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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: shafyyy

this goes for mayank and nupur and armaan and riddhima..

hope.. they understood..
"pal mein hi....mujhko.. mila.. pal naya..
kuch mila...hai.. kuch magar kho. gaya..
kya kahu,,....kya nahi...
lavaz hai..gum kahi..
hosh mein dil.. nahi..
tere aa jaane se..
tere aa jaane se..
NUPUR
pal mein hi....mujhko.. mila.. pal naya..
kuch mila...hai.. kuch magar kho. gaya..n
a jane.. kya hai.. dil ka irada...
thoda sa kam hai..
thosa sa zayeda..
kuch ni hai baki..{MAYANK}
chahega.. dil..
dil ko mili hai....manzil...
tere aa janne.. se
tere aa janne.. se
tere aa janne.. se
pal mein hi....mujhko.. mila.. pal naya..
ek kahawab tera..
ek kahawab mera...
ban sa gya.. ek khawab apna...
hooo...
ankhon se ankhen baaton se baaten..
rahe mil gayi.........rahe...
tere aa jaane.. se
tere aa jaane.. setere aa jaane.. se
kuch mila...hai.. kuch magar kho. gaya..
pal mein hi....mujhko.. mila.. pal naya..
kuch mila...hai.. kuch magar kho. gaya..
kya kahu.. kya nahi......
lavaz hai..gum kahi..
hosh mein dil.. nahi..
tere aa jaane se..
tere aa jaane se..

🤗 Thanksss shaffy, for another lovelyyy song on the situation 😳
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: anuja4mayur

hi ritu.

its a nice update.filmy but funny😆
i love ur way of writing i mean the way u make the post colorful and all😳
do continue soon😊

Thanks alot anuja
n Thanks for reading the whole FF 🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Kajenrsmecxi

HEY HUN! sorrrrrrrrrrrrrry for a very late late comment; been drowning in tests and everything school related!

Firstly can i say; you really made life hard for me ahahaah AS I am a die-hard Kajen fan (and proudy will always be) ahahaaha sooo THANK YOU! for making it soooo god damn difficult for me NOT to want Ammy and Jenny together ahhaaa LOL :) BUT AR comes first no matter what as their Love is soo pure in every form and they shall always remain together as only AR! heehe so saying that I WANT AR AND MAYUR together! come on girl F.A.S.T, they clearly love each other soooooooooo much even though they want to hate each other! Feel sorry for all of them and their situations! I wonder how will Samrat and Siddhart (THANK YOU SOOO MUCH FOR NOT MAKING HIM KARAN WAHI *does a happy dance* I like KW as individual but him with Jenny is a big NO NO ahahaha) will feel when they find out that AR & Mayur are in love vice versa with Jenny and Sanya!... I love the way you write soo simple and amaizingy fun to read (You have a great sense of humor i literally laugh at most of the dialogues Ammy and Nupur give!), like you said the last part was soo filmy and I loved it! both parts were beautifully written and i love your writing style! mmmm i wonder whats armaan got planned... Let us Know sooon!
UPDATE SOOOooooooooooooooooooooooooooOOOOOON!

drowning in tests?? sorry to hear that 😆 acctually me too litreally drowning in exms 😆
Oh Im sorry I dint mean too... Acctually, I like jenny so added her to the story then realised this will sound like Kajen Vs AR... but as i already posted it... could'nt change it..
Thanksss alot for liking it n a special thanks for tolerating the filmy part 😆 n thankssssss for the lambaaa walla comment 🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: cutiedevil1

Comment for chapter 18,19,20,21.

That was soooo cute. It's funny how both rids and nupur het lost. And especially f part where rids punches armaan thinking it's sone random stranger!!! Lol
and the propsaks part was soooo adorable. Rids told armaan she loves. I haven't read after chapter 21 till now but I hope armaan meant it when he said I love u to riddhina. The nupur nd mayank part was cute :) really good chapters.

And I must say the songs u pit are so apt with the situations. Can u pls help me cuz I have no idea which songs to pit in my ff??!!

thankss sooo much, cutedevil... for reading n liking the previous parts Yea, I'll surely help u choose songs for ur FF.. Temme if u need help anytime 😳
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: roshneerakhali

read the whole ff today. only mayur though.i feel so sorry for both of them. life's been really unfair to them. then again life's never fair.
pls pm me when ever you update.

