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Part 28

:::All are fast asleep, Morning 8am:::

@Mayank's Room

*Nupur slightly wakes up but doesn't open her eyes at once.. Is still thinking that she is at her house in India, turns n holds Mayank*

Nupur: *after 2mins: touches Mayank's eyes, nose, lips n thinks "Whats this..😕 I mean who is this?😕" wonders to herself*

Mayank: *opens his eyes n wondering "whose hand is this?? Not mine? then whose?😕"*

*Nupur opens her eyes n realizes where she is..but she has not seen mayank yet n vice versa*

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@Ammy's Room

*Ridzi is fast asleep too, her hair fly's on Ammy's face due to which Ammy sneezes "hachuuu! Shanaya (his dog).. my baby.. good morning" puts his leg on top of Ridzi*

Ridzi: aa *yells*

Ammy: kaha aao?? .. say bow bow bow bow!!! Shanaya.. yeh tumko kya ho gaya? *touching Ridzi's hands, stomach, nose etc*

Ridzi: *hits his hand n gets up*

~ ~ ~ ~ ~

@Mayank's Room

*Mayank n Nupur get up with a start n look at each other*
Nupur: 😲 *shocked!!! Doesn't know if it's a dream or what?*

Mayank: 😲 *confused!!! Whether he is still drunk n seeing Nupur or is it real?*

*For 2mins starring at each other, not shocked, just confused*

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@Ammy's Room

Ridzi: Ahhhhhhhhhhhhh 😲 *yells seeing Ammy beside her*

Ammy: Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh 😲 *yells more loudly than her seeing Ridzi beside him*

*Both looking at each other. Ridzi becomes quiet n closes her ears hearing Ammy yelling*

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@Mayank's Room

*Mayank-Nupur snap out of their confusion hearing Ammy yelling*

Nupur: what are u doing here? *shouts at Mayank*

Mayank: what-i-am-doing-here? *still dazzed* wait a sec, lemme check *jumps across a few pillows, reaches her n looks into her eyes*

Nupur: *goes lil backward looking in his eyes still confused*..what are u lookin at?

Mayank: *kisses her tightly on her cheeks*

Nupur: 😲😲😲

Mayank: Man!!! U are real.. I am not drunk! *he kissed her just to confirm whether she is a dream or reality*

Nupur: *fully dazzed after the unexpected kiss from Mayank 😲*

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@Ammy's Room

Ammy: I am drunk or dreaming? How can I dream of u?? Tum mere sapno mein pink saari pehen ke aati ho.. where is your pink saari?? No!! U are not real.. 😕

Ridzi: I am real n I have burnt off that pink saari long ago *says angrily cum sadly cum dazzedly*

Ammy: u are not real.. I can prove that

Ridzi: I am..real!!!

Ammy: u are not.. i'll show u.. see *slaps her on her cheeks......tishh*.. Saw.. u are not..*changes his tone as he realizes she is real n not a dream* i mean u are real? 😲

*Ridzi gets up immediately from his bed in full anger*

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Ridzi-Nupur together say to Ammy-Mayank: HOW DARE U???????? 😡😡

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@Mayank's Room

Nupur: How can u kiss me??? 😲😡

*Mayank kisses her again n shows her how he kissed her 😉*

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@Ammy's Room

Ridzi: how can u Hit me??? 😲😡

Ammy: *hits again* like this.. *big grin*

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All four together: but what are u doing here???

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Mayank: I live here..

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Ammy: Yeh mera ghar hai...

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Nupur: U mean.. u are veeru?

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Ridzi: u are Jai?

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Mayank: Nupur? *still getting hold of his feelings*

Nupur: Mayank? *actually so happy to see him that felt acctual 'life' pumped back to her*

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Ammy: Rid-hima? *happy to see her but doesn't wanna accept*

Ridzi: Arman? *too happy seeing him but still in shock of the 2 slaps*

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@Mayank's Room

Mayank: *composes himself n brings up a serious expression on his face* wait lemme get things in right order! So Jenny..rented u this flat for a night in our absence, right?

Nupur: yea right...

Mayank: Where's my rent? 200$?

Nupur: whattttttt??? 😕😲 *shocked at Mayank's words* u are joking, right? 😕

Mayank: Not at all! This is NewYork! Everything cost money..200$ please 😳

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@Ammy's Room

Ridzi: *dunno what to say or do to Ammy, feels like slapping him back but controls* You!!!!!!! 😡

Ammy: Yups me.. *raisin eyebrow twice*

Ridzi: .. never changed! 😳

Ammy: nor will I ever change! *goes n hugs Ridzi tightly* I missed u, man!!!!!! U missed me? *still hugging her*

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@Mayank's Room

Nupur: 200$ for one night stay?

