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sisgeo

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Posted: 15 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: Tia_0810
when r u updating??

sorry.i havent even started writing yet................sorry.....ill try to update soon...............sorry again...

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Gaurav Shanbhag

@AR_LOVER

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Posted: 15 years ago

#52

gr8 part

plz jaldi AR ko mila de

PM me wen u update

TC
GAURAV

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Caramel_21

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Posted: 15 years ago

#53

phew sweety those were some hard-hitting dialogues by you. a much needed i must say. armaan needed to take out his pent up emotions. riddhima is feeling guilty... aww ..looking to the next part.

thanks for the pm and continue soon..

loads of love..
Mel..

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sisgeo

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Posted: 15 years ago

#54

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Ridhima eneterd the conference hall thinking about their last encounter.She wasnt ready to face him.She felt she didnt have the right to even be near him after making him go through so much.He wasnt there yet.He reached just before the conference was about to start.He didnt looked good.His steps was forced.He came there and took a sit next to her without a word.He was nursing a running nose and sniffing.She noted that he was trouble in breathing too.The conference started and she was forced to change the course of her attention to it.After one hour he excused himself by saying that he was feeling sick and went to his room.She had to fight back an urge to go after him and check if he was alright.But she kept herself away from him.conference ended by 5.00 and they were suppose to go by 8.30 pm flight.And it was 7.She was about to check on him when she saw him with his bag's waiting for her in the lounge.They left for the airport and boared their plane.She noted that Arman was looking extremely pale and weak.His steps were slow.He somehow managed to move.Through out the journey arman was coughing and sniffing.When they reached Arman called for a cab for ridhima and another one for him.
"Arman i think you need to go to sanjeevani...you dont look good...there is no one at home to take care of you.."
Arman looked straight into her eyes and replied
"i know.But im fine the way i am.You dont have to worry about me being alone.I was always alone..and i can live with it..bye dr. modi.tc"
He left for his home without any further words.She stood there for a few seconds and left.
Arman entered his house with staggering steps.He somehow made it to his paradise...where all their memories lay.
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A man entered Arman's house using the spare key arman kept under the mat.He looked for Arman.When he couldnt find so him he went to look for Arman.He found him lying in his bed clutching a photo of her.
"Arman wake up.."No response.
"arman .........arman.Finding no response he felt something was wrong.He checked his pulse ad immediately called for help.
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Atul looked at Arman who was sleeping peacefully.He felt bad for his best friend ,his brother.He knew about arman's return and ridhima's decision.He had come to join sanjeevani.He wanted to meet Arman that's why he went to Arman's house but instead he found Arman with high fever.So he admitted him in the hospital.He had met Heena and they hit it off well.She was easy to talk to.He had met Ridhima too.His return was welcomed both by seniors and interns alike.But the person he wanted to meet was still asleep.He sighed looking at Arman's condition.He was very thin and resembled a ghost...well handsome ghost....he smiled thinking.Heena entered the room and wished atul.She checked Arman and injected some medicine into his iv.
"hi Dr.atul...wanna get a coffee?
"i dont mind..and its atul...no formalities...........but Arman?
"oh dont worry about him...let him sleep...he looks so cute when he is sleeping na...
She said moving out.He joined smiling.
"he is cute and very handsome..."
"But too bad he is a khadoos."
"khadoos aur arman?what are you talking about?
they had reached cafeteria.After ordering coffee they continued their chit chat.
"Well Arman is the best person if you want to enjoy you're time.he is such a prankster..for me a problem solver ...mere bhai..he was there for me when ever i needed someone.You have no ideas about the pranks he played.Nautanki ...i miss him.."
"you are talking about the same arman right?i mean the arman i know dont talk much,works all the time and yelled at me when we met for the first time.Well he did apolagise after ...but still he is an introvert..not at all fun to be with..he hardly talks."
Atul knew what had changed Arman from happy go lucky guy to a khadoos according to heena.He decided to bring the old arman back.He needed a change.And he will do anything to bring happiness to arman's life.But deep inside atul knew that arman has lost his biggest happiness.his ridhima.But still he could try. Atul said"heena something happened in Arman's that changed him.I cant tell you much because it's not mine to tell...but will you help me bring back the old arman?
"do you even have to ask?im in.so whats the plan?
"i dont have a plan.."
"ok thats the best plan"
"we will do whatever makes him happy"
"but now his health comes first.He did this to himself.You know what?He's been skipping meals...He didnt go home for 72 hrs once..first step is to get him out of his workholic ways.."
"well we can think about it later.Now i think its time to go back to him.He might be up..."
"desperate to meet him?
"you are impossible..do you know that?
"i know"
"argh...i dont blame arman for yelling at you.."
"Atul......."
While bickering they noted that they have reached arman's room.But heena's pager beeped and she left.Atul enterd as he havent started his duty.He saw that Arman was still sleeping.He waited for him to wake up.Time passed.
Arman opened his eyes and wondered where he was.He was definitly not in his room.He tried to move and pulled the iv line in his palm.
"ouch"
"kya hua arman?
The voice was familiar.Was that champ?oh my god...before arman can say anything he was pulled into a bear hug.
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Thats it for now.i know its not that good.i had trouble writing this part too..news regarding dmg is heart breaking...well sorry every one .ill try for a nice and long update next time.do comment.

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Sweet_Ashum

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Posted: 15 years ago

#55

.well handsome ghost

Loved the line
Loved the part glad Atul is back
Thanks for the PM
Update soon
Take care

Edited by Sweet_Ashum - 15 years ago

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ffkhan

@ffkhan

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Posted: 15 years ago

#56

Thanks for the nice update.

Continue soon.😛

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RapChick101

@RapChick101

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Posted: 15 years ago

#57

hey gr8 prt........
glad Atul's back!

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mansibharti

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Posted: 15 years ago

#58

awww sis that was so cute 😳😳thank god atul is here but i would love to see ridz near armaan it would be soooo wonderful if she would be taking care of him... and heena i hope she doesn't create the 3rd angle already there are sooo many problems.... so sorry couldn't comment earlier u know naa why . hey can u plz send me the links of all the FF 's u have written, there was the one . your first one, i cant seem to find it. it was really well written and i want to read it again plz zz and what made you think that i would ignore your pm ??? silly 😛

love
Mansi