Yups, Life's unfair at times.. bt end mein sab thek bhi ho jaata hai 😉 Thanksss for reading the FF, roshneerakhali 🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago

this song.. i want to dedicate.. to both the jodies.. of this ff....

"lost an lonely....
becoz..you are the only...
one day.close..me..
that.. cant be without you....
hai.. kya ye jo.. tere mere.. darmiyan hai... undekhi.. unsuni... koi dastaan hai...
hai.. kya ye jo.. tere mere.. darmiyan hai... undekhi.. unsuni... koi dastaan hai...
lagne.. lagi.. ab zindgai kahli...hai.. meri....
lagne.. lagi.. har saans bhi kahli...
lost an lonely....
bin tere....bin tere....bin tere....lost an lonely....lost an lonely....
koi khalish hai..havaon.. mein bin tere....
bin tere....bin tere....bin tere....bin tere....
lost an lonely....lost an lonely....
koi khalish hai..havaon.. mein
bin tere.........................................
ajnabee...se hue kyu... pal.. saare...
ki nazar se nazar.... milate..hi nahi.........
ek ghani..tanhayi...cha..rahi......hai,....
manzilen raaston...mein hi gum...hone..lagi.....
ho gayi..unsuni..har...dua... ab meri...
reh gayi.. unkahi... bin tere..
lost an lonely....lost an lonely.....
bin tere....bin tere....bin tere....
koi khalish hai..havaon.. mein bin tere....
bin tere....bin tere....bin tere....
koi khalish hai..havaon.. mein bin tere....
bin tere....bin tere....bin tere....
koi khalish hai..havaon.. mein bin tere....
raah mein roshni..ne hai..kyu...haath choda..
es taraf.shaam..ne kyu.hai... apna..muh moda....
kyu....k...har iss..baar...
ek bereham...si raat..ban..gayi...
hai.. kya ye jo.. tere mere.. darmiyan hai... undekhi.. unsuni... koi dastaan hai...
lagne.. lagi.. ab zindgai kahli...hai.. meri....
lagne.. lagi.. har saans bhi kahli...
lost an lonely....
bin tere....bin tere....bin tere....lost an lonely....lost an lonely....
koi khalish hai..havaon.. mein bin tere....
bin tere....bin tere....bin tere....bin tere....
hai.. kya ye jo.. tere mere.. darmiyan hai... undekhi.. unsuni... koi dastaan hai...
lagne.. lagi.. ab zindgai kahli...hai.. meri....
lagne.. lagi.. har saans bhi kahli...
lost an lonely....
bin tere....bin tere....bin tere....lost an lonely....lost an lonely....
koi khalish hai..havaon.. mein bin tere....
bin tere....bin tere....bin tere....bin tere....
hai.. kya ye jo.. tere mere.. darmiyan hai... undekhi.. unsuni... koi dastaan hai...
lagne.. lagi.. ab zindgai kahli...hai.. meri....
lagne.. lagi.. har saans bhi kahli...
lost an lonely....
bin tere....bin tere....bin tere....lost an lonely....lost an lonely....
koi khalish hai..havaon.. mein bin tere....
bin tere....bin tere....bin tere....bin tere....
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Posted: 14 years ago
Thankss Shaffy for the lovely song for the jodis... suit them perfectly right now 🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
Part 31
@Party

Mayank goes to the bar counter n starts drinking (alcohol) *he doesn't drink usually but as he tensed today so to calm down*
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Ammy: *is walking n thinkinh to himself* "KYA IDEA HAI! Agar main Jenny ko yeh yakeen dila dho ke main uss se nai.. Ridzi se pyaar karta ho tho Jenny mujhe shaadi se pahele divorce de dengi!!! Ammy, u are too good.. let's celebrate your freedom.. 😛" *goes to the bar counter n takes a glass n drinks to celebrate*
@Bar Counter
*Ammy sees a quiet alot drunkish Mayank*
Ammy: bro, you're(Ok?) *goes to ask but remembers they fought n controls himself.. n takes 4/5 shots of tequila n gets drunk too*
Mayank: Enough Ammy *goes to stop him from drinking but remembers they fought n turns, gets up n starts walking but cant walk straight coz drunk. staggering n walking.*

