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nice sc dear..pls continue soon...
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IN SHIMLA PART1 A

Once upon a time there used to live three siblings in a city called Shimla there house is located in the most beautiful area of the city .There live two beautiful girls, Nupur & Gunjan with their brother Angad Khanna . They are happy with there lives.

One Morning.
G: Di plzz wake-up humain bus stop bhi jana hai aur phir andad bahiya ne bhi job per jana hai.

N: abhi sonay daya gunji abhi to sirf 7:00 am hee howain hai humhay 9:30 bus keh liye chalain gey.

G: Di its already 9:00 am so hurry up and take a quick shower before we late for our bus.

N: Gunji tu mujahy phela nahi utha sakti thi dekh ab itna time hogaya hai.

G: main aap ko kab asay utha rahi ho lakin app uthney ka naam hi nahi le rahin kahin phir se tu raj ke khawab dekh rahi thi.

N: Ab jab tumhey pata hai tu poochney ka faidah.

Gunjan leaves their room & nupur also goes to washroom.

Now in their living room downstairs.

A: Pari, nupur kaha hai abhi tak necchey nahi ayi we 're getting really late.

G: Bahiya aati hee ho gi di.

N: main aa gai hoon bhayia, ab chalo nahi to aur late ho jaye ga.

A: lets go pari and nupur .

They leave for bus stop and fartunately they make it on time.

ON Bus stop

A: Ok nupur and pari ab main job keh liye nikalta hoon you guys take care& call me as soon as you reach Mumbai.

G&N: together bye bahiya and dont worry we will take care of ourselves aap apna khiyal rakhna.

A: nupur, tum dono apne cousins ke ghar raho gey.

N: Ji bahiya hum chalay jaye ge.Bye dont worry.

Angad leaves from bus stop. And bus arrive on time gunjan and nupur are in the bus now.

In side the bus

G: app say ek baad puchoo di ?

N: haan puchoo na.

G: di app bato app ka raj kasa ho gaya.

N: kya batao tujhey gunji mera Raj sub se alag hai.Woh abhi tak woh mere khayaloon main hai lakin main usey mehsoos ker sakti hoon.Mujhay aik aisa raj chaiye jo meri respet kerey.Jo mujhay se pyar kerey khair meri chod tu bata ,tujhay kaisa larka chaiye .

G: Di mujhay aisa larka chayia jo mujhay sumjhy aur woh kisi bhi larki ko hurt na kara mujhay koi fark nahi parta ka woh flirt hai , dil ka bohot acha ho na chaiya jo mujhay sub kuch batay, jo meri help kara,aur jo mujhay confidense dilai.

N: I hope tujhay wo larka miley yea meri dil say dua hai .

G: thank you di app ko bhi app ka prince chamring zaroor miley ga.

Nupur and Gunjan reach mumbai and they leave for bhushan house.

they arrive now in bhushan house.

At Bhushan house

Nupur and Gunjan ring the door bell then they wait for door to open.Then the door opens it was one of the three cousins Armaan Bhushan.

Ar: arey nupur,gunjan ander aao na bahir kyon khari ho,come inside.

They both go inside.

Ar: Dia uday nechay ao dheko kon aya hai humari cousin ayi hai Shimla say.

Dia and Uday said together coming bahiya.

In Living Room

D: Bahiya we are here.

Ar: Meet are cousins gunjan and nupur .

U: Hi gunjan, Hi nupur.

N&G: together ....Hi uday bahiya!!!

U: Plzzzzzzzzz dont call me bahiya My name is U-D-A-Y you see.

N&G: Ok U-D-A-Y.

D: Making fake smile expression. Hi dolls welcome to mumbai, the city of dreams.

Ar: Dia kal say yea dono tumhra excel college join kar rahi hain. You can take them with you ok.

D: sure bahiya i will take them with me.(in her head oh God ,what will people say about me)

Ar: Thats like my princess.
Ar: dodo take nupur and gunjan to their room.

U: ok bahiya I'll take them to their room.

