kahi toh hogi woh sajan ff:2.part 20 on page 84 - Page 47

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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey, I just read all the updates for your FF today...and I loved it!
Can't wait to read the next update.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: tamanna_20

Hey, I just read all the updates for your FF today...and I loved it!

Can't wait to read the next update.
Please add me to your pm list😊

thanks for reading my FF.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: aashizin

hey avi really beautiful update after so long time loved song sequence and also mayaur's cute confession now really can't wait for sajan's confession as u took so much time in sajan's confession in this FF like show 😆 so now really can't wait want to know gun's reaction after sam's proposal and thanks for pm


@priya thanks a tone for updating this update 🤗


hey no probs ur welcome aashi. lolz
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Posted: 14 years ago
BHAIIII!!!!!!!!!!!! I FINALLY FINISHED READING EVERYTHING!!!! IT'S AWESOME. aap update kab kar rahe ho? agar aap jaldi update nahi karoge toh i will lead a revolution against u with all ur readers lolz jk but jaldi update karo
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Originally posted by: loveangle_4ever

BHAIIII!!!!!!!!!!!! I FINALLY FINISHED READING EVERYTHING!!!! IT'S AWESOME. aap update kab kar rahe ho? agar aap jaldi update nahi karoge toh i will lead a revolution against u with all ur readers lolz jk but jaldi update karo

will try to continue my story in new year.
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Part 19:

(Here in party sam is looking at every girl….trying to find where is his chashmish….he is so desperate to tell her abt his love for her and want to know her reaction….in whole life he was never scared t tell anything to anyone…but today his heart is beating very fast…and he is practicing his lines for this moment from morning till now…but still he practiced it more than thousand times he is not confident….how he will confess it to her….how will she react to it…will she accept it…kya wo gussa hogi…ya isse koi usaki naya prank samazhegi….but for all the things to happen chashmish shd be thr na)

S: are ye chashmish ab tak kyu nahi ayi.

B: samrat dekho gunjan aa gayi.

S: kaha ??????? (and starts looking at everywhere…at last he finds her…standing at the door with some other person beside her…but his eyes are fixed on her only….his love.)

S: (looking her in white dress)beautiful…just beautiful….aaj tum pari se bhi jyada khubsurat lag rahi ho chashmish....(he takes the red rose from the table and starts going towards gunjan)…aaj mai tumse apne pyar ka izkaar karunga chashmish…aur mai janata hu ki tum bhi muzhse pyar karti ho.

B: (from behind)best of luck dude.

S: thanks benji and he starts moving towards her…but he put his rose behind him…he wanna surprise her….on this valentine day he will propse her…she will get shocked..and sam wanna see tht…he wanna enjoy each and every moment….he is slowly walking towards her…at last her eyes fixed on him…and she smiles and he also smiles….now he is just a hand distance from her....his heart is beating very hard and he is afraid if gunjan hears it.

S: Welcome chashmish…tumne itni der kyu kar di??????

G: wo samrat aaj traffic jam mai phas gayi thi…to der ho gayi….sorry.

S: no problem chashmish…tum aakhir aa hi gayi…muzhe tumse kuch baat karni thi…his grip on rose gets tightened whn he said tht.

G: muzhe bhi tumhe kuch kehna hai samrat.

S: ha bolo chashmsh kya kehna hai????

G: nahi tum pehale bolo tumhe kya kehna hai.

S: nahi chashmish...ladies first…meri baat ke lia puri raat padi hai.

G: nahi samrat tum pehale.

S: nahi chashmish…tum bolo.

G:ok mai batati hu….samrat inse milo…(and she points to a guy in black business suit).

S: (Till now he didn't seen the person beside gunjan…but now he notices him)Who is this Chashmish????? Tumhara koi dusra dost hai…ye achi baat nahi chashmish…mere jaise ache dost ko chodake ab tum ne aur ek dost bana liya.

G: are nahi samrat….tum bhi na….ye sameer hai.

