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hi peeps .......after trying my hand at an os ...here comes an ss that is ..a short story from my side .......

well so here's d plot .....
dia n gunjan are the jaan of excel college ....dia smart n gunjan one 2 die for .......
another thing ....here gunjan does not have specs ....n dresses almost like dia
sam n neel ...well here is d twist ...
sam n neel are both morena ke seedhe saadhe ladke ...
sam n neel cum to excel .....sent by their dad ....
both boys' names :
sam's name : Samrateshwar a.k.a Bhavesh
sam looks like this :
sam in background !😉
neel's name : Neeleshwar a.k.a Champu
neel looks like this :
in full rajput type clothes .....only thingy no turban !!!😃
will start my ss update in next post ....scroll down below
thnx n regs,
neeraja

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Page Nos. For Updates

Part 1(a) : pg 1
Part 1 (b) : pg 1
Part 2 : pg 1
Part 3 (a) : pg 1
Part 3(b) : pg 1
Part 3(c) : pg 2
Part 4 : pg 3
Part 5 : pg 5
*reserved*
regs,
neeraja😉
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Update PM List for Sajan Diel SS :

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regs,
neeraja😃
Edited by devilofkindness - 15 years ago
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ok here , after this brief description let me begin ......
Part 1(a)
In Morena :
SND : sam n neel's dad
SND : arrey ladkon .....kabhi toh ladkon ki tarah behave kiya karo .....ladkiyon ki tarah rote hi rehte ho
SND : aur haan bhavesh ( sam is called bhavesh by relatives n frndzz in morena ) , apne bhai champu ka khayaal rakhna mat bhoolna .....
sam : theek hai bauji ......bambai ki choti c chhat ke neeche hum dono apna kaam kar lenge
neel : th..ee..kk hai bauji ...
SND : aur tum bhavesh???
sam : hum theek se rehenge bauji ....aapki izzat mitti mein nahi milayenge
neel : haan bauji bhavesh thik keh raha hai........hum aapki izzat mitti mein nahi milne
denge
SND : shabaash !!! ab baachon jao varna train choot jayegi
sam n neel : (hugging SND n then leaving)
scene shifts to mumbai ....excel college :
dia : heyy you ....cum here n complete my work or else ....
gunjan : heyy deeds ...why r u hyping it up soo much ?
dia : ginny ( that is wat dia calls gunjan )
gunjan : oh come on deeds ....chodo na use bechara ......chal ..jaa kud bhagg yaha se
dia : ginny ..u dont know ajj kal ke people .....they are soo old fashioned ....
wen dia says dis .....sam n neel arrive at entrance of excel .......
gunjan : i know .....u know wat deeds ....i want in my life ..a cute n charming fellow ....who is always at my ghulami .....
dia : why r u bothering yourself soo much ?? if u ask me ginny .....i dont want 2 marry .....why not lead a sorrow free life ?
announcement ......all those loitering at corridors n canteens move toward ur resp. classes .....principal is on rounds ....
dia : oh godd !!! why do these princies live ??? to keep watch ???
gunjan : chal deeds lets go or else we'll hav 2 face hours of detention ....
sam n neel have come .....to obstruct lives of dia n gunjan ......
dia n gunjan head inside class .....n see that their places hae been occupied ......only 2 seats left n that 2 on opposite sides .......having no choice ....gunjan sits beside sam n dia beside neel
during shukla sir's class (yes guys it is shukla sir's class goin on )
sam : hello ji .....main samraeshwar ...mujhe sab bhavesh kehte hain ...
gunjan paying no attention ....
sam : suniye jii ....zara meri kitaab de sakti hain ? aapke pairon tale hai
gunjan : what ??? wat did u say ....?
sam : jii meri kitaab ....
gunjan : english nahi aati kya😡 ...jaane kahan se aaye ho .....
sam : theek hai jee aap shayad gusse main hai ...main hi le leta hoon 😕😕
meanwhile ....dia n neel r progressing quite well ....
dia : uhh kiske saath baithna pad rahaa hai .....zara iske clothes toh dekho
neel : aapna kuch kaha .....jee myself neeleshwar ....mujhe aap champu bula sakte ho
dia : oh hi boy ...dekho main is sab mein interested nahi hioon samjhe
neel : dekhiye ...gussa hona sehat ke liya aaccha nahi hota
dia : ok ok ....ab bas bhi karo ...hassa doge kya ??😆😆😆😆 well naam kya kaha ?? neelsh...?
neel : nahi nahi ...neeleshwar /
dia : oh too bigg a name ......ab se tum neel ho !
neel : jii ?? kya ....neel ?? thik hai jee 😳😳
here the convo for the day ends between sajan n diel (dia n neel)
some 5 days later........
gunjan is going towards canteen to meet dia ....while sam is going in the opp. direction to library ......both hit each other ......books fron sam's hand fall ......
sam is dreaming about him n gunjan ....
gunjan : heyy u .....sharam nahi aati .....ladki ko tuch karte ho
sam : jee ...maaf ki jeeye ......(he picks up his books)
gunjan : (helps sam in picking up books) heyy hi mera naam gunjan hai ...sorry tumhaari books gir gayi
sam : koi baat nahi jee ....gunjan jee
gunjan : heyy ladke ....(wen sam stands up) tumhaara naam kya hai ?
sam : jee ....samrateshwar .....
gunjan : wat ??? itna bada naam ??
sam : kya kare jee ...aap mujhe bhavesh kehkar pukar sakti hain .....
gunjan : no no mann ......too old fashioned !!
sam : jee ..kya kaha aapne ?
gunjan : aaj se tumhaara naam samrat hoga ....😳
sam : thanku jee .....mera naamkaran karne ke liye ....
then sam walks away ......gunjan goes 2 canteen where is dia is already present
dia : heyy ginny ...maine dekha u were getting too intimate with that morena guy
gunjan :heyy deeds nthin like dat !! well he's a cute guy .....long names but .....
dia .: by long names ..i remember a guy .....neel .....jus like dis one ....
gunjan : they maybe from same place ....well wats ur guy's name deeds ?
dia : my guy ??? u crazy ?? ..well not that bad ...he's neel sweet champ ....tu bata ..tere wale ka kya naam hai ...
gunjan : deeds dont act like a freak !!! he's called samrat .....pretty long name his ..i shortened it .....😉
dia : yaa ginny ....these gaon ke logg ....having sooo beegggg names .......its like studying a subject ....😆
well peeps ....here ends my first part .......more interesting thingys to cum in next ...sooo wait n watch ......
in samrateshwar language .....sabar kaa phal meetha hota hai jee😳😉
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all kinds of comments n criticisms welcome !!!
temme if u want me 2 continue or not ......
regs,
neeraja😊
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Part 1(b)