U: lets go my sister cousins let me show, you your room.

Uday ,nupur and gunjan leaves the living room.

In Nupur and Gunjan Room

U: Sisters this is your room app dono ka room ab main chalta ho see you guys in the morning.

Uday leaves from Gunjan and Nupur's room.

G: di mujhay bohot darr Lag raha hai kal pehla din hai pata nahi kal kya ho ga.

N: Gunji dont worry kuch nahi ho ga kal bohot maza aye ga college main ,chal abhi so ja kal college to jana hai nahi to dia, humsay gussay ho jaye gi.

They both go to sleep.

In The Morning

D: Hurry-up Dolls, we are late for college come downstairs.

U: deedz where is Gunjan and nupur?

D: dodo just SHUT UP ok aati hee hon gi.
D: Lo aa gayin.

N&G: We're here dia lets go to college.

they all leave for college .

At Excel College



D: I hope Dolls u dont mind coz yeh meri image ka swaal hai, dodo kya tum in dono ko college dikha do ge.

U:Ok didz as u wish.

N: its ok Dia hum manage kar le gey dont worry thanks anyways.

U: let's go sisters, let me show you the most impartant part of our college "The canteen", mujhay tu naam le ker hi bookh lag gayi lets go to eat somethings.

They all reach canteen

In canteen

U: meri sisters ko kya chaiye?

G: Uday bahiya mujhay sirf coffee aur saat ek sandwhich plzzzzzz.

N: Aur merey liye aik adrak ki chaye plz.

U: (uday gives her the look,adrak what?) never mind i'll go order.

Uday leaves to order breakfast.

N: Gunji ,Yeh sub humain kion itna ghor se dekh rahain hain. Merey chehry pe tu kuch nahi hai aur yeh abhi tak uday bahiya kion nahi aye? Ab mujhay dar lag raha hai.

G: Di dar to mujhay bhi lag raha hai hum to yeha kisi ko nahi jantey hai aur uday bahyia order karna gaya hain i hopefully jaldi aa jaye gey mujhay yeh sab bohot ageeb lag raha hai.

U: hey gunjan iam here dont worry yeh lo tumhra coffee and ek sandwhich key saath and i am sorry nupur excel college main adrak ki chai whatever the name nahi milti .

G: thanks uday bahiya your are so sweet .

N: Like i expected.

U: thanks gunjan your also sweet .

U: Guys time for me to go tum ab donu principal keh office jao princi ka office sedhey ja ker left hand side per hai. Aur haan his name is principal saxena aur har koi unhain princi kehta hai .Got it ?

N&G: Princi, acha got it.

G: Ok uday bahiya app jaye hum manage kara laya ga.

U: no problam ok bye nupur and gunjan see u both in class.

Uday leaves canteen.

G: Di ab humhay bhi chalana chiya principal ka office nahi to late ho jay ga.

N: tu theek kaha rahi hai gunji chal chalta hai princi ka office.

Nupur and gunjan also left the canteen.

In Principal office

Nupur and Gunjan reach princi office.

N&G: said together can we come in sir.

P: plzz come inside both of you.

Nupur and gunjan came inside of princi office.

P: You both are new in excel college right.

N&G: said together yes sir we are new in this college and city.

P: ok both of u now tell me your names plz.

N: sir my name is Nupur Khanna.

G: and my name is Gunjan Khanna and we are cousins of dia and uday.

P: nice and both of u are welcome to excel college, here is your time table. plz head to your assigned classes.

N&G: thanks sir.

Nupur and gunjan left the princi office.

In Corriedor

Gunjan and Nupur are walking in corriedor.

N: gunji ab main chalti ho our apni class bhi dhondni hai tumahay main canteen miltay ho.

G:ok di see u at canteen.

nupur leave from corriedor.

Gunjan is walking then a boy came to her.

Boy: yeh boquets of roses app ka liya hai.

G: thank you so much thats so sweet of you .

G: yeh kisi dhaya hai mujhay roses of boquets .