S: hi sameer…glad to meet you….but I didn't get why u are here…and tht also in business suits…its party dude…u can put those suits in home.

G: wo kya hai na…mai sameer ko airport se receive karne gayi thi..isiliye to der ho gayi..and usne zidd ki ki mai use party mai lao…so here he is.

S: ok no problems….magar achanak yaha kaise…koi prob hui kya????

G: wo sameer ko meri bohot yaad aa rahi thi…so he came here.

S: sameer ko tumhari itni yaad kyu aa rahi thi??????? Muzhe kuch samzha nahi…kya sameer tumhara bro hai kya???

G: nahiiiii….he is not my bro.

S: then???? (asking smiling)

G: wo mera mangetar hai…..we both got engaged to each other before I came to Mumbai.Sameer ko bohot jaldi thi shaadi ki…but I was not ready…so humne engagement hi ki hai ab tak..but as soon as mera study khatam ho jayega…humari shaadi ho jayegi.

S: (listening all this his flower falls from his hand…each and every ord of gunjan made many small pieces of his heart…its very hard to imagine condition of sam…he came thr with confidence tht he wil confess his love for gunjan and thought tht she will accept it….but fate took worng turn and all things starts to revolve around here and there…sam is not able to say anything...he put all the pain inside and said)

S:Congrats dude….you are very lucky….to have gunjan as your partner….she is very good girl.

Sameer: thanks samrat…gunjan hamesha tumhari bate karti rehati hai….tumne Mumbai mai uski bohot madad ki hai…and I m happy tht gunjan has a good frend like u to help her support her whn I m not thr.

S: ya.(Still not showing any signs of pain which he is getting whn he is listening to sameers words….i m just frend of chashmish….she didn't love me….if tht is case thn sameer yaha nahi hota….mai hi stupid hu…ussse pagalo ki tarah pyar kiya but ye bhi nahi socha ki wo bhi muzhse pyar karti hai ki nahi….hamesha aise hi socha ki chashmish ke lia mai perfect hu…but chashmish la to Mr .perfect sameer hai…mai nahi.)

G: ha samrat…ab tum batao…tumhe kya kehna tha muzhe.

S: are kuch nahi….itna kuch khaas nahi.

G:are batao na.

S: okay okay…aaj muzhe college ki sabhi ladkiyo ne red roses diye….aaj ka valentine prince hu mai…kaisi lagi news????

G: it's awesome samrat….sab ladkiya tumhari deewani hai….aur iss baat mai koi shak nahi.

S: (In mind)Magar jis ladki ko mai chahata hu wo to mere sath nahi hai chashmish…itni sari ladkiyo ka mai kya karu…jab jisse mai chahata hu wo mere sath kabhi nahi ho sakati.

G: tumne kuch kaha samrat??????

S: nahi to.

(And at the same time announcement is made…all the boys and girls on the dance floor…lets rock the dance floor.)

S: When sam is abt to ask gunjan for dance…sameer asks gunjan for dance and she goes with him smiling to the dance floor and sam is just looking at them.

Both are dancing in the center and here samrat still standing at same place just looking at them….and tears starts coming fom his eyes.

All are enjoying the party but in one corner one soul is sad…he is heartbroken and he is none other but our samrat.

He is at drinks corner and drinking and looking at them…when everyone asks him to sing….he says no but at last he starts singing….looking at them….looking at his love in other guys hand….the love which will not be his is this life time….and he reflects his pain by singing the song…………

(This soulful song reflect sam feelings…and there is no need to explain anything…u all can imagine it.)

(he is moving with drink in his hand and moving around the dance floor…his eyes still fixed on gunjan..and he sings with tears in his eyes…but nobody see it.)

Kaise batayein

Kyun tujhko chahe

Yaara batha na paayein

Baatein dil o ki

Dekho jo baki

Aake tujhe samjhaein

Tu jaane na aaaa..

