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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: mayadika11

awesome...
superb....
wonderful...
fabulous.......
rocking upd.
loved it.......
thanx for the pm........

thanx dear
for sch a sweet comment
will update soon keep readingggggggggggg
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: dolly18

i read it will reply in detail soon pakkka

re
*edited*
god sanu u r a rockstar
seriously
yar itni mystery meri to na
bas kya bataun mm dieing to read next part
by god sanu u r the best
mera poor sammy poor poor samyyyyyyy
n that doc oh god
n yaar mayu kisi uar k saath oh goddd

awwwwwwwwwww thanx dolly for such a sweet n beauti full comment
my update is on a way dear😉
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hi guys here comes my update
i hope u all like it
plz leave ur precious comments...!!!!!!!
lov u sushi n dolly
here comes my update for u guys
n ofcource for simi too..!!!!!🤗
n guys Ramadan Mubarak to all my IF friends..!!!!!!
may god bless u all🤗
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"An Unknown Mistake"
Part 4

M:hello gauri

G:mayank tum kahan tha tumhara phone bhi nahi lag raha tha

Tumna mujhe subha call kyun nahi kiya aura b tak ghar kyun nahi aye

I smsed u last night saying it is imp thing we have to do

Did u forgot it or what..????????

She shouted on her nerves

Mayank just smiled

M:relax gauri relax

Im fine mera mobile ki battery down ho gayi thi isiliye phone off ho gaya

Zaruri meeting thi isiliye phone bagair charge kiye office aa gaya

Aur ghar main abhi ata hoon

Is he came..???????

G:nope not still but woh jaldi ajayega u better be here soon'

Oh shit aa gaya'.

Accha jaan ok bye

M:accha woh ate hi main jaan ho gaya thodi dair pehla toh main badmash tha, nikama tha joh tumhari baat nahi maan raha tha

G:mayank meri iss situation ka fayda math uthao'..

Ok lov u bye'.

Ok bye ghar aao batati hoon tumhara byeeee

N she cutted the call

N mayank smiled widely thinking of gauri n her LOVE..!!!!!!

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*flashback*

Gunjan pov

Gunjan was sleeping peacefully when she got thirsty

N she looked at side to see sam sleeping peacefully

Awwwwwwwww he looks sop beautifull while sleeping

She bent down n kissed on sam forehead

She took the jug but it was empty

G:hmm neecha kitchen main hoga paani lets get some water sam ko bhi pyaas lag sakti hain raat ko

She got up slowly n came out of room n got into kitchen

N went upto fridge n opened it n took a bottle n closed

N she stood shock there for a sec

"yeh nahi ho sakta yeh mera wahan hain yup ofcource im dreaming "

She pinched herseld "ouch'"

"khol kar dekhun ki nahi'. Yeh'.. kholti hoon"

She slowly went upto fridge n opened the door to find this

She shouted n immediately back off

G:shit

n she banged fridge door

she ran from there as she was about to get out of kitchen door a nail price throught her hand causing a scarch to come on it torning her blue nighty which was on the door

as she passed through the door very nearly in fear it touched her skin'

she did not care about the pain which was causing her due to nail

she ran n started climbing the stairs

but the stairs was just not got over instead it started looking like to her

that she is on elevator

she was just trying hard to get on the end of the stair case

the steps r not overing

she just looked at side way to find a shadow n she got scared

she turn at her back to find no one but she turned again to see at wall to find ghost shadow n the shadow smiled

gunji got more scared

she started running again

nnnnnnnnnnnnnn her leg slipped n she shouted

G:SAMRAT'.!!!!!!

She got up on bed to find herself alone

She was SHOCK'

Is she was DREAMING..?????????

She loookedat her side to findno one

Just than sam came out of wash room

S:uth gayi tum chalo breakfast ka liya bhabhi kab sa hamain breakfast ka liye bula rahi hain

Main neecha hoon fresh ho kar aa jao

Sam looked at her to find her in still state

"kya hua chashmish"

She gulped a bit

G:samrat main yahan kaies ayi

S:matlab

He asked confuse

G:main raat ko pani lena gayi thi phir tum'

Sam said cutting her

S:pani lena par jug toh bhara hua hi tha maina khudh raat ko bhara tha

G:aisa kaise ho sakta hain main khudh aur WOH'woh samrat wahan..main'tumhain..kaise