next day .....
neel is in canteen looking at menu 2 order sumthing ......problem is he does not understand a single word
neel : saand.......yahan saand banate hai ? ajeeb hai jee kuch samajh nahi aa raha
just then dia enters n sees neel confused ....she goes up 2 him
dia : hi neel how r u ? need sum help ?
neel : oh hello dia jii ....aaccha hai aaj aap sukhad hain ....varna main toh ....
dia : what ??
neel : kuch nahi jee ......jee yeh menu hai .....masahari khana banta hai jee yahan ..aap ye kaise khaati hai ?
dia : oh neel ..non veg u mean ? no no ur mistaken ......i'll explain
neel : dia jii .....pata nahi kya mangaoon
dia : sandwiches ...burgers ....pizzas ......what do u want ?
neel : jii main kuch samjha nahi
dia : theek hai ...u leave it 2 me .....(to the counter man ) excuse me .....2 sandwiches please
after sum time d sandwiches arrive
dia : lo ..aa gaye ....khao u'll like it
neel : mmmm .....itna swadisht khaana jii aaj tak nahi chakha
dia : yup i know .....excel canteen is d best
neel : jii manna padega .....hai toh bahut hi aacha
dia : heyy neel .....tum ms. tamanna ke skit mein part le rahe ho na ?
neel : jii ..skeet ....woh kya hai jee ......(after explanation) .....naatak jii .....humne morena mein kitne saare naatak shaili mein bhaag liya hai ...ram leela bhi ki hai jee
dia : oh gr8 phir toh tum isme zaroor part le sakte ho
neel : jii aur aap .....
dia : ah me ?? mujhe ye nahi aata ....
neel : no aap mein yeh khubi hai jee ...aap bhi shamil ho jayiye
dia : okay ...tum itna keh rahe ho toh .....i'll try my best .....
neel : okay jee ...yeh hui na baat .....
dia : tum bhi na ...manane mein gr8 ho .......hats off !!!
then scene shifts to sajan .......
sam is walking thru 2nd floor corridor wen he hears a female voice .....he goes into a room .....deep inside .....it is d music room
gunjan is the one wid d female voice .......sam is carried away into another world hearing her .....
gunjan's singing :
yeh zindagi khole baahen khadi
hawaa yun chali ...dil kahe toh bhi
zaraa saath aaa
kal choti si ....choti yaadon ki gali
pal mein naya ....aisa vaadon ka silsila ....
bheed mein bhi kyun lage ki ....
hum do akele yahaan .....
gunjan is facing a sode ...sam seeing her back
sam : arrey waah jee .....aap gati bhi hain ?
gunjan : oh sam ..rat ..tum ....madad chahiye thi toh mujhe bula lete ....yahaan aane ki kya zaroorat thi
sam : nahi jee yahan se guzar raha tha toh aapki aawaaz sunai padi
gunjan : oh ok ...par tum yeh baat kisiko nahi bataoge ki main gaa rahi thi
sam : gunjan jee ....kyun jee ?
gunjan : dekho samrat plzz ....
sam : jee ...yadi aap aapke hunar ko iss tarah chupa kar baithengi toh aapko aacha na lagegaa
gunjan : thats not the point samrat
sam ; nahi jee ...agar aap apne hunar ko awaaz dengi toh aap hi nahi pure college ko khushi hogi ...ki humare college mein ek sundar gaayika hai
gunjan : par samrat ...meri image ka kya hoga ?
