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Radhika

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Posted: 15 years ago

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Elooo Avi..🤗😛 How are you? Good?😉😛 Anyway..you re back on forums! Congo Shongo ji! Chalo ab aapke darshan toh honge! 😆 BTW so sorry ki meine tere ko daant diya..galti meri thi..i thnk so tab net dabba ho gaya tha na isliye..but koi nahi ji comment toh aaya na mera..issi baat par naach thoda..dance kar..munna badnaam hua darling tere liye 🤣😆 Lol..mein bhi na!
Anyway..first of all thanks so much for dedicating the part to me 2! Lol not supported you but kind of pestered you..🤣😆😉 hehehe..ab now you r bak for sumtime then we want an upd..okay! Kuch bhi post kar..i wanna see ki sam ka heartbreak kaise hota hai..BTW MJHT is going so awsum these days na! Purana MJHT bak!😃😛
BTW woh waala msg..yuk..bahut hi dimmag chatne waala msg tha..mere paas bhi aaya tha..😕😆 Lol but u used at the very right place..n then dill kyun yeh mera shor kare..wow! Awsum song na..btw guzarish ka trailer..acha hai na..bechara hrithik..hesn't able to do sumthing beczo of that makhhii 🤣😆 Lol..mein kahaan aa gayi..

Btw abhi mere ko apna comment band karna hai..
aaj zyada lamba nahi

BBYe :)
Take Care.

-Radz

Edited by xxiheartmexx - 15 years ago

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Avinash

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Posted: 15 years ago

#402

Originally posted by: xxiheartmexx
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Haw! Gande Avi..You even couldn't tell me ki i haven't read the part and i should read it! Wow..dost ho toh aisa!

Anyway..i'm reading it now n comment bhi edit kar dungi aaj or kal :)

-Radz

lolzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz finally aapko yaad to aya meri ff ki.....:P

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Radhika

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Posted: 15 years ago

#403

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yaad toh aayi yahi shuqr maaniye 🤣

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Avinash

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Posted: 15 years ago

#404

Originally posted by: xxiheartmexx
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yaad toh aayi yahi shuqr maaniye 🤣

lolzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

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Shreya

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Posted: 15 years ago

#405

update soon yaar cant really wait....

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Avinash

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Posted: 15 years ago

#406

Originally posted by: SM_317
update soon yaar cant really wait....

will try to update soon.

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Avinash

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Posted: 15 years ago

#407

@radz:finally u read the part...waise i m back to forums...will try to update atleast one part before i get busy again...waise i didnt seen promo of guzarish...will see it...hmmm dabang ka bohot effect ho gaya hai tuzhpe...hahahahaha...:P

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Priya

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Posted: 14 years ago

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ok guys avi bhai told me post the part for him and here it is. lolz read away and also a little note from him:

(I kno I m updating after long time….but all of u kno I was out of town…so didn't had time…..i tried to update as I got free time….i don't know hows this update…didn't cross checked….dont kno anyone will like it or not….but wjatever u feel…pls comment abt it....and as I had prob with my net…my frend is posting my update.)

PART 18

(the camera focuses in some room...filled with photos of many famous sports persons....there is basketball basket there in one corner...and there is a guitar also....whose room is it???????....u guessed it right...its our sam's room....but what is thr in middle of the room...covered under white cloth??????....is it the gift of samrat to gunjan?????? but what is it???????...oh here comes our hero....SAMRAT...oh he just came out of bathroom..his masculine body wrapped in white towel.......looking very hot....but today his mood is something different...his eyes are full of love...it feels like today is the most beautiful day of his life...but why??????...u kno why???....are yaar u forgot....today is valentine day and sam is gonna propose to gunjan...his love....now he comes to the thing kept in middle of room under cloth and removes it...and oh my god...its portrait of our sweet chashmish....seeing her portrait sam starts blushing and goes behind the portraint to hide his blushing face...agar photo dekhke hi aise haaal hai to jab sach me gunjan ke samne jayega to kya hoga iska......and background music starts)

Lage re lage re lage lage re nainwaa

lage re lage re

Lage re lage re lage lage re nainwaa

lage re lage re

(sam comes in front of portrait and starts singing...looking at eyes of gunjan)

Jab se tere naina mere naino se lage re

Jab se tere naina mere naino se lage re

(goes back and starts dancing and sings)

Tab se deewana hua aa haaa

Sab se begaana hua aa haa

Rab bhi deewana lage re oye oye oye oye

Rab bhi deewana lage re ho oohoohooo

(comes to the portrait and again sings)

Jab se tere naina mere naino se lage re

Tab se Deewana Hua aah haaa

Sab se begaana hua

Rab bhi deewana lage re oye oye oye oye

Rab bhi deewana lage re ho oohoohooo

Jab se tere naina mere naino se lage re

(backgrund music starts)

Tak thak tak dhin dhin tak tha dhin tak dhin

Tak Dhin tak dhin tak tha dhin tak

Deewana yeh to deewana lage re

Deewana yeh to deewana lage re

(sam says bye to portrait and goes to select dress for the beautiful day....he opens his cupboard...looking for the all dresses...throwing them out...checking them out on him...but he is not impressed..thr r loads of cool dresses...but due to tension...he is not able to decide...which dress..gunjan will like....its totally funny to look cool dude of samrat...on whom every dress looks cool...is confused with wht to wear....wow love made our cool dude confused.... :))

(he selects one dress among many and looking at it gets happy of his selection......comes near portrait and sings again)

Hooo jab se mila hai tera ishaara

tab se jagi hai baicheniya.

