Aaja Nachleve (AR,MAYUR,ARJUHI) Chap 3 - Pg 10 - Page 6

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Posted: 15 years ago
#51
Hey Niha
Great!!!!
And Arohi's car broke down the same way in ZND's promo,but there Arjun hadn't given her a lift 😆
Loved it
Update soon n thanks for the PM
Take care....
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Posted: 15 years ago
#52
Lovely, nice part.
too good.
continue soon.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#53
hey gru update niha
cont soon
love ya
habs
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Posted: 15 years ago
#54
eloo niha sweets...!!

wow...a very gud beginning hun...!!
it was so gud...!!

i mean the way u nmed the chapter...it's reaally a gud idea...!!
n d story 2...
we get to noe dat life for dem ios hectic...!!
rehearsals at 6 am...!!

too early...!!

nyways...u r doin a grt job...
n i'm sure u'll do justice wid d story...!!

do updt soon...!!

--radz di--

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Posted: 15 years ago
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heyyy dear,
nice part
plzz try to write longer part
thanks for PM

love
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Posted: 15 years ago
#56

hey niha

awsummmmmmm partt

love it

do cont soon

-sanam-

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Posted: 15 years ago
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fantastic first part!! look forward to new parts soon!
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hey Niha
great part
i really loved the Arjuhi scene
so real cute n awesome
total cool part
do update soon
n thanks for the pm
pooja

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey guys sorry for not updating for such a long time . I will try to update as soon as possible .
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey guys how are you ? I know its been too long since I updated was really busy . Could not comment on your ffs either sorry . I dont want my ff to be closed so here is the second chapter .



The hazel eyes were staring at the blue ones which were lost in it . Both were staring in each others eyes as if they were reading each others thoughts . Then after picking up the files Arman stood up and offered a hand to Ridhima for getting up which she gladly accepted . It seemed as though his touch had an electric effect on her . She got up and again they were lost in each others eyes . " Thanks for the files . " , she said . " Huh " , he said dreamily . " Hmm thanks . " " Oh its ok btw you are always welcome . " She blushed away breaking their eyelock . Then he saw Mayank coming towards them . " Aa gaya hume disturb karne . Ok bye main chalta hoon . " " Bye . " And CUT .

So at last I am free now . This was the last shot I had before going to Delhi . God I am so happy to have some rest . I am went over to Anjali who was sitting at a distance .

" Hey Anjie " , I greeted her which was responded with a similar Hey Armaan . We both were great friends after all we had been working together for more than a year now . " So I told to bade a goodbye I guess we will be meeting in a few days though . " " I know so enjoy there and have a nice time . Ok dear I gotta go shot is ready . " She said and went away . I also proceeded towards the exit as I had already bade everyone .

I was in the parking lot when I saw Ridhima struggling with her car I didnt want to go and help her but I still have much chivalry left in me to help a girl whoever that is .

" Help needed ? " " Nah its ok . I guess I will be taking a taxi or something . " " No need to do that come I will drop you humari manzil to ek hi hain And as it is there are only two hours left for the flight . " " No its ok you don't have to worry . " " Ridhima just shut up and get into the car . " " But . " " Get in . " She reluctantly got in and we drove off . The car was filled with silence until I started the music . Ok so some stupid song was being played but it was lot better than the silence . I could sense that Riddhima too was getting uncomfortable .

It was the first time after DMG started that they traveled together that too alone . And it was too freaky . How silence filled the car but that silence too meant a lot it spoke volumes . " Keep the thoughts off your head dude " Armaan told himself .

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" So meet you guys soon . Enjoy . " Mohit told MayUr . " We will " they said in union . Mayank and Nupur came out . Nupur was giving Mayank a lift to the airport . They sat in the car . " So Nups Armaan tumhjare saath airport kyun nahi jaa raha ? " " Uska shoot hai Ridz ka bhi hoga . " " Hmm uska bhi hain . Sometimes I feel kash Ridz meri co star hoti . " " Kyun main nahi pasand itni boring bhi nahi hoon main . " " Mera woh matlab nahi tha you know its good to spend more time with your spouse aur tum aur boring please . " " I know kabhi mujhe bhi aisa lagta ki Ridhima kitna lucky hain jo Armaan ke saath itna samay bitati hai . " " Choro senti baatein kuch mazedar karte hain . Woh dekha ice cream chalo khate hain . " " Ice cream chalo . Driver ruko . " Nupur became all excited about ice cream . " Mujhe Strawberry " Nupur said . " Mujhe bhi . " " Tum strawberry ?????? How sweet " " Sweet kyun tum ladkiyaan hi bas khasakti ho strawberry hum ladke nahi ? " " Nahi not that . " They finished their ice cream , when they were about to leave a group of teens came asking for autographs and they happily gave it . In the car " Nupur tumhare mooh me ice cream laga hain " Nupur rubbed her face . " Ab theek hain ? " " Nahi gaya . " She rubbed her face many times but it didn't go . " Let me . " Mayank bent forward and wiped the side of Nupur's lips . Both felt a shiver run down their spines . They were in close proximity so many time but it never felt like this it was something new . Maynak withdrew . " Lo gaya . " " Thanks . "

In Arjun's car a fight was going on . " Meri galti meri galti thi Arohi woh tumhari galti thi . Tumne dialogues galat bole . " " Maine tum mujhe ghoore jaa rae the apne in bade bade aankhon se . " " Jo bhi kaha meri aankhen hain bohut khoobsurat . " " Khoobsurat my foot . " " Haye main marjava tumhare gusse pe " " Arjun ladkiyon ki tarah kyun baat kar rahe ho ? "

In Armaan's car

Silence still flooded the car . Ridhima was sitting with her eyes closed to get some rest and Armaan was staring at the street ahead none made efforts to begin a conversation . The song Alvida flowed through the player . It kind of fit the atmosphere with the silence and all . Halfway through the song Armaan changed the song . Ridhima jerked out of her trance . She put her hand forward indicating him not to change the song . " I don't like it . " was the only reply Armaan gave . He turned his face towards the road but Ridhima's silent tears didn't miss his notice but he knew better not to ask atleast to keep up his cool dude image . When they reached the airport they found none were there . They took out their tickets and had to o for the check .

Mayank and Nupur too reached the airport soon and were greeted by a smiling Armaan and a sulky Ridhima .

Soon Arjun and Arohi also reached bickering with each other followed by others .

Edited by nihakapoor - 14 years ago

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