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@Parking Lot
*Somehow, Mayank reaches the parking lot, looses balance n falls on top of his car, goes to open door of car but cant see the key-hole to put in the car-key*

"U cant drive.. you're drunk 😲" He hears a girl's voice from behind

Mayank: Nuppphooor *gives a dizzy smile to himself n turns n sees Nupur behind him standing with both her hands on her waist like a teacher*
Nupur: *pulls the key from his hand* U cant drive, dont be mad, just look at your condition 😲
Mayank: what's wrong with me?? Im FINE!!!!!!!!!!!! 😕 *leaning on car, standing with car's support*
Nupur: I can see that you're fine!! 😡 *looks here n there* u wanna go home?
Mayank: YESSSSSS..please give me my car keys *goes to take key from her but as has no balance, he falls on her*
Nupur: *holds him n makes him stand* u cant stand straight n your gonna drive? NO WAYS! I'll drop u home
Mayank: NOOOO.........*after 1min* OKAY.. come lets go *big grin*
Nupur: *holds his hand n pulls him to the roadside n calls for a cab*

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@Party Area

*Ridzi is searching Nupur in the party area*
Ridzi: *to herself* kaha gaye yeh ladki? Bata ke tho jaana tha.. *She sees Kandy n asks him if he saw Nupur, He tells her he saw Nupur going with Mayank* chale gaye? Without me? Now.. now.. now.. I am all alone!

"MAIN HO NA 😉" She hears a guy's voice from behind n yups, its Ammy
Ammy: Dont fear, I am here.. 😉
Ridzi: That's my only fear 😲
Ammy: I'll drop u home *he is drunk, half shirt out n half in*
Ridzi: U drop yourself home safely, that would be enough.! *starts to walk*
Ammy: *holds her hand n pulls her* I said.. I WILL DROP U HOME.. ek bechari ladki ko akele raat mein..akele ghar kaise jaane de sakhta ho?
Ridzi: I am not bechari *trying to leave herself from Ammy's clutches*
Ammy: I SAID MAIN TUMHE CHODONGA
Ridzi: chod tho diya mujhe
Ammy: I mean ghar chodunga.. chalo n I want no further agguements *pulls her hand n takes her forcefully with him*
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@Parking Lot
Mayank: I want my car!!! Not cab!!!
Nupur: Mayank, maine kaha na ke u cant drive, your are drunk
Mayank: but I want my car *stubborn*
Nupur: *Thinks: But I dunno driving..?*
Mayank: I dunno.. I want my car.. Thats all
Nupur: *shocked at his stubborn-Ammyish-behaviour*
*She goes n puts Mayank in his car, sits n stats driving his car, thou she doesn't know driving theek se/well*
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@Parking Lot
*A lil while later*
*Ammy starts his bike, comes n stops front of Ridzi*
Ammy: aaja meri gadi mein beth jaa.. 😎
Ridzi: 😲 Noo.. mujhe marna nai hai 😲 n nor your gonna ride this bike. 😳 You are drunk.. police ne dekh liya..pakad ke jail mein dal denge
Ammy: I am not drunk *stands straight n shows her* SEE..
Ridzi: OK.. but I dont wanna risk my life coming with u on this bike.. u go alone
Ammy: OK.. I'll go alone *starts the bike*
Ridzi: OMG *goes quickly n sits behind him on bike as cant let him go alone coz she still loves him so mare tho mare bhi tho sath sath*
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@Mayank's Car – Road/Street
Nupur: *is driving, nervously* OMG, bass ghar theek se poch jaye.. *driving less.. praying more*
Mayank: Speed.. I want more speed *holds the steering wheel*
Nupur: 😲 Nooooooooooo Mayank, what are u doing.. leave.. leave varna accident ho jayenga
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@Ammy's Bike – Road/Street
*Ridzi is sitting behind Ammy on bike, while Ammy is ridding the bike in full speed, She holds him tightly*
Ridzi: OMG, ghar pochenge ke hospital?
Ammy: Jaha bhi jayenge, sath jayenge..jeyenge sath aur marenge bhi sath ! dont fear.. I am here!
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@Mayank's Car
*Traffic Jam*
Nupur: *stops car, breaths* just lil more Nupur, phir ghar pooch jayenge..
Mayank: why are u so nervous? You are just driving a car n not in a war zone? Chill!!!
*A Cop knocks on car window, Nupur rolls down the car window glass*
Cop: Car Papers? License?
Mayank: *shows papers n his license*
Cop: The girl is driving.. not u..! Show me your license *says to Nupur*
Nupur: My License 😕😲 !! (Thinks: Mujhe driving nai aati..license kaha se hoga ) Mayank ka License ya mera license kya farak padta hai? Hehehe *fake scared laugh*
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@Ammy's Bike
*A cop stops Ammy's bike too*
Ammy: yes sir *salutes the cop*
Cop: *notices something is wrong with this guy. Comes near n smells alcohol* U ARE DRUNK n DRIVING?
Ridzi: 😲 No No Sir.. he is not drunk 😕
Ammy: No, I think I am drunk! 🤔
Ridzi: *gets angry on him* Yeh ladka
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@Police Station
*The cop takes Mayank-Nupur to police-station as Nupur was driving without a driving license*
Nupur: All because of u *tells Mayank*
Mayank: U never told me.. u dint have a licence?
Nupur: But tum hi tho zidd karr rahe theeeee? 😡
Mayank: Officer *to cop* Trust me, She has no licence but she drives really well.. better than me, really safely!!!
Cop: Rules are Rules, Mr Sharma..
*@ That Time, another Jr cop enters with Ammy-Ridzi*
Jr Cop: Sir, he was drunk n ridding the bike
*Mayank-Nupur turn n see Ridzi-Ammy*
All four: 😲 *on seeing each other*