Hooo jab se mila hai tera ishaara

tab se jagi hai baicheniya.

Jab se hui sargoshiyan

Tab se badhi hai madhossiyan

(he moves his hands on her face...and tries to feel her face...then thinkning abt how stupid he is...goes back and again sings....looking at her face.)

Jab se jude yaara

Tere mere maan ke dhaage re

(now dances couple dance with his selected shirt as his partner...lolz...and sings.)

Tab se deewana hua aah haaa

Sab se begaana hua aah haaa

Rab bhi deewana lage re oye oye oye oye

Rab bhi deewana lage re

Tha dum takta dum takta dum thak dum

Tha dum takta dum takta dum thak dum

(now after getting all set...wore black shirt and black jeans....and white jacket...looking extra sexy....he comes near the portrait....and remembers his time with chashmish...and remembers his fights with chashmish...all the happy moments....and sings again)

Hoooo jab se hui hai tujhse shararat

Tab se gaya hai chain o karar

(remembers one incident when gunjan's dupatta came on sams face bcs of winds when she passed him....tht time he felt something different...but didnt knew it why...but now he knows why he felt different.)

Jab se tera aachal dhala

Tab se koi jadoo chalaa..aaa

Jab se tujhe paaya

Yeh Jiya dhak dhak bhaage re

Tab se deewana Hua aah haaa

Sab se begaana hua aah haa

Rab bhi deewana lage re oye oye oye oye

Rab bhi deewana lage re ho hohhohho

Jab se tere naina mere naino se lage re

(sam is admiring gunjan's portrait....when his cell phone buzzed...he come out of his chashmish land....he takes call)

(it was benji)

B: dude tu kaha hai...party shuru hone vali hai.

S: ha ha mai aa raha hu...waise tune sab tayariya karli na waha??/

B: ha dude....pure ntezaam ho gaye...bas tu jaldi aaja.

S:ok mai abhi ata hu....and disconnects his phone.

(saying to himself and looking to portrait)
chashmish tum ne hi kaha tha na ki mai ye portrait kiski bana raha hu??? tab maine kaha tha ye ek special insan ke liye hai....aur wo special insan tum ho chashmish....and with saying that...he covers the portrait and leaves.

(Reaching the venue)

B: dude tu kaha reh gaya tha...muzhe to tension ho rahi thi

S: ab aa gaya hu na...tu bata sab arrangement ho gayi na???

B:ha sab ho gaya mere baap.....aaj tu gunjan ko propose marne vala hai na?

S: ha yaar...muzhe bohot darr lag raha hai....i hope wo maan jaye.

B: oh the cool dude of college is scared of proposing...dude aise to kabhi nahi
hua...means tuzhe sach me usse pyar ho gaya hai...aur wo kyu nahi manegi....agar tu usse saccha pyar karta hai to wo jarur manegi....you both r perfect for each other....tu tension mat le.

S: ya...magar ye chashmish kaha reh gayi.

B:abe romeo...abhi party shuru hone me bohot time hai...wo itne jaldi nahi ayegi...waise tune mayank ka kam kar diya?

(on this day mayank is also gonna propose to nupur....so he asked our love guru samrat to help him...and our samrat accepted to help him as anything for frends...and he also knows how mayank is feeling as he is going through thes same feeling and loss of confidence)

(here comes mayank...dressed in red T-shirt and black jeans...looking very hot...aaj party me sayank ko dekhke sari ladkiya behodh ho jayegi...lolzzz...both r looking too gud.)

M:sam tune sab tayari kar li hai na???

S: ha dude...tu tension mat le....bas mai jaisa kehta hu waise karte ja....thode der mai diya nupur ko leke aa jayegi...and he tells mayank his plan.

(party started)

B: (calls diya) hey diya tum kaha ho?

D: I m coming benji…thoda to shanty rakho…nupur di ka pata hai na…unhe kitna time lagta hai.

B: ha ha muzhe pata hai…..(in mind…khud ko tayyar hone mai jaise bohot kam time leti hai)
Magar tum log kaha ho ab?

D: hum aa gaye hai…bahar hi hai…tum plan start karo.

(diya sends nupur inside….as nupur comes inside the hall light goes off….everything is dark)

N:ye kya ho gaya….light kaise chali gayi.

(she goes ahead….now she comes in middle…as she comes in middle of hall…spotlight falls o her…blinding her…she wore white dress….with matching red chunari….lookingg elegant.)