sam : woh jee .....jo ab hai aur bhi mazboot ban jayegi .....aapki hunar aapko aasmaan tale ....suraj ki goud mein khila sakti hai
gunjan : no samrat i cant do this
sam : nahi jee ......aapko yeh karna hoga .....mere liye ....(awww)😳😳😳 .....aapko meri kasam ......aap mujhe samrat kehti hain na .....toh aap mujhe vaada kijeeye ki aap hamaari dosti nibhaayengi ......aur isliye aapko yeh karna hoga .....
gunjan : ok ...tum itna keh rahe ho toh ......
sam : jee ....aaj mere saamne ek kalakar khadi hai ......main jaakar yeh baat ms.tammana koi batakar aata hoon
gunjan : no sam please .....
sam : nahi jee meri khatir .....hum aapki gaayki ko ek surprise event ke roop mein pesh karenge .......sab khush honge .....
gunjan : ok ...nice idea .....
sam : aur haan jee aapki behen dia jee ko bhi yeh baat nahi pata lagni chahiye .....
gunjan : ok samrat maharaj !!! aur kuch ?
sam : nahi jee .....
gunjan : ok itna sab tum karva rahe ho mere se ...u promise me 1 thingy
sam : kya baat hai jee ? ek nahi do promise karungaa .......
gunjan : ok then ......talent parade khatam hone ke baad yeh mein poochoongi tumse ....
sam : aacha jee ....ab main chala .....
gunjan : bye ....samrat .....😳😳😳 main tuhaari rah dekhoongi
At d end of college :
sam n neel are leaving .....gunjan n dia pass by .....
dia : heyy neel .....going home >>>????
neel : haa jii ....
sam : champu .....yeh kaun hai ?
gunjan : hii samrat .......
neel : tu bata ye kaun hai ...(pointing towards gunjan)
dia : im dia ......n she's my sissy ginny
sam : ginny ......gunjan jee ....aapne naam badal liya ?
gunjan : no no samrat ....thats d way deeds calls me ....hi neel ...nice 2 meet u
dia : (to her ginny) u didnt like ur name na so how cum he's calling u gunjan ?
gunjan : deeds ....its okay ....waise bhi ihave 2 get used 2 it now
dia : oh ...ho .......so this is the thing ....😉
gunjan :deeds .........samrat .....mujhe tumse baat karni hai .....akele mein 😳
sam : kya hai jee ....?
gunjan : deeds u go homw i'll b bak in an hour
neel : bhavesh tu aaja ...main chalta hoon
dia : hey ..neel y dont u cum wid me ? i'll drop u home
neel : kya jee ....ok jee .....aa jaana bhavesh ..
neel n dia go in dia's car .......
now there is only sajan 😳😳😳
sam : gunjan jee ...gaana gayengi aap abhi ?
gunjan : haan samrat ..i asked u to wait coz only u know my secret .....chalo
sam ; theek hai jee ......jaisa aap theek samjhe ....
sam n gunjan go to music room ......sam gets 2 cups of coffee 4 both of them ........
gunjan starts rehearsing ....sam is just admiring her .......n has entered d world of dreams n fantasies .......
occasionally gunjan asks him for his comments .......
n sooo goes her practice ......wid sam carefully guarding her secret ....
everytime she goes into rehersal mode ...........
hi peeps so here ends my part 😊........waiting for ur wonderful comments n suggestions ........
plzzz press like button on the if u want me to pm to u wen i update next ......😉
regs,
neeraja😃