Mayank: Ammy? *bangs his head*
Ridzi: Nupur di, aap yaha kaise? 😕
Nupur: Chai.. Coffee..peene aayi thi 😛 *sarcastically*
Ammy: Yaha? Achi chai coffee nai milti!! Cafe coffee day is best place for coffee.. u shoud have asked me, Nupsy!! 😕
Mayank: SHUT UP! *gets irritated* ek se bhad karr ek hai yaha!!!
*All become quiet n look at Mayank, seriously*
Mayank: You are driving without licence *says to Nupur* n one drunk n driving.. *says to Ammy* Greatttttttt! 😡
Sr Cop: Shhh.. whats the commotion here?
Ridzi: nothing sir.. I am really sorry on behalf of Arman.. I promise, he will never do this again
Sr Cop: Quiet! I said Rules are Rules!
*A Jr cop comes n takes Ammy-Nupur n puts them inside the jail-lock-up*
Nupur: Mayank, save me *from inside jail-lock-up*
Ammy: arre wah!! jail pe jail free.. pahele jenny-wala-jail aur ab real jail.. kya din hai aaj! 😕😡
Mayank: *goes near Nupur* dont worry Nupur, i'll get u out of here.. your here coz of me...
Ammy: Someone get me out too *says loudly for Mayank to hear but doesn't say directly, as unka jagda on hai*
Mayank: Yea, how can i leave u here? *tells Ammy*
Ridzi: *starts crying n comes to Ammy* u are here coz of me.. u were drunk but i was sane.. i should have not let u ride the bike 😭
Ammy: *goes close to her* dont blame yourself.. It was I who dint listen to u.. so i deserve it.. but, i promise when i come out(of jail) I'll always listen to u 😊
Mayank: OH! U'll listen huh?! 😕 *questions sarcastically*
Cop: U both should leave now.. *says to Mayank-Ridzi*
Ammy: Mayank, take care of Ridzi.. she is new here.. kho gaye tho
Ridzi: *surprised by Ammy's words of concern for her*
Mayank: yups! Nupur, take care of yourself.. n of Ammy too.. I'll get u'll out by morning
Nupur: hmmm... I'll take care of Ammy!
*Mayank-Ridzi go out of police station, Nupur starts crying seeing Mayank going*