Tu jaane na

Tu jaane na aaaa..

Tu jaane na

Hmm milke bhi, hum na mile

Tumse na jaane kyun, milo ke,

Hai phasle tumse na jaane kyun

Anjaane, hai silsile

Tum se na jaane kyun, sapne hai

Palko tale tum se na jaane kyunnnnnn…

Kaise batayein

Kyun tujhko chahe

Yaara batha na paayein

aaa…aaa

Baatein dil o ki

Dekho jo baki

Aake tujhe samjhaein

Tu jaane na aaaa..

Tu jaane na

Tu jaane na aaaa..

Tu jaane na

(He is looking outside the window and on the glass there is reflection of gunjan and sam has tears in his eyes which are trying to convey some message )

Nigahon mein dehko

Meri jo hai bas gaya aa

Woh hai milta tumse hubahoo

Ooohhooo..

Jaane teri aankhein

Kiya baatein ki vajah…

Huye tum jo dil ki aarzoo

Tum paas ho ke bhi

Tum aas ho ke bhi

Ehsaas ho ke bhi

Apne nahin aise hai

Hum ko gile

Tumse na jaane kyun, milo ke

Hai phasle tumse na jaane kyun ooonnn….

Tu jaane na aaaa..

Tu jaane na

Tu jaane na aaaa..

Tu jaane na

Ooo jaane na jaane na jaane na

Aaaaaaa aaa… tu jaane na

Khayalon mein lakhon baatein,

Yun toh keh gayaaaa..

Bola kuch na tere saamne

Oooo… huye na begaane bhi

Tum hoke aur ke

Dekho tum na mere hi bane

Aafsos hota hai, dil bhi yeh rotha hai

Sapne sanjotha hai, pagla hua soche ye

Hum the mile tum se na jaane kyun

Milo ke, hai phasle tumse na jaane kyun

Anjaane, hai silsile

Tum se na jaane kyun, sapne hai

Palko tale tum se na jaane kyunnnnnn…

Hooooohh…

Kaise batayein

Kyun tujhko chahe

Yaara batha na paayein

Baatein dil o ki

Dekho jo baki

Aake tujhe samjhaein

Tu jaane na aaaa..

Tu jaane na

Tu jaane na aaaa..

Tu jaane na

Tu jaane naaaa… tu jaane naa

(And as the song ends he goes out of the room)

(outside)

S: (Looking at the sky) Hey dude…Whats this??…jab sab kuch acha ja raha tha to tune ye sab kya kar dala…kya tuzhe meri khushi pasand nahi hai????...muzhe pyar jaisi khubsurat feeling ka ehsaas karvaya and jab mai uss ka izhaar karne gaya toh tune apni googli daalke muzhe clean bold kar diya…..kya mai itna bura hu ki muzhe koi khushi nahi mil sakati?????..pehale tune mere parents ka pyar muzhse china aur ab mera pyar chashmish.

B: Arey dude tu yaha kya kar raha hai…tuzhe to waha gunjan ke sath hona chahiye na…aur wo languor koin hai jo gunjan ke sath hai…uss jagah pe to samrat ko hona chahiye.

S: jisse tu languor keh raha hai wo chashmish ka mangetar hai.

B: KYAAAAAAAAAAA?????

B: ye kaise ho sakata hai????? Kab hua ye??? kaise??????? Are aaj tuzhe aur gunjan ko sath hona chahiye tha naki uss langoor aur gunjan ko…mai ye nahi dekh sakata hu…mai abhi gunjan ko bata deta hu kit u use kitna pyar karta hai.

S: (holding benjis hand whn he is abt to leave)nahi dude…pls aisa mat karna.

B: magar kyu dude???? Mai tuzhe aise dukhi nahi dekh sakata…aur gunjan ko uss langoor ke sath…mai abhi sab misunderstanding ko thik karta hu.

S: nahi….tune nahi dekha…gunan kitn khush thi uss sameer ke sath…mai nahi chahata ki mere vajah se gunajn ko koi bhi takleef ho.

