO on the SECOND thread !! πŸ‘ ⭐️
wonderful update yaar!!!
Nice description of the ceremony and then the fight on the phone πŸ˜› and scene in the temple...
But the best was the fire works waala surprise...πŸ˜ƒ
And then Ayaan whispering " I love You " in the phone to make her sleep...chooooo chweeet !! πŸ˜ƒ
tum meri comment ka wait kar rahi thi kya ??πŸ˜› πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜† πŸ˜†
Abtoh maine bhi comment kardi hai...πŸ˜› πŸ˜†
abtoh Update karde yaar...πŸ˜†
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey
waiting for your update.....please continue soon

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