MayUr FF: Rishtey Part 13 @ Page 143 - Page 76

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Posted: 14 years ago
nice promo
update soon plz plz plz
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Sorry daksha i cant read this ff as its quite long and will take time...I've a lot of pending ffs so have to read them before...But if u start something new plz pm me...For this one i'll read it when get time...U dont forget to pm me okis...Love u...
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Posted: 14 years ago

lovely update..

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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome promo
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I am updating in a few minutes....
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Nupur opened her eyes as the the first ray of sun falls on her serene face......

She woke up...made her bed, took a bath and when she came out, she saw Gunjan was standing nearby her table gazing at her photograph...

"Gunjan, itni subah...." Nupur said drying up her hairs...

"Haan kuch kaam aa gaya hai toh mujhe jaana hoga..... Singhania Sir ke kuch workers aayenge.... unse kaam shuru karwaana hai"

"Theek hai main karwaa loongi"

"Accha main chalti hoon"

Nupur smiled "Happy Journey"

Gunjan reached the door and then she turned and said "Khushi, Guddi ke paas hai....socha tumhein bata doon"

Saying this Gunjan left and Nupur kept staring at the door lost in her thoughts.....

"Mujhe pata hai tum Khushi se zyaada der tak door nahin reh sakti" Gunjan spoke to her herself...

After a while when Gunjan left, truck of Singhania's netered S.M.I.L.E.S...

Nupur was doing her work in cabin when Guddi came in....

"Didi...do minute aap Khushi ko sambhaaloge mujhe udhar bacchon ko khana dena hai....bas do minute mein aati hoon" Saying this Guddi handed over Khushi to Nupur and went back.....

Nupur carefully adjusted Khushi in her arms and while doing this Khushi held Nupur's chain in her small hands.....Nupur's lips curved up a little bit into a smile....

Then suddenly she heard a shriek cry of someone and left her cabin to find out holding Khushi on her shoulders....

She found an awkward silence in the corridor.....no noise nothing...it was a place where children live....

She entered the dining hall....it was all dark. She stepped a bit forward and she found that all the children and Guddi were sitting quietly in one corner of the hall. Before she could react a masked man came and held her from back. Another took Khushi from her arms....

"Khushi...' Nupur shouted...

Nupur then looked around and found that they were surrounded by masked men having guns...

"Kaun ho tum log aur yahaan kar rahe ho...kya chahte" Nupur kept shouting but no one was there to hear her voice......

Then they heard footsteps of someone coming in.... it was Mayank and following him was Samrat.... They too were masked.....

Mayank was busy talking to someone on the phone.... He didn't took notice of anyone not even Nupur...

As he cancelled the phone.... Nupur again shouted "Kaun ho tum log....yahaan kya kar rahe ho?"

Mayank felt something familiar in his ears.... He turned back...

Mayank's eyes stopped on Nupur's face...

Wo pal wahin ruk jaata...tham jaata...

Ae khuda kaash ussko main apna chehra dikha paata....

She was Nupur....his Nupur....
Head to toe.....she was still the same....same eyes, same fragrance....

For a moment Mayank lost all his senses.....
But one of his men came and slapped her tightly.....

Nupur became quiet and a tear rolled down her eyes

Mayank became red and clenched his fist tightly in anger.....

He was about to hit him when Samrat held his shoulder.....Without saying anything he moved his eyes in a gesture to come with him.....


"Uss saale ne theek nahin kiya....himmat kaise hui usski Nupur ko haath lagaane ki" Mayank's eyes were burning red with anger...

"Thande dimag se kaam le.... abhi tu humaare plan se bhatak nahin sakta" Samrat said...

"Jaanta hoon Samrat.....wo Nup...Nupur hai.... meri Nupur..... abe vishwaas nahin ho raha mujhe" Mayank exclaimed with joy....

"Haan Mayank wo bhabhi hi hai......hum yahaan kisi ko maarenge thodi na....thodi der mein sarkar tak humaari maangein pohonch jaayegi aur bas...."

Mayank smiled....

"Ab chal hum bhabhi se baad mein milenge.....aise thodi na" Samrat said

In the meanwhile.....

Police surrounded the whole the whole area.....firing started too....

Policemen reached to the corridor and fighting strated there.....

Everyone became scared.....Nupur was holding Khushi tightly in her arms and all the other children were grasping Nupur and Guddi....

Suddenly, a troop of police entered the hall....

"Tum log apne aap ko humaare hawaale kardo....tumhaare saare aadmi maare gaye hai" Inspector said putting forward his gun....

Samrat, Mayank and two more persons were left from Mayank's gang only...they found no way to escape.....

Police started coming forward and they were moving backwards....

"Apne hathiyaar neeche daal do" Inspector said

Mayank looked at Samrat and gave him a nictate.....All of them together slowly sat on the floor to put their guns down.....

While doing this in a fraction of second Mayank turned and took Khushi from Nupur......

Nupur shouted "Khushi..."

Putting his gun over Khushi, he said "Mere aadmiyon ko yahaan se nikalne do warna main iss bacchi ko maar doonga"

Nupur started crying "Please usse chod do"

Police suddenly backed out seeing the baby in danger.....

Slowly....Samrat left....then two other men....

Then Inspector thought of something and slowly stepped forward towards him....

"Khabardaar jo ek kadam bhi aage badhaya....warna ye bacchi apni jaan se jaayegi" Mayank said tighting his grip on the gun.....

Nupur was crying...shouting "Please chod do usse....Please chod do meri bacchi ko"


Mayank could not believe his ears what Nupur said just now.....He turned to look at her...

He is holding her daughter....that means...that means....

Before he could react.... Inspector took the benefit of the situation and took Khushi from Mayank's grip......and placed his revolve gun over Mayank's head.....

"Ab kahaan jaaoge.....chalo hawaalaat ki hawa khaane" Inspector said

Nupur kissed Khushi after getting her back.....

Inspector grabbed Mayank from his collar and then removed his mask......

He put handcuffs in his hand and dragged him with him.....Nupur looked at everyone leaving.....

Mayank turned his face to take a glimpse of Nupur.....

Nupur was looking at the dead bodies and then she looked up at the gate, she saw policemen going and with them was Mayank....

She could not believe her eyes.....she got up to find that but a policemen made her sit back....

"Aap abhi baith jaaiye....baahar ka maahol abhi shaant nahin hua hai"

Nupur kept looking at the gate....she was again and again getting the same face of Mayank in front of her eyes.......

I hope you liked this part....Pleas do leave a comment...I am waitibg eagerly


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Posted: 14 years ago
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unres...
omg 4 d 1st time m 1st in commenting on ur ff....
update is seriously shocking.....😲
loved mayu wen he was angry 4 slapping nupur...
n finally dono ko hi pata chal gaya ki wo aass pass hi hai...n also dat mayu comes 2 knw abt her daughter
cnt wait yaar 4 nxt...
ho sake to keep updating in a week or 2😊
lovely update....👏
thanx 4 da pm..
Edited by amritaluvarti - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
am speechlless dear..mindblwoing part dear............................
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Posted: 14 years ago
heyy nicee
n thnkx for the pm

~Amira~
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update dakshha

thx alot for the pm

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