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Posted: 15 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: hiiiiiiiiiii

hey this is an awsome ff

plese add me to ur pm list
and update soon

Thanks!!...
I've already added u to my pm list!!😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
#32
Awww . . you've written it down so beautifully! 🤗

Amazing . . and you know what? There's nothing I can criticize in it. 😳 You deserve all the praising in the world for your talent! 😊


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Posted: 15 years ago
#33
this is a faaaaantastic ff,
loved it,
plzzzzzzz add me to your pm list....
Edited by shivangi278 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: Jiah.Angel

Awww . . you've written it down so beautifully! 🤗

Amazing . . and you know what? There's nothing I can criticize in it. 😳 You deserve all the praising in the world for your talent! 😊


Thank u soooo much Kanky !!!😆
This kinda comment coming from an expert like you .. means alot to me!!Embarrassed
Thanx once again!! 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: shivangi278

this is a faaaaantastic ff,
loved it,
plzzzzzzz add me to your pm list....

Thank you so much Shivangi!!
Will surely PM u the next time I update!.....😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
#36
Hey Sharmi di😊
What a FF
Loved it to the core..❤️
Inna mast FF hai waah..
Dil chu liya isne mera...
n haa Add me in your PM list...
Do PM me
n update soon..😊😉
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Posted: 15 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: princess.anu

Hey Sharmi di😊
What a FF
Loved it to the core..❤️
Inna mast FF hai waah..
Dil chu liya isne mera...
n haa Add me in your PM list...
Do PM me
n update soon..😊😉

Thanks a ton Anushka!!😊
Added you to my PM list!!! 😳
Edited by Mjht_Forever - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#38
Hoola Friendz!! 😊

Thank yew so much for your beautiful comments!.... Now heading to the FF!

In this update you will read about our lead characters meeting each other!!
Hope you all enjoy reading this and appreciate it as much or even more than you did my previous updates!!😉

READ ON!!😛
As readers you may want to know how our characters look!... So I'll describe it for you!.. So that you'll have a better time visualizing them!! 😊

Avantika is dressed very simply!😊
She's wearing an orange t-shirt n black jeans!... She looks uttrly stunning⭐️ even in this simple dress! She doesn't like her hair left down. So its neatly tied back into a pony tail!!😳

Zoya is in a complete tomboyish look!.. Baggy jeans n a tattered t-shirt!😃

Lucky looks like a complete book worm with a checked shirt which is neatly tucked in his trousers. An his hair is neatly oiled n combed.. like a school going kid!! 🤓