She started crying

Sam ran upto her n sat beside her

S:chashmish clam down

He hugged her side way

"tumna zarur koi bura sapna dekha hoga"

G:nahi samrat maina sach main..woh wahan main

S:chashmish chashmish relax tum so rahi thi mera pass thi tum..tum kahin nahi gayi

G:aisa kase ho sakta hain samrat main

S:shhhhhhhh'.(he said putting a finger on her lips they had n small eye lock)tum SAPNA dekh rahi thi that's it

Ab yeh sab bhool jao n get fresh up soon

Chalo cahlo jao utho

He made her stand straight n gave her towel n her clothes n gunji went into wash room giving a fake smile'.!!!

Gunji pov end

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Down in kitchen at dinning table

Mayur

M:nupur jaldi achar do nah parathe achar ka binaacche nahi lagte

N:chup karo mayank main rotiyan banaon yeh tumhain achar doon uth kar lelo

M:yaar tum badi batamiz biwi ho

N:aur tum kya ho badmash

M:who toh hoon tumhi nah mujhe banaya hain

N:woh kaise

M:kal raatt ko kya hua bhool gayi

She blushed bright red shade

N:haan haan samjh gayi but ismain meri galti nahi hain

M:ofcource tumhari hi hain tum itni KHUBSURAT joh ho

N he came near her n was about to kiss her when they saw sam comminginto kitchen n they got apart mayank sat on dinning table n nupur started making chapattis

Mayur noticed that sam did not said anything n sat quietly without saying anything

As they knowsam never leave such situations ofteasing them at anycost so what happen to him now

There is something sure for really wrong

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In sajan rooms washroom

Gunji washed her face n looked into mirror

She was terrified

She know she was not dreamingbut how can she prove it

No one will beleaveher for sure

But she has to let them know about this

But will they will beleave it

She suddenly noticed her hand in mirror

She looked at it n was shock to see the SCRACH'!!!!!!!

"THE SAME SCARCH WHICH SHE GOT WHILE COMING OUT OF KITCHEN"

If she was reaming what was this..???????

How she came back in room

She got freshen up n went down in kitchen to let others know what happen on the way

Gun pov

Kya yeh sab meri baat manainga..??????

Agar yehlogh mujhe pagal samjhe toh..??????

Nahi yeh sab thik nahi hoga bata na main inhain yeh gharchodh nah kaliya manati hoon

Gunji pov end

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In kitchen

N:samrat kya hua..???????

S:kuch nahi bhabhi

N:bhabhi sa jhoot bolega

S:chashmishbahut pareshaan hain

M:CHASHMISH..?????????

Sam bit his tounge

S:I mean gunjan

M:ohhhhhhhhhhh chashmish '.

He said teasingly

M:bhabhi dekho nah

N:mayank..!!!!!!!

She glaredat him in anger

M:arry maina kya kiya

She was still glaring

M:fine kuchnahi bolta

He kept finger on his lips

N:haan toh kya hua sam

S:bhabhi woh chas'.

Just than gunji entered n sam saw it n kep quite

G:kya hua bolte bolterukh kyun gaye..????????

S:kuch nahi'

M:yeh tumhare barain main kuch bolraha tha humsa

Gunji looked at sam with confusion in her eyes

S:kuch nahi bas yehi ki tum bahut pareshaan ho kisi baat sa..????

G:main thik hoon

S:pakka

G:pakka

N they smiled at each other they where having n eye lock

M:ahem ahem

Sajan broke the eye

S:bhabhi khane main kya bana hain

N:alo ka parathe tujhe bahut pasand hain nah

S:awwwwww bhabhi u r so sweet

N:yeh leh achar aur parathe kha

M:accha ji jab maina achar mangatoh nahi diya devar ko derahi ho not fair

S:bhabhi loves me more than u

Sam said winking at mayank

M:chup kar

Mayank said in anger

Gunji just smiled

G:hmm waise main soch rahi thi humain ab wapis ghar chalna chaiye

S:kyun'.??????? chashmishhum kal hi toh aye hain.!!

He said making a pounting face

D:nahi atleast if wapis nahi jana chate toh yahin morena mainkisi aur ghar main shift ho jaye toh accha hain

M:kyun tumhain yeh ghar pasand nahi..?????