Boy: yeh main dahaya hai app ko kyon ka app bohot beautifull ho or sweet and smpile bhi ho.

Boy left from there.

Gunjan walking holding lots of roses of boquets in her hand shae cant see where she is going and she BANG with boy all roses of boquets fell on the groung.

Boy: are you alright miss kahi app ko chot to nahi lagi hai iam really sorry.

G:its ok mujhay chot nahi lagi .

Boy: Kay app college main new ho app ko pehla nahi dhak.

G : yes main college main new ho aaj he join kaya hai.

Boy : Hi i am Samrat Shergill nice to meet you and welcome to our college.

G: Thanks Hey iam Gunjan Khanna Same nice to meet you as well.

S: kay app Dia ki cousin ho candy na bata ta.

G: yes samrat ji main hee dia ki cousin ho.

S: ek baat pouchoo app bora to nahi mana gi.

G: yes poucho sakta hai samrat ji.

S: Gunjan ji app to ayat hee popler ho gi hai.

G: Such kaho samrat ji to mujhay popler hona acha nahi laghta hai.

S: plzzz just call me samrat every beautifull girls call me sam or sammy.

G: Samrat app ka naam bohot acha hai yeh sam or sammy nick name app ko suit nahi karta hai our wasa app kisi prince charming kam nahi hai.

S: Thank you so much chashmish mujhay aaj tha kisi na itna acha compliment nahi dhaya hai.

S: Chashmish kay tum mujhay friendship karo gi.

G: yes main app ki friend bano gi kyon ka tum bohot acha ho person ho.

G: kay app basketball champ ho kyon ka main suna hai app bohot acha basketball kahlatay ho.

S: Yes main hee basketball champ hoo i just love basketball.

G: Ok samrat kaya hum saat class chal sakta hai kyon ka mujhay baad main di ko milena hai canteen main.

S: Hum saat hee class or canteen main chalay ga chashmish.

G: abhi samrat hum saat class main chalay.


S: Ok lets go chashmish warna hum late ho jaya ga.

samrat and gunjan went for Miss Aha class.

In English Class

Samrat and Gunjan enter in english class.

D: Plzzzzzzzz sammy can u sit with me.

S:Ok i will sit with you just give me one minute plz.

D: Ok just one minute i give you sammy.

samrat went to gunjan.

S: Chashmish tumhay bura to nahi laga na ka agar main candy ka saat sit karo ga to.

G: Samrat i really dont mind you can sit with dia i will sit with someone alse dont worry.

S: you are soo sweet chashmish.

G: Thank you.

Samrat sit with dia.

D: sammy i saw u with my behanji cousin u give her roses boquets.

S: what the hell candy i didnt give her roses boquets other guy give her roses boquets she just bang with me thts it nothing happend we just become friends thts it.

D: oh i thought tht u give her roses of boquets i just dont like gunjan i hate her soo much.

S: candy Chashmish is not bad i just like her she soo sweet.

D: just leave it ok.

S: ok candy.

on the other hand gunjan sit with a boy he was na other benji.

B: Hey beautifull iam benji really nice to meet you.

G: Hey I am gunjan same nice to meet you as well.

B: Gunjan app samrat ko kasa janti ho kyon ka i saw you with samrat.

G: Benji main samrat ko personly nahi janti i just bang with him in corridor kyon ka i have roses of boquets in my hands we start talking with each other and we become friends.

B: Gunjan tum such main bohot achi person ho and how did you know dia bhushan?

G: thanks benji what kind of question is this yes i know her coz i am dia cousin.

B: WHATTTTTTTT you are cousin of college diva you are tottley different from dia.

G: yes i am different from dia i just love the way i am .

Some student shout Miss Aha is here.

Miss Aha enter in the class.

MA: hey are you new here the girl sitting with benji plzz tell me your name.

G: Yes mam i am new in this college and my name is Gunjan Khanna.

MA: Frist welcome to excel college.

G: thanks Mam.

MA : Ok students pick your partners names i put the chits in the bowl.

everone pick there partners chits went too sit were they are sitting.