Edited by devilofkindness - 15 years ago
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Part 2 :

DIA N NEEL r wid ms.tamanna
ms tamanna : TM
TM : so guyz ....are u ready .....
dia : yes ma'am
neel : jii ....adhyapika jee .....
dia : neel ye lo......tumari lines
TM : ok neel ......u will start .....dia u'll follow suit
neel : ok ma'am
*my note*
it is a historic play .....
based on gupta age
names of ppl changed by me
characters of play .....
1. king chandragupta ( played by neel)
2. princess dhruvswamini ( played by dia )
it is their love story ......of chandragupta and dhruvswamini
*my note ends*
TM : ok ready
diel : yes ma'am
TM : lights camera action !
PD : play dad of dia
play rehersal starts :
dia (character) thinks about her dream man who wud cum n woo her
dia : (to her play dad ) papa ...aaj mera swayamvar hai .....aaj koi mujhe jeetegaa aur aapse dooooorr le jayegaa
PD : aise nahi kehte beta
dia : nahi .....mujhe yahaan see jaana nahi hai
at d swayamvar :
many kings from varous dynasties are lined up .......one of them arrives at last minute .....it is neel in character
as soon as dia in character sees him ....she is captivated by his charisma
neel in character cums .....all kings fail .....PD is very disheartened .....
at last it is neel's (character) turn ......all are astounded seeing his strength ......dia in character is really (in real life) amazed by his mannerisms
PD : arrey waah gupta samrat chandragupt .....aapne saari baaton ko dhyaan mein rakhkar yeh muqaable jeet liya hai .......aapko dhruvswamini mubarakho !!!
neel : (looks at dia ......) jii .....dhruvswamini jaisi apoorva sundari ko paakar main dhanya ho gaya ....
dia : (still cant get her eyes off him)
neel : (to himself as himself ) jee ....dia jee kitni sundar dikh rahi hai sach mein ...dekhkar toh kisi ko bhi muhabbat ho jayegii inse
dia : (to herself as herself) oh my godd !! he's lukin sooo handsome ......not at all like champu .....awwww i am starting to love him .....mannn i dont beleive it .....i love neel !!!
play rehersal ends
TM : heyy guyzz u were awesome .....tum dono ki jodi bahut acchi hai
both dia n neel blush n faces become pink !😳😳😳
diel : thank u ma'am
TM : keep up d gud work !!! juab next scedule hoga i'll summon u both ..now u may leave
dia n neel : ok ma'am
after yhat tam ma'am goes away ....diel are alone in the bb court
dia : heyy neel u were super hottt today .....
neel : haan jii aap bhi bahut aachi dikh rahi thi
after sum time both leave for their resp. homes
in sam n neel's home .....
sam : hi champu ....kaisi thi rehersal ?
neel : kya bataoon yaar ......dia bahut acchhi dikh rahi thi
sam : ohoo ......toh yeh chakkar hai
neel : bhavesh ....had mein rehkar baat kar
sam : main toh hoon jee had mein tumhaara pata nahi
neel : haan yaar ...aajkal bahut acchha lag raha hai sabkuch .....jahan dekhoon uska hi chehra nazar aata hai
sam : toh ....bhabhiji ko kab batane wala hai
neel : bhabhiji ???
sam : champu dekh dia jii ki baat kar raha hoon .....tu bhi jaanta hai
neel : aacha yeh sab chod tu abhi .....tu uss din koi ...ginny se naata jod raha tha tu bata
sam : champu .....ginny ???.....arrey haan gunjan use kya hua >???😕😕
neel : waah bhai .....badi chinta rehti hai uski tumhe ......
sam : chinta .....kya baat kar rahe ho .....dimaag satiyaa gaya hai ?
neel : bhavesh ....bhale hi tujhe chashma lag gaya hai main tumhaari aankein padd sakta hoon
sam : kya bakk rahe ho champu ?
neel : dekh yaar ....saaf dikhayee de raha hai ki tere dil mein uss anjaan ladki ke like kuch hai .....
sam : anjaan ladki 😕.....bhai woh meri dost hai😃
neel : haan haan sab jaanta hoon main😉
so ppl ...here ends my part ........sorry for the short update😛 ......din have much time but i cudnt dishearten u all so this part ........😉
plz press like button if u really liked it ......😃
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neeraja😊




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heyy peeps .....me back wid next part .......sorry for late update ......

