MayUr FF: Rishtey Part 13 @ Page 143 - Page 28

hey i read the first part..

wow..complted reading second part..its amazaing..

completed reading third part...aussum part..poor nupur..

completed reading fourth part..

i missed your update so much

awesum update Dakshu....
glad dat u updated ....
man... Mayu is so rude.... my poor nupur....felt very bad 4 her...
but luvd d update 2 d core...
thnx 4 d pm.....
pls update soon...
luv u loads...
-supriya

amazing

Hi Daksha... sorry for late comment.. but the update was great... i loved Nupur's anger, it was justified and i liked the way she was determined to tell Mayank what she expected but seeing him she didn't say much... was surprised at Mayank's act when he entered and saw Nupur asleep... i didn't expect him to touch her forehead or anything but it was sweet and it showed that he does have a caring side at least.. but he made Nupur cry... i dnt hate Mayank but i just think he is in the wrong company and Nupur will change him for the better soon so am pleased about that... 😊 Lol u know i laughed when she was saying it was no gunda's house that the police will come.. if only she knew poor girl. I hope Mayank starts to treat her well soon. Oh and also i have to applaud the writing style in this FF... the way u have written with a gangster type language is awesome.. i really like it, it makes it easier to believe the characters more, makes the more realistic.. so applause to u. 👏

that was a great update DD.... waiting for Mayank to fall for Nupur.. and realizing her worth.. Now be a good girl and update fast....

awesome update hunny.....make them patch up soon...cant wait 4 the next part