B: magar dude tu samazata kyu nahi…gunjan aur samrat ek dusre ke lia bane hai…tum dono ek dusre ko compliment karte ho….sam maine kabhi tuzhe harte hua nahi dekha…kitni bhi mushkil ho tu hamesha jitata aya hai…pls aisi hare hua solder ki tarah baat mat kar and gunjan ko sach bata de….wo tuzhse pyar karti hai.

S: nahi benji…agar chashmish muzhse pyar karti to muzhe mehsoos hota…uski aakho mai maine apne liye pyar nahi dekha…aur aaj to maine apna pyar kho hi diya hai..ab ye baat batake mai apni gunjan ke sath ki friendship khatre mai nahi dal sakata…chashmish ka lover to nahi ban saka magar uska sabse acha best frend to mai rahunga.

B: magar sam ye galat hai…gunjan tere sath hi achi lagati hai…aur mai tum dono ko alag nahi dekh sakata.

S: benji tuzhe meri kasam….tu aisa kuch bhi nahi karega ki jisse chashmish ko ye pata chale ki mai use pyar karta hu…chashmish bohot hi achi hai…innocent hai…agar use pata chala ki mai use pyar karne laga hu to wo apne aap ko kosane lagegi…tu nahi janata wo meri kitni care karti hai….agar use koi bhi dukh pohocha to muzhe bhi bohot bura lagega.

B: sam abhi hi tune kaha ki wo teri bohot care karti hai…matlab uske dil mai tere lia khaas jagah hai…

S: ha khaas jagah hai…magar as best friend…not her lover…uss jagah sameer hai..mai nahi.

B:urghhhhhhhhhhh…samrat mai tera kya karu…..ek to tu kuch nahi kar raha and tune muzhe kasam deke mere hath bandh diye…magar mai god se pray karunga ki tuzhe aur gunjan ko milawa de.

S: (wiping his tears and smiling)kash teri ye prayer god pehale sun leta…chal ab mai chalata hu…muzhe yaha bohot ghutan ho rahi hai.

B: tu thik to hai na…mai chalu tere sath???????

S: are mai thik hu…bas thode der akele rehna chahata hu…aur tu mere vajah se party mat chod…shayad iss party mai tuzhe tera partner mil jaye...i will be fine..u go and enjoy party.

B: but samrat…tu nahi to muzhe party mai konsa maja ayega…mai bhi chalata hu.

S: nahi dude mai thik hu…aur agar tub hi mere sath sath chala gaya to girls ko koin sambhalega…..to tu yaha rukhega…and thts my order….u consider me as your bro so meri baat nahi manoge.

B: (feeling dejected but still says)ok sam…but you take care.

S: ok bbye.

(and sam leaves…moving on lonely road...thinking of his times with his chashmish…those blissful memories…when there was no one between them…only thm….but he recalls todays incident…his love gunjan with sameer and how she was happy with him…and he falls on his knees and starts crying for his bad fate….and rain starts and its like sky also starts crying with him...he stays there for a time like lifetime...in cold weather getting drenched....feeling nothing...numb.)

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Posted: 14 years ago

yayyyy me first anyways omggg avi bro finally u updated phewwwww i was lyk u not gonna update ur any ff's anyways awwwwwwwwwww so so heartbreaking n sad part awww gunji has a fiance oh nooo poor sammy he was thinking of proposing her n he got dis news poor sammy n den da song sequence so so heartbreaking n benji-sammy talk was so so emotional m feeling so so bad for sammy anyways u beautifully pinned down da emoions in dis update loved it do continue soon now

Edited by Anu_sajan4ever - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
marvelous update...poor samrat cant see him sad....cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey avi happy new year dear 🤗 gosh it was so painful samrat's heartbreak and his pain loved song sequence i hope gun will realize his love for her and thanks for pm do continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice part

thanx for pm

do continue soon

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