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Posted: 13 years ago

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raj is bcumin so romantic...awesum update...plz cont soon :)

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Posted: 13 years ago

hey guys!!! i am back again...hope you all are fine...here's the next part..but lemme tell you i am not all satisfied with this part..i feel something is missing in this..don't know what but this definitely didn't made me happy...so over to you now..



Part 37 …

After one week..

Naina's parents left feeling contented that their daughter is happy with her husband..in this one week naina's maa tried her level best to teach her cooking but thanks to her great sasuma and even greatest husband her mom failed miserably…so the moral of story is naina still doesn't know C of cooking…

On Monday…

Raj has taken off from of his work….occasion??? "ARYAN'S PARENTS MEET"

Raj stretched on bed lazily…

Raj[checking the time]- oh its just 7a.m??? parents meet to 12 baje hai…usse pehle kya karunga???what a wastage of time..

Naina who was sleeping besides him gave him a hard punch on his arm after hearing this…

Raj-ohhh…what was that for???vo bhi itni subah subah???have you gone mad???

Naina[still with her eyes closed]-don't you dare call me mad…aur agar ghar par rehna itna hi time waste lagta hai to kal se ghar aane ki koi zaroorat nahin hai…

Raj-main to bas aise hi..

Naina-safaai nahin maangi maine aapse…sab pata hai mujhe…mushkil se ek chuti li hai usmein bhi kal se mera dimaag kharaab kar diya…ghar pe kya karunga, ghar pe kya karunga???

Raj-but that's true na…

Naina[angrily]-you know what???? People like you doesn't deserve a holiday…do whatever you feel like and stop your self talk….you are disturbing me…

Raj[sighed]-yes mam….

After 20 minutes..

Raj was completely bored and naina was in deep sleep…

Raj[murmering]-kya din aa gaye hain….kahan kahaaniyaan suni thi ki prince aata hai aur apni sleeping beauty ko kiss karke jagaata hai..aur yahan meri princess ko dekho…don't disturb me bol ke aaram se so rahi hai..

Raj went close to her with a thought of irritating her..

Raj[in mind]-no…I can't do this…I should let her sleep..must be tired…

Raj[after some more thought]-but I should also not waste this precious time..after all I don't get this chance everyday…

Raj then took a flower from a vase and started tracing her face ..

Naina made a cute face and turned to other side..

Raj smiled seeing her innocent move..he started tracing her neck this time …naina tried blocking it with her hand but raj changed the position of flower everytime she tried to catch hold of the thing which was disturbing her like anything….

Raj was having gala time seeing all her cute expressions…finally when naina couldn't take in anymore she woke up with a start…

Naina looked angrily at raj…

Naina-what were you doing??

Raj-well… I was trying to do something useful on this undeserving holiday of mine..

Naina-by disturbing me????

Raj-nope..by loving you….

Naina-I don't need this kind of love…keep it with yourself..

Raj-actually pyar itna zyada hai ki mere tak rehta hi nahin hai…my love finds you somehow..so you see its not my fault..

Naina[making a face]-raj…..please subah subah aisi line mat bolo..i can't handle such big lines in the morning…and I am sleepy [she said this like a baby who is just on the verge of crying]

Raj immediately pulled her into a hug…and made her lie down down with her head on his chest..

Raj[kissed her hair]-I am sorry love…you can sleep now..i won't disturb you now…

Naina held him tight and kissed him on his chest and drifted to sleep again..

Raj[in mind]- u'll make me mad naina…I can't believe I m falling in love with you all the very more every single second …

In the car..

Aryan was sitting quitely in naina's lap … raj was driving but was observing aryan's every expression…

Aryan[ praying in his mind]- oh god!!! Please chachu ko shaant rakhna…itni saari complaints sun ke to chachu paka mujhe punish karenge…kitna accha hua tha jab last week parents- teachers meet postpone ho gayi thi…kaash aaj bhi aisa kuch ho jaaye….school mein flood aa jaaye…par chachu ko to swimming aati hai…no no kaash abhi traffic jam ho jaaye aur hamaare school jaane se pehle hi meet over ho jaaye…please god please…

Raj-stop praying aryan…nothing's gonna help you today…

Aryan[nervously]-maine kab pray kiya????

Raj-I know you very well…

Naina-stop scaring him raj…

Raj-arre main kahan usse daraa raha hun..

Naina[imitating him]-I know you very well..

Aryan giggled at this…

Aryan[thinking]-ye accha hai…chachu ko sirf chachi hi chup karwa sakti hain…hmm kuch sochna padega..

aryan's school

they reached the school on time much to aryan's irritation…

they had to meet 3 of his teachers…

teacher no.1- aryan's class teacher [age-38]

teacher-oh mr. shekhwat…good that you are here..i was looking forward to have a word with you about your boy..

raj[sighed]-yes mrs. Patel…so what about his progress report??