Mayank: that's the rates going on here

Nupur: u will charge me? Main Nupur ho

Mayank: i charge every STRANGER *stresses on the word* who uses my apartment even for an hour 😳 *says sternly*

Nupur: Finee.. 😳 *opens her purse n takes out 200$ n gives him* here u go.. *walks to the hall*

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@Ammy's Room

Ridzi: Jab mann kiya chod diya jab chaha pakad liya.. jab chaha slap kiya.. jab chaha hug karo? Huh? What u think of yourself?

Ammy: I just think I am "Arman Malik"!! too much na?

Ridzi: Shut up.. 😡

Ammy: Ok I will shut up but just one more hug please *hugs her to irritate her*

Ridzi: Ahhhhhhhhhh *pushes him n walks to the hall*

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@Hall

*Nupur n Ridzi dash into each other n fall on the ground. Mayank-Ammy come in the hall following them*

Mayank: Accident Queen has appeared! Nupur!! Dear, furnitures please be careful!!! *looks at Nupur*

Ridzi: I dont know kyun yeh ladka(Ammy) mere peeche padha hai *complains to Nupur*

Ammy: Main Tumare peche padha ho??? OHHHHH HOOOO....TUM mere peecha karte karte NewYork ah gaye, mere ghar.. aur u are saying I am following u ??? 😕

Nupur: Exactly! U are following us.. U both! Italy bhi ah gaye aur ab yaha bhi ah gaye..

Ammy: Bro, They have no common sense! Please tell them.. They have come to our house..so that means we are not following them n gone to their house?

Mayank: Yeah!!, right..!!!

Nupur: what right haa? We are not following u..We are here for studies!!!!

Mayank: Great but Important thing is..I never knew Ridzi is here too so that means u have to pay me 200$ more.. i meant 200$ per person.. *looking at Ridzi*

Nupur: 😲 *removes 200$ n gives him* 400$ is a bit too much but this is your old nature.. cheat the innocent!! *taunts him*

Mayank: Yea..Right again! Nupur kabhi galath ho sakhte hai?? Nain na *cuts her before she says anything more...* Hi Ridzi.. how u doing?

Ridzi: *confused* I am good, n still alive.. koi aaye ya jaye..*looks at ammy* life goes on! 😳

Ammy: OooooO.. u gals cant answer to the point.. dialogue marne ki kya zarurath! 😕 Hi Nupsy... n btw bro, u dint tell me u are keeping PGs here.. Pagal Guests *looking at Nupur-Ridzi up to down*

Nupur: argggg!!! Chal Ridzi.. iss pagal khane se 🤢 *pulls Ridzi*

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*Nupur n Ridzi run down the steps as if they're really running from 2 mad people*

Nupur: Dekh dekh.. pagal peecha tho nai karr rahe?

Ridzi: Nahiii

*They take a cab. In cab:- Nupur n Ridzi look at each other n start laughing.. expression = 😲😆😲😕😆😲*

Nupur: Kya Kismat hai??? 😕

Ridzi: ghum ghum ke wohi la diya??? 😕

*They become quiet thinking of all that just happened, still soaking it all inside*

Nupur: (Thinks: Mayank was so rude?? Was he not happy seeing me? Why would he be? Main bhi na.. par kya ushe thoda sa bhi farak nai padha mere presence se? He was not even quilty..nothing ? what do I care.. huh!!!)

Ridzi: (Thinks: Arman!!! Duniya idhar se udhar ho jaye.. hum udhar se idhar ah gaye par Arman vaisa ka vaisa hai.. idiot ka idiot!!!)

Nupur: Jenny ko phir se thanks bolna tha na?

Ridzi: "No formalities" *says in Jenny's style*

*Ridzi suddenly remembers Ammy had mentioned about Jenny in Italy, that he wanted to propose her etc*

Nupur: Achi ladki hai na.. Jenny !

Ridzi : Nah, achi hai par bahut modern hai.. Ultra Extra Modern *trying to point out bad points in her..as she is lil jealous*

Nupur: hmmm.. may be.. par Mayank aur Ammy se tho achi hai! Abhi humien jaa ke uss Tiyasha ke bache ko tikane pe laagana hai... Kal Password manng rahi thi na... grrr 😡

Ridzi: Haan.. aur phir kal se College start..