Part 3(a) :
sajan are rehearsing in music room in college ........
both are practising the song iktara from movie Wake Up Sid ....
singing begins ......
gunjan :o re manvaa tu toh baavra haiii .......tuhi jaane tu kyaa sochta hai.......
*beats*
tuhi jane tu kyaa sochta hai bavrre kyun dikhaye sapne tu .....sote jagte .........
.........
..............
...........jo barse sapne boond boond .....naynon ko moond moond ......kaise main chaloon dekh na sakoon .......
.......anjaane raste .........
rehersal ends .......
sam : gunjan jee ....aapne bahut achha gaya jee .....bahut badhai ho aapko ......
gunjan : haan thank u .....par tumne bhi toh kamaa.....l .....
sam :(putting finger on her lips) ssshhhhhh .......kisi ko yeh baat na batao jeee .....mere saamne bhi agar aap kahengi toh surprise kharaab ho jayegaa jee .......koi sun lega toh ????
gunjan : ok ok sam .......mera vaada hai tumse ......(awww) .....kuch nahi bolungi ......
sam : yeh theek hai jee ......
gunjan : oh sam .......u stop calling me aap and jee .......main koi maharani thodi hoon ......m a normal citizen ......
sam : oh ....aam aadmi aapka matlab ......
gunjan : phir se aap .......?? (taking the drumsticks n running behind sam to hit him )
sam n gunjan........running behind each other n laughing to the core .........rib-tickling laughter .....hahahhaa
gunjan : ok stop .........freeze ......
sam : freeegee ???
gunjan : oh goddd !!!! freeezeee !!!! not freeegee......(laughing again)
sam : ok ok !!!!!
then they proceed towards the classroom .....shukla sir's class again ....😆
both sit in 1st bench .....u see 1st seat is reserved 4 ms. haughty taughty gunjan ......and anyone whom she prefers to sit with can't b questioned why they are sitting there .....
here the person sitting beside gunjan is .......
yupp .....i know u have got the name in the tip of ur tongue .......
its none other than .........our cute sweet charming and appealing bhavesh .....a.k.a ......samrat !!!!!!
aakhir aur kaun hoga jo gunjan ke binakuch kahe hi uske saath baith jaayegaa......
ok now .....back to class ......
sam n gunjan are sitting on d same bench n are lost in each other's
eyes .........
just then ........like a bomb blast ............sum1's voice sounded ....
shukla sir : SS
SS : vidhyaarthiyonnnnn !!!!!!!!
sam n gunjan just not listening .....too busy wid each other that all is deaf around them ......
just then sia ......gunjan's homework completer .....nudges her from behind .....
sia : arrey ginny ......wat r u upto ?? cant see SS shouting like mad???
gunjan : hmmm .....where am i ???
sia : oh godd !!!! gunjan .........!!!!!(IN FRUSTRATION)
gunjan : siaaa ...how dare u ....u called me gunjan???
sia : we'll see that later deary .......abhi apne aage dekh .....
tabhi sam ki bhi neend see tooti .......
meaning ....he came to his senses .......
sam : jeee .....kyaa hua jee ??
SS : main batata hoon kyaa hua hai😡
n he scolds sam like hell.......gunjan is unable to see the sight .........n she does not even see it is SS she is standing in front of .....
gunjan : Mr. Shhuuuklaaaaaa !!!!!! how dare u ?????? how can u raise ur voice b4 my samrat ?
sia : ginny hosh mein toh haina ??? are u mad???
gunjan : haaan sia........sam is my really close frnd ......no 1 can question him , scold him , or behave badly with him !!!!
anyone who does has to face my anger !!!!!
then SS thinks gunjan is really talking out of her mind and tells sam to take her away n calm her down.......
sam n gunjan go away .....to the canteen ......
wen gunjan can do so much for sam ...uska bhi toh kuch farz banta hai na .......that is why he has done his due......
and has booked a special table .....at the extreme corner of the canteen ......
sam : gunjan .....abhi tum baith jao .....main tumhaare liye kuch khaane ke liye lekar aata hoon .......
gunjan : sam .....plzzz mat jao ....sit here please
sam : ok .....u want to tell sumthing ???
gunjan : im sorry sam 😭😭😭 ....maine aaj aacha nahi kiya
sam : wat happ ??? .....nothing happened okay .....u just relax😉
gunjan : no sam .....just becoz i stared @ u all this u had to listen to ....im really sorry
sam : oh that .....wo toh kuch nahi tha .....that was my mistake too ......im too a dumbo !!!!
gunjan : shhh!!! don't speak ....it was all my fault
sam : no no it is ok .....calm down ....
gunjan : k ......theek hai jeee😃
sam : oh .....ulta chor kotwal ko daante .....ab samjha ......😆😆
gunjan : hhahhaha😆😆😆😆 .........main bhi tumhaare acting kar sakti hoon mister😃😆😃😆😃
after sum time ......sam is dropping gunjan home .....(awww)😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳
gunjan : chalo .....ghar chalte hain
sam : kiske ......?😉
gunjan : oh u prankster .....mere ghar aur kiske ....
sam : mujhe laga tum kahogi mere ghar jaana hai😳
gunjan : kyaa kaha 😳??
sam : ah..ummm kuch nahi ....
gunjan : tum kuch chupa rahe ho ......acchi baat nahi hai .....dekh loongi tumhe
sam : ok ma'am ab kripa karke car mein baithengi ???
gunjan is too impressed my his ways n means to say anything .....she just gets into d car .....partly blushing
sam puts on the FM ..... ..its all quiet ......just d song playing......

jaane tu mera kya hai…
jaane tu mera kya
tha
tu hi mera
har pal…
tu hi har lamha tha…

jaane kaisi kashish hai…
jaane kaisi khalish hai…
kyun ye saansein thami hain…
aankhon mein kyun nami hai…

hai ye dosti humko yakeen tha…
dosti aur kuch bhi nahi tha…
hai ye kaisa dard nayaa sa…
kyun
dil lagta toota toota saaa ......

jaana, dil jaana, kaise maine na jaana…
ke pyaar yahi hai…
ye jaane tu, ya jaane na jaane tu mera kya hai…
jaane tu mera kya tha…
tu hi mera har pal…
tu hi har lamha tha…

jaana, dil jaana, kaise maine na jaana…
ke pyaar yahi hai…
ye jaane tu, ya jaane na…

