NEW MAYUR.KISMAT KE KHEL part6/pg 40 (26/2) - Page 5

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Posted: 15 years ago
#41
Hi Kulsum.
Nice cs..post the part soon. 😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
#42
heyyy dear,
nice CS
continue soon
thanks for PM.

love
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Posted: 15 years ago
#43
aww... d concept is cool...
congos 4 ur new ff dear...
luvd d title also...
thnx 4 d pm...
luv u lots..
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Posted: 15 years ago
#44
fantastic CS...
cant wait 4 d update..
pls update soon...
thnx 4 d pm..
luv u lots...
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Posted: 15 years ago
#45
Nice concept n CS
Lets c how stry progresses
Update soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#46
heyyy kulsum
nice cs
continue soon
n thanx for pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
#47

cs is so rocking

i am in love with all the characters

especially mayank and nupur

i love this ff already

looking forward to the first part

continue soon

luv

mahima

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Posted: 15 years ago
#48
hey i loved your concept!!
your FF is gonna rock dear!!
really nice idea
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Posted: 15 years ago
#49
hey
great concept
do add me for the pm list
n congrats for the new ff
pooja
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Posted: 15 years ago
#50
PART 1
A lady in whoz age was between 35-40yrs was washing the cloth....her eyes was searching 4 someone n she was calling someone continuesly..

Lata.:nupur...nupur....kahan hai tu...zara yeh kapde sukha ke aja....are yeh ladki pata nahi kahan reh gayi...didi ne toh use laad karke sar pe chada rakha hai....pata nahi iss ladki ka kya hoga...?,...nupur....{ek aur baar apna gala phaad k us ladki ko bulati hai..}
N:are maasi aap itna chilla kyun rahi hai..?
L:kahan thi tu itni dair se bula rahi hun aur tuh hai k puch rahi hai chilla kyun rahi ho...
N:woh maasi maa k saath kamre ki setting kar rahi thi..{remember k nupur refers shilpa aunty as maa.}
L:woh haan aaj itne saalaun baad mayank beta apni padhai poori karke jo araha hai....tayyari toh karni hi hai is ghar ka iklota waaris jo hai.
N:haan maasi aaj mayank bhai arahe haina...mein b toh do saal se yahan sirf un ka naam sun rahi hun aaj dekh bhi paungi...(she said very excitedly)akhir mein b toh jaan paungi k woh kaise hai....
Both were talking about mayank then.
S:nupur beta zara yahan aana.
N:ji maa abhi aayi....maasi aapne mujhe kyun bulaya tha?
L:kapde sukhane ke liye par ab tuh didi k paas chali jaana mein sukha loongi.
N:theek hai maasi.
Nupur went to shilpa aunty's room.
N:maa aap ne bulaya mujhe..
S:haan beta yeh kapde kal mein ne tumhare liye laye the jab mein mayank ke liye khareedari karne gayi thi.
N:par maa mein yeh...
S:par var kuch nahi yeh ek maa ki taraf se beti k liye tohfa samajh kar rakh lena...(shilpa saw tears in nupur's eyes she went forward n hugged nupur)

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L:nupur yeh tere haath mein kya hai?
N:yeh kapde maa ne mere liye khareede hai....
L:nupur mein ne tujhe kitni baar kahah ke didi ke tohfoun ko mat lena.
S:lata yeh tum kya kehrahi ho?
L:haan didi aap logoun ne hum par bahut ehsaan kiye hai in sab cheezaun ki kya zarurat hai...
S:kaisi baatien kar rahi ho? Nupur meri beti ki tarah hai..kya ek maa apni beti k liye aisa nahi kar sakti kya.....then mayank dad also joined them.
Md:are maheelaun ki kaisi nishist chal rahi hai...humein toh zorun ki bhuk lagi hai bhai...aap log baad mein apni meeting puri kijye ga...ab chalo khana khate hai.
N:haan papa mein abhi khana lagati hun....nupur runs towards d kitchen....seeing nupur both mm n md smiled at each other....
Md:are shilpa mayu ki flight toh 3 baje ki hai aur ab 2 baj rahe hai chalo jaldi se lunch k baad airport chalte hai.
S:haan theek hai.
Both went 4 lunch.

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Haey frndz
i have updated 1st part.....i know this update is too short n not gud...but in d next there wil b mayank's entry & mayur meet...so read it n plzz do comment.

Luv
*kulsum*
Edited by kulsumd - 15 years ago

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