mil jaayenge hum,,, mayur ff... - Page 7

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Posted: 15 years ago
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nyc update ..to excited ...so plz update soon n thanx for the pm :)
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Posted: 15 years ago
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awesome update pari
really nice one...........
i loved it
waiting for next part.............
Update soon...............................

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Posted: 15 years ago
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cont soon and do pm me
it was nice
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey Pari,
first of all am extremely sorry for such a late reply

the concept is super duper kul......luved part 1
but Mayank is too harsh on Nupur 😔
am eagerly waiting for ur update n 2 din mein kuch hoga...arre yaar jaldi update karo kya hone wala he?????
do continue soon
thxs for the pm 😊

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Posted: 14 years ago
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OHKK......... now dont kill me......... i know mene pata nhi kab se update nhi kiya hai....... i will update soon.............

read all the replys.........

ohkk will try updatin asap......

thnk you.......

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Posted: 14 years ago
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plz update pari and add me to ur pm list
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: pari.theprinces

OHKK......... now dont kill me......... i know mene pata nhi kab se update nhi kiya hai....... i will update soon.............

read all the replys.........

ohkk will try updatin asap......

thnk you.......



hi pari very nice FF plz add me to ur pm list plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz wanna read it further
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Posted: 14 years ago
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no prob Pari
will wait for ur update take ur tym 😊



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Posted: 14 years ago
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Nice Concept ! Loved it ! Pls update it as soon as you can !

-Natasha
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Posted: 14 years ago
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previous part page 5

that whole night nupur cried cried and cried........

next day:

mayank woke up and found his head aching badly.......

he got up..........

n: cofee,,,,,,,,, (giving him the mug)

m: hmm....... (half sleepy tone..)

wen sumone knocked the door.....

npur opened it...... unable to meet mm;s eyes nupur parted her way and moved inwards....

mm: mayyu........

m: hmm..

mm: aaj tumhe mrs. khuraana ke yahaan jaana hai..

m: hm?

mm: haan unke bete ki shaadi hai aur tum dono ko jaana hai...... to jaldi tayaar ho jaao.......

m: maa,,,, nupur mere saath nhi jaayegi...

mm: mein keh rhi hoon tum dono jaaoge... and thats final..... no moe arguements...... tayyaar ho jaao.

at 11.00 am...

mayank is sitting in the car.......

wen nupur cums.......

m: peeche beth jaao.... kam se kam tumhaari shakal to nhi dekhni padegi.....

nupur was hurt but she silently sat on the back seat .......

mayank was driving really fast........ once he almost killed a dog.... and nupur was really scared........

the distance was soo much.... nupur soon fell asleep.....

mayank was looking at her thru the mirror......

her beauty and innocence was attracting him but he soon gained his senses..

the stopped with a jerk making nupur wake up.....

she saw they were still on the high way...... she looked at mayank with questioning eyes but soon realised that the the car was damaged.....

mayank was repairing it.....

wen it started raining........

npur was still in the car but mayank was outsde..... completely wrenched,,,,,

mayank was still not coming inside the car..

so nupur went ou.t.

and stood next to mayank......

her white suit turned transparent......

mayank was confused as to why nupur was standing with him....

the car was fine now and both of them again sat in the car......

mayank was driving the car in the rain...... but soon nothing was visible coz the rain was too heavy....

so mayank stopped the car......

they informed home abt the rain............

their clothes were wet and nupur was feling the cold.....

mayank had turned off his shirt and now was in his vest.....

mayank soon found nupur shivering badly.....

he switched on the heater AC but that too did not work...

now nupur was sneezing again and again......... and her head was paining.....

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