Teacher-progress??? I am sorry to say to is no progress at all…he is so difficult to handle in the first place…always upto some mischief…school bag mein books ki jagah par comics nikalti hain..lunch box mein kabhi cockroaches to kabhi frogs…he disturbs the discipline of the whole class…

Raj[strictly]-aryan is that true??

In reponse aryan hid behind naina who was listening to the teacher with a bored expression on her face…

Naina- I'll talk to him later…anything else mrs.patel????

Mrs.patel[sarcastically]-oh there is much more miss….

Naina-mrs.shekhawat…

Mrs.patel-oh sorry…mrs.shekhawat…ya as I was saying he is one difficult child… paani peene ke liye bhejo to pata nahin kahan gum ho jaata hai…

Naina-then you must provide water for kids in the classroom only…

Raj-naina…

Naina-no I was just suggesting…I mean they all are small kids..they shouldn't go searching for water everywhere in this big school..don't you think mrs.patel??

Mrs.patel-ahhh..yes..i guess..

Naina-see problem solved…

Raj was sitting with a I-don't-believe-this-you-are-impossible expression on his face…

Naina-and as for your other complaint…vo kya hai na mrs.patel aryan has a problem..he acts difficult with the people who he doesn't like…otherwise at home he is always so very obedient…but you don't worry he'll learn to adjust soon..afterall he is just a kid..i hope you understand…

Mrs.patel[shocked]-yaa..ahh..if you say so…

Naina[smiled from ear to ear]-see it was not this big a problem…now we'll take your leave…

Saying this she held aryan's hand and left the cabin..

Raj[took a deep breath]- thankyou mrs.patel…

Teacher-thanks to you for coming…I see you have lot to handle at home…[pointing at naina and aryan]…

Raj just smiled and left the cabin…inwardly he couldn't help but laugh at poor mrs.patel's plight…he was sure she'll choose to stay away from aryan and his "parents" from now on…otherwise she used to call at home atleast once a month to complain about him…but from now…"no more phone calls".."courtesy-naina"

Teacher no.2

Mrs.kapoor- [age 35]

Teacher- gud to see you mr.shekhawat…i must tell you that I was looking forward to have a word with you about aryan..

Naina[murmered]-issshh….kam se kam dialogue to change kar leti..

Raj gave a warning glare to her while she returned a i-am-so-innocent look to him..

Raj[rolling his eyes at naina]-yes mrs.kapoor…

Teacher- vaise bataane ko to bhut kuch hai but I'll tell you the latest and most common mischief… 3days back he painted on a girl's shirt who was sitting in the front ….and this is not the only time…this has happened before too..

Before raj could say anything naina started her "panga"..

Naina- this has happened before also????

Teacher-yes miss…

Naina-ahh…mrs.shekhawat…

Aryan[murmered]-maine kaha tha na chachi saree pehan kar aao…tabhi aap mummy types lagoge…dekha abhi sabhi aapko miss bol rahe hain..

Raj wanted to laugh aloud at this but controlled somehow…

Naina-ahh so I was saying that if this has happened before also you should have informed us..i mean it's your duty to inform the parents if something like this happens regularly..

Teacher-ahh..miss..

Naina[irritated]-mrsss…..ssshekhaawat..

Teacher-ya sorry mrs.shekhawat..i thought it was not important to inform the parents…

Naina-and now why is it so important suddenly???? Ah let that be…we'll deal with this later at home.. as for your complaint..i think you should increase activity periods of students..soo that they can show their creativity on drawing sheets not on shirts… don't you think soo??i mean they are small kids…

Aryan[in his mind]-clean bold…

Raj[ in his mind]- I have taken leave for this??? I was better off in headquaters…kam se kam wahan koi meri baat to sunta hai..

Teacher-I will surely forward suggestion to the principal mrs.shekhawat..

Naina[showing her 32 teeth]- thankyou so much…it was nice meeting you…lets go aryan…I'll see you other teachers too…

Teacher-what????

Naina-ahh I mean we have to meet them too..thankyou once again..

Outside the room

Raj-naina tum ye kya kar rahi ho???

Naina-kya kiya maine??

Raj-you know what I am talking about…

Naina-no I don't..

Raj-naina…

Naina-offo..aap bhi na…ye teachers ki baaton ko itna seriously lene ki zaroorat nahin hai…I mean teachers ka kaam hi hota hai har baat ko badhaa chadhaa kar bolna..itni si baat hoti nahin ki bas halla macha dete hain…inhein bas apni seniority dikhaane ka shauk hota hai..you should never take them seriously…

Raj[with a raised eyebrow]-really??? Think again..

Naina-haan haan ismein sochne waali kya baat hai…saare teachers ek jaise hi hote hain..