Nupur: Yeah, so we have to get arranging everything today itself!! First, our rehne ka tikana..🤔

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*They reach the students accom n finally get a key to their room. It's a wide stretch of small buildings in a compound. Ridzi n Nupur enter the last corner old building, a little aloof from all buildings*

Ridzi: Ghosh this looks scary...

Nupur: Yea but don't forget, abroad mein bhoot nai hota

Ridzi: Hope ki nai hota.. coz agar hoga tho yaha zarur 2/3 hoge *scared*

Nupur: Hmmmm??? *scared* shut up, Ridzi

*Opens their room door. It makes a lil noise coz opened after long*

Ridzi: he he he *fake scared laugh*

Nupur: Kaun hasa? *jumps with fright* RIDZIIIII!

Ridzi: sorry.. *looks around* Its toooo dirty.. like no one has been here since ages

Nupur: Students yaha aate jaate rehte hai...n that man said na we were last entries so humien yeh last building mila varna entrance ke pas wala building mill jaata

Ridzi: Haan.. entrance wala building acha tha... this is soo isolated corner mein.. aur iss floor pe 3 rooms hi hai..Lets see who are neighbour mates are?...

Nupur: I hope its not Mayank n Ammy *crossing fingers*

Ridzi: Hehehe *laughs n crosses fingers too*

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*Girls knocks their neighbours door*

African gal opens the door: Hey whose it? YES? *looks at Ridzi-Nupur* what u want?

Nupur: Acctually Hi.. I am Nupur

Ridzi: n I am Ridhima

Nupur-Ridzi: we are your..neigb*before they complete the word, African girl bangs the door saying "morons"*

*Nupur n Ridzi look at each other's face*

Nupur: Hi.. I am Nupur.. n I am Ridhima *imitating themselves* why are we advertising ourselves? 😕 Kam se kam nai rakh sakhte!!?? 😕😆

Ridzi: *laughs* yaar, ek neighbour bura hai tho kya.. lets try second door.. 😉

Nupur: Ek insult se tera peth nai bara kya? 😕

Ridzi : *knocks second door but no one opens*

Nupur: dekh its locked.. lagta hai no one stys here.. 😕

Ridzi: Upstairs kaun rehta hai?

Nupur: Its under Construction re

Ridzi: So u mean we stay alone on this floor

Nupur: No yeh African girl hai na

Ridzi: Shhhhh.. Ya.. Only She n We

Nupur: n Ghost.. *bites her nails*

Ridzi: *says suddenly* Mayank n Arman itne bure neighbours nai hote agar hote 🤔

Nupur: NO! We are better off alone.. we got the whole floor for ourselves.. 😛 we can do what we want.. blast the music party etc... aur koi humien kuch nai kahenga

*suddenly loud beats of music start playing from African girl's room, horrible beats which can burst the ears*

Ridzi: Its not gonna be a easy stay for us.. 😒

Nupur: Subha Subha.. Mayank-Ammy ka chera dekh liya.. ho gayi sab ghadbhad samjo.. 😒

Cont in the Below post.. (It was too big so could not fit it in one post.. pls read the next post too)

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Cont from Above..

*Later that day, girls freshen up etc n go out to a mall. Checking out some clothes*

Ridzi: Nupur di, u should try this.. *pointing to a cute jeans mini skirt*

Nupur: No! U know na yaar.. i dont wear all this

Ridzi: par yeh NY hai.. jaisa desh vaise besh.. lets try it for a change

Nupur: umm.. try karne mein koi harz tho nai 😉 but tujhe bhi yeh pehena hoga *gives her a red mini skirt*

Ridzi: Ok lets change 😉

Ridzi: Ab which is our next destination?

Nupur: Khana.. very hungry... koi acha sa restaurant dhond the hai?

*Both girls wear their new dress, kala chasma, high heels aur acha sa cute bag leke.. style mein chalte hai*

Ridzi: Why are people starring at us.. coz we are looking nice or jokers?

Nupur: Obvio hai yaar.. we are looking Garam.. HOT 😛

Ridzi: Hot? cool 😕 wo dekh... 'Royal In'..looks like restaurant.. lets go there

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@Royal In Resturant

*Ammy hogging on some food, a burger biting n shaping it into a heart.. while Mayank having some salads with fork n spoon*

Mayank: Ammy, eat your food..Dont play with it

Ammy: I made a heart

Mayank: Wow.. gr88 job! OK, now lets talk something serious.. I am trying to talk to u since morning but i dunno which world are u in

Ammy: Say Bro

Mayank: Rita Aunty would be coming this weekend.. *seriously talking to Ammy*

Ammy: Rita? *listening less n checkin out girls more*

Mayank: Ammy, are u listening?