jaana dil jaana kaise maine na jaana
jaana, dil jaana, kaise tune na jaana…jajye yeh yeh pyaar hi hai…
haan jaane tu, ya jaane .. na…
haan jaane tu, ya jaane .. na......
song ends......
bhushan mansion is just a few feet away ........gunjan has to just step out of the car n go .......but why is she unable to proceed towards her own home ????
gunjan's head is on sam's shoulder .......and sam doesn't know why he does not want to let go .........
ek ajeeb ehsaas hai dil mein ......kyaa hai yeh ??? kyaa samrat aur gunjan is ehsaas ko jaan payenge ???? samajh payenge ??
samrat mein aap logon ko kuch khaas nazar aaya is update mein ??? kyaa badal gaya hai samrat mein .........iska uttar aap log denge ......agar na samajh paaye toh mere next update ka intezaar karna hoga .......
this part will be posted in subparts .....
next part will consist of wholely dia n neel ......
sry peeps for late update ......but my comp has crashed n im doing it from my dad's laptop......so will be able 2 update only wen its free
thnx n regs ,
neeraja😳😃😉
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Posted: 15 years ago
#8

hi peeps,

here comes my next part ....
Part 3(b) :
dia n neel are rehearsing 4 d play in bhushan mansion .....
dia : aapko jab peli baar dekha tab maine aapko apna pati parmesh.........uhhh y is this line not occuring 2 me ???😕😕😕
neel : oh dia .....aise nahi .......mujhe dekho n understand ok ?
dia : fine go on
neel (saying dia's lines) : aapko jab pehli baar dekha tab maine aapko apna pati parmeshwar sweekar liya tha ...... ok this way 😃
dia : ok samjhi ......(saying lines now) ......apna pati sweekar liya tha 😳😳😳(dreaming bout neel) ....tabhi se mann mein ek chain jaag utha hai ......na jaane kab mujhe aap aapke ghar lekar jayenge .....(while she says these lines she is actually thinking bout neel n herself ........)
neel (saying his lines) : haan jii aap jaisi sarvashresht sundari ko apne ghar le jaane ke liye main kitna utavla ho raha hoon yeh mujhse behtar aur koi na jaanta devi jii
(meanwhile he is thinking bout dia n himself and dia is thinking d opposite .......awww😍)
neel n dia are in their cute little dream ..........
dia (2 herself) : heyy neel .....u don't know ......all the emotions of my character are evolved in me rite now ........ i think i have found my prince charming ......😍😍
neel (2 himself) : ohh dia .....tumhe nahi pata ki tumne mujhme wapas vahi jeene ki aas jala di hai .....ab main jeeyoon toh yeh mera nishchay hai ki sirf tumhare saath jeevan bitaoonga ......bas der hai tumse yeh baat kehne ki😳😳😳
just then like a loud fire alarm sounding ......a bigg loud noise cud b heard outside the house ........
then only dia n neel came back 2 their senses ........
dia : oh neel did u hear the noise ???
neel : haan dia ......chalo dekhte hain
dia : arrey .......yahaan toh koi nahi hai
neel : haan dia ......samajh nahi aa raha ......
just then outside the door one cud see lots of bouquets full of red roses ..........one of them had a letter attached
neel : dia yahan aao toh .....tumne phool mangaaye the kya ???
dia : wat ???? phool ??? nahi toh .....😕😕😕 maine toh bas ek flower basket maanga tha .....to decorate the dining hall ....
toh yeh sab ....woh bhi itne saare ?? i have no idea really
neel : ok ....(picks up the letter in one of them) .....see this yahan ek letter hai
dia : wat ??? letter ......i dunno y neel i don't feel good bout these flowers
neel : don't worry dia ...letter kya kehta hai dekhte hain ......
hmmm ....(reading the letter)
dear dia and neel,
this is 4 u my cutiepies .....
mujhe acche se maloom hai ki tum dono bestest friends se bhi badhkar ho isliye tumhaare is so-called-frndship ko ek aur level tak le jaane ke liye maine in phoolon ka intezaam kiya hai.
i hope tum dono is baat ko samjhoge aur apni is frndship ko ek aur bade mukaam par le jaoge.
aap dono ka chaheeta shubchintak.
dia : oh godd !!! ab yeh kaunsi nayi museebat aa gayi ???
neel : dia ...mujhe bhi kuch samajh nahi aa raha .....hamari atoot dosti ko badnaam kaun kar sakta hai ???
(in his mind thinks ......waise jo bhi hai isne sahi kaha hai😳😳)
dia (2 herself) : mann .....i dunno y im feeling good after reading d letter .....whoever has done this is really a wellwisher ......and .....the person knows very well about us too 😳😳) ......thank u god .....ishaara dene ke liye
then both stop dreaming again ........dia is first 2 cum 2 senses .....naturally😆
dia : oh godd neel .....let this be now .......lets go inside n have lunch ...i know u must b terribly hungry ......coz i am too
neel : haan ok ....
they take the bouquets inside and dia is just about to go towards kitchen when ......
ahhhhh.........ouchhhhhh!!!!
neel runs towards dia ......dia has fallen down after hurting herself in nearby shelf ......
neel : diaaaaa .......tumhe lagi toh nahi .....😭😭😭
dia : ouccchhhh .......
neel : yeh dekho.....paaon mein kharoch aa gayi ...main abhi first aid box lekar aata hoon
dia : ooochhhh ......mere room mein hai
neel cums with d box ......
he is applying medicine in dia's leg ....and had carefully bandaged it .....
dia tries to get up but is unable .......
dia : ouccchhh ...neel
neel : see ma'am .....u cant walk in this condition ......im sorry i'll have to carry u
dia just doesnt utter a word ......she is obviously too happy to be in neel's arms ......
both look into each others eyes ......they are unable to do anything else at that moment ........
then eyelock .........a longgggggg eyelock .......
then the leg of dia hurts again to prove as an adchan in the cute romance ........
ouuuccchhhh ......
neel makes dia sit on the chair n also lays the table 4 lunch .....
both start eating but both of them feed each other .....and not themselves ............
(awwwww.......😳😳😳😳)
here ends this part of mine ........
hope all of u enjoyed it ....
im waiting 4 ur comments / criticisms / feedback .......as always ......u know 😳😳
AND
IMP NOTE : i expect everyone whom i have PMed to reply to the update .....share ur view
just pressing the like button will NOT do.
by the way no offence to anyone.😃
once again .....
thnx n regs,
neeraja😃