Raj-think again naina…

Naina-kya thin……issh..[in her mind-margayi] ahh mera matlab tha almost aise hi hote hain..not everyone…

Raj[suppressing his smile]-nahin naina..shayad tumhaara tumhaare teachers ke saath experience kuch zyada hi kharaab raha hai….

Naina[gave him a nervous smile]-nahin..mera matlab tha ki…

Raj-no naina I can understand…but don't worry I have a solution for this and I'll make sure that tumhaari ye opinion change ho jaaye "teachers" ke baare mein after I take a special class tonight especially for you..[he ended with a wink]

Naina blushed having understood his hidden meaning..

Aryan-main bhi aaunga class mein..

Naina was embarrased even more at this…

Raj[smiled]-no aryan-that class is just for grown ups..children are not allowed..

Aryan[making a face]-ok….koi baat nahin main chachi se baad mein seekh lunga..

Raj laughed at this while naina gave raj a murderous look..

Naina-raj stop laughing aur aryan chalo…where is your last teacher's cabin?

Then aryan showed her the way and naina practically ran to her cabin leaving a laughing raj behind..

Teacher no.3

Miss.riya [age-26]

Miss riya smiled as if she is meeting her long lost friend…

Riya-ohh hii captain..

Raj[nervously]-ahh hello..miss riya..

Naina[antenna were already on alert]

Naina[in raj's ear]- wow..naam bhi yaad hai…miss riya..not bad…

Raj could sense danger all around him..

Riya-so how are you captain..

Raj-I am fine thankyou..ahh vo aryan.

Riya-oh him…he is a wonderful child..always so quiet and obedient…I guess he has taken after you..

Raj's eyes popped out of its sockets…

Raj[in his mind]-ye marwaayegi aaj mujhe…naina will eat me raw…jhooth bolo par itna nahin ki saamne wale ki jaan par bann aaye…

Riya-so when did you come back?? I guess you had your posting in ambala…

Naina[murmered]- oh ye bhi pata hai…aapne wahan 3 saal mein kya khaaya kya peeya…kitni baar brush kiya..kaunsa shampoo use kiya ye sab nahin pata isse???pooch kar dekho…bi**h..

Raj[shocked at her outburst]-naina..behave…

Naina[gave him an angry glare]- abhi bataati hun..

Naina-so miss riya???aap kab se yahan job kar rahi hain??

Riya[noticing naina for the first time]-ahh you miss???

Naina[smiling]-ahh again…well I guess he forgot to introduce me..won't you introduce me raj [she asked batting her eyelashes]

Raj[shook his head]-ofcourse..miss riya..this is naina..my wife..

Riya-whhhattt?????

Aryan[singing slowly]-zor ka jhatka haaye zoron se laga…haaye laga..

Naina laughed at this while raj looked away to stop himself from laughing..

Riya[still in shock]-you are married??

Raj-yes miss.riya…

Naina-you guys seem to know each other very well..raj why didn't you invited miss.riya on our wedding??

Raj gave her a stop-it look..

Naina-anyways….miss.riya has no complaints against aryan…soo I guess we should leave now…chalein???

naina-thankyou miss riya..

Riya- ahh.my pleasure..

Naina took raj's hand and pulled him outside her cabin whereas on the other hand miss.riya looked as if she has been left with no reason to live….

Raj-naina mera haath kheenchna band karo..i am not running anywhere,..

Naina[sarcastically]-as if I'll let you run…

Raj-naina..

Naina-stop repeating my name…

raj-but..

aryan-offo bas karo aap dono…I am hungry..pehle mujhe kuch khilaao baad mein jhagda karna aap dono…

raj-abhi yahan kya milega?

Aryan-chachu school mein canteen hoti hai…I am going there…aap dono lad kar aa jaana…but please zyada time mat lena kyunki paise to aap ko hi dene hai…

Saying this he ran towards the canteen and had chocolates…this was the first time raj didn't scolded him on this parents meet day…all thanks to his dearest chachi…so aryan took the full liberty to celebrate his success..

There raj and naina..

Raj-ab mujhse kyun gussa ho?

Naina-main kahan gussa hun??

Raj-to ye tumhaara pyar hai??itna khatarnaak?

Naina-aur aapka pyaar???jahan jagah jagah par speed breakers aa jaate hain??pehle vo aapki kaamini mili thi aur ab ye miss.riyaa…aage pata nahin kaun kaun dekhne ko milegi…

Raj[shocked]-hadd hai ismein meri kya galti..

Naina[pinching his cheeks]-olle nahin nahin..ye sab to khud hi aapke peeche pad jaati hain..haina????duniya mein ek aap hi to bache ho baaki sab ladke to himalaya parbat par meditation ke liye chale gaye hain haina????

Raj-naina stop it..