Now that you've got a glimpse of our characters lets head back to our story!😛

Avi, Jo and Lucky head to Mrs.Nandini' office. Her office is fairly near to the parking lot of the university and from her corridor the parking lot is visible.
Avi goes on her bike .. n Jo follows her on her own bike with Lucky on the rear... He doesn't own a bike.. n mostly rides to college on Jo's bike!!😆
The
y go to Mrs Nandini's room and knock!
"Come in" says MrsNandini in her sweet but firm voice😳. "Good Morning Ma'am" wish Avi,Jo and Lucky as they enter the room. Mrs Nandini beams seeing her favourite student Avantika. " Hello Avantika ,Zoya and Lakshman" greets Mrs Nandini. "I called to talk about your internship.... " says MrsNandini. "We were also thinking of talking to you about it ma'am" replies Jo, "Hmm.. well, the Director of IndiaTV is a close friend of mine... The other day during some conversation she told me that she needed some new people for a few of her shows.. would you 3 like to do your internship there? " asks MrsNandini. "Ofcourse Ma'am!! IndiaTV has the highest TRPs than any other channel.. we would love to work there ma'am" replies Avantika.😃 "Good I thought so... So go and get your profile and other certificates from the office,I'll sign them .. n write a recommendation letter to my friend so that you can go to meet her!". "Thank you ma'am we'll get them right now" and the three leave to go to the office.😊
They are walking in the corridor, when ,
"Hey.. he seems new here doesn't he?" says Jo. Lucky and Avi turn to the direction Jo's pointing to see a six foot tall,fair and handsome guy getting down from a very stylish bike.⭐️
All the students around stop to look at him.. and he seems to enjoy the attention. He winks at one girl.. and gives a flying kiss to another..
😆 and is coming towards them... "Show-off" mutters Avi under her breath 😡. "Come lets go!" she says and pulls Jo who seems to be mesmerised by the newcomer's looks and style 😳. Lucky follows them.. but has a very sad look on his face!😔
They are walking when.. the new guy comes up to them and addresses Avi "Hey babes!.. where is Nandyz office?"😛 Avantika is shocked😲 to be addressed like that and flares up!.. "What ?? Firstly How dare you call me babes??? And then you call Mrs Nandini .. nandy!!! ..." shouts Avi.😡 The guy is surprised at her outburst!..and "Whoa. whoa!... hold on!... What do you want me to call you... Aunty??? " asks the guy with a grin on his face.... 😃 This completely irritates Avantika and she's about to say something.. when Lucky comes in between her and the new guy... "I'm really sorry!.... For my friend's reaction.... MrsNandini's room is there around that corner" apologises Lucky. Avantika is completely amazed hearing Lucky's answer and stands there open mouthed... 😲 The new guy thanks Lucky " Thanks Dude!.. You seem sensible enough!" ..smirks at Avantika and leaves.... ! "I can't believe you actually said that" says Avi in her astonishment. "C'mon guys.. we gotta get our profile signed!.. " says Lucky in his calm manner.. n walks off... Still in amazement Avi n Jo follow ! They take their profiles from the main office and go to MrsNandini's room...
When they reach there.. they find MrsNandini.. standing outside.. and talking to some one.... After finishing her work... she turns to find Avi,Jo n Lucky waiting for her outside.. "Ah!.. you've come!... Come I'll sign your profiles.. and write that letter. And I want a small favour from you... "says MrsNandini. "Please tell us ma'am as to how we can help you.. We'd be honoured to do so!..." replies Avantika.. and the other to also nod there head in approval. "Thank you so much!.. As you all know.. I've no children... all the world to me is my nephew!.. He's completed his studies from NYU... and come to India to find a story for his first film..so..." says Mrs.Nandini....😊 Hearing the word film Jo gets excited but Avantika's face drops😔.. she's at a loss of words... MrsNandini looks at her and asks" Anything wrong Avantika? you don't seem to be willing...." Jo and Lucky understand the situation and reply" She's fine ma'am just a bit excited after hearing the word films.. "says Lucky...
Avantika composes herself .. and "Yes ma'am thats it... but what can we do about the film.... I mean how can we help your nephew?" asks Avantika 😲. " Well you see my nephew wants to make a film on students struggling for jobs and the end of their college life and how they step into the corporate world... So I thought what would be better than my favourite students... " replies MrsNandini with a smile....😊 "Errr.... How nice!.. We'd be happy to help him out!" says Jo.. "Thank you so much!.. I'll call him then! " says MrsNandini... and calls out "Vikram... Vikram!...." and the very same new guy whom the three met comes out of the room with a huge smile...😃
Avantika, Jo and Lucky are shocked to find out that this person is Vikram .. MrsNandini's nephew!!!😲
To know what was Avantika's reaction after knowing that Vikram is that guy.. And will Vikram now wanna work with them after Avantika's behaviour??? To know all this and alot more... keep reading my updates!!😉

So how was the update guys??? Please give your valuable comments and haan kuch long comments bhi de do yaar... Dekhne mein acche lagthe hain!😛... and click on the like tab if you think its nice! 😊

-SHARMI =)

















Edited by Mjht_Forever - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#39
hey!!!!
amaing upd8!!!!!
luvd the way of ur writing!!!
😃👍🏼
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Posted: 15 years ago
#40
nice updt
thanks for the pm

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