(@Inside Jail)
Ammy: Nupsy, dont cry yaar *sits besides of her* I am here..dont fear!
Nupur: Really? U know, this is my first day in US n i met Mayank this morning..n I lost my love in evening n to the end of the day..i am in jail! 😲 WOW!!! *says sarcastically n cries* 😭
Ammy: Must say, quiet an interesting day
Nupur: Ammyyy!! u know i have never been to jail *cries* this is my first time.. 😭
Ammy: Mera bhi first time hai!!! 😎 *says proudly* feels good!!! i used to always dream to be in a jail when i was a kid 😎
Nupur: 😲 u.. used..to ..dream..of being in jail? 😕 ARMAN! 😆 *starts laughing*
Ammy: That's one of my many dreams.. 😉
Nupur: OMG, I wonder what are the other many dreams like? 😕
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@Outside the police stations
*Mayank along with Ridzi go to Sanaya's Dad's House so that he could use his influence n get Nupur-Ammy out But Sanaya's Dad says influence won't help here but he will see what he can do for them..But that's only by morning. Mayank-Ridzi leave n go n sit outside police station, decide to be there till morning*
Ridzi: *cups her face with her hands n starts crying softly*
Mayank: They are alive.. not dead.. so don't have to cry!
Ridzi: Its cause of me 😭
Mayank: stop blaming yourself for Ammy's mistakes!!! 😕 Ammy n Nupur deserve it.. They did a wrong thing by breaking the rules.. They need to learn a lesson so that they don't repeat their mistakes *says in anger*
Ridzi: yea but? *still crying* wo chahe jaisa bhi hai..but I cant see him in trouble
Mayank: u love him alot, right?
Ridzi: yeaa.. *realizes what she just said*
Mayank: Even, i love her alot *accepts as he is in drunk mode*
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@Inside Jail
Ammy: Nupsy, ek baat batao?
Nupur: kya?
Ammy: Mayank really loves u alot!!!
Nupur: me too.. *realizes what she said* No no no!!! So what if he loves me? Ridzi also loves u.. 😕 Reality tho kuch aur hi hai
Ammy: I also actually love Ridhima... means among all the list of girls whom i have dated. If i truly felt something for someone, Its only Ridhima *accepts as drunk*
Nupur: OH! N what about Jenny?
Ammy: Jenny is my bestest bestie!!! But right now, dont take her name.. It reminds me that I am engaged!!! She n your bad Mayank trapped me!
Nupur: 😲 hey.. he is not my Mayank..? nor is he bad!!!! 😳
Ammy: he is bad..veryyy bad!!!! 😡
Nupur: Shut up, Ammy!!! He is not that bad 😳
Ammy: I know he is not bad.. he is just horrible.. !!!! 😡
Nupur: No, he is the most good n genuine guy I have ever seen
Ammy: Then why did u leave him?
Nupur: *stunned. No ans*
Ammy: Ok listen, I want to ask you 1 important question..
Nupur: poocho? *angry*
Ammy: jab tum Ridhima ko dekhti ho..background mein music bajne lagti hai?
Nupur: Huh? 😕 *thinks carefully* Nai tho! 🤔
Ammy: like see jab Ridhima samne se chalke aate hai *starts imagining ridzi in front of him* tho background mein suraj hua madam.. chand jalne laga..asman yeh haye kyun pegalne laga music sunaye deta hai?
Nupur: 😲 haan haan.. music bajti hai..
Ammy: Hai na??
Nupur Haan but not when i see Ridzi.. when i see Mayank tab background mein
suraj hua madam..kya yeh mera pahela pahela pyaar hai bajta hai??
Ammy: *laughs!! He makes Nupur stand up n both sing "suraj hua madam" n start dancing with each other n cheer themselves up*
*That time, Mayank-Ridzi along with Sanaya's Dad come inside police station n see Nupur-Ammy dancing n singing inside the jail-lock-up*
Mayank: Original Pieces! 😕 *says, raising his eyebrow looking at Nupur-Ammy*
Ammy: Yaha hum unke phikar karr rahe hai n what are they doing.. partying in jail? 😕
Mayank: That's what Nupur n Ammy is all about *holds his head*
Ridzi: Nupurr Dii.. *calls out to her*
Nupur: *sees Ridzi n stops dancing* Ridziii.. 😛 tumhe patha hai jab Ammy tumhe dekhta hai..tho uske background*before she completes Ammy holds her mouth*
Ammy: shhhhhhhhhhh.. its secret b/w us! If u tell her..I will tell Mayank what u told me..
Nupur: what i told u?
Ammy: yehi ke jab tum Mayank ko dekhti ho tho tumhe kya kya hota hai?
Mayank: kya kya hota hai??? *asks Ammy, curiously*
Ridzi: Nupur di, tum kuch keh rahe thi.. Arman ke background mein kya.. *asks nupur, curiously*
Nupur: Kuch Nai Ridzi! N Ammy, 😲 u wont do that.. you are not gonna tell Mayank anything what i told u 😳
Ammy: I wont tell! I am angry with Mayank.. We are not talking! 😳 n i am angry with Ridhima too!!!!!! 😳
Ridzi: Kyun? 😕
Ammy: Agar Italy mein tum mujhe kehte ke "Arman, dont leave me..main tumare bina marr jaogi" may be things would be different today 😳
Ridzi: main tumare bina marr jaogi *repeats da hindi dailouge Ammy said..meaning it but then..* main aisa kahogii??? 😡 u may be dreaming..!!! 😕
Nupur: haw Ridzi.. how mean! I also dnt wanna talk to u n Mayank se tho pahele se meri katti chal rahe hai! 😳
Ridzi: Nupur di, aap thek ho na?? *wonders to herself: why is Nupur-Ammy behaving in such a strange/ajeeb way 😕*
Mayank: They are drunk.. I am sure
Ridzi: or may be.. its the jail-effect.. jail mein jaane ka sadma
Nupur: GOOOO *says angrily to Mayank-Ridzi*
Ammy: LEAVE US ALONE! *says to Mayank-Ridzi*
Mayank: have u both lost it? We came here to get u out from here.. n u'll are telling us to get out?
Ridzi: Papa ka ghar hai jo telling us to get out? puri raat Mayank aur maine yaha waha jaa ke kiss kiss se request karrke.. finally tum dhono ko yaha se nikalne ka intezam kiya aur
Mayank: Yes right.. u'll should be thanking us..
*A Cop comes n opens the lock-up n gets Ridzi-Mayank out n warns them not to break rules again otherwise coming out for such charges is not easy.. but they are lucky they are out!*
*All go outside the police station*