Ammy: Ya ya bro.. g we should adopt some girls.. what say?

Mayank: Are u mad? I am telling u our Rita Aunt is coming here n we have to stop all this.. late coming, booze n girls!!!! 😳

Ammy: 😲 whattttt?? RITA AUNTY IS COMING... OH NOOO *holds his cheeks thnking of the slaps he keeps getting from Rita aunty* That means no booze.. no party.. NO GIRLS 😲

Mayank: NO GIRLS!!! 😳

Ammy: Rita aunty ah rahe hai tho bechari girls ka kya kasoor! U hate girls, isn't it? Girls = Allergy for u?

Mayank: Its not like that.. till the time Rita Aunt is here.. We, i mean u need to show some respect? Right? 😕

Ammy: Respect... yeah!! Ok

Mayank: n what u mean i hate girls? I dont hate girls.. I am not some.. u know watever.. I am straight!!! 😳

Ammy: sure????? u dont know how to patao/woo girls..

Mayank: AMMYY! Every girl says that my one look is enough to hypnotize her..

Ammy: ya hypnotize them by your looks then speak up n scare them off.. 😆

Mayank: i am not that bad to girls! 😳

Ammy: Is it?

Mayan: ...if i want/wish...i can be good also!.. U want me to prove...

Ammy: Yo! Here goes your challenge

Mayank: bring it on

Ammy: *looks around n sees two girls at a far distance, their back is facing him, dressed in red mini skirt...whistles lookin at her up to down* I am Coming.. *gets up to go to her*

Mayank: *holds Ammy's collar n pulls him* n the challenge is?

Ammy: Oh yea Challenge is that.. U can see those 2 girls there.. mini skirt.. long legs?

Mayank: I am not blind! Go on 😳

Ammy: Ya so.. u have to patao, charm one of the duo girls n ask her out for a date 😉

Mayank: Okay?

Ammy: n she should agree to go out with u also... n u have to take her out on a date also... n then u have too..

Mayank: stop! *stands up* watch.. i'll teach u how to woo gals..kiddo

Ammy: *big grin* Yo Bro.. Go for it.. btw, u keep one.. n give me one

Mayank: *stares at him n goes to the girls.. walking cooly*

*Duo girls = Ridzi n Nupur (guys can only see their backs n not face) Both are talking to each other*

Ridzi: i dont think waiters are here.. its self service.. i'll get the order n come..till then u catch a table

Nupur: Haan.. theek hai... come soon.. i'll be on terrace.. its good view.. come there Ok..

*Ridzi goes left-direction to get the order n Nupur starts to go right-direction towards the terrace*

Ammy to himself: ops, Mayank ke pochne se pahele hi girls are gone.. one here... one there *looking at the show*

Mayank to himself: Which one should I date? Whichever.. Its just a challenge! *follows the girl who has gone to the terrace.. means Nupur*

Ammy to himself: So Mayank, blue wali ke pas gaya that means red wali is free.. *wears his glares.. full style mein stands n follows the girl who went inside the restaurant... means Ridzi*

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@Restaurant terrace

*Nupur takes a table n sits down*

Mayank: *reaches Blue-wali-Nupur (her back is facing him, yet) Hey, lets go for a date tonight? *Mayank as always likes speaking to the point n not ghuma-phera ke*

Nupur: date? Is anyone talking to me? yeh awaaz kahin tho suna suna sa hai?

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@Inside Restaurant

Ammy: (Thinks: Never get to the point.. thoda ghuma phera ke baat hona chaheye..IDEA..drop her down n then hold her.. oh the old crappy idea but let's try 🤔)

*Ridzi takes order in a tray n starts to come back while Ammy pushes her from behind*

Ridzi: ouchhhh *drops all food n goes to slip on the coke.. when Ammy holds her in his arms according to his plan*

Ammy: No need to say Thanks! *closing his eyes*

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*Nupur turns n sees Mayank*: Both: YOU!

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*Ridzi sees Ammy*: Both: NOT AGAIN!

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@Restaurant Terrace

Nupur: *gets up* Date!!!! With u? NEVERRRRRR.. I have had a very bad experience once

Mayank: who asked u for a date?