N:I think we should agreewith gunjan

Nupur said thinking her last incident

M:par nupur hum kaise ja sakte hain bhar ka mausam dekho aur yahan 100 kilo meter tak koi hotel nahi milagi humain

G:hum barish main hi travel kar lainga

S:bolna asaan hain chashmish but it is really toughf kyun ki humari car bhi kharab hain

M:yeh sahi bol raha hain sam'hum parson tak chalet hain yahan sa

G:par'

N:I think theyr right gunjan

G:fine

Gunji said unwantedly

*flashback end*

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In jail

S:kash gunjan ki baat hum tab hi maan leta toh aaj yeh sab kuch nahi hota DAM..!!!!!!!

He closed his eyes'

Just than a lawyer passing through sam's jail was shock to see him

Lawyer:SAMRAT SHERGILL aur jail main mujhe unhain batana hoga pehla samratjail main kyun hain pata lagata hoon

N he went to inspector he said what all happen lawyer was shock

He went out of police station n called someone

Inspector:hello

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*flashback*

Sajan in room

Gunjan was still shock n tense n was thinking what to do next..?????

Sam came slowly near her n hugged her

S:merabare main soch rahi ho

Gunji just smiled

G:mera pass tumhare alava kafi zaruri vhijin hain sochna ka liye

S:mujhsa zyada zaruri kya hain..???

G:hain koi kyun baton

She said making free herself

Sam got anger

S:tum mera alava kisi aur ka barain mainnahi soch sakti

G:woh kyun..???????

S:kyun ki..???????????? hmm nahi soch sakti matlab nahi

G:sochgi

S:accha

G:hmm

S:main nahi soch nah dunga

G:woh kaise

She said confuse

Sam hugged her n than broke the hug n started kissing on her neck

Gunji blushed

S:ab bhi soch rahi ho uska baremain

G:hmm

She noddedin positive

Sam kissed on her both checks

S:aur ab

G:yup

Sam started t lean n stop near a inch from her lips

He was about to kiss but stopped n asked

Gunjan was breathing heavly

She just nodded in no

Sam smiled

N kissed her..!!!

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Mayur on terras

They were sitting on swing

N:mayank kafi acchi hawa aa rahi hain nah

M:hmm

N:kya soch rahe ho..?????

M:kuch nahi Mehta dealka bare main soch raha hoon

N:loh mayank shayad tum bhool gaye ho hum honey moon pa aye hain

M:thatsit

He shouted

N:kya..?????????

M:yehi sunna chata tha main

N he kissed nupur lightlyon her lips n took herin his arms

N started going towards their room

Theywere seeing in each other eyes

M:Tu hi haqeeqat khwaab tu
Dariya tu hi pyaas tu
Tu hi dil ki bekarari
Tu sukoon tu sukoon

Sam san the line broking the kiss'


S:Jaoon main ab jab jiss jagah
Paoon main tujhko uss jagah
Saath hoke na ho tu hai
Rubaroo rubaroo

M:Tu humsafar tu humkadam tu humnawah mera
Tu humsafar tu humkadam tu humnawah mera(mayank sang the lines making nupsi lie on bed)

S:Aa tujhe inn baahon mein bhar ke(sam hugged her)
Aur bhi kar loon main kareeb

As mayank was about to kiss nupsi she went on other side of bed rolling

M:Tu juda ho toh lage hai
Aata jaata har pal ajeeb

S:Iss jahaan mein hai aur na hoga
Mujhsa koi bhi khush naseeb(sam sang the linesfeeling extraordinary happy)


M:Tune mujhko dil diya hai
Main hoon tere sabse kareeb(mayur smiled at eachother as nupur hugged mayank)

S:Main hi toh tere dil mein hoon
Main hi toh saanson mein bassoon(he sang this lines after gunji blushed seeing herself in his arms)
Tere dil ki dhadkanon mein
Main hi hoon main hi hoon

M,S: Tu humsafar tu humkadam tu humnawah mera
Tu humsafar tu humkadam tu humnawah mera

Ohhooo'
M:Kab bhala ab ye waqt guzre
Kuch pata chalta hi nahi(mayank was kissing on nupsi neck)

S:Jabse mujhko tu mila hai
Hosh kuch bhi apna nahi(samrat was filling a glass of water to drink seeing gunji n it got over flow gunji sawit n smiled made sam saw it sam got embaress n just ran a hand through his hair)