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Posted: 15 years ago
#9
Welcome to the fan fiction forums for ur ss....now i commented already magar ab Kya likhu....hmmm aap ki ss Bohot hi unique aur achi hai jee.....jaldi continue kijiye....hum wait kar rahe hai
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Posted: 15 years ago
#10

Part 3(c) :

gunjan and dia in bhushan mansion the next night .......
dia : hiee ginny .....u were sleepin rite ??? why did u cum out then ??
gunjan : hi deeds .....bahut din ho gaye tumse baat kiye .....n anyway i wasn't feeling sleepy .....so came out 2 chat with u .....
dia : hmmm .....not feeling sleepy huh ??😉😳😉😳
gunjan : deeds ....don't dare start that again ......
dia : oho ....not feeling sleepy ......kahin uss morena guy ke baare mein toh nahi soch rahi ??
gunjan : deeds .....again i tell u ....his name is not morena guy😡 .....his name is samrat😳😳😳.......did u get it ?? Samrat ......... from next time ....remember to call him samrat ....ok ???
dia : heyyyy wait ok......i don't have any interest in ur guy fine .......and ...is this u ???😕😕😕..
gunjan : heyy deeds ......don't get iritated now ok ......
dia : whatt ?? i and iritation ??
gunjan : ok deeds now calm down .........tell me .....how is ur fellow .....and i din call him morena guy ok so don't jump @ me😆
dia : now u too ginny ....please ....he is neel tujhe pata hai na ....
and he is ... i must say ....a cute personality .....
gunjan : ohoh oho .....deeds .....tum toh mujhe chidhati thi n u now ???
dia : n wat about u lil sissy .....from wen did u adapt ur original name .....???
gunjan : woh toh ......
dia : i'll tell u ...from wen this samrat has entered ur life .....
AND ......
gunjan : deeds .....
dia : wait ...and ......from wen did u start speaking in hindi ??
gunjan : shall i do the same ??? counter question u ??? shud i ask the same to u ???
dia : ginny deary .......i was the one who asked 1st ......if u have forgotten
gunjan : that is not the case deeds😳
dia : well that is precisely the case .....samrat samrat and only samrat ..... is it not the case ???
gunjan : deeds .....sam is not a thing he has a life too 😳😳 so u better be polite while talking about him ok
and about talking in hindi .....he is more comfortable in his language and y not be ??? ......so does that mean that i can't learn a new language ?? and if .....if i learn thru samrat what is the problem ???
dia : ok ....take a breath .....(offers her mint)
gunjan : deeds ....the problem is not in sam ..it is with u ......always misunderstansding people ....
dia : who me ?? uve got the wrong person im afraid .....
gunjan : no deeds .....let us talk it out once n for all ......if i go out with a guy it is a problem ...... so then y don't u officially hang out with neel ???
dia : don't u brong neel into this ok ginny!!!😡
gunjan : achha ......sam can be talked about .....but neel is all ok ??? i don't agree ok !!!!
then a long heated argument follows ......everything gone into blows .....
then finally ....dia n gunjan both go into their resp. rooms ........after their BP rises😆😆
*********************
next morning .......we are on the same location ......bhushan mansion ......
gunjan has already woken up ......she has made the breakfast and has made dia's favourite hot chocolate .....
to make up for the previous night's argument .....
gunjan proceeds towards dia's room with her drink .......
gunjan : deeds ....chalo get up .... we need to go to excel .....get up !
dia : oh ginny ....plzz
gunjan : oh godd ...(removes the blanket from the bed n neatly folds it up) .....cmon deeds .....neel ke baare mein dream karna chodo n get up !!!
dia : ginny ........oh .....really sorry ginny ....here i am ....
gunjan : heyy deeds ....wat happ ??
dia : im toking abt yest. nite dear ......im really sorry .....
gunjan : oh deeds ....sorry toh mujhe hona chahiye .......
dia : oh ok ginny chal varna late ho jayenge .....college ke liye .....
gunjan : haan deeds .....and yes i want u to introduce neel to me ok😊
dia : hmmm ......i'll think over it .......haan ek shart par .....u ask sam to come too😃
gunjan : haan ok ....😆😆 ab chale ....
(both gunjan n dia go into peals of laughter .....u can imagine😆😆😆😆😆)
***************
this is b4 gunjan n dia make their amazing entry into excel .....
scene shifts to canteen ......