Naina-no you stop it..aap mujhe ek baat samjhaao…aisa baar baar aapke saath hi kyun hota hai..why?

Raj-how would I know?

Naina-oh nahin pata?? Koi baat nahin main batati hun…ye sab aapki smile ki vajah se hota hai..

Raj[confused]-what?smile?

Naina-jee haan…ye jo aap har kisi ko dekh kar smile pass kar dete ho na ye sab ussi ka nateeja hai….pata hai kya asar hota hai aapke smile karne se ladkiyon par..kahabardaar aaj ke baad kisi bhi ladki ko dekhkar smile kiya to..

Raj smiled at this and pulled her closer-acha??? Baaki sab ko chodo…mujhe ye bataao…main tumhein bhi to dekh kar smile kiya karta tha..to kya iska matlab mere smile karne se tum par bhi kuch asar hota tha..

Naina[blushed]-hmm..

Raj-hmm???kitna asar hota tha?

Naina-itna asar hota tha ki aaj main cadet singh se mrs.shekhawat bann gayi hun..all because of you smile…

both laughed at this and hugged each other feeling blessedwith so much of love in their life..

the end..

finally i managed to finsh this part...but i thing i wanted to tell you guys...i reallly feel that i am writing all crap now..i mean its goiing nowhere.. so if you guys feel the same...please feel free to tell me...it will only help me...

till then take care

love you all

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Posted: 13 years ago
it was indeed a veryyy cute part...loved it
Edited by tina_1234 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome, beautiful part
loved it
loved raj -naina moments
loved their conversation
loved the parents meetings
naina ne toh chutti kar dia saare teachers ke
poor miss ria
and poor raj , kaha phas gaya but loved their love, so cute raj-naina
aryan saved thanks to his chachi naina.
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
😆 😆 now dat was a surprising UD 😆😆😆. i thot u 4got abt FF 😆😆😆...
good to have Rajveer back 😍...

poor Rajveer 😆😆 ghar pe bore ho raha hai 😆😆😆...on other hand people crave for holidays from work 😆😆😆

aryan poor boy 😆😆... bechara 😆😆... like all kids scared from parent's meet 😆😆 but he has saviour in Naina 😆😆😆...

Rajveer😳😳 i disagree with Naina's first opinion😛..😆😆... saare teachers ek jaise nahi hote 😉😆...there is no1 like you 😍 would love to have teacher like you 😳😳😳

Riya 😆😆😆... god save you from Naina darling 😆😆😆... just remember she is also a trained officer like her husband 😆😆😆...

🤣 jealous are u Naina 😆😆😆... your husband has so many admirers😆😆😆... now its your husband's fault...who told him to be so handsome & chaming 😍... cute 😍

hope to have more regular UDs 😳😳😊😊

continue soon ASAP 😊😊



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Posted: 13 years ago

Hi Dear

Update was really very cute and sweet😃😃
Poor Raj is getting so bored while is wife is busy sleeping.😆😆 seriously 1 holiday mila usme bhi sone ki jagah kya kare ka naara laga raha hai Raj and this made Naina angry😆😆😆
He tries to wake her but she seems to b quite sleepy.😉😆
Aryan is really worried that his teachers will complain abt him and Raj will definetely scold him. Raj knows him too well.😆😆
Naina is really too much.When teachers were complaining abt Aryan instead of scolding him she was giving stupid advices to them. Raj was just giving her I dont believe this look.😲😲!!!
Naina shud think twice before speaking infront of Raj coz now he knows how to make her blush just by his words.😉😳😆😆 Raj ki night class ki baat sunkar Naina to wahan se bhaag hi gayi.😆😆😳
Last teacher was definetely flirting with Raj and that made Naina too jealous.😡
Aryan was enjoying all this bantering..😃😃
Raj and Naina seems to b quite enjoying their married life.😊
Pls continue soon
Bye
Edited by suhana.dixit - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update...
did u finish this ff?...
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Posted: 13 years ago
great part
i love this fic because while reading every part i have a big smile on my face and this shows how RN would have been if the show still continued
so dont stop but still i want to see other cadets too especially Aalekh
and Naina to be a little bit mature just a little
plz continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hiee...🤗

loved the update 😃😃😃
raj and naina ka morning scean was soo gud👏👏👏
and parents meet was awesome poor raj kitni
halat kharab 😆😕ho gayi uski aur naina ka gussa😡😡😡
but raj ne bhi naina ko kitne pyar se mana liya😳😳😳

nice updat
con.t soon

love
ayushi..⭐️
Edited by sainiayshi14 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome part
so Naina's parents left happily and Naina still don't know how to cook
Parent-Teacher day awesome...
Raj ko kuch bolne hi nahi diya Naina ne aur sare problem khud solve kar diye...
Riya is in shock to know Raj is married ab ye to hona hi tha...
continue soon...

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