As nupur tries to watch else where…a sound comes from the background.

Pichale 4 salo se….hum hamesha ladate rahe hai….humari koi bhi baat zagade se shuru hoti aur zagade pe khatam hoti thi….magar jab bhi uske sath hota hu to apna pan lagata hai…wo nahi hoti to apne aap ko akela pata hu…..usike vajah se maine pehale baar drama kiya….waise khud bohot badi drama queen hai…..gussa to naak pe hamesha rehata hai….magar hamesha dusro ki chinta karti rehati hai…..aur yahi baat muzhe uske bare mai achi lagati hai…maine kabhi bhi pyar me vishawas nahi kiya…hamesha suna ki pyar plan karke nahi hota…wo to bas ho jata hai…aura b mai uss ladki se pyar karne laga hu….aur aaj mai uss ladki se apne pyar ka izzhar karna chahata hu…..and spotlight falls on mayank having red flowers in his hand….now nupur and mayank r in front of each other…thy had an eyelock.

N: (in mind) ye mayank kisse apne dil ki baat batane vala hai…kya usse kisi aur se pyar ho gaya hai…kya wo mere bare mai ye sab keh raha tha….aaj mai bhi apne dil ki baat karne aai hu…magar yaha to mayank kisi aur se hi pyar karta hai…agar ye sach hua…to mai ye dard kaise sahungi….she is feeling very nervous...she wanna kno who is the gorl whom mayank loves…she wanna kno kya mayank sirf usse apna dost hi manata hai.

Mayank starts coming towards nupur….and nupurs heartbeat gets increased with each step of mayank towards her.

N: ye mayank kya kar raha hai?????
After coming in fromt of nupur….mayank falls on his knees and says to nupur.

M: I LOVE U nupur....kya tum mere sath apni zindagi bitana pasand karogi????

N: (cant believe what is happening…got very happy tht she cant even say anything…just staring at mayank.)

M: (as nupur stays silent…he got sad…thinks nupur never loved him) agar tum kisi aur se pyar karti ho to koi baat nahi…I will not force u…waise bhi pyar ka naam chinana nahi hota…agar tum kisi aur se pyar karti ho to mai kabhi tumhe tang nahi karunga….bas yahi chahata hu kit um khush raho…gives her roses and he turns to leave…..he still have confidence that nupur loves him…but cant admit it…so he used her own weapon of emotional blackmailing….it will reveal her love for him for sure.

N: nahi…mai tumse pyar nahi karti.

M: (hearing this turns)kya?? To tum kisse pyar karti ho??????

N: mai to SRK se pyar karti hu….magar wo to mera nahi ho sakta….magar ek aur insane hai jisse mai pyar karti hu.

M: (now hurt bcs of she didn't love him but still asks) koin hai who….mai uss khush kismet se milna chahunga.

N: mai to apne pyare sadu se pyar karti hu…..jo hamesha muzhse ladata rehta
hai…usse library ke alawa kuch aur nahi dikhta….aur jisse bhashan deke muzhe pakana bohot acha lagata hai…..i love tht sadu only….not u….and she smiles.

M: (getting wht she said) oh to aap uss sadu se pyar karti hai…hmmm ok to aap unke sath khush rahiye….hum chalate hai.

N:tum kaha chale?

M: sadu ko congrats kehne…..aur best of luck kehane…tum jaisi sherani jo payi hai usne….uski life to nark ban gayi ab.

N: tumne muzhe kya kaha????? Mai kaha se sherani lagati hu?????? Mai bohot hi innocent si ladki hu…..tum hamesha ke tarah sadu hi ho….tode der ke lia laga tha ki tum insane ho magar tum to sadu ke sadu hi ho.

M: hehehe….aur sadu se hi to tum pyar karti ho….and opens his arms.

N: ha

(and runs and hugs mayank and says)

N: I LOVE U MAYANK…..tum hi mere SRK ho.

And with that lights come up and all the people starts clapping…looking all the people nupur gets embarrassed….and looking nupur like tht mayank has sweet smile and says

M: tum sharmate hui bohot hi achi lagati ho.

N: hatt…ab chalo muzhe date pe leke jaoge ya nahi?????

M: jana jaruri hai…kya hum yahi pe ,aje nahi kar sakate.

N: kya mayank….tum bohot khadus ho.

M: aisa kuch nahi…mai to aise hi majak kar raha tha…sab tayariya ho chuki hai…sirf aap ke ha ka intezaar hai.

N: tumne pehale se hi tayariya kar lit hi…to tumhe pata tha ki ai ha bolungi?????? Agar maine na kaha hota to????

M: hmmm to kisi aur ke sath dinner date pe chala jata….and smiles

N: nahiiiiiii…..chalo yaha se…waise bhi sab hume bohot ghur rahe hai..

M: ok ok.

As mayor leaves mayank quickly gives thanks to sam….sam says best of luck.

S: mayank ka to ho gaya…usse uski nupur mil gayi magar tum kaha ho chashmish???????