Nupur: thank u *says to Mayank with teary eyes as she remembers he is engaged* main STRANGERS *stresses on word* ko thank u bolti ho..
Mayank: You are always welcome, Nupur!
Ammy: Ridhima.. *walks towards her but she moves away/turns away* I am sorry
Ridzi: Its too late for sorry, Ammy
Mayank: Its 3am..u'll should go home.. *to Ridzi*
Ridzi: Yaaa.. i think so too.. chalo Nupur Di *Nupur-Ridzi start to go*
Ammy: *follows Nupur-Ridzi*
Mayank: Ammy, where are u going?
Ammy: I dont wanna stay with u.. I'll stay with Nupur.. *grumpily*
Mayank: Are u still Drunk? *pulls Ammy's hand n takes him with him in a cab*
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@Ammy-Mayank's Flat
*Guys reach home, both not talking to each other. Mayank holds Ammy n reaches him till his bed as Ammy is still shaky-drunkish*
Mayank: Good Night
Ammy: Bro...
Mayank: what?
Ammy: I am sorry
Mayank: *smiles n pets Ammy's hair* It's ok..umm.. I am sorry too
Ammy: *hugs Mayank n Mayank pats his back* raha Jenny ke baat..usko main handle karr lunga
Mayank: *raises his eyebrow* Ammy, she is a nice girl.. n its time that u *forget it! to explain Ammy anything is like banging your head on a wall 😕*
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@Ridzi-Nupur's Hostel Room
*Girls reach their room*
Nupur: *falls flat on bed*
Ridzi: are u ok?
Nupur: hmmmmmmmmmmmmm *hidding her face in a pillow. She is acctually feeling bad about Mayank's engagement*
Ridzi: Ok.. I'll change n come.. *Gives Nupur some alone time n goes to bathroom to take a shower. Starts crying thinking of Ammy's engagement*
*Nupur hears knocking sound.. tak-tak-tak. She gets up n goes n opens door but no-one is at the door 😕*
Nupur: kaun tha? *asks herself! Closes door n goes on bed then hears knocking sound again on her window* 😲 *gets started* whose there??? *goes to window n opens but again no one is there at the window too*
Ridzi: *comes out from bathroom* Nupur di, kya hua.. why are u looking so scared?
Nupur: Scared? Nai tho!! Someone was knocking our door then window..but when i opened.. no one was there.. 😕
Rdzi: Someone may be playing a prank on us...as we are new here!
Nupur: ya..may be..? sab humare hi peche kyun pade hai.. patha nai?? 😕
Ridzi: 😆 *laughs. That time, someone again knocks both door n window* 😕 arre.. kaun hai???
Nupur: *holds Ridzi's hand* Nai, dont open.. may be some psycho
Ridzi: or bhoots *cranky face*
Nupur: shut up.. u open the door.. i'll open the window n lets see kaun hai 😕
Ridzi: ya.. varna it will play on our mind whole night
*Nupur goes to the window n Ridzi goes to the door.. both open*
Nupur: *looks out of window but no one is there then she sees a guy getting down thru the pipes* 😲
Ridzi: *looks out of the door and finds no one.. but when she goes out, she sees a guy running down the stairs* 😲

