MayUr FF: Rishtey Part 13 @ Page 143

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Supriya

@-SupriyaluvsMN-

Sparkler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#361

promo @ pg.41...

aww...Dakshu.........

so romantic...☺️

rush 2 read d update...

luv ya...

-supriya

Edited by mjhtmayurluver - 15 years ago

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Supriya

@-SupriyaluvsMN-

Sparkler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#362

fantastic update dakshu...

part 5 ws just awesummm......👏

luvd my Mayur soooooooooo much☺️...

arghhhhh... dat rv...😡

thnk god... mayu tym pe aaya.😳..

aaww... yeh kya... mayu ko bhi... diff... feelin...i'm luvin it...☺️

thnx 4 dpm...

pls update asap...

luv u loads.🤗..

-supriya

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anju011

@anju011

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#363

awesome update daksha.
wow the song scene was too romantic.
but that rv😡 i knew he would do something like that.
thank god mayu came for her rscue.
then again so happy to see him developing some feelings for her.
continue soon.

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hazra

@hazra66

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#364

daksha..

really i was waitng for this ff..

i realy love ur ff..

and i loved last scene..mayank felt something differnt and that last line..ab sab thick ho jaega..mai hoon na....

wow its superb..

yaar itne ache ideas ate kaha se hai..

love u yaar,,\

and update soon varna bohot marugi....lolz..

love u..

keep it up

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ShwePoo

@ShwePoo

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#365

Finally Mayank has started to feel something...
Awesome update...
Pl continue soon..

- Pooja

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pari sharma

@kiarathediva

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#366

awesome finally mayank is feeling for nupur

cont soon

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kirti123

@kirti123

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#367

wow u updated this ff
the part was superb loved the song
really nicely written
glad to know mayank is feeling for nupur
thanks for the pm
continue soon
😊

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Mahak

@FragranceOfLove

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#368

I really don't like this Mayank........lekin tera yeh idea better tha than u told me and made me hate him for a second!!

But ya...u write too romantic yaar!

Rv ek second ke liye acha tha.....par nupur ne use maara toh woh gunda ban gaya!

And i hate such people who try to molest anyone! such a shame!

but i love mayank! u know that, isn't it?

And new feelings for mayank....ahan.....

loved the update!

wonderful.....

and ya, jaldi update karna.....u know why.....

PS- sorry for the short reply...hell tired...

PPS- and sorry for the lat comment......papa ne pc le liye tha......

PPPS- jaldi update karna..plz.....

love,
Mahak