Nupur: U.. just asked ME for a DATE

Mayank: coz i had not seen your face at that time..

Nupur: 😲 so u ask any girl for a date without even seeing their face?

Mayank: No.. Ya... No.. *confused for a sec* YA, I ASK ANY GIRL FOR A DATE.. u have any problem? 😕

Nupur: Ya.. No... Ya..*confused* NO, WHY SHOULD I HAVE ANY PROBS? 😕

Mayank: SHHHHHHH! U come with me *holds her hand n pulls her to a corner*

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@Inside Rest

Ridzi: *holds Ammy collar n pulls her self up, supporting herself on his shoulder as she is slipping on the fallen coke* whao.. hold me

Ammy: *holds her tightly*

Ridzi: You 😲😡 leave me

Ammy: *leaves her*

Ridzi: *goes to slip again* arre HOLD ME

Ammy: HOLD LEAVE HOLD LEAVE.. 😕 *lifts her up n takes her away from the slippery portion*

Ridzi: Put me down.. *screams*

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@Rest Terrace

Mayank: Now see, i can take any girl on a date but i want u..*gives her 100$*

Nupur: 😲 u are paying me 100$ for a date? So this is the 'real Mayank' 😕😡

Mayank: u want i'll give u 100$ more but we need to go for a date.. what u say that saying.. yea izzat ka sawaal hai

Nupur: izzat? Kiski? *gives him 100$ back* Look, u pay me millions also na... i dont wanna date u...

Mayank: HELLO? Neither do i wanna date u.. *bangs his hand on table* but i have too n I WILL.. U GET IT? *scary tone*

Nupur: *nods yes..then no...yes.. no...acctually scared seeing his sharp eyes staring at her in that intense way*

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@Inside Rest

Ammy: *puts Ridzi down*

Ridzi: Saara khana gera diya ek tho.. nayi dress karaab bhi karr diya..

Ammy: What crap are u wearing??? 😡 *questions her haq se* I don't like it !!! *Strictly!! Throws his jacket on top of her!! Takes a tissue n starts cleaning her dress, hands etc*

Ridzi: 😲 aaaa..dont touch me..chodo mujhe..chodo mujhe

Ammy: Shhhhh.. chila tho aise rahe hai jaise main tumara rape karr raha ho?

Ridzi: anything is expected from u..

Ammy: Pleaseeeee, Meri bhi koi class hai choicee hai

Ridzi: what u mean.. I am so bad??? *makes sad face*

Ammy: Arre nai yaar... *consoling her* u are just tasteless, disfigured, miss placed piece but your legs are good.. pahele bar itna clearly dekha hai.. n that girl with u.. her legs were also ummmma *kisses his hand*

Ridzi: 😲 grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr 😡 *makes puking face 🤢*

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@Rest Terrace

Mayank: So Tonight, same Restaurant, sharp 9 bajhe, Behind there is a beautiful beach view.. over there.. we will date! 😊 *says cooly*

Nupur: u are dreaming? 😕

Mayank: U are gonna come!!! 😊

Nupur: Go on dream! I am not gonna come 😕😡

Mayank: U'll come..I'll wait for u.. 😉

Nupur: Keep waiting.. Main ab wapis kabhi nahi aaogi 😳

Mayank: Tum zarur aaogi *goes*

Nupur: Bye Mayank!! huh..never come to this restaurant ever again! Ridzi kaha reh gayi?

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@Inside Rest

*Ridzi walking, Ammy goes front of her.. not letting her go.. Ridzi tries to go from side.. but Ammy blocks her way*

Ammy: Hatoo mere raaste se

Ridzi: u are in my raasta

Ammy: Side! *pushes her in side*

Ridzi: ouch.. illmannered.. dont u know how to behave with gals!??

Ammy: I know.. par girl hona chaheye na

Ridzi: *shows herself to him* Girl! *points to herself* U see!!

Ammy: OH *touches her 'back' up to down n down to up. Ridzi's eyes opens widely* aise behave karte hai na with a gurrrl 😉

Ridzi: a..ehewhwd.aghewgda... *talks something inside her mouth..doesn't knwo what to tell this guy*

Ammy: what u said?? 😕 anyways Date?

Ridzi: Main tumare sath date pe jao? Excuse me!!! 😕 tum birth se hi aise ho... besharam? 😕

Ammy: Tum birth se hi aise ho.. bina sune bolna shuro? I was asking u aaj ka date kya hai?