G:PAGAL


M:Uff ye teri palken ghani si
Chaanv inki hai dilnasheen
Ab kise dar dhoop ka hai
Kyunki hain ye mujhpe bicchi(after kissing nupsi on lips when nupsi opened her eyes mayank sang this lines)

S:Tere bina na saans loon
Tere bina na main jiyun(samrat swirl gunji n tookin his arms n gunj closed her eyes in passion)

M:Tere bina na ek pal bhi
Reh sakoon reh sakoon

M,S:Tu hi haqeeqat khwaab tu
Dariya tu hi pyaas tu
Tu hi dil ki bekarari
Tu sukoon tu sukoon

Tu humsafar tu humkadam tu humnawah mera
Tu humsafar tu humkadam tu humnawah mera
Tu humsafar tu humkadam tu humnawah mera
Tu humsafar tu humkadam tu humnawah mera

Mayank switch off the bed side lamp n ahem ahem

N sajan were still standing in ame position

They had started feeling something for each other which is call LOVE..!!!!!!!!

*flashback end*

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In Mumbai

Mayank reached gauri house n rang the bell

N infront of him standing was SHIV..SHIV KAPOOR..!!!!!

M:hey shiv whats up bro u here not expected..

S:yup gari sa milna aya thaab jaa raha hoon

M:c'mon coffee pee kar jana chal

S:nahi mujhe jana hain

N he went off

M:I think plan is working

G:BINGO'tumhain uska cehra dekhna chaiye tha

Gauri said coming from the house

M:hmm abhi bhi dikh raha hain woh toh

Accha gauri main ab chalta hoon mujhe khanna industry ka project ka kuch documents ghar sa lena hain phir office main bhi kuch kaam hain

G:ohk bye

M:bye

Mayank drove to his house

N enter his house n than went straight into his room

Took the file frpom the cupboard

N was about to exit the room

But stopped

N looked at the pic which is hanging on wall

N just smiled

Than his cell rang he picked it up

M:hello'.WHAT SAMRAT JAIL MAIN HAIN'.......??????????

He turned to pic the pic again it was the pic of sajan mayur..!!!!!!!

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Sorry need to stop here lolz 😆

Now keep guessing what will happen next😉

He hee..😆😆

Loads of love

sanu.😃

Edited by sana_sajan - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
res
i think m first
ok
i was going to pm u today
just wanna say
ramadan mubarik
i dont know when it starts in india
but whenever it starts
may u get maximum blessings of Allah in this month
remember me in ur prayers
n will read asap
Edited by chilluppp - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
awwwwwwwww u r first congo dear🥳 waiting for ur post to get edited😃
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Posted: 15 years ago

edited half of my comment

while edit half of it later
buhut wait krwaya hy tum ny 😊
now its ur turn dear
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: chilluppp

res

i think m first
ok
i was going to pm u today
just wanna say
ramadan mubarik
i dont know when it starts in india
but whenever it starts
may u get maximum blessings of Allah in this month
remember me in ur prayers
n will read asap

hey same here
yahan par kal sa start hain ramadan
Ramdan mubarakkkkkkkk *hugs*
n will surely pray for u too
u too remember me in ur prayers
im really excited for our first roza😃
p.s:i was too thinking t pmu tonight😆
what a co-incidence😉
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: chilluppp

edited half of my comment

while edit half of it later
buhut wait krwaya hy tum ny 😊
now its ur turn dear

awwwwwwww i know
but i was busy
today i bunked coll😆
so here is my update
will be waiting for ur comment
take ur time dear😉
Edited by sana_sajan - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hello Shello And Ramadan Mubarak!!🤗
Awesome Update Yaar....
LOVED THe Flashbacks!!
To GOOD!!
And You Having Many Songs In Your FFs...
Nicee Coz I LIKE It!!!
My Poor Gunji!!
Scratches And ALL!!
Pllzz Cont Soon...
Will WAIT!!😳
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Posted: 15 years ago

why r u so busy

my uni routinue is not at all hectic
but u have always the same prob dear that u r tired, have assignments n all that
either u r an outstanding student of ur class
or ur teachers r doing injustice with u people
what is the reason???
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oh God m really sorry
unconsiously idhar hy comment kar dia
really sorry
next time pm send krn gy
really sorry its accidently happened
Edited by chilluppp - 15 years ago

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