sam is going towards canteen thinking about the episode of gunjan singing .....and the surprise tat every1 will see
he of course does not expect neel there ....
and neel ......just the opposite....he does not expect sam to cum to canteen
as u know both are (or a much better phrase ....were) padaaku ladke .....ab ban gaye ......love-stinged guys ......
sam : neel tu ???
neel : tu bata bhai ....tu yahaan kahan chala ???
sam : padhai chod diya ??
neel : yahi sawaal main poochoon toh ???
sam : neel ....please ...
neel : haan haan .....gunjan jii ke baare mein soch raha hai sahi kaha na ??
sam : aur tu yahan aaya hai toh dia jee ke liye na ???
neel : arrey bhavesh ....chup rehe
sam : ahaaa ....sharma gaya .....
neel : kyun ?? gunjan ke baare mein baat ki toh gaal laal ho jaate hai tere
sam : ....oh bhai ....please abhi se tu mujhe bhavesh nahi samrat ke naam se bula
neel : samrat......yeh kaisa naam hai?? haan .....tere bade naam ka shortform hai na .......aur tere batane se pehle bol dun main ......gunjan ne rakha hoga .....
sam : neel .....ueh bhi toh dia ka invention hai na
neel : sun re ....ab yeh sab baaten chod ....kuch khane ke liye order karte hai ......
sam just looks @ the menu when chinu cums with 2 plates of sam n neel's favourite chaat
neel : chinu ....yeh kisne order kiya .....humne ....
just then chinu points to the two girls .....u can guess ...
yup peeps ....gunjan n dia have arrived in the college and both search 4 d boys everywhere and cum to canteen to finally find them there only .......
kaise dekho paasa palat gaya......sab log finally canteen mein aa hi gaye .....
both boys look @ the girls .......both in their own world after seeing their dreamgirls ........and the same situation with the poor girls ......locked in the eyes of their dream men .......
just then chinu breaks it .....the eyelock i mean ....
the girls walk together .....all people in the canteen look @ them .....
they go towards the boys' table ....
girls 2gether : hiee guyzz .....
sam : hi girls ......kaise ho ....
dia : fine samrat ...
gunjan : hiee neel ....
neel : hi dia ...gunjan ...
chinu : arrey aap log ke mel milaap ho gaye ho toh main jaoon ?
gunjan : haan chinu .....byee😉
chinu : chalo ...jaan bachi ...😕😕 (going from there )
dia : haan ...wat did u just say ??
neel : oh dia now calm down ...
sajan : oho oho .....oho oho 😆
dia : hmm .....ok ....now ginny ...this is neel 😳
gunjan : and this is sam.....i mean samrat😳
boys : hiee
sam : ok now ....bhai dekho gunjan dia dono mujhe samrat bulate hai
neel : toh main kya karoon bhavesh ???
girls choke after hearing the word .....
girls : bhaveessshhh ???
sam : haan.....gunjan ...u know na ?? ....phir .....
dia : oh ....toh gunjan ko sab pata rehta hai .....
neel : understand dia ....😉
gunjan : aur deeds tum......tum toh jab dekho neel ki maala japte rehte ho
sam : same here gunjan ...bhai ka bhi yehi haal hai ....(giving her a hi5)
diel : aur tum dono ???? what about u ???
dia : haan ....true ....ginny kab se gunjan ho gayi ??
sam : dia ?? gunjan uska naam hai na ??
gunjan : sam ....i never used to like my name ......but since u started calling me by that name .....it sounded nice ....felt nice ....
neel : sam......mujhe nahi pata tha tumhe itni achhi aur pyaari premika mili hai
sam : shhh ......chup !
dia started laughing @ this ......
dia : chalo.....ab tumhaari fav chaat toh khao ....saari mehnat par paani phir jaayegaa
neel : haan .....yeh toh morena jaisa hi tasty hai ....samrat ...tu bhi chakh le ......
sam : oh bhai .....tumne ......thnxx
gunjan : ab chalo kha lo.....shubh kaam mein deri kaisi ??
khao na .....(feeding sam ....awww😳😳😳😳)
neel : dia ...dekha in dono ko ....
dia : yup neel ....par wat to do ??? we also are somewhat like this only .....
in this manner their milna-julna continued ....and they used to go to each other's houses and have the time of their lifeee ......
ok peeps .....here ends the part ....i know it was small .....
but i hope all of u enjoyed yourself .....😃
wait 4 d next part ...
m thinking of expanding the ss of more than 5 parts ....
so here is d gud news ......
tell me whether u all r ok with the decision or shud i restrict it to 5 parts only ......
waiting 4 all of ur comments / criticisms .....😉
do press like button
regs,
neeraja😃

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