Ridzi: Date? I dunno.. 28th

Ammy: OMG, 28th yaad dilana padenga Mayank ko! Aaj Mayank ki engagement hai.. *says n runs to Mayank*

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*Ammy goes to Mayank*

Ammy: Bro, Aaj kya hai?

Mayank: my date with the blue-mini-skirt-girl.. tonight

Ammy: 😕 NO NO! Cancel Cancel... fix it for tomorrow... u cant go for a date today

Mayank: why.. whats the prob? U only gave me the challenge.. n..

Ammy: NOOOO... she wil kill u n if u tel her i gave u this challenge.. then she wil kill me *bites his nails* or kill herself

Mayank: Who she..Nupur?? I cn handle her..! n why cant i go for a date tonight?

Ammy: Nupur bech mein kaha se ah gaye.. i was talking about to-be-barbie/bhabhi will kill u...... coz u are suppose to be getting engaged to her today...

Mayank: Oh Ya! Dash it.. skipped my mind.. This is all result of staying with u that i started forgetting such important things

Ammy: Me or Nupur *raisin eyebrows twice*

Mayank: Shut up n follow me! listen Ammy, i have a surprise for u tonight

Ammy: Surprise? (Thinks: Mayank's Surprise that too for me = dangerous = OH NO)

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*Ridzi comes to Nupur*

Nupur: where were u, took so long? So hungry aur yaha koi mera dimag khane ah gaya tha

Ridzi: Mera bhi dimag kaa raha tha

Nupur: I know idiots...

Ridzi: Exactly.. harr jagha mill jaate hai

Nupur: u mean tujhe Arman mila?

Ridzi: aur tujhe Mayank?

*both laugh while hear a voice frm behind.. turn n see.. Its Jenny*

Jenny: hey girls.. why u laughing, whats the joke.... can i join u'll?

Nupur: Ya, sure.. join us please

Ridzi : Hi Jenny' !

Jenny : Morning, i had got u'll breakfast but Mayank n Ammy said ke bhaga diya.. 😕

Nupur: bhaga diya? What? 😕

Jenny: i was lik 😲... i am really sorry if they misbehaved

Ridzi: No, why are u saying sorry... no formalities

Jenny: hehe yaa...*gets a cal- ya sir, will just be there* Hey i gotta rush...

Nupur: Okies.. no prbs.. catch u later

Jenny: later nai.. today evening.. here only

Ridzi: Here.. today??

Jenny: yaa, im getting engaged! Would give u'll a card n invite etc etc but u know i dont believe in formalities so its pakka ke tum dhono aaj ah rahe ho..thats it!

Nupur: aaa...umm... *thinking of what Mayank said.. "date here tonight"?*

Ridzi: okay.. we wil be there..

Jenny: thats better! see u *goes*

Nupur: Oye, tune haan kyun kaha... as if we wil really go for some strangers party?

Ridzi: arre.... stranger ke ghar mein reh sakhte hai.. party mein nai jaa sakhte? kitne pyaar se bolaya usne... how can we say NO?

Mayank: haan par tujhe soochna chaheye na.. she would be inviting her Jai n Veeru urf Mayank n Ammy also aur Mayank ka kahe baat saach ho jayengi (Thinks: we will be together under one roof so does make it like we are on a date ? Nai nai.. date aise thodi na hota hai)

Ridzi: Hello? what r u thnkin? Agar Mayank Arman hue tho kya.. hone dho.. why are u so scared of them?

Nupur: Not scared re baba..Actually.. chod.. long story... Lets go home n do our un-packin then party bhi hai aur phir kal college bhi

*both go home*

Hope u like it

Please do leave in your comments
Edited by ritu1618 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome and a long update thx u sooooooooo much

thx alot fro the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
woohoo..
long ud...
thnk ooo thnk ooo
lobed it...
total......masti n cool part..
thx 4 da pm
Amoon
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Posted: 14 years ago
ritu finally!! jjk!! aww I loved it!! poor RN!! and how mean are AM to them!! party is going to be interesting wonder what will happen!! update sooon!! thankz for the pm!!
Edited by CT247 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update
u took lot of time but wrote dat big part na iam very happy
loved the new beginning love story alot
thanks for big update
but iam confused about dis mayanks matter
mayank and engagement wats happening
ps do update next part fast

thanks for pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
Loved it Ritu..
Awesome Parts...
and i am waiting for mayur date..in a part...
Update soon Ritu

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