Both shut the door n window n come back to each other "Koi hai waha" Both say together while Ridzi points at door n Nupur points to window*
Ridzi: woh dhono tho nai? *biting her nails*
Nupur: u mean Mayank n Ammy argggggggggg..! 😡 *assumes its them!!!! N goes n sleeps on bed* wohi hoge.. badhmash company.. chal soo jaa
Ridzi: *goes n sleeps side of Nupur* Good night! *switches off the lights*
*After 2mins, they hear weird crying kinda sound.. then they hear hard footsteps on the floor above them*
Nupur: OMG 😲 yeh hindi film chal rahe hai ya koi serial?
Ridzi: 😲 I dunno... lagta hai someone is trying to scare us
Nupur: tryin too? He has already scared us 😲
Ridzi: Yaaa.. lets go to our neighbour n ask if she can also hear or only we can hear all this? 😕
Nupur: 😕 wo African ladki? NOOOOO..wo in ghost se bhi zyaadha daravni hai.. *thinks for 1 min..n the weird sounds conitine* OK..lets ask her

*both girls rush to African girl's door n knock*
African girl: who is it?
Nupur-Ridzi: we are your neighbours!
African gal: *opens her door n stares at Nupur-Ridzi*
Nupur: before u bang the door on our faces just tell us can u hear these weird sounds that we can hear?
Ridzi: Please Ans us n then u can bang the door on our face
African gal: Yes!!! whats so new about the sounds? i hear them everyday.. 😕
Nupur: nah nah..we mean the crying sound?
Ridzi: n foot banging sound?
African gal: Yes.. I know! This place is haunted.. 2 guys had committed suicide from your room window. It's said that their spirits come n knock the door n window.. but never open your door or window at that time.. just that.. otherwise u are safe!
Ridzi-Nupur: 😲 😲
African gal: anything more questions?? *bangs the door*

Nupur: Tune suna jo maine suna.. jo usne kaha 😲
Ridzi : maine suna jo tune suna..jo usne kaha 😲
Nupur : 2 boys ???????? 😲
Ridzi : Spiritssssss ???????? 😲
Nupur : windowwwwww ??????? 😕
Ridzi : doooorrr ???? 😕
Nupur : Ridziiiiiiii ????
Ridzi : Nupur diiiiiii ??????
*Both run to their room n lock themselves in n hold each others hand n fall on the bed*
Nupur: Ghosts, Mayank-Ammy n Musibat/troubles..
Ridzi: ..humare peeche peeche kyun aati hai? 😕
Nupur: I think sab mile hue hai.. 😡
Ridzi: I know 😡
*both dont sleep all night.. sitting in one place like statues...
@ morning 6am, time to go to college so they get ready n leave*
To be cont....

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Posted: 14 years ago
nice update waiting for their reunion
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update di
loved it loadz
hehhe armaan and napur in jail
cant wait 4 da next part
con soon
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