D: ( in her mind) sammy will be my partner for sure.

MA: Who ever i pick will open the chit name of there partners and called loud there names ok.

MA : Ok gunjan open your chit tell us who is your partner.

G: Mam my partner name is SAMRATTTTTTTT.

his elbow slip when he heard his name and dia is soo angery coz samrat is not her partner.

MA: Ok everyone sit with there partners.

samrat sit with gunjan.

MA: ok class iwill take your project tommoro dont be late.

S:Chashmish kay main tummsay ek baat pouch sakta ho plz bura na mana.

G: sure samrat kuch bhi pouch sakta ho after all we are friends right.

S: yes we are friends chashmish kay tum mara birthday celebrat karo gi plzz mara kisi friends ko yaad nahi hai ka aaj mara birthday hai or kisi na mujhay wish nahi kaya hai yah thak ka mara best friend benji na bhi mujhay wish nahi kaya hai.

G:So sorry samrat frist HAPPY BIRTHDAY yes i will celebrat your birthday tummhra friends kasa hai aaj iun ka supur cool dude samrat ki birtday hai iun loggo ko koi care bhi nahi hai ka iun ka ek friend bhi hai jo kaya feel karta ho ga but don't worry samrat main tummhra birthday ko bohot sepcial karo gi.

G: Ek baat pouch what about your parents or sis did they wish you on your birthday.

S: No they didn't wish me I live alone they never care about me plzz chashmish just leave it i don't wana talk about them.

G: Ok samrat as you wish if you dont want to talk about them its ok Know can we go to canteen i really need permishion from my di so you can meet my older sister.

S: Ok chashmish lets go to canteen.

Samrat and gunjan went togother in the canteen.

Again in Canteen

Samrat and Gunjan reach on time everyone sitting in the canteen.

S: Hey guys

D: hey sammy what's up with you today is gunjan frist day and you are hanging with my bhenji type cousin lot she is dam ugly always ware chashma hateeeeeee her .


S:JUST SHUTUP CANDY she is the most beautiful girl i have ever met and she is so kind so nice person and she is not like you.She is not fake beauty she is so natuarl she is my chashmish my sepcail friend.

D: WHATEVER


G: please samrat just leave it dia never will change .

S:ok chashmish you said tht so i am leaving tht plz everone i dont want you guys hurt my chashmish if any of you hurt her tht was stanger for me got tht everone.

G: PLz samrat forget tht yaar apna mood kyon krab kar raha ho .

S: Chashmish yeh sab tumhay bra blaha bola hai to mujhay acha nahi laghta .

G: yaar sanrat choro na yeh sab lets talk to di about getting permishion .

S: ok chashmish .

Nupur saw gunjan talking to someone she came to them.

N: HI Gunji

G: Oh hi di

N: yeh kon hai handsome tera saat.

G: di insay milo yeh hai yeaha kay basketball champ.

N: Nice kay naam hai tumhra?

S:HI iam Samrat Shergill gunjan ka friend.

N: hey i am nupur khanna gunjan ki sister aur mujahy tumhra naam bohot acha hai its really suit you.

S: Thanks your name is also nice friends.

nupur and samrat shake hands with each other.

G: Di can i go with samrat coz today is his birthday and also we have work together coz samrat is my projet partner.

N: ok gunji you can go with samrat celebrat his birthday let me wish him.

N: hey dude happy birthday and enjoy with your friends.

S: hey nups thanks for wishing me but iam only celebrating with my chashmish no other friends wish me so i take chashmish with me at my house plzz can she stay at my place for night plzzzzz.

N: ok samrat i dont mind tht gunji stay with you once again Happy Birthday enjoyy.

S&G: said together thankssssss.

Nupur left canteen. sajan also left for samrat house.






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Lovely update loved it continue soon
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nice update dear . cont. soon.
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nice n beautifull start dear
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beautiful dear!
loved it..cont soon n thnx for the pm

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superb start....
loved the basic concept of the story!
do continue soon!
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wow nice concept and lovely update dear!
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